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Rukario
Nice map.

You should fix.
Suggestion.
If you fix then fix it at the part you copy paste it too.
SB:
For DC's:
Maybe put it at some point DC makes a break otherwise, you know a lot of people skip^^
For Roddie's: Uhhhhh he is not called hybrid anymore so maybe fix his name xD


DC's Easy:
DC maps <3333333.
Notthing to say perfect.

Normal:
00:45:687 (2) - move on grid right?
00:53:995 (1) - ignore distance snap and put in the middle?
00:55:841 (1) - ^
00:56:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - two grids down.
00:57:687 (1) - put in the middle.

Sorry that I went so nazi on this diff, but I love prettyness.

Hard:
A bit overmapped but pretty good.

Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?
03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?
Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3


Star~~
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

Rukarioman wrote:

Nice map.

You should fix.
Suggestion.
If you fix then fix it at the part you copy paste it too.
SB:
For DC's:
Maybe put it at some point DC makes a break otherwise, you know a lot of people skip^^
For Roddie's: Uhhhhh he is not called hybrid anymore so maybe fix his name xD


DC's Easy:
DC maps <3333333.
Notthing to say perfect.

Normal:
00:45:687 (2) - move on grid right?
00:53:995 (1) - ignore distance snap and put in the middle?
00:55:841 (1) - ^
00:56:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - two grids down.
00:57:687 (1) - put in the middle.

Sorry that I went so nazi on this diff, but I love prettyness.

^All fixed~

Hard:
A bit overmapped but pretty good.

Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?
03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?
Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3


Star~~
Thank you very much~ :D
Roddie

Rukarioman wrote:

Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?
03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?

^All fixed.

Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3 Yes. <3


Star~~
Thanks, Rukario. 8-)

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Intense].osu
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon
okay~ All Fixed~ :D
ZeroTwo002_AI
給星給星 :)
IOSYS_Qiu Li
我也來給星了 :)
watermind123
給星 給星
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

IOSYS_BaKa-[9] wrote:

給星給星 :)
謝謝~~ :)

IOSYS_Qiu Li wrote:

我也來給星了 :)
謝謝~ :)
sscck740823
再來一顆
Ramble Stars
圖做的不錯喔 今後也要加油~~!!
給星!!
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

Ramble Stars wrote:

圖做的不錯喔 今後也要加油~~!!
給星!!
謝謝~

sscck740823 wrote:

再來一顆
謝謝~

watermind123 wrote:

給星 給星
謝謝~

謝謝你們呀~~ :D
Doomsday
Better late than never :)

  1. For the offset, I got 7,386. BPM looks fine though
  2. Personally, I think that setting the preview point at the chorus would sound better, since its where most people would recognise the song. 00:51:226 sounds like a good spot to set it imo.
  3. Maybe you should add a Kiai section for the last chorus too? (at 03:04:610). Don't forgot to do it for all difficulties!
  4. Change the grey hitcolour? It seems hard to see on that background.
[DC'S EASY]

Lookin' good

[NORMAL]

Seems fine, but it feels like a pretty tough normal. It leads on from the Easy alright though so I'll let that one slide.

[HARD]

For the little streams in the choruses (like at 01:01:841 (3,4,5,6,7), 00:58:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) etc.) , I can see what you were doing, but since you were mapping to the lyrics before, these almost feel random. Perhaps you could remove these, or some of these?

00:22:610 to 00:34:610 - I think it would be much more interesting if you mapped to the lyrics more here. It feels disjointed and almost dull at the moment since its repetitive. The same issue happens at 01:32:303 too, and the other verses.

[RODDIE'S INSANE]

This has a different timing to the other difficulties. the timing for all difficulties should really be the same. I would change it to the one I've got anyway.


Apart from that, a bit streamy, but nothing too major. Seems fine.

Hmm. A pretty nice map you got here. Normal and Hard could've been mapped to the lyrics a bit more, but its not too major.

Starred
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon
SPOILER

Doomsday wrote:

Better late than never :)

  1. For the offset, I got 7,386. BPM looks fine though
  2. Personally, I think that setting the preview point at the chorus would sound better, since its where most people would recognise the song. 00:51:226 sounds like a good spot to set it imo.
  3. Maybe you should add a Kiai section for the last chorus too? (at 03:04:610). Don't forgot to do it for all difficulties!
  4. Change the grey hitcolour? It seems hard to see on that background.
[DC'S EASY]

Lookin' good

[NORMAL]

Seems fine, but it feels like a pretty tough normal. It leads on from the Easy alright though so I'll let that one slide.

[HARD]

For the little streams in the choruses (like at 01:01:841 (3,4,5,6,7), 00:58:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) etc.) , I can see what you were doing, but since you were mapping to the lyrics before, these almost feel random. Perhaps you could remove these, or some of these?

00:22:610 to 00:34:610 - I think it would be much more interesting if you mapped to the lyrics more here. It feels disjointed and almost dull at the moment since its repetitive. The same issue happens at 01:32:303 too, and the other verses.

[RODDIE'S INSANE]

This has a different timing to the other difficulties. the timing for all difficulties should really be the same. I would change it to the one I've got anyway.


Apart from that, a bit streamy, but nothing too major. Seems fine.

Hmm. A pretty nice map you got here. Normal and Hard could've been mapped to the lyrics a bit more, but its not too major.

Starred
^All Fixed and Thank you very much~ :D
lzy
8-)
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

lzy wrote:

8-)
0.0 thanks

xBubu wrote:

嘿嘿
0.0
xBubu
嘿嘿
Mashley
Crop the background so you don't get black bars around the top and bottom.
Set the preview point at 00:50:770

DC's Easy
Fine

Normal
01:17:770 (1) - Feels better 1/1 later so it hits on the 'solo'
02:17:309 (4) - New combo
03:12:924 (3,4) - 4 is a little out of pattern

Hard
00:49:385 (1) - Remove new combo

Roddie's Intense
Approach speed is way too high. Tone it down.
02:15:462 (1,2) - Spacing's weird
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon
SPOILER

Mashley wrote:

Crop the background so you don't get black bars around the top and bottom.
Set the preview point at 00:50:770

DC's Easy
Fine

Normal
01:17:770 (1) - Feels better 1/1 later so it hits on the 'solo'
02:17:309 (4) - New combo
03:12:924 (3,4) - 4 is a little out of pattern

Hard
00:49:385 (1) - Remove new combo

Roddie's Intense
Approach speed is way too high. Tone it down.
02:15:462 (1,2) - Spacing's weird
Thanks your helped~ and normal,hard is fixed
Roddie

Mashley wrote:

Roddie's Intense
Approach speed is way too high. Tone it down.
02:15:462 (1,2) - Spacing's weird

^All fixed.
Thanks!

And I fixed my difficulty. Spacing is all fixed! :)......Almost... =_=

And another Kudosu Star for you! >~<

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Intense].osu
James2250
As requested by Roddie~

-Delete osb file in folder
-I don't really like the resolution of your bg (black bars when playing at top/bottom), the best resolutions are 1024x768 or 800x600 but anything 4:3 works, resize it plz
-Every difficulty needs a preview point
-Although I recommend all kiai times are the same make sure they are the same on Normal/Hard (check ending of final one)

DC's Easy:
I don't really like sliders going so close to hp bar (especially on easier difficulty)
02:55:386 (2)
02:59:078 (3) but it isn't unrankable so ok
map looks nice

Normal:
00:49:616 (1,1) - slightly close to the end of a spinner for a Normal but it should be fine
Could do combo modding but isn't really needed, I would just make sure most of the combo's on the kiai time match up if possible

Hard:
looks nice

Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1
I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it

*star*
Roddie

James2250 wrote:

Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1

^All fixed.

I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it Okay. ._.
Thanks, James. 8-)

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

James2250 wrote:

As requested by Roddie~

-Delete osb file in folder
-I don't really like the resolution of your bg (black bars when playing at top/bottom), the best resolutions are 1024x768 or 800x600 but anything 4:3 works, resize it plz
-Every difficulty needs a preview point
-Although I recommend all kiai times are the same make sure they are the same on Normal/Hard (check ending of final one)

Normal:
00:49:616 (1,1) - slightly close to the end of a spinner for a Normal but it should be fine
Could do combo modding but isn't really needed, I would just make sure most of the combo's on the kiai time match up if possible

Hard:
looks nice

Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1
I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it

*star*
Fixed~ and thank you~ ;)
wmfchris
[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)

[hard]
0:20:193 (7) put it nearer to next (1) and extend by 1/2?
no big problem

star~
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

wmfchris wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)

[hard]
0:20:193 (7) put it nearer to next (1) and extend by 1/2?
no big problem

star~
Thanks wmfchris 8-)
Roddie

wmfchris wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)

^All fixed.
Thanks, Chris! :)

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon
Fixed and updated~ 8-)
Antu Villegas
when I have time, I will re-do the SB ;)
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

Antu Villegas wrote:

when I have time, I will re-do the SB ;)
ok 8-)
abalee
Roddie's
Preview point not set.
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem?
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump?

Easy:
Preview point not set.

and the .osb file issues.
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

abalee wrote:

Roddie's
Preview point not set.
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem?
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump?

Easy:
Preview point not set. Fixed

and the .osb file issues. Fixed
Thank you~ :)
Roddie

abalee wrote:

Roddie's
Preview point not set. Get that fixed, Bourdon. D:
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem? Fixed.
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump? Yes. :3
Thanks, abalee. ^^

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon
^ All Fixed~ :P
orioncomet
[General]
* imo setting perview time at 00:50:539 or something is better then 0 =w=;

[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w;
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-;
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;..

other diffs seem fine ~
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
* imo setting perview time at 00:50:539 or something is better then 0 =w=;

[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w;
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-;
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;..

other diffs seem fine ~
Thx~ orioncomet :D
Roddie

orioncomet wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w; Not really.
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-; Fixed.
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;.. Fixed.
Thanks. :D

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Garven
As per your request:

[General]
DC's Easy has a different preview point than the rest of the difficulties. Please line that up.
Please crop the extra transparency from the three "Beatmap by:" images.
A spinnerapproachcircle would be nice.

[DC's Easy]
Maybe HP drain -1?
Eeew, so many whistles on slider slides.
01:47:539 (3,1) - This spacing is kinda deceitful for an easy.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the spinner.
Nice~

[Normal]
00:43:386 (2) - Do an H-flip to reduce overlap
01:14:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not a very eye-pleasing pattern. Well, I guess there are a lot with some-what random-looking placement. :/
I like what you did with the start of each chorus, but what you do afterward it kind of dulls the sheen. It goes into a nice slowly spinning circle of vocal happiness to 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 *yawn* Think you could spruce up the rhythmic end of this difficulty a bit? As it is, it's all technically fine, but only has small bursts of fun.

[Hard]
00:35:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I really think this is pushing out of the territory of a Hard difficulty. Think you can work in some consecutive repeating sliders instead? basically applies to any of these streams that are longer than 5 beats, if you choose to do this.
03:19:155 - Just delete that second to last timing section and make this last timing section the end of the kiai time. Also I would like to suggest you reduce the volume to minimum.
Kinda wish you followed the lyrics a little more than you do. :< Otherwise fine though.

[Roddie's Hard]
00:52:616 (2,3) - It might be asking for a lot, but do you think when you use stacked sliders like this you could try to make them look like one smooth curve instead of humped like they are now?
01:41:539 (9) - Hrm... it'd be neat if you could line up the slider end with the 8.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the slider.

Normal felt a little boring to me, but the other diffs were nice~
Roddie

Garven wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
00:52:616 (2,3) - It might be asking for a lot, but do you think when you use stacked sliders like this you could try to make them look like one smooth curve instead of humped like they are now? Fixed I hope.
01:41:539 (9) - Hrm... it'd be neat if you could line up the slider end with the 8. Its fine.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the slider. Done.
Thanks, Garven. 8-)

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon
SPOILER

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
DC's Easy has a different preview point than the rest of the difficulties. Please line that up.
Please crop the extra transparency from the three "Beatmap by:" images.
A spinnerapproachcircle would be nice.

[DC's Easy]
Maybe HP drain -1?
Eeew, so many whistles on slider slides.
01:47:539 (3,1) - This spacing is kinda deceitful for an easy.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the spinner.
Nice~

[Normal]
00:43:386 (2) - Do an H-flip to reduce overlap
01:14:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not a very eye-pleasing pattern. Well, I guess there are a lot with some-what random-looking placement. :/
I like what you did with the start of each chorus, but what you do afterward it kind of dulls the sheen. It goes into a nice slowly spinning circle of vocal happiness to 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 *yawn* Think you could spruce up the rhythmic end of this difficulty a bit? As it is, it's all technically fine, but only has small bursts of fun.

[Hard]
00:35:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I really think this is pushing out of the territory of a Hard difficulty. Think you can work in some consecutive repeating sliders instead? basically applies to any of these streams that are longer than 5 beats, if you choose to do this.
03:19:155 - Just delete that second to last timing section and make this last timing section the end of the kiai time. Also I would like to suggest you reduce the volume to minimum.
Kinda wish you followed the lyrics a little more than you do. :< Otherwise fine though.

[Roddie's Hard]
00:52:616 (2,3) - It might be asking for a lot, but do you think when you use stacked sliders like this you could try to make them look like one smooth curve instead of humped like they are now?
01:41:539 (9) - Hrm... it'd be neat if you could line up the slider end with the 8.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the slider.

Normal felt a little boring to me, but the other diffs were nice~
Thank you~~ Garven :)
abalee
late, but take a try for it.
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

abalee wrote:

late, but take a try for it.
Thx~ abalee :D
Glass
Great mapset ;)
Andrea
[Overall]

You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use a "cursortrail.png". If you're going to add it or remove the cursortrail, remember to do a full submission.

That's it. Fix and I'll rank!
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use a "cursortrail.png". If you're going to add it or remove the cursortrail, remember to do a full submission.

That's it. Fix and I'll rank!
Fixed~ and thank you~~ :D
Andrea
Ready to go now!

Ranked~
Roddie
Ya!!!!

Congrats Bourdon, DC, and yours truly. 8-)
Keksi
Sorry but i dont like it :S
Roddie

Keksi wrote:

Sorry but i dont like it :S
Good for you.

Now, how come you didn't like it?
Keksi

Roddie wrote:

Keksi wrote:

Sorry but i dont like it :S
Good for you.

Now, how come you didn't like it?

The song and your diff are so [...] ( i have no word for this )
Roddie

Keksi wrote:

Roddie wrote:

Good for you.

Now, how come you didn't like it?
The song and your diff are so [...] ( i have no word for this )
SPOILER
9.8 at the moment. Who cares if the map rating means nothing?
Players have no problem full combing my difficulty. Even myself.
Got some good comments from other players saying that they liked it.
I know I put a good effort on my difficulty so that other players would enjoy it.
The song is good. Same artist that made this song.

My face.
Cheery
One of my favorite songs. [:
Grats on rank! :)
J o J o
very nice map!
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