DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

There are more breaks in insane than in hard...? Perhaps you'd like to add another break in hard.

^Nah. Added more notes on the 2nd break in my difficulty. So it should be okay now.

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

Why do you have 2 of the same image in your song folder...?
There are more breaks in insane than in hard...? Perhaps you'd like to add another break in hard.
Is that skin really necessary? I'd get rid of it.

Normal;

00:49:610 (1,1) - One spinner here?
01:37:380 (3) - This seems random. Maybe just a 1/2 repeat?

Oh, and I think you need an easy. Have one on me.

RandomJibberish wrote:

You got my first MATmod. Lucky you.

General
I don't like the random skin elements, it'd be best to get rid of them
If you do keep them I'm pretty sure you need a sliderball.
The white combo colour is really ugly, especially during kiai. Make it grey or beige or something

Get rid of that .osb

DC's Easy
Is awesome
DC probably feels all left out becuase his name isn't at the start though

Normal
01:17:995 (1) - Move forward onto red tick?
01:46:149 (3) - Move out of stack to look like previous combos?
02:17:533 (5,6,7) - Move back onto red ticks and remove repeat from slider. And fix spacing of course
02:31:841 (1) - Move forward onto red ticks
03:16:610 (3,4) - Move back onto red ticks
03:17:533 (1) - End at 03:18:687?

Hard
Wow huge difficulty jump from that easyish normal. I'd suggest getting rid of the streams and making it less of an insane, especially since you already have another silly streamy diff
00:12:456 (1,2,3) - Move back a whole beat?
01:20:533 (3) - IMO if it needs a warning it shouldn't be there. Move this and the beat before so you can see the repeat?
01:50:303 (8) - Looks odd. Straighten out into a smooth curve or make the wiggles even
03:15:687 (1) - End at 03:18:687?

Hyb's Intense
00:24:229 (4,5) - Spaaacing
00:27:459 (5) - Shorten by 1/2
03:18:229 (7) - Shorten by a beat

Pretty good map.

RandomJibberish wrote:

You got my first MATmod. Lucky you.

Hyb's Intense
00:24:229 (4,5) - Spaaacing Fixed.
00:27:459 (5) - Shorten by 1/2 No.
03:18:229 (7) - Shorten by a beat No.

Pretty good map.

DiamondCrash wrote:

Add my name to tags kthx

• 01:47:533 (3,1): Spacing,too close
  02:48:456 (3): Align with 2
  03:18:691 : Do you forget to slient it?

• 00:35:072 (1): Finish
  00:49:610 (1): ^
  00:53:533 (5): 上一格
  00:57:226 (5): 左一格
  00:58:149 (1): 中间+Clap
  01:05:995 (3): Clap
  01:20:072 : 转盘在这里开始 并+Finish
  01:49:149 (1): Finish
  02:03:687 (1): Finish
  02:07:379 (5): 上一格
  02:11:072 (5): ^
  02:16:610 (4): 结尾+Clap
  02:20:303 (9): New combo
  02:33:918 : 转盘在这里开始
  02:56:303 (9): 结尾+Whistle
  03:04:149 (2): 结尾+Finish
  03:11:995 (6): New combo

• 00:36:918 (11): Finish
  00:47:072 (3,4): 有点难看 建议完全重叠
  00:51:687 (1): Finish
  01:20:533 (2): 结尾+Finish
  01:35:995 (9): Finish
  01:50:303 (8): 开头+Clap 结尾+Finish
  02:03:803 (1): Finish
  02:19:841 (3): 开头+Clap
  02:21:226 (2): 结尾+Clap
  02:35:072 (6): Finish
  02:51:687 (7): New combo
  03:05:995 (3): Clap
  03:11:995 (6): New combo

• 00:21:459 (1): Finish
  00:51:690 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  00:54:690 (2,3,4): Distance
  00:58:613 (2): Add Clap at the beginning
  01:13:844 (1,2): Spacing,too close
  02:05:536 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  02:14:767 (7,1,2): Distance
  02:22:844 (1,2,3): Distance
  02:23:536 (5): Clap
  02:24:459 (8): ^
  03:04:613 (1): Add finish at the beginning

impossiblexu wrote:

抱歉有点晚了

Only suggestions:

[DC's Easy]

• 01:47:533 (3,1): Spacing,too close
  02:48:456 (3): Align with 2
  03:18:691 : Do you forget to slient it?

[Normal]

• 00:35:072 (1): Finish
  00:49:610 (1): ^
  00:53:533 (5): 上一格
  00:57:226 (5): 左一格
  00:58:149 (1): 中间+Clap
  01:05:995 (3): Clap
  01:20:072 : 转盘在这里开始 并+Finish
  01:49:149 (1): Finish
  02:03:687 (1): Finish
  02:07:379 (5): 上一格
  02:11:072 (5): ^
  02:16:610 (4): 结尾+Clap
  02:20:303 (9): New combo
  02:33:918 : 转盘在这里开始
  02:56:303 (9): 结尾+Whistle
  03:04:149 (2): 结尾+Finish
  03:11:995 (6): New combo

[Hard]

• 00:36:918 (11): Finish
  00:47:072 (3,4): 有点难看 建议完全重叠
  00:51:687 (1): Finish
  01:20:533 (2): 结尾+Finish
  01:35:995 (9): Finish
  01:50:303 (8): 开头+Clap 结尾+Finish
  02:03:803 (1): Finish
  02:19:841 (3): 开头+Clap
  02:21:226 (2): 结尾+Clap
  02:35:072 (6): Finish
  02:51:687 (7): New combo
  03:05:995 (3): Clap
  03:11:995 (6): New combo

[hyb's Intense]

• 00:21:459 (1): Finish
  00:51:690 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  00:54:690 (2,3,4): Distance
  00:58:613 (2): Add Clap at the beginning
  01:13:844 (1,2): Spacing,too close
  02:05:536 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  02:14:767 (7,1,2): Distance
  02:22:844 (1,2,3): Distance
  02:23:536 (5): Clap
  02:24:459 (8): ^
  03:04:613 (1): Add finish at the beginning

Good map~

@STAR@

impossiblexu wrote:

Only suggestions:

[hyb's Intense]

• 00:21:459 (1): Finish
  00:51:690 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  00:54:690 (2,3,4): Distance
  00:58:613 (2): Add Clap at the beginning
  01:13:844 (1,2): Spacing,too close
  02:05:536 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  02:14:767 (7,1,2): Distance
  02:22:844 (1,2,3): Distance
  02:23:536 (5): Clap
  02:24:459 (8): ^
  03:04:613 (1): Add finish at the beginning

^All fixed.

impossiblexu wrote:

[DC's Easy]

01:47:533 (3,1): Spacing,too close lolno
02:48:456 (3): Align with 2 lolno

ouranhshc wrote:

Intense
overmapped

Hard - too much 1/4 streams it would be better if you made most of them short repeating sliders No Fixed

00:10:149 (4) - 2 grids left
01:30:918 (6) - line up with (5)

^ Fixed


forum pm me when intense and Hard are fixed

Rukarioman wrote:

Nice map.

You should fix.
Suggestion.
If you fix then fix it at the part you copy paste it too.
SB:
For DC's:
Maybe put it at some point DC makes a break otherwise, you know a lot of people skip^^
For Roddie's: Uhhhhh he is not called hybrid anymore so maybe fix his name xD

DC's Easy:
DC maps <3333333.
Notthing to say perfect.

Normal:
00:45:687 (2) - move on grid right?
00:53:995 (1) - ignore distance snap and put in the middle?
00:55:841 (1) - ^
00:56:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - two grids down.
00:57:687 (1) - put in the middle.
Sorry that I went so nazi on this diff, but I love prettyness.

^All fixed~

Hard:
A bit overmapped but pretty good.

Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?

SPOILER

03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?
Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3


Star~~

Rukarioman wrote:

Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?

SPOILER

03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?

^All fixed.

Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3 Yes. <3


Star~~

IOSYS_BaKa-[9] wrote:

給星給星

IOSYS_Qiu Li wrote:

我也來給星了

Ramble Stars wrote:

圖做的不錯喔 今後也要加油~~!!
給星!!

sscck740823 wrote:

再來一顆

watermind123 wrote:

給星 給星

1. For the offset, I got 7,386. BPM looks fine though
2. Personally, I think that setting the preview point at the chorus would sound better, since its where most people would recognise the song. 00:51:226 sounds like a good spot to set it imo.
3. Maybe you should add a Kiai section for the last chorus too? (at 03:04:610). Don't forgot to do it for all difficulties!
4. Change the grey hitcolour? It seems hard to see on that background.

lzy wrote:

8-)

xBubu wrote:

嘿嘿

Mashley wrote:

Roddie's Intense
Approach speed is way too high. Tone it down.
02:15:462 (1,2) - Spacing's weird

^All fixed.

James2250 wrote:

Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1

^All fixed.

I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it Okay. ._.

James2250 wrote:

As requested by Roddie~

-Delete osb file in folder
-I don't really like the resolution of your bg (black bars when playing at top/bottom), the best resolutions are 1024x768 or 800x600 but anything 4:3 works, resize it plz
-Every difficulty needs a preview point
-Although I recommend all kiai times are the same make sure they are the same on Normal/Hard (check ending of final one)

Normal:
00:49:616 (1,1) - slightly close to the end of a spinner for a Normal but it should be fine
Could do combo modding but isn't really needed, I would just make sure most of the combo's on the kiai time match up if possible

Hard:
looks nice

Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1
I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it

*star*

wmfchris wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)

[hard]
0:20:193 (7) put it nearer to next (1) and extend by 1/2?
no big problem

star~

wmfchris wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)

^All fixed.

Antu Villegas wrote:

when I have time, I will re-do the SB

abalee wrote:

Roddie's
Preview point not set.
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem?
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump?

Easy:
Preview point not set. Fixed

and the .osb file issues. Fixed

abalee wrote:

Roddie's
Preview point not set. Get that fixed, Bourdon. D:
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem? Fixed.
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump? Yes. :3

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
* imo setting perview time at 00:50:539 or something is better then 0 =w=;

[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w;
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-;
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;..

other diffs seem fine ~

orioncomet wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w; Not really.
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-; Fixed.
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;.. Fixed.

Garven wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
00:52:616 (2,3) - It might be asking for a lot, but do you think when you use stacked sliders like this you could try to make them look like one smooth curve instead of humped like they are now? Fixed I hope.
01:41:539 (9) - Hrm... it'd be neat if you could line up the slider end with the 8. Its fine.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the slider. Done.

abalee wrote:

late, but take a try for it.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use a "cursortrail.png". If you're going to add it or remove the cursortrail, remember to do a full submission.

That's it. Fix and I'll rank!

Keksi wrote:

Sorry but i dont like it :S

Roddie wrote:

Keksi wrote:

Sorry but i dont like it :S

Good for you.

Now, how come you didn't like it?

Keksi wrote:

Roddie wrote:

Good for you.

Now, how come you didn't like it?

The song and your diff are so [...] ( i have no word for this )