• 01:47:533 (3,1): Spacing,too close
  02:48:456 (3): Align with 2
  03:18:691 : Do you forget to slient it?

• 00:35:072 (1): Finish
  00:49:610 (1): ^
  00:53:533 (5): 上一格
  00:57:226 (5): 左一格
  00:58:149 (1): 中间+Clap
  01:05:995 (3): Clap
  01:20:072 : 转盘在这里开始 并+Finish
  01:49:149 (1): Finish
  02:03:687 (1): Finish
  02:07:379 (5): 上一格
  02:11:072 (5): ^
  02:16:610 (4): 结尾+Clap
  02:20:303 (9): New combo
  02:33:918 : 转盘在这里开始
  02:56:303 (9): 结尾+Whistle
  03:04:149 (2): 结尾+Finish
  03:11:995 (6): New combo

• 00:36:918 (11): Finish
  00:47:072 (3,4): 有点难看 建议完全重叠
  00:51:687 (1): Finish
  01:20:533 (2): 结尾+Finish
  01:35:995 (9): Finish
  01:50:303 (8): 开头+Clap 结尾+Finish
  02:03:803 (1): Finish
  02:19:841 (3): 开头+Clap
  02:21:226 (2): 结尾+Clap
  02:35:072 (6): Finish
  02:51:687 (7): New combo
  03:05:995 (3): Clap
  03:11:995 (6): New combo

• 00:21:459 (1): Finish
  00:51:690 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  00:54:690 (2,3,4): Distance
  00:58:613 (2): Add Clap at the beginning
  01:13:844 (1,2): Spacing,too close
  02:05:536 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  02:14:767 (7,1,2): Distance
  02:22:844 (1,2,3): Distance
  02:23:536 (5): Clap
  02:24:459 (8): ^
  03:04:613 (1): Add finish at the beginning

impossiblexu wrote:

抱歉有点晚了

Only suggestions:

[DC's Easy]

• 01:47:533 (3,1): Spacing,too close
  02:48:456 (3): Align with 2
  03:18:691 : Do you forget to slient it?

[Normal]

• 00:35:072 (1): Finish
  00:49:610 (1): ^
  00:53:533 (5): 上一格
  00:57:226 (5): 左一格
  00:58:149 (1): 中间+Clap
  01:05:995 (3): Clap
  01:20:072 : 转盘在这里开始 并+Finish
  01:49:149 (1): Finish
  02:03:687 (1): Finish
  02:07:379 (5): 上一格
  02:11:072 (5): ^
  02:16:610 (4): 结尾+Clap
  02:20:303 (9): New combo
  02:33:918 : 转盘在这里开始
  02:56:303 (9): 结尾+Whistle
  03:04:149 (2): 结尾+Finish
  03:11:995 (6): New combo

[Hard]

• 00:36:918 (11): Finish
  00:47:072 (3,4): 有点难看 建议完全重叠
  00:51:687 (1): Finish
  01:20:533 (2): 结尾+Finish
  01:35:995 (9): Finish
  01:50:303 (8): 开头+Clap 结尾+Finish
  02:03:803 (1): Finish
  02:19:841 (3): 开头+Clap
  02:21:226 (2): 结尾+Clap
  02:35:072 (6): Finish
  02:51:687 (7): New combo
  03:05:995 (3): Clap
  03:11:995 (6): New combo

[hyb's Intense]

• 00:21:459 (1): Finish
  00:51:690 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  00:54:690 (2,3,4): Distance
  00:58:613 (2): Add Clap at the beginning
  01:13:844 (1,2): Spacing,too close
  02:05:536 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  02:14:767 (7,1,2): Distance
  02:22:844 (1,2,3): Distance
  02:23:536 (5): Clap
  02:24:459 (8): ^
  03:04:613 (1): Add finish at the beginning

Good map~

@STAR@

impossiblexu wrote:

Only suggestions:

[hyb's Intense]

• 00:21:459 (1): Finish
  00:51:690 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  00:54:690 (2,3,4): Distance
  00:58:613 (2): Add Clap at the beginning
  01:13:844 (1,2): Spacing,too close
  02:05:536 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  02:14:767 (7,1,2): Distance
  02:22:844 (1,2,3): Distance
  02:23:536 (5): Clap
  02:24:459 (8): ^
  03:04:613 (1): Add finish at the beginning

^All fixed.

impossiblexu wrote:

[DC's Easy]

01:47:533 (3,1): Spacing,too close lolno
02:48:456 (3): Align with 2 lolno

ouranhshc wrote:

Intense
overmapped

Hard - too much 1/4 streams it would be better if you made most of them short repeating sliders No Fixed

00:10:149 (4) - 2 grids left
01:30:918 (6) - line up with (5)

^ Fixed


forum pm me when intense and Hard are fixed

Rukarioman wrote:

Nice map.

You should fix.
Suggestion.
If you fix then fix it at the part you copy paste it too.
SB:
For DC's:
Maybe put it at some point DC makes a break otherwise, you know a lot of people skip^^
For Roddie's: Uhhhhh he is not called hybrid anymore so maybe fix his name xD

DC's Easy:
DC maps <3333333.
Notthing to say perfect.

Normal:
00:45:687 (2) - move on grid right?
00:53:995 (1) - ignore distance snap and put in the middle?
00:55:841 (1) - ^
00:56:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - two grids down.
00:57:687 (1) - put in the middle.
Sorry that I went so nazi on this diff, but I love prettyness.

^All fixed~

Hard:
A bit overmapped but pretty good.

Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?

SPOILER

03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?
Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3


Star~~

Rukarioman wrote:

Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?

SPOILER

03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?

^All fixed.

Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3 Yes. <3


Star~~

IOSYS_BaKa-[9] wrote:

給星給星

IOSYS_Qiu Li wrote:

我也來給星了

Ramble Stars wrote:

圖做的不錯喔 今後也要加油~~!!
給星!!

sscck740823 wrote:

再來一顆

watermind123 wrote:

給星 給星

1. For the offset, I got 7,386. BPM looks fine though
2. Personally, I think that setting the preview point at the chorus would sound better, since its where most people would recognise the song. 00:51:226 sounds like a good spot to set it imo.
3. Maybe you should add a Kiai section for the last chorus too? (at 03:04:610). Don't forgot to do it for all difficulties!
4. Change the grey hitcolour? It seems hard to see on that background.

lzy wrote:

8-)

xBubu wrote:

嘿嘿

Mashley wrote:

Roddie's Intense
Approach speed is way too high. Tone it down.
02:15:462 (1,2) - Spacing's weird

^All fixed.

James2250 wrote:

Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1

^All fixed.

I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it Okay. ._.

James2250 wrote:

As requested by Roddie~

-Delete osb file in folder
-I don't really like the resolution of your bg (black bars when playing at top/bottom), the best resolutions are 1024x768 or 800x600 but anything 4:3 works, resize it plz
-Every difficulty needs a preview point
-Although I recommend all kiai times are the same make sure they are the same on Normal/Hard (check ending of final one)

Normal:
00:49:616 (1,1) - slightly close to the end of a spinner for a Normal but it should be fine
Could do combo modding but isn't really needed, I would just make sure most of the combo's on the kiai time match up if possible

Hard:
looks nice

Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1
I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it

*star*

wmfchris wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)

[hard]
0:20:193 (7) put it nearer to next (1) and extend by 1/2?
no big problem

star~

wmfchris wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)

^All fixed.

Antu Villegas wrote:

when I have time, I will re-do the SB

abalee wrote:

Roddie's
Preview point not set.
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem?
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump?

Easy:
Preview point not set. Fixed

and the .osb file issues. Fixed

abalee wrote:

Roddie's
Preview point not set. Get that fixed, Bourdon. D:
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem? Fixed.
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump? Yes. :3

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
* imo setting perview time at 00:50:539 or something is better then 0 =w=;

[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w;
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-;
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;..

other diffs seem fine ~

orioncomet wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w; Not really.
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-; Fixed.
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;.. Fixed.

Garven wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
00:52:616 (2,3) - It might be asking for a lot, but do you think when you use stacked sliders like this you could try to make them look like one smooth curve instead of humped like they are now? Fixed I hope.
01:41:539 (9) - Hrm... it'd be neat if you could line up the slider end with the 8. Its fine.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the slider. Done.

abalee wrote:

late, but take a try for it.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use a "cursortrail.png". If you're going to add it or remove the cursortrail, remember to do a full submission.

That's it. Fix and I'll rank!

Keksi wrote:

Sorry but i dont like it :S

Roddie wrote:

Keksi wrote:

Sorry but i dont like it :S

Good for you.

Now, how come you didn't like it?

Keksi wrote:

Roddie wrote:

Good for you.

Now, how come you didn't like it?

The song and your diff are so [...] ( i have no word for this )