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Have been added~DiamondCrash wrote:
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抱歉有点晚了 
Only suggestions:
[DC's Easy]
[Normal]
Good map~
@STAR@
Only suggestions:
[DC's Easy]
- 01:47:533 (3,1): Spacing,too close
02:48:456 (3): Align with 2
03:18:691 : Do you forget to slient it?
[Normal]
- 00:35:072 (1): Finish
00:49:610 (1): ^
00:53:533 (5): 上一格
00:57:226 (5): 左一格
00:58:149 (1): 中间+Clap
01:05:995 (3): Clap
01:20:072 : 转盘在这里开始 并+Finish
01:49:149 (1): Finish
02:03:687 (1): Finish
02:07:379 (5): 上一格
02:11:072 (5): ^
02:16:610 (4): 结尾+Clap
02:20:303 (9): New combo
02:33:918 : 转盘在这里开始
02:56:303 (9): 结尾+Whistle
03:04:149 (2): 结尾+Finish
03:11:995 (6): New combo
- 00:36:918 (11): Finish
00:47:072 (3,4): 有点难看 建议完全重叠
00:51:687 (1): Finish
01:20:533 (2): 结尾+Finish
01:35:995 (9): Finish
01:50:303 (8): 开头+Clap 结尾+Finish
02:03:803 (1): Finish
02:19:841 (3): 开头+Clap
02:21:226 (2): 结尾+Clap
02:35:072 (6): Finish
02:51:687 (7): New combo
03:05:995 (3): Clap
03:11:995 (6): New combo
- 00:21:459 (1): Finish
00:51:690 (1): Add finish at the beginning
00:54:690 (2,3,4): Distance
00:58:613 (2): Add Clap at the beginning
01:13:844 (1,2): Spacing,too close
02:05:536 (1): Add finish at the beginning
02:14:767 (7,1,2): Distance
02:22:844 (1,2,3): Distance
02:23:536 (5): Clap
02:24:459 (8): ^
03:04:613 (1): Add finish at the beginning
Good map~
@STAR@
Topic Starter
謝謝~~沒關係, 有幫到我就好impossiblexu wrote:
抱歉有点晚了
Only suggestions:
[DC's Easy]
- 01:47:533 (3,1): Spacing,too close
02:48:456 (3): Align with 2
03:18:691 : Do you forget to slient it?
[Normal][Hard]
- 00:35:072 (1): Finish
00:49:610 (1): ^
00:53:533 (5): 上一格
00:57:226 (5): 左一格
00:58:149 (1): 中间+Clap
01:05:995 (3): Clap
01:20:072 : 转盘在这里开始 并+Finish
01:49:149 (1): Finish
02:03:687 (1): Finish
02:07:379 (5): 上一格
02:11:072 (5): ^
02:16:610 (4): 结尾+Clap
02:20:303 (9): New combo
02:33:918 : 转盘在这里开始
02:56:303 (9): 结尾+Whistle
03:04:149 (2): 结尾+Finish
03:11:995 (6): New combo[hyb's Intense]
- 00:36:918 (11): Finish
00:47:072 (3,4): 有点难看 建议完全重叠
00:51:687 (1): Finish
01:20:533 (2): 结尾+Finish
01:35:995 (9): Finish
01:50:303 (8): 开头+Clap 结尾+Finish
02:03:803 (1): Finish
02:19:841 (3): 开头+Clap
02:21:226 (2): 结尾+Clap
02:35:072 (6): Finish
02:51:687 (7): New combo
03:05:995 (3): Clap
03:11:995 (6): New combo
- 00:21:459 (1): Finish
00:51:690 (1): Add finish at the beginning
00:54:690 (2,3,4): Distance
00:58:613 (2): Add Clap at the beginning
01:13:844 (1,2): Spacing,too close
02:05:536 (1): Add finish at the beginning
02:14:767 (7,1,2): Distance
02:22:844 (1,2,3): Distance
02:23:536 (5): Clap
02:24:459 (8): ^
03:04:613 (1): Add finish at the beginning
Good map~
@STAR@
Thanks for the mod, impossiblexu!impossiblexu wrote:
Only suggestions:
[hyb's Intense]^All fixed.
- 00:21:459 (1): Finish
00:51:690 (1): Add finish at the beginning
00:54:690 (2,3,4): Distance
00:58:613 (2): Add Clap at the beginning
01:13:844 (1,2): Spacing,too close
02:05:536 (1): Add finish at the beginning
02:14:767 (7,1,2): Distance
02:22:844 (1,2,3): Distance
02:23:536 (5): Clap
02:24:459 (8): ^
03:04:613 (1): Add finish at the beginning
Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [hyb's Intense].osu
impossiblexu wrote:
[DC's Easy]
01:47:533 (3,1): Spacing,too close lolno
02:48:456 (3): Align with 2 lolno
Intense
overmapped
Hard - too much 1/4 streams it would be better if you made most of them short repeating sliders
00:10:149 (4) - 2 grids left
01:30:918 (6) - line up with (5)
forum pm me when intense and Hard are fixed
overmapped
Hard - too much 1/4 streams it would be better if you made most of them short repeating sliders
00:10:149 (4) - 2 grids left
01:30:918 (6) - line up with (5)
forum pm me when intense and Hard are fixed
Topic Starter
Fixed~ and Thanks~ouranhshc wrote:
Intense
overmapped
Hard - too much 1/4 streams it would be better if you made most of them short repeating sliders No Fixed
00:10:149 (4) - 2 grids left
01:30:918 (6) - line up with (5)
^ Fixed
forum pm me when intense and Hard are fixed
nice map!!
star~~~~~!
star~~~~~!
Nice map.
You should fix.
Suggestion.
If you fix then fix it at the part you copy paste it too.
SB:
For DC's:
Maybe put it at some point DC makes a break otherwise, you know a lot of people skip^^
For Roddie's: Uhhhhh he is not called hybrid anymore so maybe fix his name xD
DC's Easy:
DC maps <3333333.
Notthing to say perfect.
Normal:
00:45:687 (2) - move on grid right?
00:53:995 (1) - ignore distance snap and put in the middle?
00:55:841 (1) - ^
00:56:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - two grids down.
00:57:687 (1) - put in the middle.
Sorry that I went so nazi on this diff, but I love prettyness.
Hard:
A bit overmapped but pretty good.
Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?
03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?
Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3
Star~~
You should fix.
Suggestion.
If you fix then fix it at the part you copy paste it too.
SB:
For DC's:
Maybe put it at some point DC makes a break otherwise, you know a lot of people skip^^
For Roddie's: Uhhhhh he is not called hybrid anymore so maybe fix his name xD
DC's Easy:
DC maps <3333333.
Notthing to say perfect.
Normal:
00:45:687 (2) - move on grid right?
00:53:995 (1) - ignore distance snap and put in the middle?
00:55:841 (1) - ^
00:56:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - two grids down.
00:57:687 (1) - put in the middle.
Sorry that I went so nazi on this diff, but I love prettyness.
Hard:
A bit overmapped but pretty good.
Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?
03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?
Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3
Star~~
Topic Starter
Thank you very much~Rukarioman wrote:
Nice map.
You should fix.
Suggestion.
If you fix then fix it at the part you copy paste it too.
SB:
For DC's:
Maybe put it at some point DC makes a break otherwise, you know a lot of people skip^^
For Roddie's: Uhhhhh he is not called hybrid anymore so maybe fix his name xD
DC's Easy:
DC maps <3333333.
Notthing to say perfect.
Normal:
00:45:687 (2) - move on grid right?
00:53:995 (1) - ignore distance snap and put in the middle?
00:55:841 (1) - ^
00:56:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - two grids down.
00:57:687 (1) - put in the middle.
Sorry that I went so nazi on this diff, but I love prettyness.
^All fixed~
Hard:
A bit overmapped but pretty good.
Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?
03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?
Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3
Star~~
Thanks, Rukario.Rukarioman wrote:
Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?
03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?
^All fixed.
Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3 Yes. <3
Star~~
Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Intense].osu
Topic Starter
okay~ All Fixed~
給星給星
Topic Starter
謝謝~~IOSYS_BaKa-[9] wrote:
給星給星
謝謝~IOSYS_Qiu Li wrote:
我也來給星了
再來一顆
圖做的不錯喔 今後也要加油~~!!
給星!!
給星!!
Topic Starter
謝謝~Ramble Stars wrote:
圖做的不錯喔 今後也要加油~~!!
給星!!
謝謝~sscck740823 wrote:
再來一顆
謝謝~watermind123 wrote:
給星 給星
謝謝你們呀~~
Better late than never
Lookin' good
[NORMAL]
Seems fine, but it feels like a pretty tough normal. It leads on from the Easy alright though so I'll let that one slide.
[HARD]
For the little streams in the choruses (like at 01:01:841 (3,4,5,6,7), 00:58:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) etc.) , I can see what you were doing, but since you were mapping to the lyrics before, these almost feel random. Perhaps you could remove these, or some of these?
00:22:610 to 00:34:610 - I think it would be much more interesting if you mapped to the lyrics more here. It feels disjointed and almost dull at the moment since its repetitive. The same issue happens at 01:32:303 too, and the other verses.
[RODDIE'S INSANE]
This has a different timing to the other difficulties. the timing for all difficulties should really be the same. I would change it to the one I've got anyway.
Apart from that, a bit streamy, but nothing too major. Seems fine.
Hmm. A pretty nice map you got here. Normal and Hard could've been mapped to the lyrics a bit more, but its not too major.
Starred
- For the offset, I got 7,386. BPM looks fine though
- Personally, I think that setting the preview point at the chorus would sound better, since its where most people would recognise the song. 00:51:226 sounds like a good spot to set it imo.
- Maybe you should add a Kiai section for the last chorus too? (at 03:04:610). Don't forgot to do it for all difficulties!
- Change the grey hitcolour? It seems hard to see on that background.
Lookin' good
[NORMAL]
Seems fine, but it feels like a pretty tough normal. It leads on from the Easy alright though so I'll let that one slide.
[HARD]
For the little streams in the choruses (like at 01:01:841 (3,4,5,6,7), 00:58:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) etc.) , I can see what you were doing, but since you were mapping to the lyrics before, these almost feel random. Perhaps you could remove these, or some of these?
00:22:610 to 00:34:610 - I think it would be much more interesting if you mapped to the lyrics more here. It feels disjointed and almost dull at the moment since its repetitive. The same issue happens at 01:32:303 too, and the other verses.
[RODDIE'S INSANE]
This has a different timing to the other difficulties. the timing for all difficulties should really be the same. I would change it to the one I've got anyway.
Apart from that, a bit streamy, but nothing too major. Seems fine.
Hmm. A pretty nice map you got here. Normal and Hard could've been mapped to the lyrics a bit more, but its not too major.
Starred
Topic Starter
SPOILER
^All Fixed and Thank you very much~ Doomsday wrote:
Better late than never[DC'S EASY]
- For the offset, I got 7,386. BPM looks fine though
- Personally, I think that setting the preview point at the chorus would sound better, since its where most people would recognise the song. 00:51:226 sounds like a good spot to set it imo.
- Maybe you should add a Kiai section for the last chorus too? (at 03:04:610). Don't forgot to do it for all difficulties!
- Change the grey hitcolour? It seems hard to see on that background.
Lookin' good
[NORMAL]
Seems fine, but it feels like a pretty tough normal. It leads on from the Easy alright though so I'll let that one slide.
[HARD]
For the little streams in the choruses (like at 01:01:841 (3,4,5,6,7), 00:58:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) etc.) , I can see what you were doing, but since you were mapping to the lyrics before, these almost feel random. Perhaps you could remove these, or some of these?
00:22:610 to 00:34:610 - I think it would be much more interesting if you mapped to the lyrics more here. It feels disjointed and almost dull at the moment since its repetitive. The same issue happens at 01:32:303 too, and the other verses.
[RODDIE'S INSANE]
This has a different timing to the other difficulties. the timing for all difficulties should really be the same. I would change it to the one I've got anyway.
Apart from that, a bit streamy, but nothing too major. Seems fine.
Hmm. A pretty nice map you got here. Normal and Hard could've been mapped to the lyrics a bit more, but its not too major.
Starred
Topic Starter
0.0 thankslzy wrote:
8-)
0.0xBubu wrote:
嘿嘿
Crop the background so you don't get black bars around the top and bottom.
Set the preview point at 00:50:770
DC's Easy
Fine
Normal
01:17:770 (1) - Feels better 1/1 later so it hits on the 'solo'
02:17:309 (4) - New combo
03:12:924 (3,4) - 4 is a little out of pattern
Hard
00:49:385 (1) - Remove new combo
Roddie's Intense
Approach speed is way too high. Tone it down.
02:15:462 (1,2) - Spacing's weird
Set the preview point at 00:50:770
DC's Easy
Fine
Normal
01:17:770 (1) - Feels better 1/1 later so it hits on the 'solo'
02:17:309 (4) - New combo
03:12:924 (3,4) - 4 is a little out of pattern
Hard
00:49:385 (1) - Remove new combo
Roddie's Intense
Approach speed is way too high. Tone it down.
02:15:462 (1,2) - Spacing's weird
Topic Starter
SPOILER
Thanks your helped~ and normal,hard is fixedMashley wrote:
Crop the background so you don't get black bars around the top and bottom.
Set the preview point at 00:50:770
DC's Easy
Fine
Normal
01:17:770 (1) - Feels better 1/1 later so it hits on the 'solo'
02:17:309 (4) - New combo
03:12:924 (3,4) - 4 is a little out of pattern
Hard
00:49:385 (1) - Remove new combo
Roddie's Intense
Approach speed is way too high. Tone it down.
02:15:462 (1,2) - Spacing's weird
Thanks!Mashley wrote:
Roddie's Intense
Approach speed is way too high. Tone it down.
02:15:462 (1,2) - Spacing's weird
^All fixed.
And I fixed my difficulty. Spacing is all fixed!
......Almost... =_=And another Kudosu Star for you! >~<
Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Intense].osu
As requested by Roddie~
-Delete osb file in folder
-I don't really like the resolution of your bg (black bars when playing at top/bottom), the best resolutions are 1024x768 or 800x600 but anything 4:3 works, resize it plz
-Every difficulty needs a preview point
-Although I recommend all kiai times are the same make sure they are the same on Normal/Hard (check ending of final one)
DC's Easy:
I don't really like sliders going so close to hp bar (especially on easier difficulty)
02:55:386 (2)
02:59:078 (3) but it isn't unrankable so ok
map looks nice
Normal:
00:49:616 (1,1) - slightly close to the end of a spinner for a Normal but it should be fine
Could do combo modding but isn't really needed, I would just make sure most of the combo's on the kiai time match up if possible
Hard:
looks nice
Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1
I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it
*star*
-Delete osb file in folder
-I don't really like the resolution of your bg (black bars when playing at top/bottom), the best resolutions are 1024x768 or 800x600 but anything 4:3 works, resize it plz
-Every difficulty needs a preview point
-Although I recommend all kiai times are the same make sure they are the same on Normal/Hard (check ending of final one)
DC's Easy:
I don't really like sliders going so close to hp bar (especially on easier difficulty)
02:55:386 (2)
02:59:078 (3) but it isn't unrankable so ok
map looks nice
Normal:
00:49:616 (1,1) - slightly close to the end of a spinner for a Normal but it should be fine
Could do combo modding but isn't really needed, I would just make sure most of the combo's on the kiai time match up if possible
Hard:
looks nice
Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1
I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it
*star*
Thanks, James.James2250 wrote:
Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1
^All fixed.
I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it Okay. ._.
Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Fixed~ and thank you~James2250 wrote:
As requested by Roddie~
-Delete osb file in folder
-I don't really like the resolution of your bg (black bars when playing at top/bottom), the best resolutions are 1024x768 or 800x600 but anything 4:3 works, resize it plz
-Every difficulty needs a preview point
-Although I recommend all kiai times are the same make sure they are the same on Normal/Hard (check ending of final one)
Normal:
00:49:616 (1,1) - slightly close to the end of a spinner for a Normal but it should be fine
Could do combo modding but isn't really needed, I would just make sure most of the combo's on the kiai time match up if possible
Hard:
looks nice
Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1
I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it
*star*
[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)
[hard]
0:20:193 (7) put it nearer to next (1) and extend by 1/2?
no big problem
star~
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)
[hard]
0:20:193 (7) put it nearer to next (1) and extend by 1/2?
no big problem
star~
Topic Starter
Thanks wmfchriswmfchris wrote:
[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)
[hard]
0:20:193 (7) put it nearer to next (1) and extend by 1/2?
no big problem
star~
Thanks, Chris!wmfchris wrote:
[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)
^All fixed.
Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Fixed and updated~
when I have time, I will re-do the SB
Topic Starter
okAntu Villegas wrote:
when I have time, I will re-do the SB
Roddie's
Preview point not set.
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem?
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump?
Easy:
Preview point not set.
and the .osb file issues.
Preview point not set.
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem?
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump?
Easy:
Preview point not set.
and the .osb file issues.
Topic Starter
Thank you~abalee wrote:
Roddie's
Preview point not set.
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem?
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump?
Easy:
Preview point not set. Fixed
and the .osb file issues. Fixed
Thanks, abalee. ^^abalee wrote:
Roddie's
Preview point not set. Get that fixed, Bourdon. D:
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem? Fixed.
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump? Yes. :3
Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
^ All Fixed~
[General]
* imo setting perview time at 00:50:539 or something is better then 0 =w=;
[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w;
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-;
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;..
other diffs seem fine ~
* imo setting perview time at 00:50:539 or something is better then 0 =w=;
[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w;
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-;
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;..
other diffs seem fine ~
Topic Starter
Thx~ orioncometorioncomet wrote:
[General]
* imo setting perview time at 00:50:539 or something is better then 0 =w=;
[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w;
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-;
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;..
other diffs seem fine ~
Thanks.orioncomet wrote:
[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w; Not really.
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-; Fixed.
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;.. Fixed.
Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
As per your request:
[General]
DC's Easy has a different preview point than the rest of the difficulties. Please line that up.
Please crop the extra transparency from the three "Beatmap by:" images.
A spinnerapproachcircle would be nice.
[DC's Easy]
Maybe HP drain -1?
Eeew, so many whistles on slider slides.
01:47:539 (3,1) - This spacing is kinda deceitful for an easy.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the spinner.
Nice~
[Normal]
00:43:386 (2) - Do an H-flip to reduce overlap
01:14:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not a very eye-pleasing pattern. Well, I guess there are a lot with some-what random-looking placement. :/
I like what you did with the start of each chorus, but what you do afterward it kind of dulls the sheen. It goes into a nice slowly spinning circle of vocal happiness to 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 *yawn* Think you could spruce up the rhythmic end of this difficulty a bit? As it is, it's all technically fine, but only has small bursts of fun.
[Hard]
00:35:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I really think this is pushing out of the territory of a Hard difficulty. Think you can work in some consecutive repeating sliders instead? basically applies to any of these streams that are longer than 5 beats, if you choose to do this.
03:19:155 - Just delete that second to last timing section and make this last timing section the end of the kiai time. Also I would like to suggest you reduce the volume to minimum.
Kinda wish you followed the lyrics a little more than you do. :< Otherwise fine though.
[Roddie's Hard]
00:52:616 (2,3) - It might be asking for a lot, but do you think when you use stacked sliders like this you could try to make them look like one smooth curve instead of humped like they are now?
01:41:539 (9) - Hrm... it'd be neat if you could line up the slider end with the 8.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the slider.
Normal felt a little boring to me, but the other diffs were nice~
[General]
DC's Easy has a different preview point than the rest of the difficulties. Please line that up.
Please crop the extra transparency from the three "Beatmap by:" images.
A spinnerapproachcircle would be nice.
[DC's Easy]
Maybe HP drain -1?
Eeew, so many whistles on slider slides.
01:47:539 (3,1) - This spacing is kinda deceitful for an easy.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the spinner.
Nice~
[Normal]
00:43:386 (2) - Do an H-flip to reduce overlap
01:14:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not a very eye-pleasing pattern. Well, I guess there are a lot with some-what random-looking placement. :/
I like what you did with the start of each chorus, but what you do afterward it kind of dulls the sheen. It goes into a nice slowly spinning circle of vocal happiness to 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 *yawn* Think you could spruce up the rhythmic end of this difficulty a bit? As it is, it's all technically fine, but only has small bursts of fun.
[Hard]
00:35:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I really think this is pushing out of the territory of a Hard difficulty. Think you can work in some consecutive repeating sliders instead? basically applies to any of these streams that are longer than 5 beats, if you choose to do this.
03:19:155 - Just delete that second to last timing section and make this last timing section the end of the kiai time. Also I would like to suggest you reduce the volume to minimum.
Kinda wish you followed the lyrics a little more than you do. :< Otherwise fine though.
[Roddie's Hard]
00:52:616 (2,3) - It might be asking for a lot, but do you think when you use stacked sliders like this you could try to make them look like one smooth curve instead of humped like they are now?
01:41:539 (9) - Hrm... it'd be neat if you could line up the slider end with the 8.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the slider.
Normal felt a little boring to me, but the other diffs were nice~
Thanks, Garven.Garven wrote:
[Roddie's Hard]
00:52:616 (2,3) - It might be asking for a lot, but do you think when you use stacked sliders like this you could try to make them look like one smooth curve instead of humped like they are now? Fixed I hope.
01:41:539 (9) - Hrm... it'd be neat if you could line up the slider end with the 8. Its fine.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the slider. Done.
Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
SPOILER
Thank you~~ Garven Garven wrote:
As per your request:
[General]
DC's Easy has a different preview point than the rest of the difficulties. Please line that up.
Please crop the extra transparency from the three "Beatmap by:" images.
A spinnerapproachcircle would be nice.
[DC's Easy]
Maybe HP drain -1?
Eeew, so many whistles on slider slides.
01:47:539 (3,1) - This spacing is kinda deceitful for an easy.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the spinner.
Nice~
[Normal]
00:43:386 (2) - Do an H-flip to reduce overlap
01:14:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not a very eye-pleasing pattern. Well, I guess there are a lot with some-what random-looking placement. :/
I like what you did with the start of each chorus, but what you do afterward it kind of dulls the sheen. It goes into a nice slowly spinning circle of vocal happiness to 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 *yawn* Think you could spruce up the rhythmic end of this difficulty a bit? As it is, it's all technically fine, but only has small bursts of fun.
[Hard]
00:35:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I really think this is pushing out of the territory of a Hard difficulty. Think you can work in some consecutive repeating sliders instead? basically applies to any of these streams that are longer than 5 beats, if you choose to do this.
03:19:155 - Just delete that second to last timing section and make this last timing section the end of the kiai time. Also I would like to suggest you reduce the volume to minimum.
Kinda wish you followed the lyrics a little more than you do. :< Otherwise fine though.
[Roddie's Hard]
00:52:616 (2,3) - It might be asking for a lot, but do you think when you use stacked sliders like this you could try to make them look like one smooth curve instead of humped like they are now?
01:41:539 (9) - Hrm... it'd be neat if you could line up the slider end with the 8.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the slider.
Normal felt a little boring to me, but the other diffs were nice~
late, but take a try for it.
Topic Starter
Thx~ abaleeabalee wrote:
late, but take a try for it.
Great mapset
[Overall]
You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use a "cursortrail.png". If you're going to add it or remove the cursortrail, remember to do a full submission.
That's it. Fix and I'll rank!
You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use a "cursortrail.png". If you're going to add it or remove the cursortrail, remember to do a full submission.
That's it. Fix and I'll rank!
Topic Starter
Fixed~ and thank you~~osuplayer111 wrote:
[Overall]
You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use a "cursortrail.png". If you're going to add it or remove the cursortrail, remember to do a full submission.
That's it. Fix and I'll rank!
Ready to go now!
Ranked~
Ranked~
Ya!!!!
Congrats Bourdon, DC, and yours truly.
Congrats Bourdon, DC, and yours truly.
Good for you.Keksi wrote:
Sorry but i dont like it :S
Now, how come you didn't like it?
Roddie wrote:
Good for you.Keksi wrote:
Sorry but i dont like it :S
Now, how come you didn't like it?
The song and your diff are so [...] ( i have no word for this )
Keksi wrote:
The song and your diff are so [...] ( i have no word for this )Roddie wrote:
Good for you.
Now, how come you didn't like it?
SPOILER
9.8 at the moment. Who cares if the map rating means nothing?
Players have no problem full combing my difficulty. Even myself.
Got some good comments from other players saying that they liked it.
I know I put a good effort on my difficulty so that other players would enjoy it.
The song is good. Same artist that made this song.
Players have no problem full combing my difficulty. Even myself.
Got some good comments from other players saying that they liked it.
I know I put a good effort on my difficulty so that other players would enjoy it.
The song is good. Same artist that made this song.
My face.