Thanks for the mod, dkun.dkun wrote:
'ello~
hyb's Intense
01:01:383 (1,2) - Could you move the 1/4 stream to the two to match with the placement of these two notes? Or space it out like you did at 01:08:998 (1,2)
02:03:459 (3-9) - These can't be spaced out like the ones following?
^All fixed.
Thanks you very much~dkun wrote:
'ello~
Feel free to disregard anything I post.
Normal
Nothing much to report here.
Hard
Just on a side note, you could replace some of the 1/4 streams in the beginning with some short repeating sliders.
00:55:384 (6) - New combo here? Just following how you're comboing things.
01:31:384 (7) - ^
02:17:076 (1,2) - For some reason, I don't like this stack. Space out, maybe?
02:17:768 (1,1) - Is this part trying to go with the vocals? Because it doesn't fit.
03:07:384 (6) - New combo here?
Take a ★ ~
Thank you~~xxheroxx wrote:
[Mod Infos]
Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General][Normal]
- • Tags: leamega008 hybrid579 (Tags should be the same on all difficulties)
• Offset: 7380 (resnap all notes)
• The SB Images contains unnecessary trasparency.
• Max background size is 1024x768.
• The easiest difficulty must be below a 3-star difficulty level.
• Set a preview point.
• Honestly, I don't like this skin: delete it.
- • 00:14:764 (5) - New combo
• 00:21:456 (2) - Start this slider here 00:21:687 and end it here 00:22:149
• 03:04:033 (2) - Start this slider here 03:04:149
Thanks for mentioning, DC.DiamondCrash wrote:
General;
There are more breaks in insane than in hard...? Perhaps you'd like to add another break in hard.
^Nah. Added more notes on the 2nd break in my difficulty. So it should be okay now.
Thanks ur easy difficulty~DiamondCrash wrote:
General;
Why do you have 2 of the same image in your song folder...?
There are more breaks in insane than in hard...? Perhaps you'd like to add another break in hard.
Is that skin really necessary? I'd get rid of it.
Normal;
00:49:610 (1,1) - One spinner here?
01:37:380 (3) - This seems random. Maybe just a 1/2 repeat?
Oh, and I think you need an easy. Have one on me.
Thank you~RandomJibberish wrote:
You got my first MATmod. Lucky you.
General
I don't like the random skin elements, it'd be best to get rid of them
If you do keep them I'm pretty sure you need a sliderball.
The white combo colour is really ugly, especially during kiai. Make it grey or beige or something
Get rid of that .osb
DC's Easy
Is awesome
DC probably feels all left out becuase his name isn't at the start though
Normal
01:17:995 (1) - Move forward onto red tick?
01:46:149 (3) - Move out of stack to look like previous combos?
02:17:533 (5,6,7) - Move back onto red ticks and remove repeat from slider. And fix spacing of course
02:31:841 (1) - Move forward onto red ticks
03:16:610 (3,4) - Move back onto red ticks
03:17:533 (1) - End at 03:18:687?
Hard
Wow huge difficulty jump from that easyish normal. I'd suggest getting rid of the streams and making it less of an insane, especially since you already have another silly streamy diff
00:12:456 (1,2,3) - Move back a whole beat?
01:20:533 (3) - IMO if it needs a warning it shouldn't be there. Move this and the beat before so you can see the repeat?
01:50:303 (8) - Looks odd. Straighten out into a smooth curve or make the wiggles even
03:15:687 (1) - End at 03:18:687?
Hyb's Intense
00:24:229 (4,5) - Spaaacing
00:27:459 (5) - Shorten by 1/2
03:18:229 (7) - Shorten by a beat
Pretty good map.
Thanks for the mod. RJ.RandomJibberish wrote:
You got my first MATmod. Lucky you.
Hyb's Intense
00:24:229 (4,5) - Spaaacing Fixed.
00:27:459 (5) - Shorten by 1/2 No.
03:18:229 (7) - Shorten by a beat No.
Pretty good map.
Have been added~DiamondCrash wrote:
Add my name to tags kthx
謝謝~~沒關係, 有幫到我就好impossiblexu wrote:
抱歉有点晚了
Only suggestions:
[DC's Easy]
- 01:47:533 (3,1): Spacing,too close
02:48:456 (3): Align with 2
03:18:691 : Do you forget to slient it?
[Normal][Hard]
- 00:35:072 (1): Finish
00:49:610 (1): ^
00:53:533 (5): 上一格
00:57:226 (5): 左一格
00:58:149 (1): 中间+Clap
01:05:995 (3): Clap
01:20:072 : 转盘在这里开始 并+Finish
01:49:149 (1): Finish
02:03:687 (1): Finish
02:07:379 (5): 上一格
02:11:072 (5): ^
02:16:610 (4): 结尾+Clap
02:20:303 (9): New combo
02:33:918 : 转盘在这里开始
02:56:303 (9): 结尾+Whistle
03:04:149 (2): 结尾+Finish
03:11:995 (6): New combo[hyb's Intense]
- 00:36:918 (11): Finish
00:47:072 (3,4): 有点难看 建议完全重叠
00:51:687 (1): Finish
01:20:533 (2): 结尾+Finish
01:35:995 (9): Finish
01:50:303 (8): 开头+Clap 结尾+Finish
02:03:803 (1): Finish
02:19:841 (3): 开头+Clap
02:21:226 (2): 结尾+Clap
02:35:072 (6): Finish
02:51:687 (7): New combo
03:05:995 (3): Clap
03:11:995 (6): New combo
- 00:21:459 (1): Finish
00:51:690 (1): Add finish at the beginning
00:54:690 (2,3,4): Distance
00:58:613 (2): Add Clap at the beginning
01:13:844 (1,2): Spacing,too close
02:05:536 (1): Add finish at the beginning
02:14:767 (7,1,2): Distance
02:22:844 (1,2,3): Distance
02:23:536 (5): Clap
02:24:459 (8): ^
03:04:613 (1): Add finish at the beginning
Good map~
@STAR@
Thanks for the mod, impossiblexu!impossiblexu wrote:
Only suggestions:
[hyb's Intense]^All fixed.
- 00:21:459 (1): Finish
00:51:690 (1): Add finish at the beginning
00:54:690 (2,3,4): Distance
00:58:613 (2): Add Clap at the beginning
01:13:844 (1,2): Spacing,too close
02:05:536 (1): Add finish at the beginning
02:14:767 (7,1,2): Distance
02:22:844 (1,2,3): Distance
02:23:536 (5): Clap
02:24:459 (8): ^
03:04:613 (1): Add finish at the beginning
impossiblexu wrote:
[DC's Easy]
01:47:533 (3,1): Spacing,too close lolno
02:48:456 (3): Align with 2 lolno
Fixed~ and Thanks~ouranhshc wrote:
Intense
overmapped
Hard - too much 1/4 streams it would be better if you made most of them short repeating sliders No Fixed
00:10:149 (4) - 2 grids left
01:30:918 (6) - line up with (5)
^ Fixed
forum pm me when intense and Hard are fixed
Thank you very much~Rukarioman wrote:
Nice map.
You should fix.
Suggestion.
If you fix then fix it at the part you copy paste it too.
SB:
For DC's:
Maybe put it at some point DC makes a break otherwise, you know a lot of people skip^^
For Roddie's: Uhhhhh he is not called hybrid anymore so maybe fix his name xD
DC's Easy:
DC maps <3333333.
Notthing to say perfect.
Normal:
00:45:687 (2) - move on grid right?
00:53:995 (1) - ignore distance snap and put in the middle?
00:55:841 (1) - ^
00:56:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - two grids down.
00:57:687 (1) - put in the middle.
Sorry that I went so nazi on this diff, but I love prettyness.
^All fixed~
Hard:
A bit overmapped but pretty good.
Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?
03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?
Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3
Star~~
Thanks, Rukario.Rukarioman wrote:
Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?
03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?
^All fixed.
Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3 Yes. <3
Star~~
謝謝~~IOSYS_BaKa-[9] wrote:
給星給星
謝謝~IOSYS_Qiu Li wrote:
我也來給星了
謝謝~Ramble Stars wrote:
圖做的不錯喔 今後也要加油~~!!
給星!!
謝謝~sscck740823 wrote:
再來一顆
謝謝~watermind123 wrote:
給星 給星
Doomsday wrote:
Better late than never[DC'S EASY]
- For the offset, I got 7,386. BPM looks fine though
- Personally, I think that setting the preview point at the chorus would sound better, since its where most people would recognise the song. 00:51:226 sounds like a good spot to set it imo.
- Maybe you should add a Kiai section for the last chorus too? (at 03:04:610). Don't forgot to do it for all difficulties!
- Change the grey hitcolour? It seems hard to see on that background.
Lookin' good
[NORMAL]
Seems fine, but it feels like a pretty tough normal. It leads on from the Easy alright though so I'll let that one slide.
[HARD]
For the little streams in the choruses (like at 01:01:841 (3,4,5,6,7), 00:58:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) etc.) , I can see what you were doing, but since you were mapping to the lyrics before, these almost feel random. Perhaps you could remove these, or some of these?
00:22:610 to 00:34:610 - I think it would be much more interesting if you mapped to the lyrics more here. It feels disjointed and almost dull at the moment since its repetitive. The same issue happens at 01:32:303 too, and the other verses.
[RODDIE'S INSANE]
This has a different timing to the other difficulties. the timing for all difficulties should really be the same. I would change it to the one I've got anyway.
Apart from that, a bit streamy, but nothing too major. Seems fine.
Hmm. A pretty nice map you got here. Normal and Hard could've been mapped to the lyrics a bit more, but its not too major.
Starred
0.0 thankslzy wrote:
8-)
0.0xBubu wrote:
嘿嘿
Mashley wrote:
Crop the background so you don't get black bars around the top and bottom.
Set the preview point at 00:50:770
DC's Easy
Fine
Normal
01:17:770 (1) - Feels better 1/1 later so it hits on the 'solo'
02:17:309 (4) - New combo
03:12:924 (3,4) - 4 is a little out of pattern
Hard
00:49:385 (1) - Remove new combo
Roddie's Intense
Approach speed is way too high. Tone it down.
02:15:462 (1,2) - Spacing's weird
Thanks!Mashley wrote:
Roddie's Intense
Approach speed is way too high. Tone it down.
02:15:462 (1,2) - Spacing's weird
^All fixed.
......Almost... =_=Thanks, James.James2250 wrote:
Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1
^All fixed.
I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it Okay. ._.
Fixed~ and thank you~James2250 wrote:
As requested by Roddie~
-Delete osb file in folder
-I don't really like the resolution of your bg (black bars when playing at top/bottom), the best resolutions are 1024x768 or 800x600 but anything 4:3 works, resize it plz
-Every difficulty needs a preview point
-Although I recommend all kiai times are the same make sure they are the same on Normal/Hard (check ending of final one)
Normal:
00:49:616 (1,1) - slightly close to the end of a spinner for a Normal but it should be fine
Could do combo modding but isn't really needed, I would just make sure most of the combo's on the kiai time match up if possible
Hard:
looks nice
Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1
I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it
*star*
Thanks wmfchriswmfchris wrote:
[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)
[hard]
0:20:193 (7) put it nearer to next (1) and extend by 1/2?
no big problem
star~
Thanks, Chris!wmfchris wrote:
[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)
^All fixed.
okAntu Villegas wrote:
when I have time, I will re-do the SB
Thank you~abalee wrote:
Roddie's
Preview point not set.
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem?
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump?
Easy:
Preview point not set. Fixed
and the .osb file issues. Fixed
Thanks, abalee. ^^abalee wrote:
Roddie's
Preview point not set. Get that fixed, Bourdon. D:
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem? Fixed.
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump? Yes. :3
Thx~ orioncometorioncomet wrote:
[General]
* imo setting perview time at 00:50:539 or something is better then 0 =w=;
[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w;
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-;
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;..
other diffs seem fine ~
Thanks.orioncomet wrote:
[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w; Not really.
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-; Fixed.
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;.. Fixed.
Thanks, Garven.Garven wrote:
[Roddie's Hard]
00:52:616 (2,3) - It might be asking for a lot, but do you think when you use stacked sliders like this you could try to make them look like one smooth curve instead of humped like they are now? Fixed I hope.
01:41:539 (9) - Hrm... it'd be neat if you could line up the slider end with the 8. Its fine.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the slider. Done.
Garven wrote:
As per your request:
[General]
DC's Easy has a different preview point than the rest of the difficulties. Please line that up.
Please crop the extra transparency from the three "Beatmap by:" images.
A spinnerapproachcircle would be nice.
[DC's Easy]
Maybe HP drain -1?
Eeew, so many whistles on slider slides.
01:47:539 (3,1) - This spacing is kinda deceitful for an easy.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the spinner.
Nice~
[Normal]
00:43:386 (2) - Do an H-flip to reduce overlap
01:14:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not a very eye-pleasing pattern. Well, I guess there are a lot with some-what random-looking placement. :/
I like what you did with the start of each chorus, but what you do afterward it kind of dulls the sheen. It goes into a nice slowly spinning circle of vocal happiness to 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 *yawn* Think you could spruce up the rhythmic end of this difficulty a bit? As it is, it's all technically fine, but only has small bursts of fun.
[Hard]
00:35:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I really think this is pushing out of the territory of a Hard difficulty. Think you can work in some consecutive repeating sliders instead? basically applies to any of these streams that are longer than 5 beats, if you choose to do this.
03:19:155 - Just delete that second to last timing section and make this last timing section the end of the kiai time. Also I would like to suggest you reduce the volume to minimum.
Kinda wish you followed the lyrics a little more than you do. :< Otherwise fine though.
[Roddie's Hard]
00:52:616 (2,3) - It might be asking for a lot, but do you think when you use stacked sliders like this you could try to make them look like one smooth curve instead of humped like they are now?
01:41:539 (9) - Hrm... it'd be neat if you could line up the slider end with the 8.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the slider.
Normal felt a little boring to me, but the other diffs were nice~
Thx~ abaleeabalee wrote:
late, but take a try for it.
Fixed~ and thank you~~osuplayer111 wrote:
[Overall]
You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use a "cursortrail.png". If you're going to add it or remove the cursortrail, remember to do a full submission.
That's it. Fix and I'll rank!
Good for you.Keksi wrote:
Sorry but i dont like it :S
Roddie wrote:
Good for you.Keksi wrote:
Sorry but i dont like it :S
Now, how come you didn't like it?
Keksi wrote:
The song and your diff are so [...] ( i have no word for this )Roddie wrote:
Good for you.
Now, how come you didn't like it?