hi winber sorry for the delay
[General]
- the black slider border doesn't match with the hitcircle overlay, if you can make a hitcircle overlay with black border it'll match otherwise better remove it
- a little thing in the tags, give space between Scarlet & embodiment on Normal diff
- please snap the kiai exactly on the time line
- I'm pretty sure that you only allowed to have 2 insane diff including taiko. As of now you have 3 insane including Onosaki's taiko
[Normal]
as funky as it is, the multiple spacing used in this diff make this not suitable as the easiest diff even though the star rating is 3, you should get an easy diff or re-vamp the Normal
00:29:234 (2) - the repeat on 1/2 doesn't sound very good. Shorten this by 1/1 is better
00:43:567 (x) - add a circle here to make it flow better
01:38:568 (5) - same as 00:29:234 (2)
01:47:567 (x) - same as 00:43:567
01:52:901 (x) - ^
02:03:901 (1) - this overlap with the previous slider doesn't look so good could you move it somewhere else?
02:05:234 (3) - move it beside 2 please, the current position is not center between the 2 slider and it also overlap the 1 a little
[Hard]
01:39:068 (3) - I'd rather if you'll go with the guitar and move this back 1/2 beat then shorten it by 1/2 beat too
[Challenging]
00:35:234 (1,2,3) - make this into a slider or unstack it, the stack make this kinda hard to read and the drum sound in the music is subtle too
00:40:401 (2,3) - rather than a repeat try using a long slider, something like this http://puu.sh/1wZd
01:21:901 (4) - the black slider border make this slider almost hidden
01:24:818 (5) - umm why kick slider? imo it'll sound better if you lengthen this to 01:25:068
01:33:901 (1) - the anti jump kinda break the flow of your previous stream, I suggest to make 01:33:234 (11) into along slider that end here
02:00:401 (2,3) - same as 00:40:401 (2,3), if you didn't want to fix it then stack 02:00:901 (3) perfectly under 2
[Lunatic]
because there are multiple spacing used, AR 9 is too much you really should make it 8
haha this diff is too much for me xD
my main concern is the diff spread, the funky spacing is a kinda iffy but not hard too read, well maybe in lunatic it is
anyway good luck with it
~star
[General]
- the black slider border doesn't match with the hitcircle overlay, if you can make a hitcircle overlay with black border it'll match otherwise better remove it
- a little thing in the tags, give space between Scarlet & embodiment on Normal diff
- please snap the kiai exactly on the time line
- I'm pretty sure that you only allowed to have 2 insane diff including taiko. As of now you have 3 insane including Onosaki's taiko
[Normal]
as funky as it is, the multiple spacing used in this diff make this not suitable as the easiest diff even though the star rating is 3, you should get an easy diff or re-vamp the Normal
00:29:234 (2) - the repeat on 1/2 doesn't sound very good. Shorten this by 1/1 is better
00:43:567 (x) - add a circle here to make it flow better
01:38:568 (5) - same as 00:29:234 (2)
01:47:567 (x) - same as 00:43:567
01:52:901 (x) - ^
02:03:901 (1) - this overlap with the previous slider doesn't look so good could you move it somewhere else?
02:05:234 (3) - move it beside 2 please, the current position is not center between the 2 slider and it also overlap the 1 a little
[Hard]
01:39:068 (3) - I'd rather if you'll go with the guitar and move this back 1/2 beat then shorten it by 1/2 beat too
[Challenging]
00:35:234 (1,2,3) - make this into a slider or unstack it, the stack make this kinda hard to read and the drum sound in the music is subtle too
00:40:401 (2,3) - rather than a repeat try using a long slider, something like this http://puu.sh/1wZd
01:21:901 (4) - the black slider border make this slider almost hidden
01:24:818 (5) - umm why kick slider? imo it'll sound better if you lengthen this to 01:25:068
01:33:901 (1) - the anti jump kinda break the flow of your previous stream, I suggest to make 01:33:234 (11) into along slider that end here
02:00:401 (2,3) - same as 00:40:401 (2,3), if you didn't want to fix it then stack 02:00:901 (3) perfectly under 2
[Lunatic]
because there are multiple spacing used, AR 9 is too much you really should make it 8
haha this diff is too much for me xD
my main concern is the diff spread, the funky spacing is a kinda iffy but not hard too read, well maybe in lunatic it is

anyway good luck with it
~star