Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game
General
Well, I hate this. 2.7 slider velocity, random streams that don't fit the song, 1/2 all over the place. This only looks like something that was made for the sake of making something difficult. Sorry.
Ono's Taiko Oni
I don't understand the streams but it might just be me
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General
- The title of the game is Embodiment of Scarlet Devil... not Devils. Remove the s from the tags.
- Very noisy. The song is very loud and so are the hitsounds (although I'd like them to be a bit louder). Can you reduce the volume of the mp3 ?
- I have an offset of 1136 (-10ms from yours)
- The sliders are way too fast for a Normal, which resulsts in very high spacing and a very difficult diff despite "simple" rhythms.
- Also the beginning is way above the rest in terms of difficulty. First off, starting that hard for the easiest diff of the mapset is not a good idea, and second off, it makes the whole diff inconsistent.
- 00:07:812 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These are way too hard for the beginning of a Normal diff. The BPM is very high, so 1/2 is already hard enough to play, but you add stacks to that (which make the rhythm difficult to read) and the repeat sliders are on red ticks, which make them sound weird and makes the rhyhm even more confusing.
- 00:16:974 (1,2,3,1) - Them being on red ticks makes them sound weird, and make the rhthm rather confusing. I suggest you just cut that part and star on the white tick with 00:19:807 (2) -
- 00:27:807 (1,2) - I didn't expect the last repeat on both at all.
- 01:23:807 (1) - I think you should avoid such sliders for Normal diffs. They play weird and the sliderball movement might throw off new players. Besides, the time length of the slider doesn't match its visible length and that makes the timing of notes following confusing.
- 01:25:807 (3) - This slider threw me off. I expected nothing like a 3/4 rhythm, then this slider kicks in and I missed the next note because of the surprising rhythm.
- 01:43:807 (4) - Move it up so that it's "stacked" under that weird angle from the previous slider ?
- 01:49:140 (3) - The last repeat surprised me.
- 01:59:807 (3) - This slider is hidden under a previous slider. Also, I don't think such kick sliders are a good idea for Normal diffs, as the number of repeats can't be guessed, and new players wouldn't have the reflex of holding.
- Some parts were really similar to Normal... That said, this does play like a Hard.
- 00:35:140 (1) - Why this here ? It makes no sense whatsoever according to the song.
- 00:44:140 (5) - I didn't expect a third repeat on this slider at all
- 01:32:473 (2,3,4) - Move these a bit closer to (2) - I hesitated here when testplaying, wondering whether this was 1/2 or 1/1 apart.
- 01:55:140 (1) - Why this here ? It makes no sense whatsoever according to the song.
- 02:04:473 (7) - Why a kick slider here ? I don't think the song has any 1/4 at that point
- 318 unsnapped objects...
Well, I hate this. 2.7 slider velocity, random streams that don't fit the song, 1/2 all over the place. This only looks like something that was made for the sake of making something difficult. Sorry.
Ono's Taiko Oni
I don't understand the streams but it might just be me