Hello!
Per your request from #modreqs
Well,as the source is doriko,it's neccessary to add
Kiritan-P to Tags then.
Stack Leniency in Insane and Hard difficulties are unrankable.It should be
4 at least.
And fix Taiko for consistency.
And the last issue is about difficulty spread.Normal is 2,99 and it's actually plays like normal,but not easy.Why not to map easier difficulty then?
Otherwise it's fine in general.
[Normal]No matter,will you map Easy or not,I suggest to lower AR by 1.
00:33:225 - Why didn't you add notes here and to 00:33:569? You should follow that drums I think.Making a slider with these 2 notes won't make it harder to hit/read.
01:02:363 (4) - You don't really need a finish here,but I'd use claps instead to follow drums.
01:13:397 (4) - ^
01:19:604 - Add a note here,I hear cymbals here,so don't forget to add finish hitsound.
01:50:466 - Well,same at the first half,you need 2 notes here.
01:59:431 (3) - Oh,I read it so bad,it's not really expected at all.Make a slider,spaced with DS or stacked under previous slider: (01:59:431 - 01:59:776),that'd be easier to read.
02:19:604 (4) - And claps again,yep.
02:30:638 (4) - ^
02:36:845 - Note is missing.
03:09:949 (1) - Looks like a spacing mistake.DS lies,as we can't predict when slowdown ends,so we're reading 0.75x right up to this point,but....it was totally readable to me,and I personally like how you placed it,so,you might leave it as it is.
03:19:259 (2,3,4) - A bit odd..you wasn't using such things during the map,and anyway,if you use 1/2 rhytm,then you're missing a note at 03:19:087.So add it,and make reverse-slider out of these 3,or delete 03:19:431 (3) at all.
03:27:707 - Note is missing?
[S o r d a's Hard]There's a big gap between AR and OD..I'd rather use AR 7,then increased OD,especially when Insane uses the same AR.
Cause,it's supposed to be Hard,but not Insane,right?
And hitsounds' volume is so low..I can hear them,but not that clearly.
00:06:673 (4) - Move it farther from previous object.There was a little jumpy pattern before this slider,and they're all in the same combo,so the spacing looks wrong.
00:13:397 - Why would use notepad to make a break from here?
You can fill this space with notes.
00:51:328 (8,1) - - Same mistake as in Normal.They're too close from each other.Spacing is wrong,cause DS automatically spaces it as 0.5x but actually you should manually space these objects as 1x.
00:58:742 (3) - Doesn't looks so good,copy from (4) like this:
01:19:604 - Note is missing,there're drums,so you should add one.
01:21:500 - Remove clap,it's noisy.
01:22:363 - Again you're missing a note with cymbals.Add it please and use finish hitsound.
01:52:707 - ^ And next 2 patterns as well,so I won't point them out anymore,seems like you was following only lyrics,but not the music.
01:56:242 (2) - What's with this object? Why it's on the blue tick?
[Insane]00:26:673 (4) - Remove clap.
00:37:707 (5,6,7,1) - Hm,this spacing plays weird,how about switching (6) with (7)?
I mean this:
01:43:914 (4) - Again this clap sounds weird,could you remove it?
Some claps on red tick sounds noisy,too,but they're always repeating,so it's not really neccessary to nazi such things,you worked well on hitsounding anyway.
And mapping style is awesome,I enjoyed it
As well as mapset,the only major thing for me is missing Easy difficulty,I really wish you could map it.
Good luck~
