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00:02:248 - 00:02:857 - I think these sounds are much more valuable, maybe you should emphasize them instead of 00:02:654 - this? Also it would feel way more consistant with the next phrase

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00:21:302 - same here, I feel like something like 00:20:492 - "dk ddk kd" would fit much better here

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addes smth on the beginning part, but not in middle part, i just want to keep the spread efficiently, and mapping all the vocal

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00:03:073 (8) - k, sounds higher pitched than the last note

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00:04:380 (9,10) - ctrl+g because of the pitch of the vocal
00:05:597 (13,14) - ctrl+g, and then 00:06:002 (15,16) - change to d = https://i.imgur.com/o689YWD.png
00:30:529 (95) - change to k, i think the pitch stays the same from the previous note in 00:30:124 (94)
00:31:948 (100,101) - ctrl+g
00:35:394 (110) - change to d

00:42:083 (130) - change to k like i already said

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ctrl G somenotes and keep the rest, some notes that you mention is clearly have low pitch, i'll keep them as d
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00:05:506 (13,14) - you should ctrl+g on these two

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00:05:799 (14,15) - change to k d? this sounds better and matches the 3 notes of the same tone in the song

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keep, i want to emphasize 00:06:002 (15) - so i use don for 14

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00:08:127 (19,20) - I feel like these ones are pretty much monotone, but 00:08:532 (21) - this sound has a hard consonant, so it could be emphasized. So basically change kat from 19 to 21. Also add 00:10:154 (26) - kat here for the same reason

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but the pitch isnt that high, i can say, the vocal is quite calm

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00:09:225 (23) - 00:10:036 (25) - I had a thought if you could change these notes to k for more conistancy and emphasis on the 00:09:023 (22) - 00:10:239 (26) - vocals.

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change 22 to k, and keep 26 since it have same pitch with 25

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00:12:195 (32,33,34,35) - Not important, if you're following vocal, ddkd (emphasize ko"ro") OR dkkd (same pitch) might suit better.

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00:12:803 (35) - maybe move this note to here 00:13:006 -

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added note there

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00:12:803 - mending apus, bagian lembut iki, enak start dari drum kanan. panjang e

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00:13:006 - A slight SV change here ould be good here, eh? Whaddya say?

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i'll discuss it with faputa

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00:13:614 - Add a note to emphasize the percussion better, as well as make this note as a kat to improve the flow here.

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00:14:293 (39,40) - ctrl+g for snare->bassdrum sound

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changed to ddk for vocal

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00:15:235 - mau delete? e

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delet aja , biar concept 4plet terjaga dan terlestarikan

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00:17:262 (50,51,52,53) - This could work better as a d k d k pattern, because vocals and stuff

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00:17:668 (53,54) - have same pitch, i keep it as kk

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00:17:262 (51,52,53,54) - It feels a little bit different with others. how about changing to d k d k or similar to something to follow vocals?

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00:17:668 (53,54) - exactly have same lyric and pitch so dkdk doest rly fit there

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00:18:659 - Create red line, omit barline. Double barlines are illegal.
00:42:968 - Same thing here. Both difficulties.

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00:21:610 (64,65,66,67) - change to kddk, because you follow the snare here 00:20:799 (61) -

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i follow the vocal

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00:24:448 (73) - change to k? this sounds better and makes a 2-2 section that matches the 2 higher notes and 2 lower notes in this part of the song.

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changed to kddk

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00:25:664 (78) - change to k.

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keep 78, for vocal, change 77

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00:26:181 (80,82,82) - How about changing to ddd? I want to increase the tension of pitch here, you can feel it when you have changed the tripets to ddd. Also, kat will emphasize the vocal better.

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im not sure ab out ddd, since it have high tone snare and vocal at 00:26:789 - is not high enough, i'll change it 00:26:789 - to don

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did smth here

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00:28:502 (89) - make this d, and make 00:28:907 (90) - a k since the latter actually has a distinct sound that signifies the use of the k. The first note I linked is lower pitched than the k before it, so it should be a d

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89 is don, and i want to keep 90 as don as well, to avoid repeating pattern

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Poii I think you misunderstood something because I changed the offset which causes the wrong notes to show in the editor. 00:28:482 (89) - is actually kat right now but should be don, as Dusk suggested. I also agree that 00:28:887 (90) - should be kat.

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00:29:293 - I feel like this space is too empty because you mapped that beat previously 00:27:266 (85,86,87) -

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make doublet on the prev beat, for consistency

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00:30:033 (96) - change to D? For consistency with 00:26:789 (86) - , also because it's pretty strong sound here I think it's worth a finisher. Also add finisher 00:33:276 (108) - here too if you agree

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why i put big D in 86 bcs it have cymbal crash, and 96 is only vocal and guitar, make it k bcs i want to emphasize both of them

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00:31:857 (101) - I dunno, I feel like this note shouldn't be there

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i think its fit f orme, as a connection, i think too much doublet isn5t fun at all

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00:35:887 - there you can add a d, here 00:36:090 - k, here 00:36:292 - k again and ends here 00:36:495 - with d sounds good ^^

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00:38:232 (118,119,120) - Avoid using the vocals here and follow the same rhythm as the pattern that matches it. Change to k d k k.
This pattern should look like: https://puu.sh/zM2II/5ba1c04f10.png

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vocal mapping is my basic concept, so i wont do that, i change the pattern lil bit

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00:38:735 (127) - change to k for consistency with other same moments?

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00:38:127 (125) - also change to d, to emphasize higher vocals and to avoid too much kats in a row

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kat for high vocal, i think thats not a real prob with too many kats

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00:40:867 (125) change to K since this is the same snare sound as 126

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00:41:143 - kasih brek enak, 00:41:954 - biar ni yg kuat aja yg ttp.

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00:41:860 - add a k here, that snare sound is really prominent and doesn't make the pattern harder at all

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big kat

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00:43:502 (136) - change to k because of the rhythm
01:06:407 (226) - change to d, the pitch of the vocal stays same in the prev. note

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vocal for 136
226 have hiher pitch for me

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00:44:718 (141) - there isnt any significant reason for this to be a katu, change to don. it sounds better this way anyways :)

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don

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00:45:934 - remove triple, not in the oni, not in the music either.

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00:49:178 - same thing

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00:58:907 - another, you know if you did it more.

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yes

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00:47:238 (156) - add d better, the k alli is very strong

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i think k is with the vocal

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00:47:465 (160) - lower pitched than the first note of the pattern, so make this a d

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00:48:681 - kiai seems to be lacking rest moments, I think this could easily be removed to get a 2/1 break without taking away anything from the map

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same for 00:58:411 -

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00:48:681 (163) - I would put d here because its so empty :D

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mentioned in lasse's mod

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00:52:735 - This is the only spot in the kiai you ignored the cymbal for a triple. Might be better to stay constant?

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k

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00:55:066 - What about adding a triple here? To reinforce the little build up, it'd emphasis the vocal as well pretty nicely.

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not rly sure about double triplet, since fapu didnt have any 5plet or any longer 1/4 pattern

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00:55:168 (183,184,185,186,187) - d kkk d is better in way of finisher emphasis and following both instruments and vocal in my opinion.

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00:55:752 (189) - here k, here 00:55:752 - one d, it sounded better

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i think you use wrong mp3, it doesnt accurate

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Yeah lol

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00:55:776 (187) - While having this kat I'd suggest you to change this to don because the pitch is dropping here, as well as improve the flow here. And one more thing, it will emphasize the Big Kat better.

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don'd

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pitch raised

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00:56:070 (185) - add finisher like in oni.

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yes

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00:57:195 (195) - k for consistency. It's higher vocals than previous one.

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ok

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00:57:286 (188,189,190) - this should be the same as the 3 notes before it.

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don

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00:58:411 - 00:58:614 - I suggest d here and remove this 00:59:019 (203) -

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removed and added

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00:59:019 - add note? drums are pretty strong and you tend to represent them (cf. 01:02:262 - )

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yee

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01:00:211 - d, 01:00:414 - k please

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keep, its fit with the vocal for me

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ddK since the last K have higher pitch

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01:06:387 - ctrl+g this k and next d , the same vocal sound you marked a moment ago as d and the same snare sound you marked as k are now inverted.

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forgot to comment,its ctrl+g'd

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01:06:610 - Add a note here, not only can a drum sound be heard, but the break here feels weird

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add

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01:06:996 - marking this bassdrum with a d would make this pattern easier and more intuitive as [ddkk]

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keep on vocal

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01:07:198 - ctrl+g this d and next k for [kdk] pattern highlighting the snare-bass-snare drum fill here

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emphasize the vocal

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01:07:624 (225) - change to d to give note before it more impact.

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maybe keep it for now, i think its fit with the vocal, so

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01:10:979 - similar to last point, a rhythm like https://i.imgur.com/lkNn8ze.jpg would work well here to get a 3/2 break while still following the song

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01:11:658 - move 1/2 earlier to 01:11:455 - since prominent bassdrum sound is there

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i did smth there

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01:12:195 (249) - I feel like this note could be emphasized more, maybe change 01:11:789 (247,248) - this to dd?

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247 and 248 was a snare, i put kk there for consistency with other parts

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01:12:286 (244) - add finish, there's a cymbal and a huge vocal hit.

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yes

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01:14:806 - k, 01:15:009 - d, 01:15:211 - k, 01:15:414 - d, 01:15:617 - d, 01:15:819 - k, Better consistency in the rhythm

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your timestamp is clearly inaccurate, sorry

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Uhh

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01:14:830 (256,257) - both could be finish because these note covers the finishes in the song

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yes

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01:15:033 - Not hearing a cymbal or really a note here, considering removing the finish and moving the note to 01:15:235 - .

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remove that finisher and moved

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01:17:759 - remove triple, not in oni, not in music but it's in a different spot than the others.

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01:17:871 (268,269) - maybe make these 2 notes finishers? they seem to have a higher emphasis that the previous notes so I don't see why not • >• ...

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no, i want to emphasize 01:18:681 - so if i change them to finisher, it wont stand out and seem flat

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01:17:962 (262,263) change to D since loud drums can be heard here. Also consistent with Oni difficulty

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01:17:962 (262,263) - just a k, bcs i mainly use big notes for cymbal here, so keep this

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01:18:276 (268) - Change to d (emphasize finisher and follow lower-pitched vocal) also matches with Oni

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don

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could also just skip 01:19:087 - or something else in this part since it's all 1/2 + 1/1 until end of the map

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deleted smth

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01:21:316 (277,287) - This is also not important, but this might be useful in attraction purpose.

Change these note to k to make variation, so you'll get
ddk --> dkk --> ddk --> dkk(dd) (Second triplet also matches with Faputa's)

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its follow the piano, i'll keep it bcs i think its can fill the piano very well

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01:21:316 (280) - make it k, delete 01:21:519 (281) - , 01:21:722 - add note here. Better emphasis of piano

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the snare is quite strong and very catchy, i wont miss that, so i put dd for the piano so it still emphasized and fit with the drum

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01:21:407 (272) maybe change to k here to avoid using the pattern d k d d k repetitively

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just 3 in a row, i think its ok

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01:21:722 - add a d here so that you can alternate the patterns

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will consider this

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01:22:330 - fill this with a k or something please, there's no reason for this to be empty.

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k

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01:22:330 - k here

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k

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01:22:330 - You seemed to forget adding note here.

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3rd time i see same mod, why you guys dont put it on respond, dank

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01:23:952 (288) - move this to 01:24:154 - (or add a note there). Also I think 01:24:965 (292) - k feels better here

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maybe no, i think my pattern still can emphsize the piano, and for me 01:24:154 - not quite strong and audible, so yeap, no

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01:24:154 - you could most definitely add a note (d) here for the light piano.

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too low and i think note at 01:24:357 - can emphasize it

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01:24:357 (286,287,288,289) - kkdk cuz it would reflect better one particular instrument here, you don't need to follow exclusively the guitar like you did it in the beginning

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its piano, and i think ddkdd is fit there since the last 2 notes have same pitch

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makes more sense now lol, i thought following the "cling thing" instrument is better like in fapu's diff

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01:26:181 (293) - It would be better to use k following the melody like 01:27:398.

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01:31:046 (310) - Same as above.

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01:27:691 (292) maybe move this to 01:27:489 and change it to k to pick up the piano note at 01:27:489 instead of mapping to the drum only

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01:30:914 - this [ddd] is misplaced, it should be 1/2 earlier in 01:30:712 -

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01:30:914 - this [ddd] is misplaced, it should be 1/2 earlier in 01:30:712 -

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After you moved it, you can fill 01:31:117 - with either a d to match the sound, or with a k to make a more readable pattern

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sure

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nothing wrong with kat, prev note have lower pitch

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01:31:745 - should match the oni with a finisher and then spinner imo

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yes

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01:31:847 Start of spinner different from Oni. Move the start of this spinner to 01:31:948

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it moved by itself

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01:31:857 - You could maybe make the volume gradually lower? Well.. I find the volume a bit high there, so even if you don't like the effect I'm suggesting, try to reduce it a little bit from the beginning at least?

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yeah my bad, to not add any greenline there

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