00:35:636 (1,2) - I see what you're going for here, but there's noise in the middle of 1 at 00:35:811, but no noise in the middle of 2. For this reason, I wouldn't recommend having 1 and 2 look and play the same.
I'd recommend turning 00:35:636 (1) into 3 notes, or maybe 1 note and a 1/2 slider.
00:50:287 (1,2,3,1) - I feel as though these should be spaced farther away from eachother since it's the start of the kiai. Feels underwhelming as of right now.