00:24:822 - The sound here is very strong, and I feel like it's very inexpressive to leave it as a slider tail. 00:24:473 (1) - Why don't you try switching to two circles to make the song a little stronger?
00:32:846 (1) - Overall, there's a bit more focus on the vocals, and I feel like the unnecessary 3/4 here makes the rhythm of this section feel awkward, so I'd like to see it switched to 1/2 rhythm to focus more on the vocals.
00:35:636 (1,2) - I see what you're going for here, but there's noise in the middle of 1 at 00:35:811, but no noise in the middle of 2. For this reason, I wouldn't recommend having 1 and 2 look and play the same.
I'd recommend turning 00:35:636 (1) into 3 notes, or maybe 1 note and a 1/2 slider.
00:43:136 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's one of the harder patterns in the map, but I don't think the sound here is that strong, and I think it would be nice if you could make the rhythm a little easier.
00:50:287 (1,2,3,1) - I feel as though these should be spaced farther away from eachother since it's the start of the kiai. Feels underwhelming as of right now.
01:07:729 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:09:125 (1,2,3,4) - The front one is following the vocal, the back one is following the drums. It's the same musical flow, so why did you suddenly need to switch rhythm layers? I think it would be nice if you could focus on one rhythm layer.