00:07:470 (1) - ncing in 1/4 is really tricky to read even if it's at the end, could move this one 1 note forward (same thing at 02:06:581 (1) - and 03:05:247 (1) - )
00:39:914 (18) - could split the section with an nc here (could also use one at 02:24:358 (14) - to split the buildup)
01:07:247 (16,17,18,19,20) - dkdkk follow the guitare pretty well but kinda flow a bit weird with the kkd here 01:06:803 (13,14,15) - . You may want to make the pattern smoother by using a kddkk. kddkk still keep the ascending pitch guitare sound you're following while making the transition easier from kkd to this xxxxx pattern.
01:11:469 (22) - Surely you'll place a finisher here! Right? It would be consistent with the whole rest of xxxxX patterns you've already laid out yourself in this diff ^-^
01:41:692 (27) - if you want a smoother flow with the dkd; you can easily change that note as k. However you lose a bit of emphasis on kkd here 01:42:136 (28,29,30) - . So it's really up to what you prefer.
01:54:358 (1) - could move nc one note back, should also do it at 02:33:581 (1) - and 02:37:025 (1) - for consistency with 02:29:692 (1) -
02:05:692 - I'd rather have the 5 notes pattern start here instead of here 02:05:025 - . just like this: 1 is the note here 02:05:025 -
Current pattern kinda feel like a weird in between by following vocals & drum at the same time.
If you decide to change it, from the screenshot 4 can be any color you want and 11 can be deleted if you feel like continuous triplet and 5 notes patterns are too much.