I think the kiai rhythms at some places feels off and somewhat random. This is mainly due to your emphasis and rhythm choices, which include jumps that doesn't follow either the vocals or the instrumental part of the song. As a result, the player may struggle to understand the rhythm, making the cursor movement feel more random rather than naturally following the melody.
For example, in 01:39:805 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6), you used a repetitive triangular pattern that doesn't align well with the vocals. The transition from vocals to instrumental at 01:40:783 (2,3) doesn't work very well, where's 01:41:436 (5,6) feels much smoother as it naturally leads into the next lyrics. Additionally, it seems questionable since the second half of the kiai is more focused on vocals at 01:50:892. And also, the moment 01:56:436 (2,3,4,5), where the rhythm shift to circles feels random - maybe applying Ctrl+G would improve consistency? Same for 02:51:218 (3,4,5).
The second kiai is also consist of small amount rhythm issues. 02:46:327 (3,4) ; 02:52:522 (2,3) - Jumps like this do not illustrate the rhythm of the song and looks more randomly, switching from the vocals to instumental - just place a slider instead. Also 02:51:544 (3,4,5) - rhythm as this one must be Ctrl+G for better vocals.
02:18:283 is also suffers for a rhythm choice. 02:18:609 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) vs. 02:13:881 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Comparing this one choice is clearly show of questionable choice of rhythm, which do not follow something. Also for the bridge section, it looks too much active (and a bit overspaced?) this moment 02:24:479 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) or, again, with repetitive construction of 02:29:370 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks monotonous, and also require some changes. As also a way of solution, try to stick rhythm like you did here 02:13:066 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) and not to make so active in jumps, because it begin looks like another kiai, but the intense not as kiais.
(about kiai rhythms) or another variant to use rhythm like 01:44:207 (1,2,3) - in Insane diff also looks cool, imo. rhythm from Insane could be also used in some places.