Subarashiki Guuzou Sekai

00:23:476 (4) - Two kick sliders would be cooler for the guitar.

00:24:968 (1) - Extend this one to the blue tick for the guitar sound.

00:24:968 (1) - missnap bro

00:29:443 (2,3,4,5,1) - Nitpick #1:

00:40:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1) - Nitpickt #2:

00:47:675 (1) - Remove NC.

00:50:824 (3,4,5,6,1) - Flow/emphasis here feels way too similar to what you did at 00:49:995 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -

Would contrast the movement a bit more by doing something like this instead:

00:53:642 (3,4,5,6) - Rhythm would fit better as a 1/2 into a double at 00:53:890 -

00:59:940 (2,3,4,5) - vs 01:00:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Would change rotation for the second set of jumps to differentiate these groupings a bit better.

01:02:758 (3) - Would move this closer to 01:02:426 (2) - something like x:260 y:163 to give better emphasis to 01:02:923 (4) - with higher spacing.

01:03:421 (7,1) - Spacing on (1) should be much smaller compared to 01:03:255 (6,7) -

Would place (1) in between 01:03:255 (6,7) - like:

01:08:641 (3) - HS feedback.

01:08:890 (1) - Remove NC.

01:10:051 (1,1) - Would change patterning a bit for these, giving 01:10:051 (1) - a wider angle instead like:

01:14:526 (2,3) - I play this. I get dopamine.
01:17:178 (2,3) - I play this. I get melotonin. Give me dopamine.

01:16:515 (5) - Move downwards.

01:18:006 (1,2) - This would fit better as a 1/1 slider for the vocal instead.

01:18:504 (3,4) - Would turn this into a 1/2 slider to represent the vocals more accurately.

01:18:835 (3,4,5) - buff

01:19:498 (1,4) - Fix stack.

01:20:658 (6,1) - Massive spacing for such calm vocals.

Would nerf spacing considerably.

01:20:824 (1,2,3) - Movement feels very forced and doesn't play well at all compared to previous patterns in the chorus.

Would try something here like:

01:24:388 (2) - HS

01:26:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nitpick #3:

01:28:117 (6,7,8) - Same suggestion from #4647730

01:47:209 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Whistles.

01:54:305 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Would adjust your jumps into something more consistent with what you been doing before, since the wide angles here are not very expected.

02:06:404 (3,4) - Would increase the angle for these to represent the intensity buildup for those jumps like:

02:10:714 (6,7,8,1) - Nitpick #4:

02:10:714 (6,7,8,1) - Nitpick #5:

02:11:044 (1,2) - Fix stack.

02:11:045 (9,1) - what do you think of doing a 1/2 slider cuz ending the sound on 02:11:210 with a slider-end goes hard asf

02:11:211 (2) - Single circle would fit better.

02:38:642 (8) - Ctrl+G this slider so 02:38:393 (7,8,9,1) - plays somewhat better.

02:40:382 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:41:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I get that the guitar starts playing for these, but spacing goes up way too quickly and it does not fit the intensity of this section.

Would nerf these considerably and make the spacing buildup more reasonable.

02:48:835 (3,4) - Ctrl+G for vocals.

02:54:139 (3,4,5) - Nitpick #6:

02:54:968 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Spacing here is so underwhelming, it doesn't contrast at all with previous section.

Would buff overall spacing for this section to better reflect the intensity this part of the song a bit better.

03:05:824 (2,3) - Move two pixels down and one to the right to fix stack.

03:06:155 (4,5,6,7) - Nitpick #7:

03:06:238 (5) - Ctrl+G so the pattern plays a little bit better.

03:19:581 (1) - This is supposed to be at 03:19:498 -

03:19:829 (3) - NC

03:19:830 (3) - Ctrl+G to give better movement emphasis to 03:20:161 (1) -

03:23:144 (2,3,4,5) - Nitpick #8:

03:29:940 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+G so it plays better into 03:30:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -

03:36:570 (5,6) - Ctrl+G for vocals.