01:21:786 (4) - keeping momentum here would be nice rather than cutting the movement since intensity is still pretty high here.
01:14:202 (1,2,1) - would expect this to be a lot smaller spacing considering the vocal isn't that strong to warrant the same intensity spacing as 01:11:674 (6,7,8,1) -
01:06:449 (6,7,8) - give these jumps a little bit wider angle, so it would stand out a lil more from the rest 01:05:607 (1,2,3,4,5).
01:13:810 (1,2,3,4) - kinda confusing rhythm you have going on here, just do like 4 1/2 sliders for the vocals?
00:47:469 (1,2) - replacing all of these with circles wouldnt be that bad of an idea ya know for the vocals
01:28:444 (1,2,3,4) - doing a clockwise movement here would give a nicer variety to the movement since there are already a lot of counterclock movement like 01:26:615 (4,5,1,2,3,4).