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00:33:217 - can be more comfortable by avoiding shield imo

Just because this is the hardest diff I don't think that 00:34:297 - have to be this stuffed. And it also happens at Infinity and Transcendence diffs

Try something like this https://imgur.com/a/CGnZrzp, and also nerf this part for easier diffs.

With this you will achieve to avoid the second column anchor, and also making it more gameplay-friendly.

00:34:777, 00:38:617, etc can be more interesting but not only that I feel like the notes are pretty random cause there is no main focus such as the piano try incorporating some mini jacks for the repetitive sounds this will help with adding some more dynamic to the chart.

00:35:257 (35257|1) - this sound is actually at 00:35:377

00:36:457 (36457|1,36577|2) - I think better to ctrl+h this, left hand are a bit heavy here

should check other section too

00:41:497 - how about this

want to avoid this anchor 00:41:257 (41257|1,41377|1,41497|1,41617|1,41737|1) -

should check other section too

00:52:017 - refrain from such bold copy paste as the vocals arent entirely symmetric here causing a vocal to go missing here

00:54:277 (54277|2) - to consistent with 00:54:037 (54037|2) - , that notes should be at 00:54:217 -
00:54:757 (54757|1) - on 00:54:697 -
00:55:237 (55237|2) - on 00:55:177 - , etc..

applied 02:26:137 - too

i dont understand your choice from 00:58:297 to 01:01:657 because you got an LN - edited Jumpstream with doubles each 1/2 beat yet there is a very distinguishable beat each 1/1 that in my opinion should not have the same representation as the 1/2's doubles

00:58:337 (58337|0,58377|1,58417|2,58457|0,58497|1) - 1/6 feels off, try this with 1/4

also 1/6 release are also feels a bit off, so simplify it to 1/4

check other section too

01:01:417 (61417|3,61417|2,61537|2,61537|0) - leaving especially these two doubles into this https://imgur.com/a/bI3SZDL would make the drum beat and the synth more clear imo.

01:01:657 - this place feels strange when there are similar sounds but its currently more like a random stream.

This can be fixed easily deleting 01:02:057 (62057|1) and 01:03:977 (63977|1), it makes 01:02:137 sound more neat when playing, it also would help to make this inevitable anchord 01:03:457 (63457|0,63577|0,63697|0,63817|0) less uncomfortable.

01:11:017 (71017|1,71137|1) - this is way too simple for this sound, instead try something like this https://imgur.com/a/F79JDUH

in the 1st kiai 01:13:177 - 01:28:537 the song pretty much continues to have consistent melody and i think the bits where there's suddenly no density for a couple notes is off-putting

This is a very LN heavy map obviously so why not connect all streams with LNs?? I don't see the change in the song as to not to but if there's any hint that's stopping you from connecting them just let me know

01:13:377 (73377|3,74337|1,75297|3,76257|2,77217|0,78177|2,79137|0,80097|1,81057|3,82017|1,82977|3,83937|2,84897|0,85857|2,86817|0) - some of these notes hasn't the same release, if there's not a reason for it (even when they are for the same sound), then fix it doing them the same length.

01:21:337 (81337|1) - , 01:25:177 (85177|2) - should be 1/12 longer imo, have similar with 01:17:497 (77497|2) - , 01:20:377 (80377|1) - etc..

01:32:617 - here you can use different LN lengths or other methods to express the ascending sounds, instead of just monotonous inverse LNs

01:32:977 - can be a little more interactive some feels like it doesn't follow the song that right compared to the intensity

as an example.

01:37:417 (97417|0) - try to enlarge this note into 1/2 to make this pattern different to 01:39:457 (99457|3,99457|0) because there are different sounds, it's a very small detail but still can be noticeable.

same at 01:39:457 (99457|3,99457|0) -

01:41:917 - here are some sounds (that are actually at 1/6 if i'm correct) but you can simplify it and also putting a note for it at fourth column. It wouldn't make a big mess considering that the next note is the big LN

01:43:057 (103057|3,103177|1,103297|2,103537|2,103657|0,103777|1) - consider making these doubles these seem louder then 01:44:017 (104017|2,104037|3) - for example

01:54:517 (114517|3) - should be on 01:54:577

i dont think this section is as intense as to have this density, notes 02:22:777 (142777|0) - probably are better off nerfed since this is just a build up not the kiai

02:27:877 (147877|0,147937|1,147997|0) - nitpick, swap these notes col to reduce the long anchor 02:27:757 (147757|0,147877|0,147997|0,148117|0,148237|0,148357|0,148477|0,148597|0,148717|0,148837|0,148957|0) -

02:29:017 - I think you can put long LN just like other diff here

02:32:677 (152677|2) - small mod (no kudos plz), I think you forgot to put this note as LN

03:15:097 - you can make double LN here because Infinity using double rice

03:15:217 (195217|2) - is a ghost note because it's 03:15:337 (195337|3) - that starts at 03:15:277
and i believe 03:15:697 (195697|0) - is a ghost note too so you could rearrange the LN lenghts for this last couple seconds after fixing the ghost notes :) the ending is fine but I (((personally))) like to end such an intense map with at least two holding notes rather than 1