SICK feat. Natsuki Karin (Cut Ver.)

00:08:034 (8034|3,8294|2) - can be stacked since have the same vowels, even 00:15:860 - / 00:16:120 - | and 00:16:381 - / 00:16:642 - all vowels ends with u, it would be cool being stacked,

00:09:599 (9599|1,9860|0) - / 00:13:512 (13512|0,13773|1) - / 00:17:947 (17947|2,18207|1) - too

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why is there a jack here 00:10:668 (10668|2,10755|2) - to me it feel out of place for the hi hat sound

i suggest making the pattern like this

i think moving this 00:13:277 (13277|0) - to 3 and this 00:13:451 (13451|2) - to 1 so it can flow better

00:14:842 (14842|3,14929|3) - i feel that the jack here is out of place similar to #4161229 but i suggest this pattern

i think this pattern 00:19:016 (19016|0,19103|0) - similar to the other two like this #4161238 #4161229 is out of place

i suggest this pattern

similar to #4161239 this 00:23:190 (23190|2,23277|2) - feels off

i suggest this

i moved 00:23:625 (23625|3) - because it would be a bit better like this if you copy the pattern above

these two sections sound similar but you mapped them completely different

00:32:364 (32364|0,32855|2,32855|1,32855|3) -

vs

00:36:695 (36695|3,36695|0,36695|1,36695|2) -

i suggest making the first one like the second and removing the vocal note

00:32:364 (32364|3) - move the tail of this ln to the triplet

this pattern here 00:35:375 (35375|3,35495|3,35615|3,35735|2,35735|3,35855|2,35855|3,35975|3,35975|2,36095|3,36095|2,36215|3,36215|2,36335|2) - feels much harder then the rest of this section of triples, please rework it

the second part 00:40:115 (40115|2,40115|1,40175|0,40175|3,40235|2,40295|1,40295|0,40355|2,40355|3,40415|0,40415|1,40475|3,40535|0,40535|2,40535|1) - of this pattern plays the same as the first part 00:39:575 (39575|3,39575|2,39635|0,39635|1,39695|2,39695|3,39755|0,39815|1,39815|3,39875|2,39935|1,39935|0,39995|2,40055|0,40055|3) - even tho the sounds are completely different they play very similar, i suggest changing the second part because it is less intense as the first part

00:40:655 (40655|3,40655|2) - this could be a triple like how you did the others before

00:40:715 - / 00:41:435 - should be triplets

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this note 00:42:875 (42875|3) - goes to nothing and this sound 00:42:755 has no note

00:42:935 (42935|1) - this note it's missplaced, the rhythm it's at 00:42:815 -

other missing single notes : 00:43:295 -

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this 00:44:315 (44315|2) - is a snare so you can make it a double and this 00:44:375 (44375|3,44375|1,44375|0) - is a kick so it can be a single

you can make this a 00:46:175 (46175|0,46175|3) - triple for the snare sound

00:46:595 (46595|2,46655|1) - this transition it's easier compared with 00:46:955 (46955|3,47015|0) - , also look at this anchor here 00:46:715 (46715|3,46835|3,46955|3,47075|3,47195|3) -:

to improve it we can do something like:

i honestly preferr the second one since it's more playable and it remove the 4 note anchor at the start, but it depends by you the final choice

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00:47:555 (47555|2) - should be charted as doublet (suggest note on the 4th column) to match with 00:47:675 (47675|1,47675|0) -

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you could make this 00:47:615 (47615|0) - a double since the spacing would allow for it similar to the other

00:47:795 (47795|3,47795|0,47835|2,47835|1) - ik that's intentional, but what about making this more linear by placing at 3|4 columns the first doublet and 1|2 columns the 1/6 ?

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i dont hear a sound here, why is there a note here? 00:50:375 (50375|0) - if this is not intentional then please remove it

comparing this 00:51:095 (51095|3,51095|0,51175|2,51175|1,51255|3,51255|0,51335|1,51335|2) - to this 00:51:575 (51575|1,51575|0,51655|0,51655|3,51735|1,51735|2,51815|0,51815|3) - this they are the same sounds but the second one is a bit harder due to the mini jack at 00:51:575 (51575|0,51655|0) - i think you should move this 00:51:575 (51575|1,51575|0) - to the center

there is a second snare here 00:55:415

i suggest charging this pattern to allow emphasis of the snare 00:56:615 (56615|1,56615|2,56675|3,56675|0,56735|1,56735|2,56795|3,56795|0,56855|2,56855|1) -

this 00:58:135 (58135|0,58135|3) - should be a sniggle if you want to follow the other layering of the 1/3 section

00:58:275 - i dont get why you charted this as doublet, the sound it's the same of 00:58:195 (58195|0) -, if you make it single note 00:58:435 (58435|3,58435|1) - would be emphatized better

also 00:58:835 - should be charted as triplet

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00:59:075 - missing doublet, it's like 00:59:555 (59555|2) -

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01:04:835 - missing doublets like 01:12:515 -

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this 01:07:175 (67175|0) - should be a 1/4 ln similar to 01:06:935 (66935|0) -

this should be a triple 01:12:695 (72695|3,72695|1,72695|0,72695|2) - like how this is 01:11:255 (71255|0,71255|2,71255|1) -

there is a snare sound here 01:13:895 i suggest making this a tripple

i hear a small hi hat sound here 01:14:315 so maybe add a note here

there is a kick here 01:14:455 01:14:535 so add a double to stay consistent with the others

01:14:510 (74510|1,74510|2,74585|0,74585|3) - i think it's overcharted, the real doublets should be only 01:14:435 - / 01:14:675 - / 01:14:915 -

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turn to a double for the kick 01:14:615

i do not understand why these notes are here 01:14:675 (74675|0,74735|1,74795|3,74915|1,74975|3,75035|0) -

i hear kicks here 01:15:455 01:15:515 01:15:575

01:16:355 - to 01:16:595 - it's intentional do dont chart that sounds ?

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01:17:075 (77075|3,77155|3,77155|2,77235|2,77315|3) - right hand it's heavy, i'd suggest to move 01:17:155 (77155|3) - in the center to avoid that minijack on the 4th column, in this way you'll balance each sides

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i dont here what this note is for 01:21:095 (81095|0) - so maybe remove it

01:21:395 (81395|2,81395|1) - make this lns like 01:18:995 (78995|3,78995|0) -

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01:21:815 make a double to stay consistent with the rest of them in this section

01:22:775 make a triple to stay consistent with the rest of the crashes in this section

make a double to stay consistent with the rest of the kicks please 01:24:935

01:26:675 (86675|3) - ghost ln here, it doesnt follow a new vocal like 01:19:235 (79235|2,86675|3) -

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i hear a kick here 01:28:655

make it a double to keep it consistent 01:29:255

01:29:555 - should be charted as triplet since the offset it's involved in a snare sound

01:30:515 - missing hihat

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01:32:915 (92915|1) - move this to the 4th column for playability, then 01:33:395 (93395|3) - to the 2nd and 01:33:515 (93515|1) - to the 3rd

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01:33:635 - same suggestion of #4171297, graces for squared sounds are really weird to play, also why it have less graces than the insane diff

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make this a triple for the snare 01:33:815