01:44:823 -> 01:45:485 - you can add notes in 1/2 here following the drums, the bpm is very lenient you don't necessarily need this big of a break for this difficulty unless the structure really benefits from it
01:49:676 - this suffers from the same as 01:37:102 again but i think here its a bit more awkward to fit the pattern since the drums die down a bit, id say to have a note at 01:52:102 so its the same as oni but honestly its more of a bandaid fix than anything
02:43:279 - the pattern you did here is pretty nice, i think you should do the same for the rest of this section while adjusting the patterns around a bit to differentiate it from the rest of the map