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00:58:499 - honestly you could spruce up this pattern a bit because it feels underwhelming to just play a mono when places like 02:12:617 / 02:41:293 represents it a lot more nicely

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idk why that was a mono lol

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01:04:235 - i think the changing the pattern to something like this represents the song better

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agreed, applied to all instances of that lyric

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01:06:661 - i don't think there's anything in the song worth enough to represent this as a kdkdkdk, you could probably make it something like a kdkkdkd for the improv to flow a bit better

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kdkdkkd

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01:25:963 - you could make this a don to have the same progression you did on 01:10:852 where it goes K ddddK dkddK but the other way around

same for 02:40:080

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i like that

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01:39:418 - add a note here since there's sound here

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01:41:183 - same here

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01:39:418 - i don't hear a sound?
01:41:183 - altered pattern a bit to fit song better

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02:01:588 - idk if you're representing vocals here but you should change the pattern to something like this:

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oops yes, makes it more consistent

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02:12:617 - should probably get more feedback on this but for me at least i was getting a bit thrown off by the very harsh volume changes on these patterns even though i get what you're going for

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changed from 30->80% to 50->80% because i like the volume changes; the previous one did sound off

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02:33:573 - nitpick but could maybe change the kkkdk on this pattern so you don't play kkkdk twice in a row?

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lol i like that actually

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02:57:176 - the repetition idea here is pretty nice but you could maybe switch up 02:59:161 a bit so it doesn't drag on the same pattern for as long?

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done, also tweaked patterns around it

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03:24:639 (1200,1202) - would remove these two notes to make it easier to transition the density

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i don't want to remove notes on clear drum sounds, so i just deleted 03:23:977

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04:05:227 - maybe move this to 04:05:448 so the improv for the vocal to flow a bit better? more of a nitpick though

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i like it better that way so yes

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04:14:327 - kiai flashes, basically the same problem as #4413620

consider removing this greenline cuz it doesn't contribute anything meaningful to playability

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fixed from #4413651

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04:21:441 - awesome

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