00:58:499 - honestly you could spruce up this pattern a bit because it feels underwhelming to just play a mono when places like 02:12:617 / 02:41:293 represents it a lot more nicely
01:06:661 - i don't think there's anything in the song worth enough to represent this as a kdkdkdk, you could probably make it something like a kdkkdkd for the improv to flow a bit better
02:12:617 - should probably get more feedback on this but for me at least i was getting a bit thrown off by the very harsh volume changes on these patterns even though i get what you're going for