Mr. Perfectly Fine (Taylor's Version) (From The Vault) mapped by JoshEco4‬ · beatmap discussion‬

01:36:220 - there's enough going on in the song to represent it more than 5 1/1s in a row, you could add a kat here and even make 01:36:882 play something like the other drum improvs where it goes kdd/kkd

same thing for 01:50:338 but then only have 01:50:999 be a kat instead

7 months ago

rookie oopsie

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01:44:823

01:44:823 - you can start some improv here to avoid the same issue as #4541359

7 months agoLast edited by Foxeru 7 months ago.

sure

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01:54:308

01:54:308 - this pattern is considerably longer than everything else on this section so you could remove it to split the pattern into 2 (maybe add a note on 01:55:301 so the pattern is not only full 1/2 like muzu as well)

7 months ago

sure

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02:39:529

02:39:529 - note here for consistency with 01:25:411

7 months ago

sure

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03:01:146

03:01:146 - everywhere else you placed notes where it would follow the vocals but only in here you switched it up to go only for the drums, i'd change this part to play something like 03:18:352 so this weird one off doesn't happen

same for Muzukashii

7 months ago

revised accordingly, also for muzukashii

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03:09:088

03:09:088 - more of a nitpick l but i think removing this would play nicely onto the structure

7 months ago

sure

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03:19:896

03:19:896 -> 03:21:220 - everything i've said so far was to differentiate from muzu but i think this is the one part where you should do the same as it, the vocal has a lot of emphasis on the song rn and on oni it just kinda disregards it for this section

7 months ago

sure

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03:21:441

03:21:441 - more personal but i would remove 03:22:323 and 03:23:646 to give some sense of progression from muzu towards inner oni (there's also a mod for muzu to address this)

7 months ago

sure

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03:38:867

03:38:867 - note here to follow a structure with the vocals where they all do 3plets? if you change 03:40:411 to kkd it also adds some nice contrast to the ddk that comes up later

and since you were following strictly the vocals in this little break i think you can remove 03:42:617, keeping 03:44:382 to define the break should be fine though

same for Muzukashii

7 months agoLast edited by Foxeru 7 months ago.

sure, also applied to muzu

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04:26:293