00:07:543 (5) - move NC here instead of 00:07:677 (1) - here otherwise this SV change is basically unreadable ngl
01:05:524 (1) - 01:23:013 (1) - don't really need the NC here tbh, can just remove
02:13:730 (1) - end on red tick and add a triple to blue tick instead? drum is pretty noticeable and impactful here
03:23:013 (1) - 03:23:686 (1) - 03:24:358 (1) - could maybe reduce the SV on these repeats a bit?
04:01:892 (1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - i really do not think this works well, at all -- not only is this the only instance of super fast sliders designed and structured this way in the entire map (with sliderticks, too, so it's very easy to sliderbreak on these), but it also frankly comes out of left field completely; the vocal pitch increases, sure, but it doesn't increase to the point where doing something like this is really justifiable
i don't see why something more standard could be done here, whether it be through actively emphasizing the vocals primarily or going for a more jumpy approach with the drums
yes, this is a collab diff, i get that, but this is the only instance throughout the entire difficulty where i looked at it and said "this is insanely out of place" to myself. the other parts have vastly different styles, but gameplay-wise none of them stray too far from each other and overall at least have some cohesion together