01:13:462 (3) - could maybe add NC here and move 01:12:386 (6) - NC here instead of 01:12:789 (1) - here i guess? works a bit nicer imo
02:10:099 (4) - works a bit nicer ending on 1/2 instead imo, the 3/4 extend doesn't really feel super fitting here considering you opt for 00:50:323 (1,2) - just a circle here
03:35:390 (8) - why not do the overmap like you did with 00:53:552 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the prior parts similar to this tho
04:37:811 (1,2) - kind of random stack here, could probably be spaced out at least somewhat instead