00:01:396 (1,2) - this pattern would look better like this https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/921479574594920449/1052561063989751958/image.png
00:18:477 (1) - https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/921479574594920449/1052562203775090718/image.png this slider would look much better like this.
00:20:956 - youre missing a pretty notable sound here, should atleast end the slider there. i know youre mostly focusing on vocals and the piano but here 00:18:972 (2) - you placed an object on the same sound. i would either make 2 circles or end the slider there.
01:49:975 (4,5) - 01:50:927 (4,5) - 01:51:880 (4,5) - 01:52:832 (4,5) - i would turn these circles into sliders because the circles here arent really mapped to anything, like how the circles on 01:53:070 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - are mapped to drums and pitch changes on the instrument
02:04:167 (1) - would make this wave and all the waves like it more curvy like 02:00:402 (1) - unless youre trying to go for something like "sound stronger and more noticable = curvier waves"
02:30:320 (5) - 02:32:166 (5) - 02:33:204 (1) - ok but these just look bad please curve them
02:29:281 - (storyboard) artist of Run Away should be Sunstroke Project & Olia Tira instead of Team Moldova, could also add them to tags
team moldova actually means nothing tho, nobody is gonna search for that, epic sax guy is infinitely better if u cant fit sunstroke project
07:15:599 (6,7) - if u want transition into F, better do such rhythm before https://i.imgur.com/drN6pjF.png instead of putting 400 bpm jump
07:16:191 (1) - Rules
Every slider must have a clear and visible path of movement to follow from start to end. Sliders that overlap themselves without straightforward slider borders and sliders whose individual sections are unreadable cannot be used. A slider's end position must be clear under the assumption that a player has a skin which makes slider end circles fully transparent.
i manually checked the top 15 and it looks like 9 out of 15 misread the slider
#1 -pare: ok
#2 Nightsky: misread
#3 Soups: misread
#4 MineFrostHD: ok
#5 richp2k: misread
#6 GanyUwU: ok
#7 -Tamamo-: ok
#8 [Rikaosu]: misread
#9 lawiee: misread
#10 Wolfey-: misread
#11 villix: misread
#12 Espei: misread
#13 ShigeBestWaifu: ok
#14 gogos19: misread
#15 Germany: ok
07:27:876 https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/720606803486048256/1051980502933966888/image.png?width=1202&height=676
uuuuuuhhhh... why? the object is placed after the song ended?