00:29:116 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this bit doesn't follow any layer in the song accurately - expanding jumps make no sense considering the song doesn't build up in any way plus you pretty much ignore the vocals and synth by doing this
consider at least adding a few 1/2 sliders for the vocals to improve the song representation
my suggestion is to change 00:29:748 (1,2,1,2) - to 1/2 sliders because the melody is going down in pitch here and sliders could represent the decrease in intensity better
01:40:069 (1,1,1) - because the previous spinner ends so close to the circle, there's actually a really short window where you can actually press on the circle (try it yourself, testplay the map and spam ur keys on the circle while the spinner is going)
would have atleast a 1/4 gap from previous spinner and also to the next
there's some issues with dash spacing as most of the dashes are easily overshootable if you just hold dash (like i expect a new player to)
a lot of the dashes just need a big buff in spacing, like:
00:06:760 (2,1) -
00:09:443 (4,1) -
00:14:858 (4,1) -
00:16:865 (3,4) -
00:17:532 (4,1) -
00:21:583 (2,3) -
00:28:661 (4,1) -
00:31:021 (4,1) -
00:34:064 (3,1) -
00:38:113 (2,1) -
00:40:457 (2,3) -
00:42:142 (8,1) -
00:43:145 (2,1) -
00:48:553 (2,3) -
00:55:611 (3,1) -
01:00:996 (5,1) -
01:02:011 (2,1) -
01:03:711 (5,1) -
01:05:059 (2,3) -