sliders like 00:17:936 (5) - and 00:19:907 (2) - are a little weired. If used correctly they can be really good, try fixing that.
also 00:19:907 (2) - is overlapping 00:20:563 (4) - wich makes it a little weired with it's shape.
the groops like 00:24:067 (1,2,3,4) - should be a little bit more straight and less messy, because they are making it look bad.
also these overlaps 00:38:082 (1,3) - are quite bad. its pretty hard to read and doesnt look very good.
also the map doesn't have the flow wich the song calls to.
tho hitsounds are good
it is better yes. but the spacing is slightly big, and the slider velocity is quite fast..
also their angle isnt that comprehending the map.. I whould make them hard slider points with very small / big angles like the angles on 00:13:556 (1) - 00:33:483 (4) - .
hope that helps!
i nerf the spacing of the stream part and the last chorus's slider velocity, i dont really care for much about angles and slider art stuff, i just focus more on the gameplay part of the map but i do occasionally try to do some variety here and there. meaning i dont really give two sh*ts about aesthetic.
well, if you think its about estetics you are 100% wrong. its about the gameplay and feel of the sliders.
another thing that bothers me is that at the start, at the guitar riff, at the long notes you put in a bunch of objects. in my opinion it sould be like 1 long slider following the guitar note then breaking at the snare hit. like the song gives the attention to the guitar, so the map sould be.
I'd recommend listenign through the song and adding some more timing points cuz i think the timing is off in a few places which makes you map with the wrong beat snap divisor. for example 02:06:336 (1,2,3,4) - i think is 1/8, but you've mapped it as 1/6. the timing is also off, so you could add a timing point at 02:06:117 - and change the offset with +10ms and it'd be timed more correctly. i haven't looked through all of the map for these timing changes, but yeah, just slowing down the song to .25% speed and listening for the timing and adding a few timing points in-case it changes.
also highly suggest downloading mapset verifier if u don't have it already cuz it gives a lot of info like if notes possibly are snapped incorrectly and so on :D
i feel like you honestly don't have to map start till 00:13:562 - cuz there is basically nothing to map and it plays a bit weird with the fade-in. i'd understand if it was to get a certain drain time due to the ranking criteria requiring another diff then, but it doesn't get the map up to 05:00 minutes, nor does it drag it down below 04:15 (where you'd need an insane), so i'd honestly suggest just not having anything for the intro and just starting at the high pitched guitar thing. but subjective i suppose :p
I noticed that you have not consistent guitar and drums mapping.
00:23:197 (2,3) - correct piece of mapping a guitar
00:21:664 (3,4) - literally the second earlier same beat type piece you messed up.
00:35:679 (3,4) - same
01:25:825 (1,2,3) - new pattern appeared?
01:31:080 (1,2,3) - and more
01:38:088 (1,2,3) - and this one is not bad and you probably should use it but with a little correction.
there's no sounds. If you want to map a lyrics, make a 1/4 snap note-slider pattern 00:19:584 (2) 00:19:913 (4,5) 00:20:350 (7,8) 00:20:788 (10)