sliders like 00:17:936 (5) - and 00:19:907 (2) - are a little weired. If used correctly they can be really good, try fixing that.
also 00:19:907 (2) - is overlapping 00:20:563 (4) - wich makes it a little weired with it's shape.
the groops like 00:24:067 (1,2,3,4) - should be a little bit more straight and less messy, because they are making it look bad.
also these overlaps 00:38:082 (1,3) - are quite bad. its pretty hard to read and doesnt look very good.
also the map doesn't have the flow wich the song calls to.
tho hitsounds are good
well, if you think its about estetics you are 100% wrong. its about the gameplay and feel of the sliders.
another thing that bothers me is that at the start, at the guitar riff, at the long notes you put in a bunch of objects. in my opinion it sould be like 1 long slider following the guitar note then breaking at the snare hit. like the song gives the attention to the guitar, so the map sould be.
it is better yes. but the spacing is slightly big, and the slider velocity is quite fast..
also their angle isnt that comprehending the map.. I whould make them hard slider points with very small / big angles like the angles on 00:13:556 (1) - 00:33:483 (4) - .
hope that helps!