I like this song.
https://www.sasakuration.com/ergosum
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NZecO3stfmI
https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm35663527
https://www.bilibili.com/video/av67275458/ (Romanizes without capitals)
You have two choices for the metadata:
Video Content
Title: レプリカ
R.Title: replica
Artist: sasakure.UK
Video Title
Alt Title: レプリカ feat. 初音ミク
R.Title: replica feat. Hatsune Miku
Artist: sasakure.UK
Tags: Japanese Electronic Rock Novelty Vocaloid エルゴスム ergosum 革蝉 kawasemi sasakuration ササクレイション C97 Comic Market Comiket 佐々木秀尚 Sasaki Hidehisa mami
Note, you can use Replica with capitals as your own romanization, but it's best to follow what the composer wishes.
Fixed I guess.
Didn't add Sasaki Hidehisa and mami tags, since their guitar&vocals are included only in another version of the song.
初音ミク Hatsune Miku is totally absent in the metadata, which should be there
The thing about 佐々木秀尚 and mami is not entirely wrong, because they are stated to be involved in the songs on the ergosum page
there's a pretty large diff gap between insane and the top diff
-top diff has pretty big spacing overall, with lots of jumps
-01:59:580 - huge rhythm density gap. on top of that, the top diff is full of consecutive circles
-the insane is fairly tame with its usage of quads, but the top diff has a lot of them, along with a couple of long streams
i suggest adding a filler diff to bridge the gap better.
03:37:830 - putting a circle here feels pretty awkward, as the start of the new phrase of the song is at 03:37:580. while yes, this note is a strong one in the melody, you also skipped the rest of the phrase afterwards. so i suggest removing the circle here
removing the circle would also make the very end of the map where the video turns to black
how about these? https://puu.sh/Fr090/c248b9e1d8.png
they're the colours from the bg. if you don't like the red, you could try a light grey.
Codes are:
[Colours]
Combo1 : 192,52,0
Combo2 : 255,220,150
Combo3 : 0,177,244
Combo4 : 255,180,90
Your current MP3 seems to be a lower quality version upscaled to 192kbps, as shown in the frequency cutoff here: https://i.imgur.com/3BZbrHu.png
This breaks the current audio quality rules, so here's a true 192kbps version, offset should be the same (message me if it isn't): https://shiryuu.s-ul.eu/1tZhGNTW
Frequency cutoff of the new version, for reference: https://i.imgur.com/mbysNV7.png
I listened to the FLAC and noticed some weird zzzzt's, don't really know the reason but the zzzzt's are annoying especially at the chrous part.
AIMod is showing a few snap and timing related issues. Here's a list with all difficulties:
Hard:
03:19:829 (1) - Unsnapped object.
03:13:580 - Double green line.
Preview Point conflicts with the other two difficulties (55571 in here, 55330 in the others).
Collab Insane:
02:46:580 (2) - Unsnapped object.
01:05:580 - Double green line.
02:33:580 - Double green line.
02:41:580 - Double green line.
02:46:580 - Double green line.
Artificial:
02:46:580 (1) - Unsnapped object.
01:05:580 - Double green line.
02:33:580 - Double green line.
02:41:580 - Double green line.
02:46:580 - Double green line.
These are all unrankable, so you will have to address them if you're looking to rank this eventually.
Can you give me some suggestions on how to fix the red lines? Making the redlines consistent will cause the slidertail impossible to snap with something.
You'll have to change the slider, there isn't really a way to make it slower than what you're allowed to without changing the BPM (that I know of, at least) and the song isn't actually doing that.
The song is doing a complete silence, I wonder if it's rankable if I spam red lines during that part, in order to keep the slider snapped to something?
When I first listened to the song, the sudden stop of the music chilled up my spine. Simply putting a break will not be a good way to express to that feeling, so a gimmick of "stop" is required imo.
Put a red line at 181455 with bpm = 15.238095238095
Put a red line at 181517 with bpm = 15.3590170229
Got rid of AIMod finally. Don't really know if it's legit.