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Yannis Brown - Transformation Theme

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Topic Starter
Arnold0
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lundi 19 novembre 2012 at 22:09:38

Artist: Yannis Brown
Title: Transformation Theme
Source: Dragon Ball GT
Tags: GBA Game Boy Advance Nintendo DB Goku Pan Trunk
BPM: 105,6
Filesize: 3540kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,35 stars, 209 notes)
  2. Insane (4,95 stars, 331 notes)
  3. Normal (2,82 stars, 132 notes)
Download: Yannis Brown - Transformation Theme
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd Beatmap, but my 1st was a realy bad one. For this one I've asked and got 48 mods. [2 MAT ones] [1 BAT one] This is my 1st and only ranked map.
Thanks to all the modders for there usefull mods.

Special thanks to :
Kawayi Rika -> Star icon
Breeze -> Bubble icon
Kurai -> Ranked <3


The music is from a GBA game Dragon Ball GT transformation.

List of all modders, thanks all!
popner (Timing check)
those
Hitomi May
Yu-Izanagi-12
LKs
ertyukjh010
BeatofIke
Ryu
h-728
EvilElvis
hibarirailwayz
ZLOdeuka
RikiH_
Akashi_S
KiyoshiX101
Yoru-SAN
Alduric
-Bakari-
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Kurokami
Flask
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Kin
Aunxfb
cool cool
HelloSCV
JudgeTheDude
Reisen Udongein
popner
Chewin
Katty Pie
R e v i v e
Kert
selova
Beren
Pereira006
Kawayi Rika (Gime star :3)
haha5957
zeroclover
SephWalker
Armin
Weez
Jebok
Gabe
Stefan
pimpG
Breeze (Gime bubble :3)
UnderminE (Bubble poper :))
Kurai (Gime Ranked <3<3)
popner
[Timing]

Your current timing is fine. If you want more, try this:

bpm:105.6
offset:1144

GL~
Topic Starter
Arnold0
BPM is already @ 105.600BPM
Offset changed to 1144ms, thanks :)
I'll move in pending now and start asking for modding ;)
popner
Good luck.
Topic Starter
Arnold0
I'm new to mapping and was thinking I can't give one if I havent any but it seems I can so done (:
those
From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Delete .osb files and full submit if you aren't using a storyboard or the same storyboard across all difficulties.
In each of the difficulties, quite a bit is too linear. What I mean is, if you notice the beginning of Easy, everything just goes in line, running around in a circle, following a path; flowing, but not fun.

[Easy]
00:42:053 (4) - Before this point, all you've had is too linear. Try to move things around so that objects don't just go in straight lines. On this note, this slider should have New Combo (NC).
00:44:325 (1) - Remove the NC.
01:13:587 (1) - Remove NC.
01:13:871 (2) - NC here.
01:18:416 (4) - NC here.
01:22:962 (4) - NC here.
01:26:655 (1) - Remove NC.
01:27:507 (2) - NC here.

[Hard]
00:37:507 (1) - You've used a long slider in this direction for the third time now. Try to be creative in the shapes; you can have more than 3 points in a slider. Even something like this can enhance the gameplay by that much more.
00:44:325 (1) - Change this one too, while you're at it.

[Insane]
The diff is way too linear, and the stacking is too much. Try to be more creative; you can do lots of stuff. Here's an example around time 00:15:348.
00:44:325 (1) - A slider like this definitely does not fit in an Insane.

Good luck :3
Topic Starter
Arnold0

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Delete .osb files and full submit if you aren't using a storyboard or the same storyboard across all difficulties.
In each of the difficulties, quite a bit is too linear. What I mean is, if you notice the beginning of Easy, everything just goes in line, running around in a circle, following a path; flowing, but not fun.File deleted but full reload not done because I have to change hard and insane. For linearity you are right so i'll change the 3 levels

[Easy]
00:42:053 (4) - Before this point, all you've had is too linear. Try to move things around so that objects don't just go in straight lines. On this note, this slider should have New Combo (NC). Done, I have change all the easy now it is not linear at all, I changed from the start to the end because after the change from 00:00:000 to 00:42:053 the rest of the song seems too linear too
00:44:325 (1) - Remove the NC. done
01:13:587 (1) - Remove NC. done
01:13:871 (2) - NC here. done
01:18:416 (4) - NC here. done
01:22:962 (4) - NC here. done
01:26:655 (1) - Remove NC. done
01:27:507 (2) - NC here. done

[Hard]
00:37:507 (1) - You've used a long slider in this direction for the third time now. Try to be creative in the shapes; you can have more than 3 points in a slider. Even something like this can enhance the gameplay by that much more. I'll change all thing like I do in the easy because now it look realy too linear compared too the easy D: I'll use this kind of sliders for sure (I aslo used it in the easy) and will try the sliders have not all the same direction
00:44:325 (1) - Change this one too, while you're at it.Same^

[Insane]
The diff is way too linear, and the stacking is too much. Try to be more creative; you can do lots of stuff. Here's an example around time 00:15:348. I do so many staking because I was thinking it is too hard but I never passed a insane so I can't realy know ... I'll change I think i'll look realy better
00:44:325 (1) - A slider like this definitely does not fit in an Insane.Like what I have done on easy and will do on hard i'll change all the map in insane too so i'll try to make sliders more harder.

Good luck :3 thanks ;)
Realy usefull mod for me ;) . I hope I won't put things worst than it was before D:
I'll edit when I have do all the modifications in the 3 diff and have uploaded again.
Topic Starter
Arnold0
All 3 diff changed and full reupload done
Hitomi May
Hi

The song ends very suddenly

[Easy]

00:18:331 (3) - do like this:
00:21:314 (2) - add circle
00:25:859 (4) - placed above in 1 gird
01:01:513 (4) - like a 00:18:331 (3)
01:54:212 (2) - so curve

[Hard]

00:50:007 (1) -

[Insane]

00:50:007 (1,2) - heeeey, looks bad ._.
01:40:007 (1,2) - ehhh, cuuuurve

I hope it's help you :3
Yu-Izanagi-12
Hi from my queue
the map looks good to to me
Hard
Circle Size +2
Insane
Circle Size +2
Overall Diff -1
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Hitomi May wrote:

Hi

The song ends very suddenly I have to search how to have a fadding to the end

[Easy]

00:18:331 (3) - do like this:
done
00:21:314 (2) - add circle Don't done , I think it don't fit with the music
00:25:859 (4) - placed above in 1 gird done
01:01:513 (4) - like a 00:18:331 (3) done
01:54:212 (2) - so curve I'm not sur what you want to say but I have littely modified this slider, hope it is better now

[Hard]

00:50:007 (1) -
Tryed but the result is not exacly the same but looks better than before

[Insane]

00:50:007 (1,2) - heeeey, looks bad ._. Changed
01:40:007 (1,2) - ehhh, cuuuurve Like I say in easy not sure about what you want to say but I'v modified this too

I hope it's help you :3 sure ;)

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

Hi from my queue
the map looks good to to me
Hard
Circle Size +2 I done +1 Because it look realy small when circle size is 5 I think ?
Insane
Circle Size +2 I done +1 Because circles look realy too small (like the size of the osu! cursor) when they are set to 6
Overall Diff -1 done
Thanks for your mods (:

EDIT : Faddout done (: (full reupload done as well)
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

you're 200th post, the lucky dog(customer), so you'd have higher priority

[General]

  1. resize BG to 800x600
  2. Dragon Ball GT GBA move these to Source, maybe keep GBA on tags..
  3. offest 1163
[Easy]

00:19:344 (4) - NC here but not 00:20:765 (1) -

[Hard]

fine

[Insane]

00:08:264 (3) - not a line here
01:25:821 (11,12) - add some notes here
01:30:366 (6,7) - ^ you can add on whitle and bule tick :3

this track is a bit abstracting lol

GL
ertyukjh010


Hello, :)

[General]

background.png size is 800x601, change it to 800*600

[Easy]

HP2 OD2 AR3 pls
00:02:422 (3) - Start at 00:02:564
00:04:695 (3) - Start at 00:04:837
00:16:058 (4) - Start at 00:16:200
00:18:331 (3) - Start at 00:18:473
00:34:240 (4) - Start at 00:34:382
00:36:513 (3) - Start at 00:36:655

[Hard]

ok

[Insane]

OD7 HP7

I do not say anything, but you need more work and you must strengthen your rhythm, slider shape, layout
That all
Topic Starter
Arnold0

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

you're 200th post, the lucky dog(customer), so you'd have higher priority Lol it is not all the time I'm lucky like this D:

[General]

  1. resize BG to 800x600 done
  2. Dragon Ball GT GBA move these to Source, maybe keep GBA on tags.. done
  3. offest 1163 done


[Easy]

00:19:344 (4) - NC here but not 00:20:765 (1) - done

[Hard]

fine okey (:

[Insane]

00:08:264 (3) - not a line here changed
01:25:821 (11,12) - add some notes here done
01:30:366 (6,7) - ^ done
you can add on whitle and bule tick :3

this track is a bit abstracting lol

GL

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Hello, :)

[General]

background.png size is 800x601, change it to 800*600 As I say before, done

[Easy]

HP2 OD2 AR3 pls done
00:02:422 (3) - Start at 00:02:564 After offset change (In the mod I got before), make like this is not synched with the music
00:04:695 (3) - Start at 00:04:837 ^
00:16:058 (4) - Start at 00:16:200 ^
00:18:331 (3) - Start at 00:18:473 ^
00:34:240 (4) - Start at 00:34:382 ^
00:36:513 (3) - Start at 00:36:655 ^

[Hard]

ok

[Insane]

OD7 HP7 done

I do not say anything, but you need more work and you must strengthen your rhythm, slider shape, layout
That all
I changed the mp3 file for fade out the end, and it changed the offset I have before è:
BeatofIke
Request from modding queue. Music was very repetitive (which can be boring), so I didn't like the map much. Anyway, hare is my mod:

[General]
-Map a Normal Difficulty? Easy-Hard-Insane is unrankable, I believe. Or rather, change easy to normal difficulty.
-Remove the OSB File on the song folder. There's no storyboard on your map.
-Your slider velocities are TOO HIGH!
-Make your sliders smoother and nicer.

[Easy]
-Maybe change the difficulty name to normal? If so, set HP Drain to 3, Approach rate to 4, and Overall Difficulty to 3.
-Your polarity seems fine, but it could be a bit better: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws

Hard
-Set HP Drain to 5 for better difficulty spread.

Insane
-None

Map has potential. Keep it up. Didn't like the map though.
Topic Starter
Arnold0

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from modding queue. Music was very repetitive (which can be boring), so I didn't like the map much. Anyway, hare is my mod:

[General]
-Map a Normal Difficulty? Easy-Hard-Insane is unrankable, I believe. Or rather, change easy to normal difficulty. Easy renammed to normal
-Remove the OSB File on the song folder. There's no storyboard on your map. I have done that one time but the file apper again U_u . Done
-Your slider velocities are TOO HIGH! Reduced on hard & insane
-Make your sliders smoother and nicer.

[Easy]
-Maybe change the difficulty name to normal? If so, set HP Drain to 3, Approach rate to 4, and Overall Difficulty to 3. Done
-Your polarity seems fine, but it could be a bit better: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws Done but not sure if it is okey like this

Hard
-Set HP Drain to 5 for better difficulty spread. Done
I have changed many of my sliders due to slider speed reduced

Insane
-None
I have changed many of my sliders due to slider speed reduced

Map has potential. Keep it up. Didn't like the map though.
Ryu_old
From Ryu's queue~ :3

Honestly, I dont like songs from other stuffs like dat one D:


But here you are~

Easy:

● 00:29:856 - off nc

Hard:


● Size Circle - 1

Insane:

● Circle Size - 2


Map is good enough.


Good luck :3
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Ryu wrote:

From Ryu's queue~ :3

Honestly, I dont like songs from other stuffs like dat one D:


But here you are~

Easy:

● 00:29:856 - off nc Maybe you want I add a nc ? I have addded one

Hard:


● Size Circle - 1 No because my hard is already too easy and this will make it easyer

Insane:

● Circle Size - 2 Done -1


Map is good enough.


Good luck :3
Thanks (:
Topic Starter
Arnold0
Ungraveyarded, need more mods please *_*
h-728

thank you for your request

[General]
  1. How about add Kiai Time?
  2. there are few hit sounds through all diffs. consider add more hit sounds. make other pattern in this pattern.
    I suggest one of clap patterns. please use it when you like. red circle means clap.
[Normal]
  • 00:02:015 (2) - I don't recommend you to use kick slider in these for-newbie diff.
    00:20:765 (2) - short break time will cause confusing, so you should remove it and put notes.
    00:53:435 (3) - ^
[Hard]
  • SV2.0 is too high for Hard. recommend to use 1.8 or less.
    00:40:935 (1) ~ finish sounds are attached whole of this slider. remove it and add finish on start/end point of the slider.
    00:46:617 - this break time seems unnecessary.
    01:45:708 - ^
[Insane]
  • 00:40:935 (1) ~ finish sounds are attached whole of this slider. remove it and add finish on start/end point of the slider.
    00:40:935 ~ it looks almost same as Hard. consider to add more notes to adjust difficulty.
    00:46:617 - this break time seems unnecessary.
    01:26:106 (12) - this whistle sound strange, because you hadn't use whistle at all in other place.
    if you like whistle hit sounds, consider add more whistle in other place, and it will become sounds natural.
    01:45:708 - same as 00:46:617
that's all.
good luck
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