Arnold0 wrote:

Hum... I'll probaly change when I'll get another mod.

pimpG wrote:

hi
from #modreqs Wohhh miracle x')

general

try this custom hitclap http://puu.sh/1jkPg Tried but I prefer mine (I think yours is less audible while playing, maybe it's just me?)

normal

00:06:884 (1,2) - i think you should use a long slider here, like 00:04:611, the slider tick sounds good for 00:07:168
01:23:872 (1) - try something like that for better flow http://puu.sh/1jkAu
01:48:020 (1) - http://puu.sh/1jkwN ?
Done for the 3

hard

00:50:065 (1,2) - this slider shapes looks random and a bit strange imo, try to use symmetry? I agree the patern is a bit strange I changed hope it's better
00:54:043 (3) - try ctrl+shit+R "selection centre" and rotate by -5? I moved that after changing the previous thing
01:40:918 (2) - make a simple blanket with previous note? I tryed but not sure about the result ^^
01:50:009 (2) - ^ ^

insane

00:22:793 (1,2,3) - not a good way to place this notes imo, try stack? Hum okey why not
00:24:213 (5,1,2,3,4) - check the spacing Fix
00:34:583 (4,5) - move this notes 1 grid left to fix shape Done
also, how about this http://puu.sh/1jlwy If I do that I'll have to move other notes after and like actual is ok so i keep mine

yeah its really good

it just needs more mods and you can get your bubble soon

good luck with ranking Thanks and thanks for mod

Arnold0 wrote:

PS : My last port in the thread is 9 days ago but the map was graved why ? :O

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yours:

what I think:

1. 00:34:156 (1) -
2. 00:35:577 (3) -
3. 01:01:429 (1) -

Breeze wrote:

Rhythms are fine, the only thing I could say is some of your sliders can be proved, I mean in shape, it could have a better curve

such as 01:51:429 (1,2) in [Normal] diff.

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yours:

what I think:

I changed but I'm not sure I got the exact same result as yours (PS : This is in hard diff and not normal )
So if you want, you can redo those sliders, other sliders I think can be proved:

[Normal]

1. 00:34:156 (1) -
2. 00:35:577 (3) -
3. 01:01:429 (1) -

I changed the 3 a little, hope it's better
I shouldn't be that picky in your 2nd map, send me a forum pm when you have reply then

Breeze wrote:

It's not bad as your 2nd map, maybe this kind of sliders fits the DB game more haha. Since the method to make slider changed not long ago, you can try make pretty sliders in your next map
Lemme bubble this map

UnderminE wrote:

[Normal]
00:21:940 (3) - This slider shape doesn't go well after 00:20:520 (1) - this since they are in same combo colour.
00:27:054 - soft whistle Okey why not
00:33:304 (3) - ugly slider
00:34:156 (1) - ^
00:35:577 (3) - ^
00:40:122 (3) - ^
You really need to use a bit longer sliders, or else this will be boring for Normal players. Because you don't have that much choices while shaping short-sliders and it makes them look ugly. Change Velocity imo. So that you can create more beautiful and fun patterns. I don't want to remap all so nope...
00:48:929 (1,2) - make them symmetrical Tried
00:51:486 (3,4) - stack these Okey
01:30:690 (4) - whistle Okey

needs better sliders, I didn't point out all of them. I changed the ones you sayd and a few other but i'm not realy good at finding bad sliders

[Hard]
AR+1 Nope I don't want it to be the same as insane
Don't use same rhythm over and over again. It really makes the map boring and boring. Anyone wouldn't want to play the same rhythm for minutes. I'll try with my next map but, I don't want to remap all and breeze sayed me the rythm is fine.
00:58:588 (1,2) - Not a nice jump actually Fixed
Try different patterns and rhythm styles. Same don't want to remap all
01:09:668 (5) - Ugly slider
01:11:940 (5) - ^
01:21:031 (5) - ^
It is like you just put different kinds of sliders randomly. Symmetrical patterns or delicious patterns always look better than randomized patterns. Try some.
Fixed bads sliders you sayd (I hope). But I'm sorry I don't want to broke all olds mods and lose much more time when it can be okey like this.

[Insane]
Finally good patterns. Try these kind of things in Hard too.
01:14:071 (7,8,9,10) - Ugly pattern especially this ruins 01:14:497 (10) - I don't understand whats the problem?
01:42:338 (1,2,3) - Instead of using huge and same sliders over and over again, why don't you try blankets or circle sliders? Since making sliders is easier than before. I did not know how to use and where the new fonction is
01:44:043 (3,2) - Stack these two perfectly Yes.

I will mod this again after few mods. Good luck

Kurai wrote:

Enjoy your first rank !