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Yannis Brown - Transformation Theme

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Topic Starter
Arnold0
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lundi 19 novembre 2012 at 22:09:38

Artist: Yannis Brown
Title: Transformation Theme
Source: Dragon Ball GT
Tags: GBA Game Boy Advance Nintendo DB Goku Pan Trunk
BPM: 105,6
Filesize: 3540kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,35 stars, 209 notes)
  2. Insane (4,95 stars, 331 notes)
  3. Normal (2,82 stars, 132 notes)
Download: Yannis Brown - Transformation Theme
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd Beatmap, but my 1st was a realy bad one. For this one I've asked and got 48 mods. [2 MAT ones] [1 BAT one] This is my 1st and only ranked map.
Thanks to all the modders for there usefull mods.

Special thanks to :
Kawayi Rika -> Star icon
Breeze -> Bubble icon
Kurai -> Ranked <3


The music is from a GBA game Dragon Ball GT transformation.

List of all modders, thanks all!
popner (Timing check)
those
Hitomi May
Yu-Izanagi-12
LKs
ertyukjh010
BeatofIke
Ryu
h-728
EvilElvis
hibarirailwayz
ZLOdeuka
RikiH_
Akashi_S
KiyoshiX101
Yoru-SAN
Alduric
-Bakari-
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Kurokami
Flask
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Kin
Aunxfb
cool cool
HelloSCV
JudgeTheDude
Reisen Udongein
popner
Chewin
Katty Pie
R e v i v e
Kert
selova
Beren
Pereira006
Kawayi Rika (Gime star :3)
haha5957
zeroclover
SephWalker
Armin
Weez
Jebok
Gabe
Stefan
pimpG
Breeze (Gime bubble :3)
UnderminE (Bubble poper :))
Kurai (Gime Ranked <3<3)
popner
[Timing]

Your current timing is fine. If you want more, try this:

bpm:105.6
offset:1144

GL~
Topic Starter
Arnold0
BPM is already @ 105.600BPM
Offset changed to 1144ms, thanks :)
I'll move in pending now and start asking for modding ;)
popner
Good luck.
Topic Starter
Arnold0
I'm new to mapping and was thinking I can't give one if I havent any but it seems I can so done (:
those
From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Delete .osb files and full submit if you aren't using a storyboard or the same storyboard across all difficulties.
In each of the difficulties, quite a bit is too linear. What I mean is, if you notice the beginning of Easy, everything just goes in line, running around in a circle, following a path; flowing, but not fun.

[Easy]
00:42:053 (4) - Before this point, all you've had is too linear. Try to move things around so that objects don't just go in straight lines. On this note, this slider should have New Combo (NC).
00:44:325 (1) - Remove the NC.
01:13:587 (1) - Remove NC.
01:13:871 (2) - NC here.
01:18:416 (4) - NC here.
01:22:962 (4) - NC here.
01:26:655 (1) - Remove NC.
01:27:507 (2) - NC here.

[Hard]
00:37:507 (1) - You've used a long slider in this direction for the third time now. Try to be creative in the shapes; you can have more than 3 points in a slider. Even something like this can enhance the gameplay by that much more.
00:44:325 (1) - Change this one too, while you're at it.

[Insane]
The diff is way too linear, and the stacking is too much. Try to be more creative; you can do lots of stuff. Here's an example around time 00:15:348.
00:44:325 (1) - A slider like this definitely does not fit in an Insane.

Good luck :3
Topic Starter
Arnold0

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Delete .osb files and full submit if you aren't using a storyboard or the same storyboard across all difficulties.
In each of the difficulties, quite a bit is too linear. What I mean is, if you notice the beginning of Easy, everything just goes in line, running around in a circle, following a path; flowing, but not fun.File deleted but full reload not done because I have to change hard and insane. For linearity you are right so i'll change the 3 levels

[Easy]
00:42:053 (4) - Before this point, all you've had is too linear. Try to move things around so that objects don't just go in straight lines. On this note, this slider should have New Combo (NC). Done, I have change all the easy now it is not linear at all, I changed from the start to the end because after the change from 00:00:000 to 00:42:053 the rest of the song seems too linear too
00:44:325 (1) - Remove the NC. done
01:13:587 (1) - Remove NC. done
01:13:871 (2) - NC here. done
01:18:416 (4) - NC here. done
01:22:962 (4) - NC here. done
01:26:655 (1) - Remove NC. done
01:27:507 (2) - NC here. done

[Hard]
00:37:507 (1) - You've used a long slider in this direction for the third time now. Try to be creative in the shapes; you can have more than 3 points in a slider. Even something like this can enhance the gameplay by that much more. I'll change all thing like I do in the easy because now it look realy too linear compared too the easy D: I'll use this kind of sliders for sure (I aslo used it in the easy) and will try the sliders have not all the same direction
00:44:325 (1) - Change this one too, while you're at it.Same^

[Insane]
The diff is way too linear, and the stacking is too much. Try to be more creative; you can do lots of stuff. Here's an example around time 00:15:348. I do so many staking because I was thinking it is too hard but I never passed a insane so I can't realy know ... I'll change I think i'll look realy better
00:44:325 (1) - A slider like this definitely does not fit in an Insane.Like what I have done on easy and will do on hard i'll change all the map in insane too so i'll try to make sliders more harder.

Good luck :3 thanks ;)
Realy usefull mod for me ;) . I hope I won't put things worst than it was before D:
I'll edit when I have do all the modifications in the 3 diff and have uploaded again.
Topic Starter
Arnold0
All 3 diff changed and full reupload done
Hitomi May
Hi

The song ends very suddenly

[Easy]

00:18:331 (3) - do like this:
00:21:314 (2) - add circle
00:25:859 (4) - placed above in 1 gird
01:01:513 (4) - like a 00:18:331 (3)
01:54:212 (2) - so curve

[Hard]

00:50:007 (1) -

[Insane]

00:50:007 (1,2) - heeeey, looks bad ._.
01:40:007 (1,2) - ehhh, cuuuurve

I hope it's help you :3
Yu-Izanagi-12
Hi from my queue
the map looks good to to me
Hard
Circle Size +2
Insane
Circle Size +2
Overall Diff -1
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Hitomi May wrote:

Hi

The song ends very suddenly I have to search how to have a fadding to the end

[Easy]

00:18:331 (3) - do like this:
done
00:21:314 (2) - add circle Don't done , I think it don't fit with the music
00:25:859 (4) - placed above in 1 gird done
01:01:513 (4) - like a 00:18:331 (3) done
01:54:212 (2) - so curve I'm not sur what you want to say but I have littely modified this slider, hope it is better now

[Hard]

00:50:007 (1) -
Tryed but the result is not exacly the same but looks better than before

[Insane]

00:50:007 (1,2) - heeeey, looks bad ._. Changed
01:40:007 (1,2) - ehhh, cuuuurve Like I say in easy not sure about what you want to say but I'v modified this too

I hope it's help you :3 sure ;)

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

Hi from my queue
the map looks good to to me
Hard
Circle Size +2 I done +1 Because it look realy small when circle size is 5 I think ?
Insane
Circle Size +2 I done +1 Because circles look realy too small (like the size of the osu! cursor) when they are set to 6
Overall Diff -1 done
Thanks for your mods (:

EDIT : Faddout done (: (full reupload done as well)
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

you're 200th post, the lucky dog(customer), so you'd have higher priority

[General]

  1. resize BG to 800x600
  2. Dragon Ball GT GBA move these to Source, maybe keep GBA on tags..
  3. offest 1163
[Easy]

00:19:344 (4) - NC here but not 00:20:765 (1) -

[Hard]

fine

[Insane]

00:08:264 (3) - not a line here
01:25:821 (11,12) - add some notes here
01:30:366 (6,7) - ^ you can add on whitle and bule tick :3

this track is a bit abstracting lol

GL
ertyukjh010


Hello, :)

[General]

background.png size is 800x601, change it to 800*600

[Easy]

HP2 OD2 AR3 pls
00:02:422 (3) - Start at 00:02:564
00:04:695 (3) - Start at 00:04:837
00:16:058 (4) - Start at 00:16:200
00:18:331 (3) - Start at 00:18:473
00:34:240 (4) - Start at 00:34:382
00:36:513 (3) - Start at 00:36:655

[Hard]

ok

[Insane]

OD7 HP7

I do not say anything, but you need more work and you must strengthen your rhythm, slider shape, layout
That all
Topic Starter
Arnold0

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

you're 200th post, the lucky dog(customer), so you'd have higher priority Lol it is not all the time I'm lucky like this D:

[General]

  1. resize BG to 800x600 done
  2. Dragon Ball GT GBA move these to Source, maybe keep GBA on tags.. done
  3. offest 1163 done


[Easy]

00:19:344 (4) - NC here but not 00:20:765 (1) - done

[Hard]

fine okey (:

[Insane]

00:08:264 (3) - not a line here changed
01:25:821 (11,12) - add some notes here done
01:30:366 (6,7) - ^ done
you can add on whitle and bule tick :3

this track is a bit abstracting lol

GL

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Hello, :)

[General]

background.png size is 800x601, change it to 800*600 As I say before, done

[Easy]

HP2 OD2 AR3 pls done
00:02:422 (3) - Start at 00:02:564 After offset change (In the mod I got before), make like this is not synched with the music
00:04:695 (3) - Start at 00:04:837 ^
00:16:058 (4) - Start at 00:16:200 ^
00:18:331 (3) - Start at 00:18:473 ^
00:34:240 (4) - Start at 00:34:382 ^
00:36:513 (3) - Start at 00:36:655 ^

[Hard]

ok

[Insane]

OD7 HP7 done

I do not say anything, but you need more work and you must strengthen your rhythm, slider shape, layout
That all
I changed the mp3 file for fade out the end, and it changed the offset I have before è:
BeatofIke
Request from modding queue. Music was very repetitive (which can be boring), so I didn't like the map much. Anyway, hare is my mod:

[General]
-Map a Normal Difficulty? Easy-Hard-Insane is unrankable, I believe. Or rather, change easy to normal difficulty.
-Remove the OSB File on the song folder. There's no storyboard on your map.
-Your slider velocities are TOO HIGH!
-Make your sliders smoother and nicer.

[Easy]
-Maybe change the difficulty name to normal? If so, set HP Drain to 3, Approach rate to 4, and Overall Difficulty to 3.
-Your polarity seems fine, but it could be a bit better: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws

Hard
-Set HP Drain to 5 for better difficulty spread.

Insane
-None

Map has potential. Keep it up. Didn't like the map though.
Topic Starter
Arnold0

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from modding queue. Music was very repetitive (which can be boring), so I didn't like the map much. Anyway, hare is my mod:

[General]
-Map a Normal Difficulty? Easy-Hard-Insane is unrankable, I believe. Or rather, change easy to normal difficulty. Easy renammed to normal
-Remove the OSB File on the song folder. There's no storyboard on your map. I have done that one time but the file apper again U_u . Done
-Your slider velocities are TOO HIGH! Reduced on hard & insane
-Make your sliders smoother and nicer.

[Easy]
-Maybe change the difficulty name to normal? If so, set HP Drain to 3, Approach rate to 4, and Overall Difficulty to 3. Done
-Your polarity seems fine, but it could be a bit better: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws Done but not sure if it is okey like this

Hard
-Set HP Drain to 5 for better difficulty spread. Done
I have changed many of my sliders due to slider speed reduced

Insane
-None
I have changed many of my sliders due to slider speed reduced

Map has potential. Keep it up. Didn't like the map though.
Ryu_old
From Ryu's queue~ :3

Honestly, I dont like songs from other stuffs like dat one D:


But here you are~

Easy:

● 00:29:856 - off nc

Hard:


● Size Circle - 1

Insane:

● Circle Size - 2


Map is good enough.


Good luck :3
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Ryu wrote:

From Ryu's queue~ :3

Honestly, I dont like songs from other stuffs like dat one D:


But here you are~

Easy:

● 00:29:856 - off nc Maybe you want I add a nc ? I have addded one

Hard:


● Size Circle - 1 No because my hard is already too easy and this will make it easyer

Insane:

● Circle Size - 2 Done -1


Map is good enough.


Good luck :3
Thanks (:
Topic Starter
Arnold0
Ungraveyarded, need more mods please *_*
h-728

thank you for your request

[General]
  1. How about add Kiai Time?
  2. there are few hit sounds through all diffs. consider add more hit sounds. make other pattern in this pattern.
    I suggest one of clap patterns. please use it when you like. red circle means clap.
[Normal]
  • 00:02:015 (2) - I don't recommend you to use kick slider in these for-newbie diff.
    00:20:765 (2) - short break time will cause confusing, so you should remove it and put notes.
    00:53:435 (3) - ^
[Hard]
  • SV2.0 is too high for Hard. recommend to use 1.8 or less.
    00:40:935 (1) ~ finish sounds are attached whole of this slider. remove it and add finish on start/end point of the slider.
    00:46:617 - this break time seems unnecessary.
    01:45:708 - ^
[Insane]
  • 00:40:935 (1) ~ finish sounds are attached whole of this slider. remove it and add finish on start/end point of the slider.
    00:40:935 ~ it looks almost same as Hard. consider to add more notes to adjust difficulty.
    00:46:617 - this break time seems unnecessary.
    01:26:106 (12) - this whistle sound strange, because you hadn't use whistle at all in other place.
    if you like whistle hit sounds, consider add more whistle in other place, and it will become sounds natural.
    01:45:708 - same as 00:46:617
that's all.
good luck
Topic Starter
Arnold0

h-728 wrote:


thank you for your request

[General]
  1. How about add Kiai Time? Added
  2. there are few hit sounds through all diffs. consider add more hit sounds. make other pattern in this pattern.
    I suggest one of clap patterns. please use it when you like. red circle means clap.
Sound realy good so I've used it all the times :)

[Normal]
  • 00:02:015 (2) - I don't recommend you to use kick slider in these for-newbie diff. A person speaks me about polarity problems so what to do, changes them back to notes with polarity problem or keep it like this ? :x
    00:20:765 (2) - short break time will cause confusing, so you should remove it and put notes.There is no break time here :o, and it you want to say there is too many time beetwin the two sliders I think not and don't know how to add a note here :(
    00:53:435 (3) - ^ No break time again here but many time beetwin the two sliders, I've added notes.
[Hard]
  • SV2.0 is too high for Hard. recommend to use 1.8 or less.Used 1.8
    00:40:935 (1) ~ finish sounds are attached whole of this slider. remove it and add finish on start/end point of the slider.Done
    00:46:617 - this break time seems unnecessary.Removed and added notes
    01:45:708 - ^^
[Insane]
  • 00:40:935 (1) ~ finish sounds are attached whole of this slider. remove it and add finish on start/end point of the slider. I've deleted this slider and puted notes so... :)
    00:40:935 ~ it looks almost same as Hard. consider to add more notes to adjust difficulty. Slider deleted and notes added, I've also changed some sliders for notes after this one.
    00:46:617 - this break time seems unnecessary. Removed and added notes
    01:26:106 (12) - this whistle sound strange, because you hadn't use whistle at all in other place.
    if you like whistle hit sounds, consider add more whistle in other place, and it will become sounds natural. I've added more before & after :)
    01:45:708 - same as 00:46:617 Removed and added notes
that's all.
good luck
Thanks and thanks for the star :)

I've set the snap dividor to 1/8 just for the sliders at 00:45:055; 00:54:145; 01:44:145; 01:53:236, in insane, Can someone says me if this is okey ?
For the easy can someone say me if it's better to have this littles sliders and good polarity or just simple notes but with the polarity problem ?
h-728

Arnold0 wrote:

I've set the snap dividor to 1/8 just for the sliders at (2)00:45:055, (2)0054:145, (2)01:44:145, (2)0153:236 Can someone says me if this is okey ?
you can combine some kinds of snap divisor.
so no problem with your using 1/8 snap divisor.
but it should be easy to read rhythm.
for example, using 1/4, 1/3, 1/8 and 1/6 snap divisor in one section will just confusing.

btw, I think 00:45:055 (2): this slider should be snapped at 00:45:197. to do so, it will follow the music well and we can easily to pass this section.
00:54:145 (2) - same as above.
01:44:145 (2) - ^
01:53:236 (2) - ^

Arnold0 wrote:

For the easy can someone say me if it's better to have this littles sliders and good polarity or just simple notes but with the polarity problem ?
too short slider(we call kick slider, like 00:02:015 (2) in Normal) maybe confuse newbie players because it is hard to follow the sliderball.
and connecting another note after kick slider, they will be more confused so that it is difficult to find when they should hit the next note.
in these reasons, I don't recommend you to use kick slider in these diffs, but absolutely you want to use, you should use it by itself and not to connect to another note.

sorry for my lazy explanation.
no kudosu for this plz.
Topic Starter
Arnold0

h-728 wrote:

Arnold0 wrote:

I've set the snap dividor to 1/8 just for the sliders at (2)00:45:055, (2)0054:145, (2)01:44:145, (2)0153:236 Can someone says me if this is okey ?
you can combine some kinds of snap divisor.
so no problem with your using 1/8 snap divisor.
but it should be easy to read rhythm.
for example, using 1/4, 1/3, 1/8 and 1/6 snap divisor in one section will just confusing.

btw, I think 00:45:055 (2): this slider should be snapped at 00:45:197. to do so, it will follow the music well and we can easily to pass this section.
00:54:145 (2) - same as above.
01:44:145 (2) - ^
01:53:236 (2) - ^
Tryed but it sound desynched, the sound come after the music :(

Arnold0 wrote:

For the easy can someone say me if it's better to have this littles sliders and good polarity or just simple notes but with the polarity problem ?
too short slider(we call kick slider, like 00:02:015 (2) in Normal) maybe confuse newbie players because it is hard to follow the sliderball.
and connecting another note after kick slider, they will be more confused so that it is difficult to find when they should hit the next note.
in these reasons, I don't recommend you to use kick slider in these diffs, but absolutely you want to use, you should use it by itself and not to connect to another note.
Changed back to notes (Also it sound better like this)

sorry for my lazy explanation.
no kudosu for this plz.
-Nothing-To-Do-Here-
Hello from E.E's modding queue!
[Hard]
look perfect for me
[Insane]
Suggestion
00:02:867 (10) - try something like this
00:05:140 (10) - ^
00:16:503 (11) - ^
00:18:776 (10) - ^
00:25:310 (5) -
00:27:867 (3) -
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Arnold0

EvilElvis wrote:

Hello from E.E's modding queue!
[Hard]
look perfect for me
[Insane]
Suggestion
00:02:867 (10) - try something like this
00:05:140 (10) - ^
00:16:503 (11) - ^
00:18:776 (10) - ^
00:25:310 (5) -
00:27:867 (3) -
Good luck!
All done
hibarirailwayz
from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
none

[Normal]
00:27:583 (1,2) - remove and add NC
00:29:856 (1,2) - ^
00:46:617 - I don't like break time in kiai time. I suggest adding spinner.
01:45:708 - ^

[Hard]
00:40:935 (1) - finish=00:41:361 and add circle in next timing
00:56:276 (1) - start=00:55:992
01:40:026 (1) - finish=01:40:452 and add circle in next timing

[Insane]
whistle is not match this song...


Good luck!!
Topic Starter
Arnold0

hibarirailwayz wrote:

from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
none

[Normal]
00:27:583 (1,2) - remove and add NC Done
00:29:856 (1,2) - ^ Done
00:46:617 - I don't like break time in kiai time. I suggest adding spinner. Done
01:45:708 - ^ Done

[Hard]
00:40:935 (1) - finish=00:41:361 and add circle in next timing Done
00:56:276 (1) - start=00:55:992 Done
01:40:026 (1) - finish=01:40:452 and add circle in next timing Done

[Insane]
whistle is not match this song... Removed


Good luck!! Thanks :)
ZLOdeuka-
Hello Arnold0. Sorry, I was doing other maps :(

[Normal]

00:46:049 (3) - delete. add Circle 00:46:049 and add spiner 00:46:617 (start spiner 46.617 and 48.890 end)
01:45:140 (6,1) - ^
01:04:799 (4) - new combo.
01:05:651 (1) - delete new combo

[Hard]

00:01:163 (1,2,3) - hmm... maybe so...? http://puu.sh/JBgs
00:03:435 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/JBhg
00:55:992 (1) - start here 00:56:276. end here 00:57:981

[Insane]

00:02:867 (10) - delete.move here slider 00:03:009.
00:05:140 (10,11) - ^
00:16:503 (11,12) - ^
00:50:026 (1,2) - disturbed interval! on Distance Snap.

Good luck
Topic Starter
Arnold0

ZLOdeuka wrote:

Hello Arnold0. Sorry, I was doing other maps :(

[Normal]

00:46:049 (3) - delete. add Circle 00:46:049 and add spiner 00:46:617 (start spiner 46.617 and 48.890 end) Done
01:45:140 (6,1) - ^^
01:04:799 (4) - new combo. Done
01:05:651 (1) - delete new combo Done

[Hard]

00:01:163 (1,2,3) - hmm... maybe so...? http://puu.sh/JBgs Looks realy good thanks :)
00:03:435 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/JBhg ^
00:55:992 (1) - start here 00:56:276. end here 00:57:981 Done

[Insane]

00:02:867 (10) - delete.move here slider 00:03:009. Changed, sound better thanks :)
00:05:140 (10,11) - ^^
00:16:503 (11,12) - ^^
00:50:026 (1,2) - disturbed interval! on Distance Snap. Epic fail, fixed

Good luck Thanks :)
RikiH_
Hi, I'm here for 4m4. Sorry for late D:

Normal

00:10:253 (1,2,3) - Make this pattern symmetric!
00:32:412 - Remove NC
00:32:981 (2) - Add NC

Hard

00:17:072 (1,2,3) - Try to make these symmetric
01:16:162 (1,2,3) - ^
01:30:651 - Add a note?

Insane

00:25:452 (6) - NC?
01:04:089 (9) - Weird overlap with the slider (10), move it away

Uhm. Insane is nice but for the other diffs I suggest you to make some patterns with circles/slider because in some parts they're really random... Good luck! :D
Alltur
Hello~
I'm not great at modding but here's some suggestion that I can think of..

[General]
Cut the music at the end. There's some silence.
Maybe try to get a better music? 192kbps?


[Normal]
Approach Rate -1
In my personal opinion, all the beats sounds okay.

[Hard]
Approach Rate -1
Nothing wrong with the beats :D
Why this map has such low star rating? It should be around 4.0~4.2
00:12:526 and 00:14:515 are pretty much in the same spot so overlap them :D
01:12:469 - up 2 grid to make it on the center x-axis.

The song is pretty dynamic imo, but the pattern of the beatmap is repetitive :x
This song already had a lot of mods so I don't think I was any help XP..
Topic Starter
Arnold0

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi, I'm here for 4m4. Sorry for late D:

Normal

00:10:253 (1,2,3) - Make this pattern symmetric! Done (I think)
00:32:412 - Remove NC Done
00:32:981 (2) - Add NC Done

Hard

00:17:072 (1,2,3) - Try to make these symmetric Done (I think)
01:16:162 (1,2,3) - ^^
01:30:651 - Add a note? Done

Insane

00:25:452 (6) - NC? Done
01:04:089 (9) - Weird overlap with the slider (10), move it away I moved the slider

Uhm. Insane is nice but for the other diffs I suggest you to make some patterns with circles/slider because in some parts they're really random... Good luck! :D


Akashi_S wrote:

Hello~
I'm not great at modding but here's some suggestion that I can think of..

[General]
Cut the music at the end. There's some silence. It's not silence, it's a fadeout because before the music cutted drectly
Maybe try to get a better music? 192kbps? I think this is a waste of filespace for this song


[Normal]
Approach Rate -1 Don't know if it's better but done
In my personal opinion, all the beats sounds okay.

[Hard]
Approach Rate -1 Don't know if it's better but done
Nothing wrong with the beats :D
Why this map has such low star rating? It should be around 4.0~4.2 Ask osu!, not me ^^"
00:12:526 and 00:14:515 are pretty much in the same spot so overlap them :D With The changes I made before I can't do it now
01:12:469 - up 2 grid to make it on the center x-axis. Now it's 3 down than the X axis, put it on the X axis will do a wired spacing so no sorry :(

The song is pretty dynamic imo, but the pattern of the beatmap is repetitive :x
This song already had a lot of mods so I don't think I was any help XP..
I've changed some of the patterns, hope it's a little better.
Thanks for your mods and RikiH_ for your star :)
[Luxord]
[Mod Request]
From my Modding Queue - p/1675802#p1675802
[General]
Maybe find a better background? :C

[Easy]
Is perfect :3

[Hard]
00:50:026 (1,2) - Fix Slider Shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376466

[Insane]
AR -1 I guess.
01:13:890 (2,3,4,5) - Move 3, 4 and 5 a bit way from 2 cause it's confusing :c
01:20:140 (6) - Move this to X:376 Y:296
01:24:969 (7,8,9,10,11) - Turn off the Grid snap and stack precisely - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376458
01:35:623 (7,8,9,10) - Maybe like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376464
01:48:265 (3) - Fix the spacing. Move it to X:156 Y:276

[Commets]
Nice for 2nd map :3 Good luck!
Yoru-hide
Hi! from my mod queue~

General:

Your BG size is 800x600, when recommended is 1024x768. Use Grid Level 4.

Insane:

SPOILER
00:25:878 (2,3,4,5,6) - is sink needed change, for exaple , http://puu.sh/K8nt.
01:24:969 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^ create some confuses 'cause start after slider.

00:46:049 (3) - m... try make it more steady or change.
01:45:140 (3) - ^

00:50:310 (2,3) - try this http://puu.sh/K8oR.
01:40:310 (2,3) - ^
01:49:401 (2,3) - ^ etc.

01:47:981 (1,2,3) - need to do smoother.

Hard:


SPOILER
Approach Rate 7.

Would be better if you remake all diff on Distance Snap.

Change some moments with sliders to:
before - http://puu.sh/K8tK
after - http://puu.sh/K8v0

It's make your "Hard" more harder , lol.

Normal:
SPOILER
Fine.

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Arnold0

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Mod Request]
From my Modding Queue - p/1675802#p1675802
[General]
Maybe find a better background? :C This BG is from the game, and I can't find a image from the game which is better cuz GBA games have a low resolution

[Easy]
Is perfect :3

[Hard]
00:50:026 (1,2) - Fix Slider Shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376466 Tryed but not like yours, because with yours the 1st slider become 1 tick too long

[Insane]
AR -1 I guess.
01:13:890 (2,3,4,5) - Move 3, 4 and 5 a bit way from 2 cause it's confusing :c Switched 2/3 but pattern not changed not sure if it's better?
01:20:140 (6) - Move this to X:376 Y:296 Ok
01:24:969 (7,8,9,10,11) - Turn off the Grid snap and stack precisely - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376458 I have changed this part
01:35:623 (7,8,9,10) - Maybe like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/376464 Done
01:48:265 (3) - Fix the spacing. Move it to X:156 Y:276 Done

[Commets]
Nice for 2nd map :3 Good luck! Thanks

Yoru-SAN wrote:

Hi! from my mod queue~

General:

Your BG size is 800x600, when recommended is 1024x768. Use Grid Level 4.For this kind of image I think 1024X768 is useless and a waste of filsespace because the image is already pixelated

Insane:

SPOILER
00:25:878 (2,3,4,5,6) - is sink needed change, for exaple , http://puu.sh/K8nt. Changed
01:24:969 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^ create some confuses 'cause start after slider. CHanged but not with the patter you saw because it was too near the border of the screen

00:46:049 (3) - m... try make it more steady or change. Not changed because I don't realy know what you wanted to say and don't know how to change them
01:45:140 (3) - ^^

00:50:310 (2,3) - try this http://puu.sh/K8oR. Done
01:40:310 (2,3) - ^^
01:49:401 (2,3) - ^ etc.^

01:47:981 (1,2,3) - need to do smoother. Don't understand what you meen and this looks good for me so not changed

Hard:


SPOILER
Approach Rate 7. Okey

Would be better if you remake all diff on Distance Snap.

Change some moments with sliders to:
before - http://puu.sh/K8tK
after - http://puu.sh/K8v0
I've done this with "2 reverse arrow" sliders but not with the ones like at the start of the song.
It's make your "Hard" more harder , lol.

Normal:
SPOILER
Fine.

Good Luck! Thanks :)
Thanks for mods :) And YEY now my hard have the yellow star with an H and not the Normal star anymore thanks ! :)
haigawdy
Even if you fail mod mine map, I'll mod yours ;p

[Normal]
  1. 00:19:344 (1) - Correct this slider shape, like this: http://puu.sh/Kb5M
[Hard]
  1. Nothing here.
[Insane]
  1. 00:45:055 - How about adding one more reverse arrow? If not, you can also set beatsnap divisor to 1/6 and correct slider to that - it looks nice.
  2. 00:54:145 - ^
  3. 01:44:145 - ^
  4. 01:53:236 - ^
  5. 01:27:526 - Incorrect spacing.
  6. 01:34:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing between these notes look ugly in my opinion. Try move them in nicer way, but it is only my little suggestion. :)
Good luck! :)
Genshin
Star :D
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Alduric wrote:

Even if you fail mod mine map, I'll mod yours ;p Thanks :)

[Normal]
  1. 00:19:344 (1) - Correct this slider shape, like this: http://puu.sh/Kb5M Done
[Hard]
  1. Nothing here.
[Insane]
  1. 00:45:055 - How about adding one more reverse arrow? If not, you can also set beatsnap divisor to 1/6 and correct slider to that - it looks nice. 1 more reverse arrow added
  2. 00:54:145 - ^^
  3. 01:44:145 - ^^
  4. 01:53:236 - ^^
  5. 01:27:526 - Incorrect spacing. Changed
  6. 01:34:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing between these notes look ugly in my opinion. Try move them in nicer way, but it is only my little suggestion. :)I made them like this due to the previous mod and I think they are good so no change for now sorry
Good luck! :) Thanks

Genshin wrote:

Star :D Thanks
Topic Starter
Arnold0
Grrr it's too hard to have a MAT mod...

More important thing:

Fixed 2 hitsound missing and changed the 4 1/8 sliders to 1/6, sound better. (Insane diff)
riffy
ok. as you requested

[General]
100% volume sounds too loud. reduce it, please!
all difs has a lot of overlaps. doesn't looks really good

[Normal]
AR + 1. it fits with your slider velocity much better
00:50:026 (1) - too far from spinner. it's easiest diff on this mapset. so.. put this closer to the screen center
01:05:651 (2) - http://puu.sh/KIH5
01:49:117 (1) - same as 00:50:026 (1)

[Hard]
OD + 1 this is Hard!
00:10:822 - circle here
00:25:594 - ^

[Insane]
UNSNAPPED OBJECTS
00:14:515 (1,7) - stack them
00:45:055 (2) - doesn't really fits here.

more looks like unfinished diff. i expected to see much more sliders. kinda unbalanced now

short mod. i just pointed out some things. looks like some parts are copy-pasted. so.. check them too for same mistakes
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

gl~
Topic Starter
Arnold0

-Bakari- wrote:

ok. as you requested

[General]
100% volume sounds too loud. reduce it, please! Set to 70%
all difs has a lot of overlaps. doesn't looks really good Most of them are caused by distance snapping so...

[Normal]
AR + 1. it fits with your slider velocity much better Changed
00:50:026 (1) - too far from spinner. it's easiest diff on this mapset. so.. put this closer to the screen center Changed
01:05:651 (2) - http://puu.sh/KIH5 I think it sond bad so not changed sry
01:49:117 (1) - same as 00:50:026 (1) Okey

[Hard]
OD + 1 this is Hard! Changed
00:10:822 - circle here Changed
00:25:594 - ^ I don't hear thing in the music here which need a circle.

[Insane]
UNSNAPPED OBJECTS AIMod say "unsnapped (0)"
00:14:515 (1,7) - stack them Okey
00:45:055 (2) - doesn't really fits here. Why? I think it follow the music :o

more looks like unfinished diff. i expected to see much more sliders. kinda unbalanced now Why does it need more sliders? This is an insane after all an putting slider will just make it easyer no?

short mod. i just pointed out some things. looks like some parts are copy-pasted. so.. check them too for same mistakes I never copy/pasted >.<
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

gl~
Thanks for mod :) I'll try to upload but I'm not sure it'll work my connexion is so buggy tooday ...

EDIT: Upload succesfull.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue


General

  1. better find a better quality bg ...
Normal

  1. 00:40:935 (3) - make shape better i think.. move 2 points in middle o.o? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/379485
Hard

  1. 00:25:878 (6,7) - seems one slider 3 reverse fits better...
  2. 00:44:344 (1) - make symmetry
  3. 01:04:799 (1) - put slider point (32,176) looks better..?
  4. 01:54:231 (2) - last point (432,152)
Insane

  1. 00:39:799 (1,2,3) - bigger spacing so don't overlap?
  2. 00:46:049 (3) - you can make a better slider like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/379389
  3. 00:50:452 (3) - spacing
  4. 01:13:890 (2,3,4,5,6) - make better shape..?
  5. 01:40:310 (2,3) - spacing bigger
weird music ..orz don't know how to mod this sorry ;_;

Good luck~
Kurokami
Yo.

[Normal]
00:40:935 (3) - haha, yeah, same as above mentioned
01:40:026 (1,2) - weird overlap

[Hard]
00:08:265 (3) - what are you mapped here? I know its sounds good, but...
01:17:157 (3,4) - unrankable issue, 4's repeat arrow partially covered by 3's hirburst
01:17:157 (3,4) - ^
01:33:066 (4,5) - unrankable issue, 5's repeat arrow partially covered by 4's hirburst

[Insane]
00:16:219 (9,11) - 1 grid down
00:17:072 (1,3,5) - 1 grid right
00:40:083 (3) - 1 grid down
00:46:901 (1,2,3) - 2 one grid down? this way 3 will be centered in the middle of 1 and 2
00:48:037 (4,5) - 1 grid down
01:06:219 (5) - 1 grid left?
01:07:072 (1,2,3) - looks ugly, move 1,3 1 grid right
01:09:344 (1,2,3) - ugly, 3 is 1 grid up, 1 is 1 left and up
01:11:759 (2,3) - 1 right
01:39:174 (9) - 1 down

I wanted to say, its okay, but then I saw your triplets. o.o

[]
That's all, what I able to say about this map. Sorry for the too much nazy things. o.o Good luck with this. :3
Topic Starter
Arnold0

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue


General

  1. better find a better quality bg ... Maybe I'll search one, but I can't find an image from the game which is better if it change it'll not from the game and that's not what I want :x
Normal

  1. 00:40:935 (3) - make shape better i think.. move 2 points in middle o.o? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/379485 Done
Hard

  1. 00:25:878 (6,7) - seems one slider 3 reverse fits better... Changed
  2. 00:44:344 (1) - make symmetry Tryed (But not sure about success ^^')
  3. 01:04:799 (1) - put slider point (32,176) looks better..? Done
  4. 01:54:231 (2) - last point (432,152) Done
Insane

  1. 00:39:799 (1,2,3) - bigger spacing so don't overlap? Changed a little, I think it's good now
  2. 00:46:049 (3) - you can make a better slider like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/379389 Can't succesfully made the same as yours but changed hope it's okey
  3. 00:50:452 (3) - spacing Changes just a little (The overlap just a little because this was an idea from another mod
  4. 01:13:890 (2,3,4,5,6) - make better shape..? Changed but not sure it's better :x
  5. 01:40:310 (2,3) - spacing bigger Same as 00:50:452
weird music ..orz don't know how to mod this sorry ;_;

Good luck~ Thanks
Thanks for mod :)

EDIT ninja'd by other mod :o
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Kurokami wrote:

Yo.

[Normal]
00:40:935 (3) - haha, yeah, same as above mentioned Already done in the mod before ^^
01:40:026 (1,2) - weird overlap Changed

[Hard]
00:08:265 (3) - what are you mapped here? I know its sounds good, but... What is the problem here ? it folows the music fine :o
01:17:157 (3,4) - unrankable issue, 4's repeat arrow partially covered by 3's hirburst Grrr default 300 are realy bigger than the ones in my skin... Changed
01:17:157 (3,4) - ^ O_O You give me the same time as before, fail ?
01:33:066 (4,5) - unrankable issue, 5's repeat arrow partially covered by 4's hirburst Changed

[Insane]
00:16:219 (9,11) - 1 grid down
00:17:072 (1,3,5) - 1 grid right
00:40:083 (3) - 1 grid down
00:46:901 (1,2,3) - 2 one grid down? this way 3 will be centered in the middle of 1 and 2
00:48:037 (4,5) - 1 grid down
01:06:219 (5) - 1 grid left?
01:07:072 (1,2,3) - looks ugly, move 1,3 1 grid right
01:09:344 (1,2,3) - ugly, 3 is 1 grid up, 1 is 1 left and up
01:11:759 (2,3) - 1 right
01:39:174 (9) - 1 down
All done
I wanted to say, its okay, but then I saw your triplets. o.o What triplets mean? I've used a translator and I did not know the french word it gives to me o_O

[]
That's all, what I able to say about this map. Sorry for the too much nazy things. o.o Good luck with this. :3 Thanks
Thanks for mod :)
I've got 20 mod on my map :o
Kurokami

Arnold0 wrote:

Kurokami wrote:

Yo.

[Hard]
00:08:265 (3) - what are you mapped here? I know its sounds good, but... What is the problem here ? it folows the music fine :o nope, you mapped 3 note, but the last note isn't represent in the music.
01:17:157 (3,4) - unrankable issue, 4's repeat arrow partially covered by 3's hirburst Grrr default 300 are realy bigger than the ones in my skin... Changed I'm also not using the default skin, but this is unrankable anyways.
01:17:157 (3,4) - ^ O_O You give me the same time as before, fail ? oops. My mistake. o.o 00:27:015 (1,3) - here

and here too: 00:15:793 (4,5) -


I wanted to say, its okay, but then I saw your triplets. o.o What triplets mean? I've used a translator and I did not know the french word it gives to me o_O Triplet means 3 note following each other with no space between them. The selected ones are the triplets: http://puu.sh/L2tP
Topic Starter
Arnold0
The two other hitburst hiding reverse arrow are fixed thanks.
Flask
Hi there ~ Request From CLANNAD Mod queue~
Regou does not choose your map to mod , so i take a look :3!

[General]
Background.png >> should be jpg (less file size)

And i think kiai time should be here
#1 00:42:072 - (open)
#2 01:41:162 - (open)
I'd like to set preview time on Offset 40935 but it's up to you :3


[Normal]
00:02:441 (3) - should start at 00:02:583 - and end at 00:02:867 -
00:04:714 (3) - ^ (start at red tick and end at white tick)
00:16:077 (4) - ^
00:18:350 (3) - ^
00:21:617 (3) - spacing
00:34:259 (3) - same as above
00:36:532 (3) - ^
00:37:526 (4) - nc
01:01:532 (4,3) - ^
01:15:168 (3) - ^
01:33:350 (4,3) - ^

not bad .-.

[Hard]
00:12:810 (3) - why here's a clap? remove

[Insane]
I find some unsnapped slider ,please snap them ↓
00:45:055 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:45:055 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
00:54:145 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:54:145 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
01:44:145 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
01:44:145 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
01:53:236 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
01:53:236 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)

00:45:055 (2) - Why here has finish T_T too loudly
00:54:145 (2) - ^


umm... this is your first map and still needs more mod :3 good luck!
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Flask wrote:

Hi there ~ Request From CLANNAD Mod queue~
Regou does not choose your map to mod , so i take a look :3!

[General]
Background.png >> should be jpg (less file size)
I'll respond to this with an image :

And i think kiai time should be here
#1 00:42:072 - (open) Okey
#2 01:41:162 - (open) Okey
I'd like to set preview time on Offset 40935 but it's up to you :3 Okey


[Normal]
00:02:441 (3) - should start at 00:02:583 - and end at 00:02:867 - This is easyer and not sound bad so okey
00:04:714 (3) - ^ (start at red tick and end at white tick) ^
00:16:077 (4) - ^^
00:18:350 (3) - ^^
00:21:617 (3) - spacing Changed
00:34:259 (3) - same as above ^
00:36:532 (3) - ^^
00:37:526 (4) - nc Yep
01:01:532 (4,3) - ^^
01:15:168 (3) - ^^
01:33:350 (4,3) - ^^

not bad .-.

[Hard]
00:12:810 (3) - why here's a clap? removeThere is all the time a clap on this sond on the music so no.

[Insane]
I find some unsnapped slider ,please snap them ↓
00:45:055 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:45:055 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
00:54:145 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:54:145 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
01:44:145 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
01:44:145 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
01:53:236 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
01:53:236 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
I think it's okey now
00:45:055 (2) - Why here has finish T_T too loudly Removed
00:54:145 (2) - ^^


umm... this is your first map and still needs more mod :3 good luck! More mods? I've got already many ones but sure I think my map can still be improved, but getting realy many mods is not realy easy :s
TTTTTTTTTTTT
From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

Hi~

[Normal]

00:01:163 - consider add a finish?
00:32:981 - There lacks a finish.
00:40:935 - I don't think this finish is fit the music..
00:41:787 - ^
00:53:435 - add a NC and consider add a finish at the head of slider?
01:00:253 - emm.I think there lacks a finish.ww
01:32:072 - ^

[Hard]

00:41:361 - remove finish
00:48:322 - I think it would be better to add a clap.
01:00:253 - Add a finish.
01:40:452 - remove finish

[Insane]

00:10:395 - move 1 grid up
00:10:537 - move 2 grids up
00:41:361 - remove finish
00:45:102 - try another method,because it's too loudly.
00:54:193 - ^
01:40:062 - add a finish
01:44:193 - the same as 00:45:102
01:53:284 - ^

Good luck!!!
Topic Starter
Arnold0

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

Hi~

[Normal]

00:01:163 - consider add a finish? Added
00:32:981 - There lacks a finish. Added
00:40:935 - I don't think this finish is fit the music.. Removed
00:41:787 - ^ Removed
00:53:435 - add a NC and consider add a finish at the head of slider? Done
01:00:253 - emm.I think there lacks a finish.ww Added
01:32:072 - ^ Added

[Hard]

00:41:361 - remove finish Done
00:48:322 - I think it would be better to add a clap. Huh! How I missed that :O
01:00:253 - Add a finish. Done
01:40:452 - remove finish Done

[Insane]

00:10:395 - move 1 grid up Okey
00:10:537 - move 2 grids up ^
00:41:361 - remove finish Removed
00:45:102 - try another method,because it's too loudly. idk what to do so I just lowered the volume a little
00:54:193 - ^^
01:40:062 - add a finish Done
01:44:193 - the same as 00:45:102 the same as 00:45:102 ^^
01:53:284 - ^^

Good luck!!! Thanks :)
Kin
From Mod queue :)

général :

Il te faudrait au moins un break time

Normal :


ce spoiler est seulement si tu veux des slider parfaitement parallèle a un certain point :
SPOILER
00:01:163 (1) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwL7
00:07:981 (3) - changer ce slider pour celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwML
00:16:219 (4) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwOU
00:28:435 (1) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwRK
00:30:424 (1) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwTC
00:38:947 (3) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwUW
01:18:435 (1) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwWY
01:19:856 (3) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwXp

Hard


00:08:265 (3) - si tu map les sons électriques je pense pas que cette note soit utile, tu pourrais la delete
00:10:537 (3) - Pareil que l'autre
00:21:901 (3) - pareil que les 2 autres
00:24:174 (3) - pareil que les 3 autres
00:25:310 (5) - je pense qu'un petit slider serrais mieux : http://puu.sh/MzqC
00:40:083 (3) - pareil que les 4 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider)
01:07:356 (3) - pareil que les 5 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider)
01:09:628 (3) - pareil que les 6 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider)
01:20:992 (3) - pareil que les 7 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider)
01:23:265 (3) - pareil que les 8 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider)
01:24:401 (5) - un petit slider serrais peut etre mieux : http://puu.sh/Mzv5
01:27:810 (4) - pareil que les 9 d'en haut (sauf ceux qui parlent du slider)
01:42:015 (4) - un slider içi serrait pas mieux ?

Bon par contre ne suis pas mon mod à la lettre y a surement des erreurs vue que je suis qu'un débutant modder, et j'ai pas encore assez d’expérience pour modder les insanes

Good luck ~
Aunxfb
From:Fishball's NEWBIE modding queue

[Normal]
00:40:935 (3) - start at 00:41:361
00:50:026 (1) - start at 00:50:473
01:40:026 (1) - start at 01:40:452
01:49:117 (1) - start at 01:49:543

[Hard]
00:10:537 (3,4,5) - change this into a slider(with one reverse)
00:12:810 (3,4) - change this into a slider(no reverse,long slider )
00:41:503 (2) - remove circle
00:40:935 (1) - extend slider til 00:41:503
01:13:038 (5) - extend this in timeline into a 3-hit slider
01:13:606 (1) - remove circle
01:13:890 (6) - NC(new combo)
01:40:594 (2) - remove circle
01:40:026 (1) - extend slider til 01:40:594

[Insane]
00:14:515 (1) - remove NC
00:14:799 (2) - add NC
00:25:310 (5) - delete circle, and let the slider starts here
00:25:452 (1) - remove NC
00:25:878 (2) - add NC
00:45:055 (2) - delete slider
00:45:197 - add circle
00:54:193 (2) - delete slider
00:54:287 - add circle
01:24:401 (5) - delete circle, let slider starts here
01:24:969 (7) - add NC
01:44:193 (2) - let slider start at 01:44:145
01:53:284 (2) - let slider start at 01:53:236
P.S:I'm not skillful enough to play this map

Conclusion:
-----------------
It's following the music, but the patterns doesn't look good.Try rearranging the beats.
Hope my mod was useful,Good Luck ;)
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Kinzo wrote:

From Mod queue :)

général :

Il te faudrait au moins un break time Quand j'en avais on ma dit de les enlever et la musique n'ai pas trop longue donc je pense que sa va comme ça.

Normal :


ce spoiler est seulement si tu veux des slider parfaitement parallèle a un certain point :
SPOILER
00:01:163 (1) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwL7
00:07:981 (3) - changer ce slider pour celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwML
00:16:219 (4) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwOU
00:28:435 (1) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwRK
00:30:424 (1) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwTC
00:38:947 (3) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwUW
01:18:435 (1) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwWY
01:19:856 (3) - changer ce slider et le faire comme celui la ---> http://puu.sh/MwXp
Tout fait ^^

Hard


00:08:265 (3) - si tu map les sons électriques je pense pas que cette note soit utile, tu pourrais la delete J'ai toujours mis des notes sur se sont et sans je trouve que sa ne vas pas donc je laisse comme ça
00:10:537 (3) - Pareil que l'autre Idem
00:21:901 (3) - pareil que les 2 autres Idem
00:24:174 (3) - pareil que les 3 autres Idem
00:25:310 (5) - je pense qu'un petit slider serrais mieux : http://puu.sh/MzqC Oui
00:40:083 (3) - pareil que les 4 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider) Idem (Sauf celui qui parle du slider) ^^
01:07:356 (3) - pareil que les 5 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider) Idem
01:09:628 (3) - pareil que les 6 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider) Idem
01:20:992 (3) - pareil que les 7 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider) Idem
01:23:265 (3) - pareil que les 8 d'en haut (sauf celui qui parle du slider) Idem
01:24:401 (5) - un petit slider serrais peut etre mieux : http://puu.sh/Mzv5 Oui
01:27:810 (4) - pareil que les 9 d'en haut (sauf ceux qui parlent du slider) Idem que ceux d'avent ^^
01:42:015 (4) - un slider içi serrait pas mieux ? Peut être mais je ne sait pas ou je pourrais mettre la fin donc pas changé pour l'instant.

Bon par contre ne suis pas mon mod à la lettre y a surement des erreurs vue que je suis qu'un débutant modder, et j'ai pas encore assez d’expérience pour modder les insanes Ho bah t’inquiète pas des débutant modder j'en connais (moi ^^)

Good luck ~ Thanks (Some english in your message only here ? :P)
Aunxfb I'm applying your mod now :)
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Aunxfb wrote:

From:Fishball's NEWBIE modding queue

[Normal]
00:40:935 (3) - start at 00:41:361 Tryed, sound special so no change
00:50:026 (1) - start at 00:50:473 Huh the time you gives me is not snapped on a tick o_O
01:40:026 (1) - start at 01:40:452 Tryed, sound special no change
01:49:117 (1) - start at 01:49:543 ^

[Hard]
00:10:537 (3,4,5) - change this into a slider(with one reverse) Ive just make the 3,4 into a slider.
00:12:810 (3,4) - change this into a slider(no reverse,long slider ) Done
00:41:503 (2) - remove circle Done
00:40:935 (1) - extend slider til 00:41:503 Done
01:13:038 (5) - extend this in timeline into a 3-hit slider Done
01:13:606 (1) - remove circle Done
01:13:890 (6) - NC(new combo) Done
01:40:594 (2) - remove circle Done
01:40:026 (1) - extend slider til 01:40:594 Done

[Insane]
00:14:515 (1) - remove NC Done
00:14:799 (2) - add NC Done
00:25:310 (5) - delete circle, and let the slider starts here Done (I've put start here and end same as before)
00:25:452 (1) - remove NC Done
00:25:878 (2) - add NC Done
00:45:055 (2) - delete slider Done
00:45:197 - add circle Done
00:54:193 (2) - delete slider Done
00:54:287 - add circle Done
01:24:401 (5) - delete circle, let slider starts here Done
01:24:969 (7) - add NC Done
01:44:193 (2) - let slider start at 01:44:145 I've do like the 1st part of the song, del slider and add note.
01:53:284 (2) - let slider start at 01:53:236 ^
P.S:I'm not skillful enough to play this map

Conclusion:
-----------------
It's following the music, but the patterns doesn't look good.Try rearranging the beats. If I realy have to chage this I'll maybe make it but for now if it can be okey like this it'll be better :o
Hope my mod was useful,Good Luck ;) Thanks and yes it was usfull :)
Topic Starter
Arnold0
Because many one asked me,
BACKGROUND CHANGED!
If you need the new background redownload!
new BG

FILENAME in song folder : BG.jpg
[ Zzz ]
01:34:628 (3) - unstack with 01:34:344 (1) - this ( little bit stack )
01:49:543 (3) - use 1.0x Distace
Topic Starter
Arnold0

cool cool wrote:

01:34:628 (3) - unstack with 01:34:344 (1) - this ( little bit stack ) Maybe you want to say they overlap? Okey changed.
01:49:543 (3) - use 1.0x Distace Changed.
Short mod but usefull, just saying you, you should give the difficulty name.
HelloSCV
Hi~ From my Queue
My Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER
Normal
00:21:617 (3) - NC
00:25:878 (4) - ^
01:32:072 (2) - add finish start of slider
01:42:583 (3,4) - change to slider?

Hard
00:48:890 (4) - NC
01:47:981 (4) - ^
01:55:367 (1) - finish

Insane
312 circles and only 17 sliders?? how about using more slider?
00:25:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - try pentagon
01:24:969 (6) - NC
01:55:367 (1) - finish

Good luck :D
Topic Starter
Arnold0

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
My Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER
Normal
00:21:617 (3) - NC Done
00:25:878 (4) - ^^
01:32:072 (2) - add finish start of slider Okey
01:42:583 (3,4) - change to slider? Done

Hard
00:48:890 (4) - NC Done
01:47:981 (4) - ^^
01:55:367 (1) - finish Okey

Insane
312 circles and only 17 sliders?? how about using more slider? I don't know what to do with sliders and think like this can be okey, if someone sugest me some things to replace with slider which dont make the diff to easier I'll see.
00:25:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - try pentagon Tryed but not sure about the result *.*
01:24:969 (6) - NC Okey
01:55:367 (1) - finish Okey

Good luck :D Thanks ;)
JudgeTheDude
From my Modding queue

J'ai eu beau chercher, j'ai rien trouvé qui n'allait pas. Juste 2 notes sur le Normal snappées sur du bleu, mais en fin de compte ça allait. Bon courage pour le Ranking ^^

[General]
Passe à un BPM fixe de 105, 105,60 me parait bizarre comme BPM, mais après peut-être est-ce normal

[Normal]
Pas de soucis

[Hard]
Pas de soucis

[Insane]
Trop rapide pour moi, désolé
Topic Starter
Arnold0
J'ai essayé mais non le BPM est bien 105.60 et non pas 105 ^^"

EDIT : Notes sur le bleu fixé donc je t'ai donné un kudosu vu que tu l'as remarqué et que c'est une suggestion utile.
Reisen Udongein
Bonjour x3 from my queue!

[General]

umm.. did you use Distance Spacing :3?? I think you better use it there are so many irregular spacing notes..

[Insane]

SliderMultiplier:2.79999990463257 -> 2.8

00:01:163 (1) - add finish?
00:05:708 (1) - ^
00:14:799 (1) - ^
00:19:344 (1) - ^
00:32:981 (1) - ^
00:41:787 (4) - delete finish
01:00:253 (1) - add finish
01:04:799 (1) - ^
01:13:606 (1) - Delete NC
01:13:890 (2) - NC , add finish
01:18:435 (1) - add finish
01:25:822 (6) - delete finish
01:26:958 (2) - add finish
01:30:367 (6) - delete finish
01:31:503 (2) - add finish
01:31:219 (1) - delete NC
01:32:072 (3) - NC
01:32:072 (3) - add finish
01:36:617 (1) - ^
01:40:878 (4) - delete finish on the head

[Hard]

same finish problems :3 please set the finishes based on cymbals sound and set those when music starts x_x not abusing on weird part

00:25:878 (6) - NC
00:27:015 (1) - delete NC
00:28:435 (3) - NC
00:29:288 (1) - delete NC
00:30:424 (3) - NC
00:31:560 (1) - delete NC
00:59:685 (1,1) - this will be better?
01:24:969 (6) - NC
01:26:674 (1) - delete NC
01:27:526 (2) - NC
01:31:219 (1) - delete NC
01:32:072 (2) - NC
01:38:890 (3) - ^

[Normal]

Same as Insane finishes

00:07:981 (3) - NC
00:12:526 (4) - ^
00:14:515 (1) - delete NC
00:14:799 (2) - NC
00:32:128 (3,4) - change those into 1 slider so that this can be much easier
01:07:072 (4) - NC
01:11:617 (4) - ^
01:24:969 (4) - ^
01:29:515 (4) - ^
01:31:219 (1) - delete NC
01:32:072 (2) - NC
01:38:890 (3) - ^
01:43:435 (4) - ^

hope you become much more experienced about mapping :3
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Reisen Udongein wrote:

Bonjour x3 from my queue!

[General]

umm.. did you use Distance Spacing :3?? I think you better use it there are so many irregular spacing notes.. Yes I used it, but it looks like I did not used it all the time :O I've fixed spacing in Normal & Hard.

[Insane]

SliderMultiplier:2.79999990463257 -> 2.8

00:01:163 (1) - add finish?
00:05:708 (1) - ^
00:14:799 (1) - ^
00:19:344 (1) - ^
00:32:981 (1) - ^
00:41:787 (4) - delete finish
01:00:253 (1) - add finish
01:04:799 (1) - ^
01:13:606 (1) - Delete NC
01:13:890 (2) - NC , add finish
01:18:435 (1) - add finish
01:25:822 (6) - delete finish
01:26:958 (2) - add finish
01:30:367 (6) - delete finish
01:31:503 (2) - add finish
01:31:219 (1) - delete NC
01:32:072 (3) - NC
01:32:072 (3) - add finish
01:36:617 (1) - ^
01:40:878 (4) - delete finish on the head

[Hard]

same finish problems :3 please set the finishes based on cymbals sound and set those when music starts x_x not abusing on weird part

00:25:878 (6) - NC
00:27:015 (1) - delete NC
00:28:435 (3) - NC
00:29:288 (1) - delete NC
00:30:424 (3) - NC
00:31:560 (1) - delete NC
00:59:685 (1,1) - this will be better?
01:24:969 (6) - NC
01:26:674 (1) - delete NC
01:27:526 (2) - NC
01:31:219 (1) - delete NC
01:32:072 (2) - NC
01:38:890 (3) - ^

[Normal]

Same as Insane finishes

00:07:981 (3) - NC
00:12:526 (4) - ^
00:14:515 (1) - delete NC
00:14:799 (2) - NC
00:32:128 (3,4) - change those into 1 slider so that this can be much easier
01:07:072 (4) - NC
01:11:617 (4) - ^
01:24:969 (4) - ^
01:29:515 (4) - ^
01:31:219 (1) - delete NC
01:32:072 (2) - NC
01:38:890 (3) - ^
01:43:435 (4) - ^

Sorry don't want to write like 50 times done so all done :P


hope you become much more experienced about mapping :3
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Keep the Kiai same in all your diffs.

[Normal]
00:42:072 - start Kiai here
01:40:026 (1) - remove NC
01:41:163 (2) - NC

[Hard]
00:14:799 (2) - delete previous NC and add NC here
00:41:788 (2) - curve it to fit the end of 00:40:935 (1)? http://puu.sh/NmqC
01:41:162 - start Kiai here to keep consistence
01:49:117 (1,2) - they are close to each other and looks not good, so make more space between them?

[Insane]
AR-1 because you doesn't have any complex pattern.
00:25:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a better polygon?
01:41:162 - start Kiai here to keep consistence

GL~
Topic Starter
Arnold0

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Keep the Kiai same in all your diffs.
I've changed it in normal and forget to change it in Hard & insane.
[Normal]
00:42:072 - start Kiai here mine was unsnapped :o Fixed :o Also used the same on hard & insane for having the same in the 3 diffs
01:40:026 (1) - remove NCOkey
01:41:163 (2) - NC^

[Hard]
00:14:799 (2) - delete previous NC and add NC hereOkey
00:41:788 (2) - curve it to fit the end of 00:40:935 (1)? http://puu.sh/NmqC I tried but I'm not sure I've got the exact same (The level 4 grid is so small it's hard to see :( )
01:41:162 - start Kiai here to keep consistence Fixed
01:49:117 (1,2) - they are close to each other and looks not good, so make more space between them? Changed but broke spacing, it'll be okey?

[Insane]
AR-1 because you doesn't have any complex pattern. Okey.
00:25:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a better polygon? I changed it a little but not sure about the result (I won't broke distance snap for this so I think it's just a little chage hope it's okey now)
01:41:162 - start Kiai here to keep consistence Fixed

GL~
Topic Starter
Arnold0
Self fixed :

[Normal]
01:17:441 (3) - This one is still on bleu ticks when others are on red/white. Fixed
01:35:623 (3) - ^ Fixed too

Yes I mod myself my own map and found things to change lulz

Give kudos to Judge post because he says me I've note snapped on blue ticks on normal thats why I checked.
Chewin
Hi Arnold0 :3 Well, you are the one with the highest SP of who have joined the special round of my modding queue xD
Then here is my mod, let's start.

[General]
Remove letterbox during breaks from all diffs because there aren't breaks in your map (Just go in song setup > storyboarding > remove letterbox)
Remove GBA from the title adding it ONLY in the tags.
We have some tags to add here: Game Boy Advance, Nintendo, Videogames, DB, Goku.
Are you sure that the title name is correct?

[Normal]
00:05:708 (1) - Move the 2nd point at x:144 y:108, in this way the slider would become more curved on the center and so also more flowing to play
00:10:253 (1,2,3) - Select these 3 elements and mvoe to x:48 y:224 so the 00:11:106 (2) is completely overlapped with 00:09:401 (3)'s end
00:28:435 (1) - Use finish on this slider head?
00:34:401 (3) - You should improve your sliders' shape to make it more flowing while the play. Move the 2nd waypoint at x:388 y:24
00:36:674 (3) - 3 grid right 2nd waypoint for the same reason ^
00:40:935 (3) - I would move this slider 1/2 late reducing it by 1/1 and adding a clap on its end, I mean:

00:42:072 (1) - You have forgotten clap on the head
01:15:310 (3) - This slider is pretty ugly, I guess you wanted to make something like this: http://puu.sh/NLGM
01:26:106 (2) - I can hear a finish here from the music. What about to add finish on the circle then?
01:40:026 (3) - What ugly slider here :\ Move the 2nd point at x:416 y:80
01:41:163 (1) - ^ 2nd waypoint at x:360 y:332
01:42:583 (2) - Clap at the end
01:51:958 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:20:765 (2,3) - Select them and move to x:212 y:248 so they are symetric
01:02:526 (1,2,3,4) - Select them and move to x:164 y:320 always for symmetry
You have to improve the shape of the sliders.

[Insane]
00:42:072 (5) - New combo
00:51:162 (5) - ^
01:40:310 (2) - Remove this circle keeping the 01:40:452 (3) instead that follows the music
01:40:878 (4) - If you followed above use NC here
01:50:253 (5) - ^
I hate the spacing of these streams..

That's all, good luck ^^
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Chewin wrote:

Hi Arnold0 :3 Well, you are the one with the highest SP of who have joined the special round of my modding queue xD
Then here is my mod, let's start.

[General]
Remove letterbox during breaks from all diffs because there aren't breaks in your map (Just go in song setup > storyboarding > remove letterbox) Don't know why since they are no breaks so unable or not will change nothing but okey if you want ^^
Remove GBA from the title adding it ONLY in the tags. Okey (Lol makes me duplicate the map thanks to jericho2442 for deleting the bad one)
We have some tags to add here: Game Boy Advance, Nintendo, Videogames, DB, Goku.Added
Are you sure that the title name is correct? I don't know because it's from a GBA game so I think there is not real title ?

[Normal]
00:05:708 (1) - Move the 2nd point at x:144 y:108, in this way the slider would become more curved on the center and so also more flowing to play Okey
00:10:253 (1,2,3) - Select these 3 elements and mvoe to x:48 y:224 so the 00:11:106 (2) is completely overlapped with 00:09:401 (3)'s end Moved at X:44 Y:228, I think it overlapps better.
00:28:435 (1) - Use finish on this slider head? Okey
00:34:401 (3) - You should improve your sliders' shape to make it more flowing while the play. Move the 2nd waypoint at x:388 y:24 Okey
00:36:674 (3) - 3 grid right 2nd waypoint for the same reason ^ Okey
00:40:935 (3) - I would move this slider 1/2 late reducing it by 1/1 and adding a clap on its end, I mean:
Yep
00:42:072 (1) - You have forgotten clap on the head I don't reealy like how a clap sound here
01:15:310 (3) - This slider is pretty ugly, I guess you wanted to make something like this: http://puu.sh/NLGM How yey it's better :)
01:26:106 (2) - I can hear a finish here from the music. What about to add finish on the circle then? Why not, added
01:40:026 (3) - What ugly slider here :\ Move the 2nd point at x:416 y:80 Okey
01:41:163 (1) - ^ 2nd waypoint at x:360 y:332 Okey
01:42:583 (2) - Clap at the end Yes, sure
01:51:958 (4) - ^^

[Hard]
00:20:765 (2,3) - Select them and move to x:212 y:248 so they are symetric Done
01:02:526 (1,2,3,4) - Select them and move to x:164 y:320 always for symmetry Done
You have to improve the shape of the sliders. I tryed to change some, hope it's better now

[Insane]
00:42:072 (5) - New combo Yes
00:51:162 (5) - ^^
01:40:310 (2) - Remove this circle keeping the 01:40:452 (3) instead that follows the music Nope I think this circle follow the music too
01:40:878 (4) - If you followed above use NC here Did not followed the one above but an NC here fit so added
01:50:253 (5) - ^^
I hate the spacing of these streams.. Whats the problem with them? They are 1.0x distance snapped :o

That's all, good luck ^^
Thanks for mod :)

And yes... My map got 30 mods but no MAT watch it XD
Topic Starter
Arnold0
The BG image disapered on http://osu.ppy.sh/s/49001 so full reupload done.
Topic Starter
Arnold0
00:42:072 (1) - You have forgotten clap on the head I don't reealy like how a clap sound here
What i've done here ? This is okey :o so fixed :o :o

Re edit I think I do so special things I'm not consentrated... I think I've added a finish :o okey I'll check after work :o
Poggo
Hi from my mod Q ^.^

Insane

00:46:049(3) - make more symmetry http://puu.sh/OdWV
00:50:594 - add note here
01:40:878 - this slider make double and put on white tick
01:49:685 - add note

Hard

not bad~~

Normal

not bad~

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q ^.^

Insane

00:46:049(3) - make more symmetry http://puu.sh/OdWV Tryed I think it's okey.
00:50:594 - add note here Yes
01:40:878 - this slider make double and put on white tick Sound good so done :)
01:49:685 - add note Yes

Hard

not bad~~

Normal

not bad~

Good luck~ Thanks :)
R e v i v e
Hi Arnold :-)

From my modding queue,,,


NOTE : follow Normal then fixed other difficulties like this pattern sounds.

Normal

00:02:583 (3) - Add whistle at tail slider.
00:04:856 (3) - ^
00:16:219 (3) - ^
00:18:492 (3) - ^
00:34:401 (3) - ^
00:36:674 (3) -
00:42:072 (1,2) - Add whistle all slider.
00:51:163 (2) - ^
00:53:435 (1,2) - ^
01:01:674 (4) - Add whistle at tail slider.
01:03:947 (3) - ^
01:15:310 (3) - ^
01:17:583 (3) - ^
01:33:492 (3) - ^
01:35:765 (3) - ^
01:41:163 (1) - Add whistle all slider.
01:43:435 (1) - ^
01:50:253 (2) - ^
01:52:526 (1,2) - ^

I don't like this song, but your clap sound is great >3

Sry for my short mod (Need to read my book for exam again ._.)
Topic Starter
Arnold0

R e v i v e wrote:

Hi Arnold :-)

From my modding queue,,,


NOTE : follow Normal then fixed other difficulties like this pattern sounds.

Normal

00:02:583 (3) - Add whistle at tail slider. Added
00:04:856 (3) - ^^
00:16:219 (3) - ^^
00:18:492 (3) - ^^
00:34:401 (3) - ^^
00:36:674 (3) - ^
00:42:072 (1,2) - Add whistle all slider.Don't like how it sound so no change
00:51:163 (2) - ^^
00:53:435 (1,2) - ^^
01:01:674 (4) - Add whistle at tail slider. Added
01:03:947 (3) - ^^
01:15:310 (3) - ^^
01:17:583 (3) - ^^
01:33:492 (3) - ^^
01:35:765 (3) - ^^
01:41:163 (1) - Add whistle all slider.Don't like how it sound so no change
01:43:435 (1) - ^^
01:50:253 (2) - ^^
01:52:526 (1,2) - ^^

I don't like this song, but your clap sound is great >3

Sry for my short mod (Need to read my book for exam again ._.)
Thanks for mod :)
Please next time don't use "tail slider", but prefer say end slider because I can't understand that and have to ask in mod help what it means :p
Kei
Interesting beatmap and song. You should check a lot the modding queues subforum to find some MAT. It's very hard for new mappers but I'm sure that you'll have chance to find a good MAT to help you out. Oh btw, I have a question: why did you wrote "DragonBall" in the song title without a space between Dragon and Ball, but in the source you wrote it with space? It looks odd, that's why I'm asking. :D

Edit: oh lol new page
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Kei wrote:

Interesting beatmap and song. Thanks :)

You should check a lot the modding queues subforum to find some MAT. I check it all days but no MAT modding queues open here. (Yes Leorda one is open but I already posted in it and she skipped because she don't like the song... & I have posted in Kawayi Rika one but it's random mod and I'm unlucky I belive so yea :o)

It's very hard for new mappers but I'm sure that you'll have chance to find a good MAT to help you out. You think? I start myself to think this will never be ranked, ranking porcess is too hard (And seeing some maps bubbled after 4 days with less mod and less SP broke alot more my motivation...)

Oh btw, I have a question: why did you wrote "DragonBall" in the song title without a space between Dragon and Ball, but in the source you wrote it with space? It looks odd, that's why I'm asking. :D Fail, added space in title. Also added dragonball as tag because I prefer search "dragonball" than "dragon ball" XD

Edit: oh lol new page
Kei
Owww I had the same problem with my first beatmap. I was so tired of this ranking system that I almost ended leaving it to the graveyard. In the end, after waitin around 8 months :? I got it ranked. I would like to help you out. I know about some MATs that u can ask for some help. After school if you're online we can talk about it :D
Pereira006
yay more videogames, but i can't download this beatmap as osu sayd "This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!"
Kei
Hmmm perhaps it can be fixed by doing a full-submission?
Topic Starter
Arnold0
No it's a BSS bug, I have to wait for a fix.........


Sakura wrote:

Edit: Confirming this, full submits end up in "beatmap not uploaded correctly" as well as new submissions.
Standard submissions end up in needing update after download.

PS : If you have a beatmap which actualy works don't do a full submition or you'll likely got this!
Topic Starter
Arnold0
Watch the first post I putted a tamporal link for download until the BSS is fixed.

EDIT : Temp link deleted, the BSS link is fixed.
Kert
Yo
Epic music here

[General]
The mapset is fine, though it suffers from lack of beats/"pauses"/"gaps" most of the time

[Normal]
I suggest you a small remap here, everything with 1,2x spacing (I believe the map looks generally more accurate when there are no overlaps)
Certain sliders bugged me a lot here
00:02:583 (3) - I think it should start at 00:02:441 and end where it ended before
Same for all other sliders
SPOILER
00:04:856 (3) - 00:16:219 (3) - 00:18:492 (3) - 00:34:401 (3) - e.t.c.
I think the rhythm is more natural this way + it won't be hard for newbies because sliders and not circles (impossible to 100)

[Hard]
And here starts stuff about what I mentioned in [General]
00:03:151 - Add circle
00:05:424 - ^ optional
00:08:549 - ^
00:09:969 - ^
00:12:242 - ^
00:16:787 - ^
00:19:060 - ^ optional
00:22:185 - ^
00:27:583 (3) - Instead of this slider you can make a circle on this place and then a slider from 00:27:867 - to 00:28:151 -
00:29:856 (3) - A short slider here instead maybe? to 00:30:140 -
00:32:697 - Add circle
00:34:969 - ^
Now about larger gaps
00:41:788 (2,3,1) - It's very lonely here with this amount of notes
Sounds a lot better like this
You can refrain from adding (6) for example though, if you wish to make a short break
Again fill the pause with a slider or a circle/two here 00:45:481 -
00:51:163 (2,1) - Use you imagination! Do something similar here
00:53:435 (1,2) - Yeah
01:00:253 (1,2) - Overlaps badly, move reverse arrow up or something
Basically the same suggestions for the remaining part of the map

[Insane]
Too many "short breaks between notes here"
You can use more sliders here to fill them
If you wish, I can make quickly my version of your Insane fixing these things and sending it to you
But better try to do this by yourself

Hey, don't be scared by my long post. There is always room for improvement
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Kert wrote:

Yo
Epic music here

[General]
The mapset is fine, though it suffers from lack of beats/"pauses"/"gaps" most of the time

[Normal]
I suggest you a small remap here, everything with 1,2x spacing (I believe the map looks generally more accurate when there are no overlaps) I used only 1x on hard I belive 1.2x it too much for an normal diff. So no change I don't think overlaps is hard but high spacing can be.

Certain sliders bugged me a lot here
00:02:583 (3) - I think it should start at 00:02:441 and end where it ended before
Same for all other sliders
SPOILER
00:04:856 (3) - 00:16:219 (3) - 00:18:492 (3) - 00:34:401 (3) - e.t.c.
I think the rhythm is more natural this way + it won't be hard for newbies because sliders and not circles (impossible to 100) I don't know, some say to do like actual; some say like you (I make them like actual due to a previous mod) so if someone else say me this I'll see but for now not changed

[Hard]
And here starts stuff about what I mentioned in [General]
00:03:151 - Add circle Okey
00:05:424 - ^ optional ^
00:08:549 - ^ Added a slider which start where was the previous note and end here, sond better to me.
00:09:969 - ^ Okey
00:12:242 - ^ optional ^
00:16:787 - ^^
00:19:060 - ^ optional^
00:22:185 - ^^
00:27:583 (3) - Instead of this slider you can make a circle on this place and then a slider from 00:27:867 - to 00:28:151 - I don't like how it sond sorry no change here
00:29:856 (3) - A short slider here instead maybe? to 00:30:140 - Yep
00:32:697 - Add circle ^
00:34:969 - ^^
Now about larger gaps
00:41:788 (2,3,1) - It's very lonely here with this amount of notes
Sounds a lot better like this Okey done whitout the (6)
You can refrain from adding (6) for example though, if you wish to make a short break
Again fill the pause with a slider or a circle/two here 00:45:481 -
I added a note at 00:45:765 - too for make the next two ones feels less empty too
00:51:163 (2,1) - Use you imagination! Do something similar here Do the same
00:53:435 (1,2) - Yeah I have do like this here
01:00:253 (1,2) - Overlaps badly, move reverse arrow up or something Done
Basically the same suggestions for the remaining part of the map Okey

[Insane]
Too many "short breaks between notes here"
You can use more sliders here to fill them
If you wish, I can make quickly my version of your Insane fixing these things and sending it to you
But better try to do this by yourself I've tryed, maybe you can say what do you think about it?

Hey, don't be scared by my long post. There is always room for improvement Haaa your mod is the one which takes me the longer time to apply *.*(More than 2hours for apply it wow)
Good luck!
Kert
Yeah it's cooler now \:D/
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Kert wrote:

Yeah it's cooler now \:D/
Thanks and thanks for star :3
V E
hi Arnold0, req via mod queue

note: all just suggestion, sorry for poor english :)

[Normal]
00:50:026 (1,2) - remove finish from slider body?
00:59:685 (1) - add finish?
01:30:651 - maybe you add a note? same like previous

[Hard]
{maybe you adjust the 1/4 slider repeat arrow pointer position to next and previous note to make a beautiful way, just like you do from the first 5 second}
00:59:685 (1) - add finish on slider head?

[Insane]
{maybe about position make it +-0,02 spacing between circle note} forget it hhe :P
maybe make slider curve more beauty XD

~
good song, and it hitsounded well,
good luck getting ranked XD
Topic Starter
Arnold0

selova wrote:

hi Arnold0, req via mod queue

note: all just suggestion, sorry for poor english :)

[Normal]
00:50:026 (1,2) - remove finish from slider body? Done & added finish only at the start of the sliders
00:59:685 (1) - add finish? done
01:30:651 - maybe you add a note? same like previous Done

[Hard]
{maybe you adjust the 1/4 slider repeat arrow pointer position to next and previous note to make a beautiful way, just like you do from the first 5 second}
00:59:685 (1) - add finish on slider head? Done

[Insane]
{maybe about position make it +-0,02 spacing between circle note} forget it hhe :P
maybe make slider curve more beauty XD Tryed

~
good song, and it hitsounded well,
good luck getting ranked XD
Thanks
Beren
Hi/


[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
01:40:026 (1) - start at 01:40:310 end at 01:40:594

[Insane]
00:45:197 (2) - http://puu.sh/QChm beyond the screen...
01:28:947 (8) - change to slider end at 01:29:231
01:40:452 (3) - x:248 y:236

good luck~
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Beren wrote:

Hi/


[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
01:40:026 (1) - start at 01:40:310 end at 01:40:594 No there is two sond here and I want to folow the other one here.

[Insane]
00:45:197 (2) - http://puu.sh/QChm beyond the screen... I saw it while playing but i forgot to check if it's realy off sreen or just realy neer the botom... Fixed.
01:28:947 (8) - change to slider end at 01:29:231 Changed to slider but end at 01:29:373 is better to me.
01:40:452 (3) - x:248 y:236 Done

good luck~
Thanks for mod :)
Pereira006
finally now work downlaod lmao i gonna mod this map because i like videogames anyway

imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if witouht " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[General]

the tag " Dragonball " is not need this because aldready on sourçe that can easy search imo also add " Pan " and " Trunk " ? because they are playable on GBA too that can easy search if somoene use this

[Normal]

Hitsound: i gonna put here only fit and some missing

00:02:583 (3) - Clap with whistle is so annoying just remove only clap that will be most better imo not only this have many more example 00:04:856 (3), 00:16:219 (3),00:18:492 (3) and many more pleasse remove clap only and whistle staying that most better imo
00:03:435 (1) - add finish on begin slider is fit more
00:17:072 (1) - ^ too
00:27:583 (3) - this need add clap on end slider because the drums still repetive
00:32:128 (3) - ^ too
00:35:253 (1) - again add finish on begin slider that fit more
00:46:049 (3) - add clap ? this fit add clap imo
00:55:140 (2) - add clap on begin slider ? also add finish on end slider ? the above is fit more imo
01:02:526 (1) - add finish on begin slider same explain before
01:16:163 (1) - ^
01:26:106 (2) - Why finish ? that don't sense, remove finish
01:26:674 (3) - add clap on end sllider
01:31:219 (3) - ^ same
01:40:026 (3) - imo this finish don't sense, remove finish ?
01:45:140 (2) - add clap? same explain on 00:46:049 (3)
00:55:140 (2) - add clap on begin slider ? also add finish on end slider ? same explain on 00:55:140 (2)

good use hitsound my problem is that i explain on 00:02:583 (3) just remove clap and whistle staying that most better if you fix that fix another notes and slider too, because is same and consistency

Gameplay:

Look great for me

[hard]

00:02:441 (4) - again i did explain on Normal
00:03:435 (1) - add finish on begin slider is fit more
00:17:072 (1) - ^ too
00:27:583 (3) - add clap on end slider is same explain before
00:30:424 (1) - the end slider remove finish and add clap
00:32:128 (3) - same explain on 00:27:583 (3)
00:35:253 (1) - again add finish on begin slider that fit more
00:40:935 (1) - imo again this finish don't sense, remove finish ?
00:46:049 (3) - add clap on begin slider and remove finish only begin slider ? this fit more
00:55:140 (2) - ^ same
01:02:526 (1) - add finish on begin slider
01:16:163 (1) - ^
01:26:674 (3) - add clap on end sllider
01:31:219 (3) - ^ same
01:40:026 (3) - imo this finish don't sense, remove finish ? if you did add clap on end slider
01:45:140 (2) - add clap? same explain on 00:46:049 (3)
00:55:140 (2) - ^ same

Same explain on Normal

Gameplay:

00:40:935 (1) - remove new combo because is don't sense new combo and at 00:42:072 (3) - put new combo the guitar is change that sense imo
01:40:026 (1) - remove new combo and at 01:41:162 (3) - put new combo same explain before

[Insane]

00:02:441 (4) - again i did explain on Normal
00:03:435 (1) - add finish is fit more
00:17:072 (1) - ^ too
00:27:867 (3) - add clap on end slider is same explain before
00:32:412 (3) - add clap on begin slider
00:35:253 (1) - again add finish
00:40:935 (1,2) - this finish don't sense imo remove finish
00:46:049 (3) - add clap on begin slider and remove finish only begin slider ? this fit more
00:55:140 (2) - ^ same
01:02:526 (1) - add finish on begin slider
01:16:163 (1) - ^
01:26:958 (2) - remove finish and add clap
01:31:503 (9) - ^ same
01:40:026 (1) - remove finish ? don't sense
01:40:594 (1) - ^ same if you did add clap on begin slider
01:45:140 (2) - add clap? same explain on 00:46:049 (3)
00:55:140 (2) - ^ same

Again same explain on normal

Gameplay:

00:20:197 (4) - this slider really need more arc because this don't like really arc
00:40:935 (1) - this need remove new combo imo
01:40:026 (1) - remove new combo
01:40:594 (1) - remove new combo and at 01:41:162 (2) - put new combo that sense

[]
good job keep it work
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
or if need help go ahead question me
good luck and bye bye
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Pereira006 wrote:

finally now work downlaod lmao i gonna mod this map because i like videogames anyway

imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if witouht " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[General]

the tag " Dragonball " is not need this because aldready on sourçe that can easy search imo also add " Pan " and " Trunk " ? because they are playable on GBA too that can easy search if somoene use this Tag dragonball not removed because I want searching dragonball without space works. Pan and Trunk added

[Normal]

Hitsound: i gonna put here only fit and some missing

00:02:583 (3) - Clap with whistle is so annoying just remove only clap that will be most better imo not only this have many more example 00:04:856 (3), 00:16:219 (3),00:18:492 (3) and many more pleasse remove clap only and whistle staying that most better imo Yes done
00:03:435 (1) - add finish on begin slider is fit more Done
00:17:072 (1) - ^ too Done
00:27:583 (3) - this need add clap on end slider because the drums still repetive I don't like how a clap sond here so nope
00:32:128 (3) - ^ too ^
00:35:253 (1) - again add finish on begin slider that fit more Yep
00:46:049 (3) - add clap ? this fit add clap imo Done
00:55:140 (2) - add clap on begin slider ? also add finish on end slider ? the above is fit more imo Done
01:02:526 (1) - add finish on begin slider same explain before Done
01:16:163 (1) - ^ Done
01:26:106 (2) - Why finish ? that don't sense, remove finish Removed
01:26:674 (3) - add clap on end sllider I don't like how a clap sond here so nope
01:31:219 (3) - ^ same ^
01:40:026 (3) - imo this finish don't sense, remove finish ? Okey
01:45:140 (2) - add clap? same explain on 00:46:049 (3) Yep
00:55:140 (2) - add clap on begin slider ? also add finish on end slider ? same explain on 00:55:140 (2) Lol time fail but I find the slider and fixed

good use hitsound my problem is that i explain on 00:02:583 (3) just remove clap and whistle staying that most better if you fix that fix another notes and slider too, because is same and consistency

Gameplay:

Look great for me

[hard]

00:02:441 (4) - again i did explain on Normal Yes
00:03:435 (1) - add finish on begin slider is fit more Yes
00:17:072 (1) - ^ too ^
00:27:583 (3) - add clap on end slider is same explain before Same as before no change
00:30:424 (1) - the end slider remove finish and add clap It's already a clap here o_O
00:32:128 (3) - same explain on 00:27:583 (3) Same as before
00:35:253 (1) - again add finish on begin slider that fit more Yes
00:40:935 (1) - imo again this finish don't sense, remove finish ? Yes
00:46:049 (3) - add clap on begin slider and remove finish only begin slider ? this fit more Done
00:55:140 (2) - ^ same Yes
01:02:526 (1) - add finish on begin slider Done
01:16:163 (1) - ^^
01:26:674 (3) - add clap on end sllider Nope like before
01:31:219 (3) - ^ same^
01:40:026 (3) - imo this finish don't sense, remove finish ? if you did add clap on end slider Yes
01:45:140 (2) - add clap? same explain on 00:46:049 (3) Yes
00:55:140 (2) - ^ same Yes

Same explain on Normal

Gameplay:

00:40:935 (1) - remove new combo because is don't sense new combo and at 00:42:072 (3) - put new combo the guitar is change that sense imo Yes
01:40:026 (1) - remove new combo and at 01:41:162 (3) - put new combo same explain before Done

[Insane]

00:02:441 (4) - again i did explain on Normal Yes
00:03:435 (1) - add finish is fit more Yes
00:17:072 (1) - ^ too Yes
00:27:867 (3) - add clap on end slider is same explain before Nope same as before
00:32:412 (3) - add clap on begin slider ^
00:35:253 (1) - again add finish Yes
00:40:935 (1,2) - this finish don't sense imo remove finish Removed
00:46:049 (3) - add clap on begin slider and remove finish only begin slider ? this fit more Yes
00:55:140 (2) - ^ same Yes
01:02:526 (1) - add finish on begin slider Not a slider ^^ but yes
01:16:163 (1) - ^^
01:26:958 (2) - remove finish and add clap Finish removed but no clap.
01:31:503 (9) - ^ same Finish removed but no add clap/color]
01:40:026 (1) - remove finish ? don't sense
01:40:594 (1) - ^ same if you did add clap on begin slider Yes
01:45:140 (2) - add clap? same explain on 00:46:049 (3) Yes
00:55:140 (2) - ^ same Yes

Again same explain on normal

Gameplay:

00:20:197 (4) - this slider really need more arc because this don't like really arc Fixed
00:40:935 (1) - this need remove new combo imo Yep
01:40:026 (1) - remove new combo Yes
01:40:594 (1) - remove new combo and at 01:41:162 (2) - put new combo that sense Yes

01:38:890 (6) - I've added a NC here.

[]
good job keep it work
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
or if need help go ahead question me
good luck and bye bye
Thanks for mod

EDIT : INSANE MOD & upload done.
Kawayi Rika
Hello ~ Arnold0 ~ :)

M4M here ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]


  1. 00:26:020 (2) - Remove this circle sound better to me.
  2. 01:00:111 (4) - ^
  3. 00:40:367 - Add a circle,because have drum to here.
  4. 00:40:935 (5) - This circle should move to 00:41:077 following for vocal.
  5. 01:40:026 (5) - Same as above.

[Hard]


  1. 00:56:276 (1) - You are forgot add finish here.

[Normal]


  1. 00:56:276 (1) - You are forgot add finish here.

That's all ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck wirh rank ~
;)
Topic Starter
Arnold0

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ Arnold0 ~ :)

M4M here ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]


  1. 00:26:020 (2) - Remove this circle sound better to me. I think it sood worse and borke the pattern so no sorry
  2. 01:00:111 (4) - ^ The sond I'm folowing whit (1,2,3) is the same and it sound like something is missing if removed so nope sorry
  3. 00:40:367 - Add a circle,because have drum to here. Yes
  4. 00:40:935 (5) - This circle should move to 00:41:077 following for vocal. Vocals ? :o And after change it sound like the note is late for me so no change
  5. 01:40:026 (5) - Same as above.^

[Hard]


  1. 00:56:276 (1) - You are forgot add finish here. Yes

[Normal]


  1. 00:56:276 (1) - You are forgot add finish here. Yes

That's all ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck wirh rank ~
;) Thanks
Thanks for mod and star icon.

Will have to fond another MAT mod... It'll take time, or maybe it'll never append. Will this die in graveyaed or can I succesfully get it ranked? I've a so low confidence into me... Let's se what append now. :? :(
haha5957
from haha's random modding queue >~<

[Insane]

00:06:560 (4) - try to improve shape of "This kind of slider(which i wouldnt point out all of them) by
1. maybe try to use 2 curving slideers if they are long enough.
2. try to place "endpoint of slider" at the middle or endpoint circle. it makes better shape
example : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/404212
currently every long slider in the map needs improvement and it won't take that long. btw you can add curving point by doing
ctrl+clicks
00:25:310 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - this part looks pretty bad.. maybe this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/404215 this?
01:01:532 (7,8,9,10) - if you see this, it looks like too many patterns are squeezed in a very tight space, overlapped by previous (1,2,3,4,5,6)s, and etc..
and I personally suggest not to use 00:59:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern, but I don't know how should i explain.
01:02:952 (4,5) - see this too, and see how it's overlapped to previous (10) or so..
if you are planning to place your patterns on where your pattern just came from - (my English sucks. maybe, in easy world - you are planning to do some overlaps to previous pattern)
make sure the overlap looks pretty nice and understandable.

01:35:623 (7,8,9,10) - move them few grids left so they can overlap nicely with previous patterns?

for other difficulties, I believe you fix some by yourself according to Insane mods. (lazy5957 <----)




Btw I took 4 month to rank my first map and I was told lucky because someone even spends 6 or more months for their first ranked map (well talented mappers spent less then 2 months even for their first ranked map but that's not that usual case 'ㅁ')
however in order to get your map ranked fast, your map needs to be good enough for it.

See how you called Kawayi Rika but you missed the chance.. maybe you don't want it to happen again when you finally found another MAT.

Currently it's on "Not bad" status but your map needs to be "Good" to be ranked.
maybe try adding some enjoyable jumps that makes sense according to the music?

But honestly, this music isn't kind of music that everyone might enjoy, so actually I would like to say "look for another music", because It's gonna be kinda hard to rank it(especially, when it's your first map) if your music isn't attractive enough..

and one more thing, about the star priority, it doesnt matter that much. if it's higher then 30, they are usually treated about the same unless yours reach something like hundred.



Was mostly about general advices! Don't give up mapping, you will finally get your chance to rank your map, if you are keep improving your map!
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