This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011년 4월 18일 월요일 at 오후 11:14:57

Artist: ClariS
Title: Connect
Source: Puella Magi Madoka Magica
Tags: Mahou Shoujo
BPM: 175
Filesize: 5774kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:

1. Alice (2.39 stars, 217 notes)
2. Clara (4.22 stars, 379 notes)
3. ClariS (4.95 stars, 540 notes)

Download: ClariS - Connect
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Puella Magi(Mahou Shoujo) Madoka Magica OST

Hope you like this map.


*
HAPPY GRAVEYARD

Loved the song. And the map! Star~

[Clara]
- Combo pb
00:45:258 (6) - New combo 00:45:944 (1) - Remove new combo
02:02:058 (6,1) - ^
- Distance
02:45:601 (6) - Right 1 grid
- Other
03:54:859 (1) - Isn't Finish?

Thanks, Done! (actually finish didnt sound good though)

General:

-You need a diff under 3 stars for this to get ranked

Alice:

00:34:972 (4) - New combo
00:56:230 (1,2,3,4) - (nazi) Uneven
01:18:515 (7) - Move one level 3 grid right
01:43:201 (3) - New combo
02:35:315 (7) - Move one level 3 grid left

Clara:

00:01:715 (5) - New combo
00:20:915 (5) - New combo
00:41:830 (5) - Make it equidistant from the ends of (4)
01:10:972 (6) - Move one level 3 grid left
01:56:401 (1,2) - Align (1) with (7), then (2) with (1)?
01:58:630 (5) - Make it equidistant from the ends of (4)
03:54:859 (1) - End it at 03:57:601

Nice map. *stars*

Done. Thanks!

added 2.5 star map

suggestions to make your map look nicer :3
general
Could use more histounds, like finishes and the like
spacing seems a little inconsistent
combo's need work
it looks like you copy-pasted a lot to

ClariS
00:05:830(1,2) - a little hard for an easy? maybe make like this?00:28:458(1,2) - ^
00:42:858(1,2,3,4,5) - why don't you make this prettier looking? like 01:02:058(1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:15:772(3) - new combo
01:20:401(1,1,1) - I don't think the new combo spam really fits here, plus this is only an easier diff
01:29:487(1) - end this spinner at 01:32:230?

Alice
has a lot of harder to read patterns that aren't very fun to play
00:12:687 (2) - add finish
00:15:430 (1) - ^
00:18:172(1) ^
00:12:344 (1) - delete this note and add new combo at (2)
00:27:087(2) - extend this slider a tick?
00:42:344(x) - add a note here
00:49:030(x) - ^
00:52:630(4) - make into a triplet like
01:02:915(2) add a repeat
01:06:687(x) - add a note with a soft clap here
01:15:772(x) - add a note
01:16:458(x) - ^
01:17:315(x) ^
02:09:258(4) - make into a triplet like
02:19:715(2) - add a repeat
02:32:572(x) - add a note
02:33:258(x) - ^

Clara
youseem to overuse this pattern a bit 01:02:401(1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
01:50:744(5,6) - very confusing pattern
03:02:744(1) - make this spinner longer and delete the next one
03:11:658(x) - add a note here
03:13:715(1) same as 03:02:744(1)
03:37:544 this stream look very cramped

oh god that was long

I don't really like how it is right now, so no star.
PM me forum or in-game for a re-check if you think its better

nice mapping it really good map i just hope it get ranked soon
here a star~

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
first post a bit long here... emm changing styles (compared to Battle of Rose) at the beginning time of mapping is not a bad thing, you could know more styles and choose then develop the one really fits you. but too many copy&paste is not counted since it won't help you any about mapping techniques (also player would feel boring)
the countdown is useless, remove plz.
diff spread is mostly fine, but the first diff is only 1/3 mapped so the max score spread is terrible. (0.18M compared to 2.4M). at least mapped to 02:46:287 -- here?
offset: +5, not really sure since it seems to be changed when testing..
about the diffs name. as usual we will put the two singers name for the first two diffs and "ClariS" as the highest one...? seems a little strange to me.

[ClariS]
00:01:030 (1) - emm. add a point to make it curve more smoothly? as i see there are many sliders like this... orz.

00:58:630 - add a note?
01:09:430 (4) - since the beats you used before is fast enouth, a beat change is not really fit here in an Easy. maybe just move it 1/2 earlier then add a circle at 01:10:287
01:20:401 (1) - for here the notes before are 2/1s... so much better. but i'm not sure about the combo color change (as i saw, in all diffs). is it really needed?
01:29:487 (1) - end 1/1 earlier?

[Alice]
00:11:144 (3) - whistle?
00:20:915 (1,2,3,4) - use normal hitsounds sample here, and increase volume a bit on each slider, for example, 35,40,45,50. check the effect
00:41:658 (1,2) - whistle at 1's end is better than at 2's
01:02:401 (1,2,3,4) - why whistle stopped here?
02:13:030 (1) - miss a whistle at the beginning?
02:19:201 (1,2,3,4) - why whistle stopped here?

[Clara]
AR+1, too low for the highest diff now.
00:20:915 (5) - same hitsounds suggestion as [Alice], maybe increase the spacing as well.
01:24:687 (2,3) - though it's fits the distance snap well but a little too close imo.
01:25:887 (4,1,2,3,4) - not really symmetry. move 1234 all right a tick
03:11:144 & 03:11:315 & 03:11:658 - add notes?
03:34:115 (1,2,3) - not really symmetry, 1 grid right plz?
03:43:202 (1) - remove new combo
the beats are placed mostly vocal-based but used normal/clap sometimes... so a bit uncomfortable but should be fine.

[clara]
00:20:915 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - normal-hitnormal
01:04:801 (1) - no clap. use normal-hitfinish?
01:28:801 (6) - ^
02:21:601 (1) - ^
02:45:601 (6) - ^
03:54:173 (6) - ^
[alice] ^
01:04:801 (1) - ^
01:21:601 - ^?
02:21:601 (1) - ^
02:24:344 (5) - ^

request modding~

[Alice]
2.19.715(2) - 1more return

nice

+star

Color Legend

Colors Legend
You HAVE to do this
You should do this
You Could do this

[Claris](it's a Easy)
01:08:572 (3) - Add repeat and stack 01:09:430 (4) under it just sound good and is good.

[Alice] (it's an Hard right?)
Hp + 2, OD +1, AR +1
00:01:201 (x) - Add Hit Circle
00:07:030 (x) - ^
00:08:401 (x) - ^
00:08:744 (x) - ^

[Clara](Insane, right?)
to make it even Insaner Hp +1, CS+1 ( smaller) , AR+2, OD+1

didn't find that much >.<

Editing on Grid Level 4

[ClariS]
00:06:515 (2,3) - 1 square up
00:14:058 (2) - 1 square up
00:15:430 (3) - 2 squares right
00:29:830 (2) - 1 square right
00:36:001 (2) - 1 square down
00:37:372 (3) - 1 square left
00:41:487 (2) - 1 square up, 1 square right
00:44:230 (5) - 2 squares up
01:02:058 (1) - 2 squares left
01:09:430 (4) - 3 squares right (optional)

[Alice]
02:19:715 (2) Try vvv
Extend slider up
02:19:372 (1) - Add whistle
02:20:230 (2) - ^
02:20:744 (3) - ^

00:04:115 (6) - 1 square down
00:10:972 (2) - 1 square up
00:11:144 (3) - 2 squares up
00:12:687 (2) - 1 square down
00:12:344 (1) - 2 squares down
00:16:458 (4,5,6,7) - 1 square up
00:17:487 (7) - 2 squares left
00:18:858 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Match up with 00:15:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
00:48:001 (7) - 1 square up
01:08:915 (3) - 1 square down
01:23:487 (4) - 1 square up
01:48:001 (4) - 2 squares down
01:50:058 (3) - 2 squares left
02:09:430 (4) - 1 square down, 1 square right
02:40:287 (4) - 1 square up
02:42:515 (3) - 2 squares left

[Clara]
00:01:201 (2,3) - 1 square left
00:07:715 (5,6,7) - 4 squares up
00:08:058 (7) - 3 squares down
00:08:572 (1) - 1 square left
00:21:601 (9,10,11,12) - 1 square left
00:21:772 (10) - 1 square down
00:21:772 (10,11,12) - 1 square left
00:26:401 (1,2,3) - 1 square up
00:27:087 (5,6) - 2 squares down
00:31:030 (6) - 2 squares left
**00:34:287 (6) - CTRL-R --> SPACING 0.00x --> Distance Snap to (5) --> CTRL-R
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00:37:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:26:401 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
00:52:458 (3) - 1 square left
01:00:001 (6,7,1,2,3) - 1 square down
01:07:544 (5) - 1 square down
01:18:515 (5) - 1 square down
01:19:715 (1,2,3) - 1 square down
01:42:172 (3) - 1 square left
01:43:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:26:401 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
01:54:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:44:915 (5,6) - 1 square left
==================================================

Timing - Excellent
Difficulty Bars - Excellent
Hit Sounds - Excellent
Spacing - Good, could be improved (did some critical spacing)

Very good! I gave critical marking for better spaced circles. Almost ready for approval.
vvv
아주 좋아! 난 더 간격 서클에 마킹 중요했다. 거의 승인을 준비.

Star★

Thanks for doing nazi for me, but yeah I like and trust grid level 3.

spacing might be more appropriate but I think grid level 3's spacing is okay (before that If I turn grid level 4 on, I had to move almost every circles, and sliders)

when I just started to map I used grid level 4 but I realized that grid level didn't fit on me, thanks again but I'll keep my level 3

actually for some parts (like ctrl+R) I did fix it, and thank you for this (I didn't know Ctrl+R xD)



Difficulty name changed to Alice - Clara - Claris (Easy/Normal - Normal/Hard - Hard/Insane)

Clara AR +1
Claris AR +1, OD +1

and actually I didn't put easy, hard,insane on difficulty name
because then there's gonna be tons of mod like "too easy as Insane" or something like that.


Maybe Alice difficulty is bit hard as a Easy, but not as an Normal. same for Clara, easy as Hard, but hard as Normal.
and ClariS difficulty is kind of Hard+ (hard as hard - easy as insane)



tried to remove many factors that were reused (copy/pasted) but on some parts I just kept it because It really does fit music IMO.



for Mint's mod.. thanks, but this beat fits more for me (and I don't think it's that bad though)



Again thanks to all!

General
One person who want to his/her map take in advance means that there are no objective proplems

Alice's slider is not good.Because when i see other two difs,i find it.Such as
00:01:030 begin->end grid.

Compare with your 3 difs,you will see the first map's slider pulling the casually.
Star thank you

I'm so slow

[Alice]
01:17:144 (3) - repeat one more time or circle at 01:18:172 ?
02:26:230 (4) - i think that this needs to be distinguished more. clap all 3 or whistle all 3?
02:43:544 (1,2,3) - change it like http://puu.sh/Vs7 or http://puu.sh/Vsb ?

[Clara]
01:08:915 (3) - move this to 01:09:087 and add a circle here?

[ClariS]
01:20:401 (1,1,1) - this is awesome, but I think that you should try adding some finishes to sliders like 01:14:915 (3) and 01:09:087 (2) throughout the song too, Not necessarily all 3 finishes, try finding the best variant (for example, only at end)

Also, don't worry about the diff names. They could be Normal, Normal+ and Hard but it's not bad as you did it.
And thanks to you now I know why they are called ClariS

@kissfly

I don't get what your saying about D:
sorry your words were to hard for me T_T
(I'm not good at English)


@senaya

thanks, fixed (but not for finish things)

and actually it is not long ago when i knew ClariS was Clara + Alice
I just searched on internet to get some informations about the song before mapping

haha5957 wrote:

Thanks for doing nazi for me, but yeah I like and trust grid level 3.

spacing might be more appropriate but I think grid level 3's spacing is okay (before that If I turn grid level 4 on, I had to move almost every circles, and sliders)

when I just started to map I used grid level 4 but I realized that grid level didn't fit on me, thanks again but I'll keep my level 3

actually for some parts (like ctrl+R) I did fix it, and thank you for this (I didn't know Ctrl+R xD)

I agree totally with you. I map in grid level 3 most the time. When it comes to double checking my song, I usually bump to level 4. It lets me "fine-tune" my patterns, symmetry sections.

I didn't know about Ctrl+R either for a long time. It really helps, right? haha. Glad I helped.

ClariS
00:29:830 (3,4,5,6) - (nazi) imo, seems better:01:04:801 (1) - remove clap from spinner, add finish.
01:29:487 (1) - end of spinner here : 01:32:230
02:40:630 (1) - clap at reverse sounds bad.remove?
02:44:915 (5,6) - add 2 finishes here

Clara
01:04:801 (1) - remove clap from spinner, add finish.
01:17:315 (2) - add note
02:44:915 (2,3) - add 2 finishes here

Alice
01:29:487 (1) - end of spinner here : 01:32:230
02:46:287 (1) - end of spinner here : 02:49:030

That's all, it's your star.

added finish but not 2

and I'm preety sure about the spinner end

thanks for others!