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You HAVE to do this
You should do this
You Could do this

[Claris](it's a Easy)
01:08:572 (3) - Add repeat and stack 01:09:430 (4) under it just sound good and is good.

[Alice] (it's an Hard right?)
Hp + 2, OD +1, AR +1
00:01:201 (x) - Add Hit Circle
00:07:030 (x) - ^
00:08:401 (x) - ^
00:08:744 (x) - ^

[Clara](Insane, right?)
to make it even Insaner Hp +1, CS+1 ( smaller) , AR+2, OD+1

didn't find that much >.<

Editing on Grid Level 4

[ClariS]
00:06:515 (2,3) - 1 square up
00:14:058 (2) - 1 square up
00:15:430 (3) - 2 squares right
00:29:830 (2) - 1 square right
00:36:001 (2) - 1 square down
00:37:372 (3) - 1 square left
00:41:487 (2) - 1 square up, 1 square right
00:44:230 (5) - 2 squares up
01:02:058 (1) - 2 squares left
01:09:430 (4) - 3 squares right (optional)

[Alice]
02:19:715 (2) Try vvv
Extend slider up
02:19:372 (1) - Add whistle
02:20:230 (2) - ^
02:20:744 (3) - ^

00:04:115 (6) - 1 square down
00:10:972 (2) - 1 square up
00:11:144 (3) - 2 squares up
00:12:687 (2) - 1 square down
00:12:344 (1) - 2 squares down
00:16:458 (4,5,6,7) - 1 square up
00:17:487 (7) - 2 squares left
00:18:858 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Match up with 00:15:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
00:48:001 (7) - 1 square up
01:08:915 (3) - 1 square down
01:23:487 (4) - 1 square up
01:48:001 (4) - 2 squares down
01:50:058 (3) - 2 squares left
02:09:430 (4) - 1 square down, 1 square right
02:40:287 (4) - 1 square up
02:42:515 (3) - 2 squares left

[Clara]
00:01:201 (2,3) - 1 square left
00:07:715 (5,6,7) - 4 squares up
00:08:058 (7) - 3 squares down
00:08:572 (1) - 1 square left
00:21:601 (9,10,11,12) - 1 square left
00:21:772 (10) - 1 square down
00:21:772 (10,11,12) - 1 square left
00:26:401 (1,2,3) - 1 square up
00:27:087 (5,6) - 2 squares down
00:31:030 (6) - 2 squares left
**00:34:287 (6) - CTRL-R --> SPACING 0.00x --> Distance Snap to (5) --> CTRL-R
---->

00:37:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:26:401 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
00:52:458 (3) - 1 square left
01:00:001 (6,7,1,2,3) - 1 square down
01:07:544 (5) - 1 square down
01:18:515 (5) - 1 square down
01:19:715 (1,2,3) - 1 square down
01:42:172 (3) - 1 square left
01:43:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:26:401 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
01:54:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:44:915 (5,6) - 1 square left
==================================================

Timing - Excellent
Difficulty Bars - Excellent
Hit Sounds - Excellent
Spacing - Good, could be improved (did some critical spacing)

Very good! I gave critical marking for better spaced circles. Almost ready for approval.
vvv
아주 좋아! 난 더 간격 서클에 마킹 중요했다. 거의 승인을 준비.

Star★

Thanks for doing nazi for me, but yeah I like and trust grid level 3.

spacing might be more appropriate but I think grid level 3's spacing is okay (before that If I turn grid level 4 on, I had to move almost every circles, and sliders)

when I just started to map I used grid level 4 but I realized that grid level didn't fit on me, thanks again but I'll keep my level 3

actually for some parts (like ctrl+R) I did fix it, and thank you for this (I didn't know Ctrl+R xD)



Difficulty name changed to Alice - Clara - Claris (Easy/Normal - Normal/Hard - Hard/Insane)

Clara AR +1
Claris AR +1, OD +1

and actually I didn't put easy, hard,insane on difficulty name
because then there's gonna be tons of mod like "too easy as Insane" or something like that.


Maybe Alice difficulty is bit hard as a Easy, but not as an Normal. same for Clara, easy as Hard, but hard as Normal.
and ClariS difficulty is kind of Hard+ (hard as hard - easy as insane)



tried to remove many factors that were reused (copy/pasted) but on some parts I just kept it because It really does fit music IMO.



for Mint's mod.. thanks, but this beat fits more for me (and I don't think it's that bad though)



Again thanks to all!

General
One person who want to his/her map take in advance means that there are no objective proplems

Alice's slider is not good.Because when i see other two difs,i find it.Such as
00:01:030 begin->end grid.

Compare with your 3 difs,you will see the first map's slider pulling the casually.
Star thank you

I'm so slow

[Alice]
01:17:144 (3) - repeat one more time or circle at 01:18:172 ?
02:26:230 (4) - i think that this needs to be distinguished more. clap all 3 or whistle all 3?
02:43:544 (1,2,3) - change it like http://puu.sh/Vs7 or http://puu.sh/Vsb ?

[Clara]
01:08:915 (3) - move this to 01:09:087 and add a circle here?

[ClariS]
01:20:401 (1,1,1) - this is awesome, but I think that you should try adding some finishes to sliders like 01:14:915 (3) and 01:09:087 (2) throughout the song too, Not necessarily all 3 finishes, try finding the best variant (for example, only at end)

Also, don't worry about the diff names. They could be Normal, Normal+ and Hard but it's not bad as you did it.
And thanks to you now I know why they are called ClariS

@kissfly

I don't get what your saying about D:
sorry your words were to hard for me T_T
(I'm not good at English)


@senaya

thanks, fixed (but not for finish things)

and actually it is not long ago when i knew ClariS was Clara + Alice
I just searched on internet to get some informations about the song before mapping

haha5957 wrote:

Thanks for doing nazi for me, but yeah I like and trust grid level 3.

spacing might be more appropriate but I think grid level 3's spacing is okay (before that If I turn grid level 4 on, I had to move almost every circles, and sliders)

when I just started to map I used grid level 4 but I realized that grid level didn't fit on me, thanks again but I'll keep my level 3

actually for some parts (like ctrl+R) I did fix it, and thank you for this (I didn't know Ctrl+R xD)

I agree totally with you. I map in grid level 3 most the time. When it comes to double checking my song, I usually bump to level 4. It lets me "fine-tune" my patterns, symmetry sections.

I didn't know about Ctrl+R either for a long time. It really helps, right? haha. Glad I helped.

ClariS
00:29:830 (3,4,5,6) - (nazi) imo, seems better:01:04:801 (1) - remove clap from spinner, add finish.
01:29:487 (1) - end of spinner here : 01:32:230
02:40:630 (1) - clap at reverse sounds bad.remove?
02:44:915 (5,6) - add 2 finishes here

Clara
01:04:801 (1) - remove clap from spinner, add finish.
01:17:315 (2) - add note
02:44:915 (2,3) - add 2 finishes here

Alice
01:29:487 (1) - end of spinner here : 01:32:230
02:46:287 (1) - end of spinner here : 02:49:030

That's all, it's your star.

added finish but not 2

and I'm preety sure about the spinner end

thanks for others!

Hey,

[General]
You may want disable letterbox during breaks
Remove "anime" from tags, too general


[ClariS]
01:58:630 (5) - move it so it doesn't overlap with (3)
02:00:687 (4) - 1st sliderpoint(where slider starts) 1 grid left.
02:46:287 (1) - end it there 02:49:030

[Clara]
00:12:344 (1) - new combo(?)
01:20:401 (1,1,1) - I guess this diff is "normal", and I'm not a fan of jumps in diffs easier than hard
02:37:201 (1,1,1) - ^

[Alice]
00:01:030 (1) - 3rd sliderpoint 1 grid down
00:04:458 (3) - ^ right


nice, star

Alice
AR+1
00:55:201 (5) - Add whistle at the very end ?
01:17:144 (3) - Remove the clap at the very end and add clap onto the reverse
02:00:001 (2) - Add whistle
02:12:001 (5) - Add whistle at the very end
02:19:201 (2) - Add whistle
02:33:944 (3) - Remove the clap at the very end and add clap onto the reverse

Clara
AR+1
00:03:772 (5,6) - Move them 1/2 earlier
00:04:287 (1) - Move it 1/2 earlier and extand by 1/2 (If you have fixed the previous line)
00:07:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make something that

02:23:658 (1,2,3,4,5) - Have you make this spacing change intentionally ?

ClariS
00:20:915 (5) - New combo ?
01:29:487 (1) - Extand by 1/2

Star~

General
- Make Alice and Clara end at the same spot as ClariS!!! People told me this before on my map >.<
- Change the source to "Puella Magi Madoka Magica"

Alice
00:06:515 (2) Delete this slider and extend the previous one 00:05:830 (1) to here
00:18:172 (1) Add a finish the the start of the slider
00:19:201 (2) Delete note
00:19:544 (1) Remove new combo
00:20:572 Delete note
00:20:915 (1) the spinner is too close to hte next note for an esay. Try the following:
- Make it end at 00:22:972
- Delete note at 00:24:344
- Add a slider at 00:24:001 ending at 00:24:344
- Whistle at the end of the slider?

00:28:458 (2) Beats like these are a bit hard for a Easy. Delete this and add a repeat to the previous slider
00:31:887 (1,2,3,4) Again too hard. delete all and make a slider from 00:31:887 to 00:32:572
00:42:858 (1,2,3,4) Look above^^

There are more of these problems so just go through it

Clara
01:04:287 (4) Remove one repeat


ClariS
01:44:230 Add a beat?
01:55:372 (7) Left and down one
03:11:315 New combo, you got it for the other jumps like that
03:54:858 (1) Make it end at 03:56:572

Nice map and good luck with it
STAR POWER

[Alice]

01:20:401 (1,2,3) Center this

[Clara]

00:36:001 (2) Center this and leaves at the same distance 1, 2 and 3 and then center 4.
01:09:772 (4) Clap ?

[Claris]

AP +1 ?

00:41:830 (5) 1 Grid right and down
00:52:115 (2,4) Center this
01:25:372 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) Center this
01:28:801 (6) 2 Grid down
02:16:115 (4) This very low, This central and up 1 grid (position also changes the following notes)
02:36:001 (7,8) 2 Grid right, 1 grid down (both)
03:45:258 (2) 1 Grid right

Nice song ! +1

[clara]
00:38:915 (4,5) - hmm, I understand you're making up the rhythm here, but I prefer mapping to something in the background. http://puu.sh/WLn seems to fit the music better for me, and you can put sliders connecting two notes pretty much anywhere. I think 6 to 7 is a good spot to do so.
01:49:715 (2) - I hate nazing spacing, but it looks pretty bad.
01:55:201 (1,2,3) - another rhythm that doesn't really fit.
01:59:658 (1,2,3) - I would rather have slider slider circle here so you're hitting on the lyrics. Theres a few more places you've repeated this, and you can switch it from slider slider circle or circle slider slider so it doesn't get too repetitive.
02:37:201 (1,1,1) - didn't we have a jump exactly like this in the previous kiai? flip it vertically or something.


[claris]
01:09:087 (2,3) - switch these
01:20:401 (1,1,1) - something to think about: this is hard in osu, but simple in CTB.
02:06:515 (3,4,5,6,7) - there's a nazi in there somewhere, and it's repeated a bunch
03:18:515 - go ahead and map this. Otherwise it's not worth mapping the third chorus.
all these made up stream notes are killing me:
03:35:487 (1,2,3) -
03:37:715 (5,6,7,8,9) -
03:42:858 (1,2,3,4,5) -
03:48:173 (5,6,7) -
but it seems osu is filled with beats mapped where nothing exists in the song, so you don't have to change it to placate me. I'm just expressing my distaste for imaginary mapping.

*sigh* I need to check before I mod a map if it has been modded before. It sucks when you get 5 mods in a row and have to fix them all.

Some are done, some are not done.

for imaginary maaping yeah sorry i know it sucks when you are playing it for first time but otherwise I have to put outrageous jumps to make it even harder.

My mapping style is - everyone may enjoy, but not everyone may clear/full combo/SS it. (means it's easy to get to last part of the song but hard from that point)
checking Ryo Yoshimata - Resolver (Insane) make it faster to understand

for difficulty issues like i said Alice is Easy++ or Normal-, Clara is Normal+ or Hard-, ClariS is Hard+ (maybe not Insane- though xD)
since I haven't done ridiculous things like putting whole bunch of 1/2 stream or 1/4 stream on easy, I don't wanna get mod from difficulty issues though

I'm fan of jump so please understand about jumps done at all difficulties (x1.2/x2.0/x2.0) xD

Mapping Alice and Clara till 3:54, I'll think about it but I wanna keep this if this isn't a big issue.

for nazi thanks for doing it and done, some of them but some are not done because for some or them the exact opposite modding were done before.

Source Mahou Shoujo <=> Pullea Magi
I'll say Mahou Shoujo is okay since I wanna respect japanese sound rather then Latin meanings.


like the sources are said " To Aru no Kagaku no Railgun " not "Railgun of some science" or something like that.



I guess I haven't skipped anything without any reason. yeah, thanks to all for modding!

haha5957 wrote:

Source Mahou Shoujo <=> Pullea Magi
I'll say Mahou Shoujo is okay since I wanna respect japanese sound rather then Latin meanings.

btw this is what tags are for, and "japanese anime" will automatically be inserted into the genre, so it's not needed on the tag (though if you want people to search for "anime opening" it will need to stay in tags).

heyo, again.....

[Alice]
00:58:630 - end spinner here

[ClariS]
00:20:915 (5) - new combo
00:31:030 (6) - make sure its the sure as (4)

Great job again!

thanks, all done!

Alice

imo,it would be better that 1st kiai time strat at 01:07:544
if so,01:06:858 and 01:07:201 use softhitsound
2nd kiai time start at 02:24:344
if so, (1) in the same way as 01:06:858 and 01:07:201

01:07:544(1) - add finish
02:24:344(1) - ^

Clara

it was the same suggestions with Alice diff

besides

02:21:601(1) - remove clap , i feel that it be a bit inconsistent
02:35:315(5) - add finish

ClariS

01:07:544(5) - add finish at the beginning
02:21:601(1) - remove finish
02:24:344(5) - ^
02:35:315(5) - ^

starrrr

[ClariS]
00:15:430 (1,2) - (1) whistle, (2) whistle at middle only
01:12:172 (4) - left 1 grid
02:35:144 (4) - ^
03:16:458 (s) - soft finish?

[Clara]
Sounding of beginning- whistle / clap every 4 beats?
00:30:172 (3) - down 1 grid to stack with last (4)
00:55:887 (5) - down 1 grid
02:32:544 (4) - up 1 grid

[Alice]
02:46:287 (s) - extend spinner by 1 beat

though there're many repeating patterns, it looks pretty good, star

[Skin]
Get some 40-44 bytes sounds for your silent slider slides because those are kinda big

[General]
You've only mapped up to 87% of the mp3 on the hardest diff, consider cutting the mp3 to save size.

[All Difficulties]
Audio Lead-in 2 seconds.
01:20:401 (1,1,1) - (And similars) Dont new combo spam, it messes up hp calculations, plus it looks better without the new combos. ([Alice] is fine tho).

[ClariS]
00:20:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this spacing acceleration is really unintuitive, considering evening out the spacing of these notes.
00:45:258 (7,1) - Switch new combo since it's a new musical pattern.
I'm really impressed by your mapping style, good job!

[Clara]
AR+2 to match up your slider speed.
Finish the map please :<

[Alice]
Finish the map please :<

Overall pretty nice map, unfortunately i dont like how Clara and Alice arent mapped until the end, so all i'll do is leave this mod post here o/ Good Luck!~

Complete with T*? // wmfchris / Sakura Hana's mod at the moment (clap for Clara is not done though)

mapped Alice and Clara completely through end of the mp3


and please understand that the third kiais are harder then rest of the map, for all difficulty


Thanks for modding

Pretty promising new mapper here, i'm impressed with your mapping skill despite the ammount of maps you have
so yeah, Bubbled~

Sakura Hana wrote:

Pretty promising new mapper here, i'm impressed with your mapping skill despite the ammount of maps you have
so yeah, Bubbled~

wow~ thanks for your bubble and encourage!

late mod :/. been kinda busy lately

ClariS

00:21:087(2) - sounds better to me if you delete this note.
00:27:601(7) - instead of this reverse slider. i would rather have a slider that starts at 00:27:772 and ends at 00:28:115 and a note at 00:28:287
00:38:572(7) - ^i would like to have the same pattern here
01:07:887(claps) - i would rather have a 2/1 clap pattern, like in Clara, but i guess if you really don't want to deal with the slider tick claps, it's ok. (especially since you don't even have ticks on the sliders lol)
01;28:115(5) - finish
01:28:801(1) - maybe change the normal hitsounds into a soft with clap
01:44:401(7) - same as 00:27:601
01:55:371(7) - ^
02:45:601(6) - same as 01:28:801
02:49:030(spinner) - end spinner here
02:56:915(section) - maybe more hitsounds?
03:06:687(spinner) - end spinner here
03:35:487(1,2) - i would make these two soft hitsounds
03:35:658(3) - normal hitsounds with finish and clap
03:53:487(5) - finish

Clara

00:38:572(3,4,5) - it may be better to orient the timing like this (the notes are just kinda randomly placed. it's just the timing i'm talking about):
01;28:801(3) - like in ClariS, maybe make it soft with clap?
01:55:372(4,5,6) - same as 00:38:572
02:45:601(3) - normal hitsound with clap and finish?
02:57:258(section) - this section overall needs more hitsounds
03:35:487(5) - make it soft hitsound
03:35:658(1) - normal hitsound with clap and finish?
03:54:172(3) - soft hitsound with clap?
03:06:687(spinner) - end spinner here

Alice

01:07:544(1) - i would add a finish (possible be a clap, if you do add a clap, which i think it best, then you should move some of the other claps around)
01:28:801(3) - soft hitsound?
02:24:344(1) - same as 01:07:544
02:49:030(spinner) - end spinner here
02:57:258(section) - more hitsounds?
03:06:687(spinner) - end spinner here
03:35:487(4) - make this note soft
03:35:658(x) - add note with normal hitsound and finish and clap
03:45:772(1,2,3) - move notes closer together
03:54:172(3) - soft with clap?

Nice Map! :3

Star~

Thanks for modding! but Since I see no major problems (thanks to all your suggestions)

I won't pop a bubble for not major problems, thanks for modding though@

winber1 wrote:

late mod :/. been kinda busy lately

SPOILER

ClariS

00:21:087(2) - sounds better to me if you delete this note.
00:27:601(7) - instead of this reverse slider. i would rather have a slider that starts at 00:27:772 and ends at 00:28:115 and a note at 00:28:287
00:38:572(7) - ^i would like to have the same pattern here
01:07:887(claps) - i would rather have a 2/1 clap pattern, like in Clara, but i guess if you really don't want to deal with the slider tick claps, it's ok. (especially since you don't even have ticks on the sliders lol)
01;28:115(5) - finish
01:28:801(1) - maybe change the normal hitsounds into a soft with clap
01:44:401(7) - same as 00:27:601
01:55:371(7) - ^
02:45:601(6) - same as 01:28:801
02:49:030(spinner) - end spinner here
02:56:915(section) - maybe more hitsounds?
03:06:687(spinner) - end spinner here
03:35:487(1,2) - i would make these two soft hitsounds
03:35:658(3) - normal hitsounds with finish and clap
03:53:487(5) - finish

Clara

00:38:572(3,4,5) - it may be better to orient the timing like this (the notes are just kinda randomly placed. it's just the timing i'm talking about):
01;28:801(3) - like in ClariS, maybe make it soft with clap?
01:55:372(4,5,6) - same as 00:38:572
02:45:601(3) - normal hitsound with clap and finish?
02:57:258(section) - this section overall needs more hitsounds
03:35:487(5) - make it soft hitsound
03:35:658(1) - normal hitsound with clap and finish?
03:54:172(3) - soft hitsound with clap?
03:06:687(spinner) - end spinner here

Alice

01:07:544(1) - i would add a finish (possible be a clap, if you do add a clap, which i think it best, then you should move some of the other claps around)
01:28:801(3) - soft hitsound?
02:24:344(1) - same as 01:07:544
02:49:030(spinner) - end spinner here
02:57:258(section) - more hitsounds?
03:06:687(spinner) - end spinner here
03:35:487(4) - make this note soft
03:35:658(x) - add note with normal hitsound and finish and clap
03:45:772(1,2,3) - move notes closer together
03:54:172(3) - soft with clap?

Nice Map! :3

Star~

Don't give out kudous if you didn't take they're mod :/

I usually give out kudosus If even 1 or the mod is taken..
yeah, I know why youre saying this but I wanted to kudosu him for trying hard

okay sorry for kudosuing without taking mod );

Weezy wrote:

Don't give out kudous if you didn't take they're mod :/

great!

Sorry...I am late
so...
/me shoot star

winber1 wrote:

late mod :/. been kinda busy lately

ClariS

00:21:087(2) - sounds better to me if you delete this note.
00:27:601(7) - instead of this reverse slider. i would rather have a slider that starts at 00:27:772 and ends at 00:28:115 and a note at 00:28:287
00:38:572(7) - ^i would like to have the same pattern here
01:07:887(claps) - i would rather have a 2/1 clap pattern, like in Clara, but i guess if you really don't want to deal with the slider tick claps, it's ok. (especially since you don't even have ticks on the sliders lol)
01;28:115(5) - finish
01:28:801(1) - maybe change the normal hitsounds into a soft with clap
01:44:401(7) - same as 00:27:601
01:55:371(7) - ^
02:45:601(6) - same as 01:28:801
02:49:030(spinner) - end spinner here
02:56:915(section) - maybe more hitsounds?
03:06:687(spinner) - end spinner here
03:35:487(1,2) - i would make these two soft hitsounds
03:35:658(3) - normal hitsounds with finish and clap
03:53:487(5) - finish

Clara

00:38:572(3,4,5) - it may be better to orient the timing like this (the notes are just kinda randomly placed. it's just the timing i'm talking about):

SPOILER

[attachment=0:565c3]screenshot021.jpg[/attachment:565c3]

01;28:801(3) - like in ClariS, maybe make it soft with clap?
01:55:372(4,5,6) - same as 00:38:572
02:45:601(3) - normal hitsound with clap and finish?
02:57:258(section) - this section overall needs more hitsounds
03:35:487(5) - make it soft hitsound
03:35:658(1) - normal hitsound with clap and finish?
03:54:172(3) - soft hitsound with clap?
03:06:687(spinner) - end spinner here

Alice

01:07:544(1) - i would add a finish (possible be a clap, if you do add a clap, which i think it best, then you should move some of the other claps around)
01:28:801(3) - soft hitsound?
02:24:344(1) - same as 01:07:544
02:49:030(spinner) - end spinner here
02:57:258(section) - more hitsounds?
03:06:687(spinner) - end spinner here
03:35:487(4) - make this note soft
03:35:658(x) - add note with normal hitsound and finish and clap
03:45:772(1,2,3) - move notes closer together
03:54:172(3) - soft with clap?

Nice Map! :3

Star~

# Even if you don't follow the modder's advice, did you not follow it because of your personal choice only, and not because the modding seemed pointless to you?

Why kudosu denied?

Its not me who denied kudosu, as i said I wanted to give him kudosu for trying hard.

Ask Gens because hes the one who denied kusodu....

nante wrote:

winber1 wrote:

late mod :/. been kinda busy lately

ClariS

00:21:087(2) - sounds better to me if you delete this note.
00:27:601(7) - instead of this reverse slider. i would rather have a slider that starts at 00:27:772 and ends at 00:28:115 and a note at 00:28:287
00:38:572(7) - ^i would like to have the same pattern here
01:07:887(claps) - i would rather have a 2/1 clap pattern, like in Clara, but i guess if you really don't want to deal with the slider tick claps, it's ok. (especially since you don't even have ticks on the sliders lol)
01;28:115(5) - finish
01:28:801(1) - maybe change the normal hitsounds into a soft with clap
01:44:401(7) - same as 00:27:601
01:55:371(7) - ^
02:45:601(6) - same as 01:28:801
02:49:030(spinner) - end spinner here
02:56:915(section) - maybe more hitsounds?
03:06:687(spinner) - end spinner here
03:35:487(1,2) - i would make these two soft hitsounds
03:35:658(3) - normal hitsounds with finish and clap
03:53:487(5) - finish

Clara

00:38:572(3,4,5) - it may be better to orient the timing like this (the notes are just kinda randomly placed. it's just the timing i'm talking about):

SPOILER

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01;28:801(3) - like in ClariS, maybe make it soft with clap?
01:55:372(4,5,6) - same as 00:38:572
02:45:601(3) - normal hitsound with clap and finish?
02:57:258(section) - this section overall needs more hitsounds
03:35:487(5) - make it soft hitsound
03:35:658(1) - normal hitsound with clap and finish?
03:54:172(3) - soft hitsound with clap?
03:06:687(spinner) - end spinner here

Alice

01:07:544(1) - i would add a finish (possible be a clap, if you do add a clap, which i think it best, then you should move some of the other claps around)
01:28:801(3) - soft hitsound?
02:24:344(1) - same as 01:07:544
02:49:030(spinner) - end spinner here
02:57:258(section) - more hitsounds?
03:06:687(spinner) - end spinner here
03:35:487(4) - make this note soft
03:35:658(x) - add note with normal hitsound and finish and clap
03:45:772(1,2,3) - move notes closer together
03:54:172(3) - soft with clap?

Nice Map! :3

Star~

# Even if you don't follow the modder's advice, did you not follow it because of your personal choice only, and not because the modding seemed pointless to you?

Why kudosu denied?

[Alice]

Change the Audio Lead-In through the txt file to 2000.

[Clara]

03:44:230 (6) - New combo.
03:44:744 (1) - Remove new combo.

[ClariS]

Change the Audio Lead-In through the txt file to 2000.

03:39:772 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:40:287 (3) - New combo.
03:44:401 (10) - ^

Also, you should place a new offset at 03:35:658 on every difficulty for reset the metronome.

thanks!

all done

Hi
xorh aksemffody

thanks again and...

...Done (orz)

why am i making there kind of mistakes..


samiljul // 이번 맵은 아예 난이도 자체도 2개로 하려고 했는데 이지가 꼭 있어야 된다고 해서 어쩔수 없이 세번쨰 난이도를 끼워만든 맵이에요

태..태고매핑을 해주신다니 감사하지만 난이도 이름상 이번엔 태고를 넣지 않기로 해서요..@@!

Seems good now, finally.

Re-Bubbled~

osuplayer111 wrote:

Seems good now, finally.

Re-Bubbled~

Ok~ Thanks for checking!

And sorry again for asking recheck many times x.x

★~

Post to Prevent this from being graveyarded.

haha5957 wrote:

Post to Prevent this from being graveyarded.

Bubbled maps dont graveyard

Sakura Hana wrote:

haha5957 wrote:

Post to Prevent this from being graveyarded.

Bubbled maps dont graveyard

Didnt know, Thanks -D

I thought no response for 4 week = graveyard applys to all map

03:35:658 - here is an useless red line. remove it plz.
offset:344. check this and you'll know why.
Source:Puella Magi Madoka Magica

and some suggestions:
about Background, why not Madoka ?! it's an Anime song O.O

-Clara-
00:01:029 (1) - unsnaped. it should be at 00:01:030
00:03:772 (5,6) - move the two notes to 00:03:601 and 00:03:944 will be better
00:27:601 (7) - a bit strange here. how about try this:(don't look at my spacing XD)

sorry but i have to pop this. don't worry, fix these and call back. i'll do a friendly recheck

Thanks~



Offset 344 : Done
Source : Done
Red line : Done
BG : actually ClariS is who I like more, not Madoka (however this doesnt mean I don't like Madoka though O.O I guess you know what I mean by this)
This image was used When ClariS first came out (with Irony), and since this Image still has realationship with the song, I guess this is ok.
Sorry about this xD

00:01:029 : Done
00:03:772 : I like the way it is, since you said this is just suggestion I guess this is okay o.o
00:27:601 : Done, but slightly different from yours (I guess this is okay too o.o)

xierbaliti wrote:

03:35:658 - here is an useless red line. remove it plz.
offset:344. check this and you'll know why.
Source:Puella Magi Madoka Magica

and some suggestions:
about Background, why not Madoka ?! it's an Anime song O.O

-Clara-
00:01:029 (1) - unsnaped. it should be at 00:01:030
00:03:772 (5,6) - move the two notes to 00:03:601 and 00:03:944 will be better
00:27:601 (7) - a bit strange here. how about try this:(don't look at my spacing XD)

SPOILER

sorry but i have to pop this. don't worry, fix these and call back. i'll do a friendly recheck

well, all seems ok now. rebubbled.

Seeing as I don't want to see this go to the graveyard

I suggest that you start your first kiai time at 01:07:544, your second kiai time at 02:24:344 and your final kiai time at 03:35:658 (They all seem to fit alot more with the song that way, especially the 3rd one that starts on a quiet part at the moment)

Alice:
00:07:201 (3) - this can either be shortened to the white tick or extended to the red tick but it shouldn't end on a blue tick (might be a resnapping error)
00:08:572 (4) - ^
00:40:115 (1,2) - ^ (shorten to white ticks)
02:46:286 (1) - sounds much better extended to 02:49:029
03:02:744 (1,1,1), 03:13:715 (1,1) - Don't have so many spinners near each other, beginners have trouble with them and it could be much more creatively mapped
03:10:115 (1,2,3,4) - add some hitsounds to this and the section before it?
03:54:858 (1) - extend to the next white tick

Clara:
01:18:858 (9,1) - switch the new combo to follow your pattern
02:35:658 (6,1) - ^
02:57:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - add some more hitsounds?
03:07:544 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - ^ (also same spinner comment from before)
03:45:086 (1) - remove new combo

ClariS:
02:46:287 (1) - extend to the next white tick
03:07:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same spinner/hitsound comments in this area

Call me back after fixes and I will rebubble (or you can let this go to the graveyard if you really don't want it ranked)

Have done preety much everything, except for the spinners in Clara difficulty (I guess this is okay as an difficulty charicterastic)
for other difficulties it's remapped.

Kiai done,
Alice blue tick error done
Hitsound done



And Since Ive decided to grave another map that wasnt active for a week, this map should be ok now.

I was in kinda hurry to upload a new map - but since that was Impossible I guess I have to wait from now on :/

and thanks a lot~

James2250 wrote:

Seeing as I don't want to see this go to the graveyard

I suggest that you start your first kiai time at 01:07:544, your second kiai time at 02:24:344 and your final kiai time at 03:35:658 (They all seem to fit alot more with the song that way, especially the 3rd one that starts on a quiet part at the moment)

Alice:
00:07:201 (3) - this can either be shortened to the white tick or extended to the red tick but it shouldn't end on a blue tick (might be a resnapping error)
00:08:572 (4) - ^
00:40:115 (1,2) - ^ (shorten to white ticks)
02:46:286 (1) - sounds much better extended to 02:49:029
03:02:744 (1,1,1), 03:13:715 (1,1) - Don't have so many spinners near each other, beginners have trouble with them and it could be much more creatively mapped
03:10:115 (1,2,3,4) - add some hitsounds to this and the section before it?
03:54:858 (1) - extend to the next white tick

Clara:
01:18:858 (9,1) - switch the new combo to follow your pattern
02:35:658 (6,1) - ^
02:57:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - add some more hitsounds?
03:07:544 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - ^ (also same spinner comment from before)
03:45:086 (1) - remove new combo

ClariS:
02:46:287 (1) - extend to the next white tick
03:07:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same spinner/hitsound comments in this area

Call me back after fixes and I will rebubble (or you can let this go to the graveyard if you really don't want it ranked)

*LAUGHS* graveyarded!

버블 받으실거 왜 무덤으로 ㄷㄷ;

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