1. Easy Style (2,66 stars, 128 notes)
2. Insane Style (4,9 stars, 497 notes)
3. Normal Style (4,52 stars, 290 notes)

1. "very good song" tags are odd. Delete them
2. I suggest adding 3rd combo color (Maybe white?)
3. Delete .osb file and do full submit
4. I suggest offset: 6657
5. Your Normal difficulty is too hard to be "Normal" Try to make it easier. (You should have 3,50 Star Rating)

1. 00:40:152 (4) - This is unrankable. | Overlayed slider.
2. 00:46:551 (4) - ^
3. 00:54:650 (7) - New Combo
4. 00:58:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Stack them properly.

adron zhero wrote:

* If the next ones that mod my beatmap CAN send the beatmap with the errors fixed, i'll be glad.
(College=No time to play)

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

BPM 150.000, offset 6,619 sounds better imo.
Delete the .osb.
Capitalize DJ in the artist?
Tags?
Why "style"? Why not just "Easy", etc...?
Your preview point isn't actually part of Easy/Normal...
Combos felt weird in all diffs.

[Easy Style]

00:38:644 (1) - The song really only starts here; remove the spinners before it, they're not particularly fun to play. In fact, you could start it as late as 00:51:443 (1).
01:09:861 - Lack of a note here is weird.
01:17:839 - Add a break?
01:17:439 - Unused timing section.
01:21:339 - Unused timing section.
01:36:637 (1) - Combos are awfully long in this section.

I dunno, even for an Easy, this feels quite boring. Maybe it's just that I don't like the song too much.

[Normal Style]

OD feels too low.

00:29:046 (2) - This looks terrible.
00:51:443 (1) - Consider just starting here.
01:10:440 (7,1,2) - Very hard to read.
01:21:839 (1,2,3,4) - Unreadable.
01:23:638 (1) - I didn't really like the use of notes and repeats in this section; it feels like they were placed randomly to follow a constant 1/2 pattern rather than follow some aspect of the music. It feels repetitive, just how long it is, too.
01:50:835 - Unused timing section.

[Hard Style]

Those fast sliders felt weird, especially ones that start on red ticks and end on white.

00:51:443 (1) - Once again, just start it here. The kicksliders at the beginning don't really fit, and the high OD + no bass after it is quite hard to play. It would also cut your score to below 10m, which is always good.
01:21:839 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - Err, this placement is weird.
01:26:238 (10,11,12) - Blah.
01:42:236 (10,11,12,13,14) - I know some people don't like zig-zag sliders.
02:00:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not readable at all.
03:00:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Weird pattern again.
03:07:025 (14,15,16,17,18) - Really don't like this formation, and don't like combos going so high. The twisty formations after this one aren't cool either.

Good luck!

• • Offset: 6650 (resnap all notes)
  • The mp3 you are using is a lot longer than the part which is mapped. Consider cropping it to reduce filesize

• • 00:29:019 (2) - This slider is hidden: make it more visible
  • 00:32:219 (3) - ^
  • 00:35:418 (4) - ^

• • 01:04:218 (8,1) - Spacing
  • 01:21:018 (1,1) - ^
  • 02:05:818 (3) - This slider is hidden: make it more visible
  • 02:09:018 (3) - ^
  • 02:14:218 (4,1) - Spacing

1. You should use less hitsounds since they can get pretty annoying...

• .Opinions:
  01:21:840 (1,2) - this should be ok, but i think it's weird because the map always has regular spacing. Your choice, btw.

• .Opinions:
  01:51:00 - missing break?

• .Opinions:
  02:00:240 (1,2,3) - i really don't like this.
  lol@trycky parts.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Easy Style:

• .Opinions:
  01:21:840 (1,2) - this should be ok, but i think it's weird because the map always has regular spacing. Your choice, btw.

- Normal Style:

• .Opinions:
  01:51:00 - missing break?

- INSANE STYLE:

• .Opinions:
  02:00:240 (1,2,3) - i really don't like this.
  lol@trycky parts.

Goos map overall, but you should add a bit more variety, at least about hitsounds: whistles do get really repetitive after a while D:
Is this your first or second beatmap? It's a really good work for a beginner, so you'll improve a lot in short time ^^

Real1 wrote:

BPM is set to 150,001

1. If Son of Darkness is the ablum name, you should move it to tags according to this post Album Title doesn't belong in "Source" field, and other tips, if it's a movie name or show name, that's OK
2. Turn off countdown would better IMO

1. 01:23:040 (3) - You'd better avoid using unusual spacing in Easy diff.

1. 01:04:140 (3) - This slider confusing me, maybe just for me
2. 01:50:840 (T) - I feel this timing section set a loud sound, lower a bit would better
3. And I think this difficulty ends at a strange position

1. 01:47:840 (7) - Remove whistle
2. 01:56:240 (4,5,6) - These would confused players

Breeze wrote:

[Insane Style]

1. 01:47:840 (7) - Remove whistle Intended
2. 01:56:240 (4,5,6) - These would confused players Isn't so confusing

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!

Here are some suggestions for your map~ You don't have to change them if yoou don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- As Breeze said, if Son of Darkness is the name of the album, delete it.

~Easy Style~
No problems, good job!!

~Normal Style~
- I'd rename this to Hard... It looks so hard for a Normal imo (4,5 stars is considered Hard I think :/)

02:13:440 (2,3,4,5) - Ugly overlaps. Stack them just on one point.

~INSANE STYLE~
- Why is the name diff on caps? ._.

01:42:240 (10,11,12,13,14) - Evilllllll xDDD
02:00:640 (3) - Fix spacing.
02:04:240 (3) - Stack it under (1)
02:07:440 (3) - ^
03:07:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - So evillllll xDDD
03:10:240 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:13:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Well, I don't like the song so much but the map is fun xD Good Luck!! *star*

1. Offset: 6,650 (a little later than yours)
   The MP3 you are using is very low quality, but I can't find a better one from anywhere, or find an MP3 of this at all, so I can't help you here. If you can, you should get a better MP3[
2. Your tags are not great. You don't really need xxx in there, and I don't think this song is a metal song. Also, if you're having Hard Style in there (shouldn't it be Insane Style?), you should add "Easy Normal" in the tags too.
3. Also, there is a lot of the MP3 that hasn't been mapped (just over 25% of it). You should cut the MP3 down to save space. (or cut the new MP3 down if you can get one.)