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ND Lee - Lover (BS Style)

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aesopl19193
572 posts
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aesopl19193
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年11月27日 at 12:59:18

Artist: ND Lee
Title: Lover (BS Style)
Source: DJMAX
BPM: 145
Filesize: 16044kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.66 stars, 64 notes)
  2. Hard (4.9 stars, 196 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 336 notes)
  4. Normal (4.03 stars, 106 notes)
Download: ND Lee - Lover (BS Style)
Download: ND Lee - Lover (BS Style) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Third beatmap

DJMAX Protable BS Edition
Lover(BS Style)

update: changed .mp3 [27/11/2010 13:00(GMT+8)]
Last edited by aesopl19193 , edited 41 times in total.
jericho2442
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1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
mod is gogo XD

Add some tag's ;)

[Easy]
00:51:32 (1,2,3) - line (1) up with the end of the combo before it, then line (3) up with (1)
00:56:703 (2,3) - nazi. line these up with (1)
01:01:255 (1,2,1,2) - random and ugly placing, place a more nicer way
01:08:703 (3,1) - too much of a jump for easy, make them closer
01:21:945 (2) - would look better lined up with (1)

[Normal]
00:20:703 (2) - place under the end of (1) slider better, the way it is right now is very ugly
00:29:393 (4) - new combo
00:29:807 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:220 (3) - i dont like this at all, sounds much better as a single note
00:35:186 (2,3) - spacing, too close so dont feel good
00:39:738 (1) - line with (2)
00:41:393 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - line all these up better with each other, as it is there all wobbly and wierd, which makes it look ugly
01:06:220 (1,2) - give these the same curve as 01:04:565 (1,2) -
01:17:807 (1,1) - spacing, too close, these really really need to have more space between them

[Hard]
00:21:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - placing is rather ugly, line these up better with each other
00:25:255 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^
00:38:496 (2,3,4,5) - line (3) up with (2) then line (4,5) up with (3)
00:50:496 (5,6) - spacing is too far, and it does not suit as a jump, please fix
01:17:807 (1) - make the start and end of this slider line up and it will look much better

[Redesign]
go through this map and check to make sure everything lines up and looks nice

_______________________________
that sould keep you busy for now ;)
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

jericho2442 wrote:

mod is gogo XD

Add some tag's ;)

[Easy]
00:51:32 (1,2,3) - line (1) up with the end of the combo before it, then line (3) up with (1)
00:56:703 (2,3) - nazi. line these up with (1)
01:01:255 (1,2,1,2) - random and ugly placing, place a more nicer way
01:08:703 (3,1) - too much of a jump for easy, make them closer
01:21:945 (2) - would look better lined up with (1)

[Normal]
00:20:703 (2) - place under the end of (1) slider better, the way it is right now is very ugly
00:29:393 (4) - new combo
00:29:807 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:220 (3) - i dont like this at all, sounds much better as a single note
00:35:186 (2,3) - spacing, too close so dont feel good
00:39:738 (1) - line with (2)
00:41:393 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - line all these up better with each other, as it is there all wobbly and wierd, which makes it look ugly
01:06:220 (1,2) - give these the same curve as 01:04:565 (1,2) -
01:17:807 (1,1) - spacing, too close, these really really need to have more space between them

[Hard]
00:21:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - placing is rather ugly, line these up better with each other
00:25:255 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^
00:38:496 (2,3,4,5) - line (3) up with (2) then line (4,5) up with (3)
00:50:496 (5,6) - spacing is too far, and it does not suit as a jump, please fix
01:17:807 (1) - make the start and end of this slider line up and it will look much better

[Redesign]
go through this map and check to make sure everything lines up and looks nice

_______________________________
that sould keep you busy for now ;)
All Fixed~ Thanks!
(I am very not good at spacing =[ )
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Easy
01:10:358 (2) - remove its repeats, then shrink it of a timing tick with 1/4 beat snap divisor. After that, add 2 repeats on this slider!
01:23:600 (2) - ^

Normal
00:25:255 (2) - move it a square right
00:37:462 (2) - shrink it of a slider tick

Insane
00:23:393 (2) - move it a square down

Redesign
Sounds REALLY nice!

Just a pair of final tips for this well-mapped song:
1) The initial countdown is quite unuseless for this song... Remove it or silence it, please.
2) Redesign mode's hitsound-placing is really nice, but I can't say it for the other modes... Time to fix it!
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

Lokamp wrote:

Easy
01:10:358 (2) - remove its repeats, then shrink it of a timing tick with 1/4 beat snap divisor. After that, add 2 repeats on this slider!
01:23:600 (2) - ^

Normal
00:25:255 (2) - move it a square right
00:37:462 (2) - shrink it of a slider tick

Insane
00:23:393 (2) - move it a square down

Redesign
Sounds REALLY nice!

Just a pair of final tips for this well-mapped song:
1) The initial countdown is quite unuseless for this song... Remove it or silence it, please.
2) Redesign mode's hitsound-placing is really nice, but I can't say it for the other modes... Time to fix it!
All fixes =] Thanks for your modding!
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
My DIF, WIP !!

Download: ND Lee - Lover (BS Style) (aesopl19193) [AL2e's DIF].osu
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

James2250 wrote:

put offset as 4995 and resnap all notes
Source/tags if possible
the max allowed bg is 1024x768 so make yours smaller

easy:
seeing as all the other diff's have kiai time in the same place why not this one

normal:
why does it have same hp drain/overall diff as easy

insane:
00:54:220 (4) - shouldn't clap be at the start of this
01:21:117 (2) - new combo?

Redesign:
nice

*star*
All fixed =] , Thanks !
rust45
1,088 posts
Joined May 2009
rust45
[Kiai]
I don't really agree with the use of Kiai, and think a fountain would work where it is but not the flashing beats, but this is my opinion.

[Easy]
01:09:547 (1,2) - Can be very confusing for newbs.
01:22:788 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
Fine

[Insane]
Name this Hard

[AL2e's DIF]
Fine

[Redesign]
I don't get the name of the diff.
But the triplets are fun

Pretty good.
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
rust45
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Joined May 2009
rust45
Actually in easy, it's confusing cause of the spacing, at the same parts in Normal I find it easier cause stacked sliders can get confusing, basically, I think you should move the sliders so they don't overlap.

No kudos for this.
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

rust45 wrote:

Actually in easy, it's confusing cause of the spacing, at the same parts in Normal I find it easier cause stacked sliders can get confusing, basically, I think you should move the sliders so they don't overlap.

No kudos for this.
Got it , It is fixed ~ =]
anonymous_old
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Here since the beginning
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
aesopl19193
572 posts
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aesopl19193

Loogiesquared wrote:

Hard
00:26:496 (1) : Add clap on the endpoint of this slider. -fixed
01:09:531 (1) : Clap hitsound. -fixed
01:10:359 (5) : Clap hitsound. -fixed
01:19:462 (1) : Remove new combo. -no
01:21:117 (2) : New combo. -fixed


Redesign
00:17:718 (9) : Left by 1 grid. -no
00:18:856 (4,5) : Move up by 2 grids. -fixed
Thanks for your mod =]
simplistiC
237 posts
Joined April 2009
simplistiC
These are purely suggestions. I like symmetry a lot but you might not, so you do not have to change those if you do not wish. It just looks better IMO.

[Easy]
00:19:892 (1) - Vertical flip and align with 00:18:236 (1)?
00:21:547 (1,2,1) - Take this and delete. Then take 00:18:236 (1,2,1), copy and paste, and do a vertical+horizontal flip
00:24:857 (1,2,1,2) - Make this symmetrical somehow?
00:28:167 (1,2,3,4) - Unstack
00:48:030 (1,2,1,2) - Make this symmetrical?
00:51:340 (1,2) - Move up 2 level 3 grids up
01:11:202 (1,1) - End on the white tick before.

[Normal]
00:24:857 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Make this symmetrical?
00:39:340 (4,1,2) - 4 grids to the right
01:11:202 (1,1) - End on the white tick before.

[Hard]
00:18:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Symmetrical?
00:25:478 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move 2 grids right
00:25:478 (3,4) - 1 grid right

[AL2e's DIF]
It's okay.

[Redesign]
00:10:787 (7) - 1 grid to left
00:19:477 (7) - ^

Nice map star~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO SEXY!

This is my mod post, you better like it

[Easy]
SPOILER
00:19:064 (2) - Add a clap hitsound
00:19:892 (1) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
00:22:374 (2) - Add a clap hitsound
00:23:202 (1) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
00:43:064 (1,2,3,4,1) - Add a finish hitsound
00:44:305 (4) - Remove clap hitsound if you already add a finish hitsound

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:19:064 (3) - Add a clap hitsound
00:20:719 (2) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
00:22:374 (3) - ^
00:24:030 (3) - ^
00:43:064 (1,2,3) - Remove whitsle hitsound and add a finish hitsound
00:44:719 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
01:11:202 (1,1) - ^

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:18:650 (3) - Add a clap hitsound
00:19:478 (6) - ^
00:19:892 (1) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
00:20:719 (2) - Remove whitsle hitsound at the end of slider and add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
00:21:961 (3) - Add a clap hitsound
00:23:616 (3) - ^
00:24:236 (6) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
00:43:064 (1,2,3,4) - Add a finish hitsound
00:56:719 (2) - Remove whitsle hitsound and add a clap hitsound

[AL2E DIF]
SPOILER
00:31:063 (6) - Add a clap hitsound

[Redesign]
SPOILER
00:43:063 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
00:43:477 (4) - ^
00:43:891 (7) - ^
00:44:304 (10) - Add a finish hitsound and remove clap hitsound

GREAT MAP!!!
STAR
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
[Easy]
00:19:064 (2) - Add a clap hitsound
00:19:892 (1) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
00:22:374 (2) - Add a clap hitsound
00:23:202 (1) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
00:43:064 (1,2,3,4,1) - Add a finish hitsound
00:44:305 (4) - Remove clap hitsound if you already add a finish hitsound
All Fixed

[Normal]
00:19:064 (3) - Add a clap hitsound
00:20:719 (2) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
00:22:374 (3) - ^
00:24:030 (3) - ^
-I think clap sound effects shoud be start at 00:24:857 to match with bgm..

00:43:064 (1,2,3) - Remove whitsle hitsound and add a finish hitsound
Fixed

00:44:719 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
01:11:202 (1,1) - ^
- They do not sound better if I add finish hitsound /_\

[Hard]
00:18:650 (3) - Add a clap hitsound
00:19:478 (6) - ^
00:19:892 (1) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
00:20:719 (2) - Remove whitsle hitsound at the end of slider and add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
00:21:961 (3) - Add a clap hitsound
00:23:616 (3) - ^
00:24:236 (6) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
-same as normal...

00:43:064 (1,2,3,4) - Add a finish hitsound
00:56:719 (2) - Remove whitsle hitsound and add a clap hitsound[/color][/b][/spoilerbox]
All fixed

[AL2E DIF]
00:31:063 (6) - Add a clap hitsound
-Wait for al2e to mod it =]

[Redesign]
00:43:063 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
00:43:477 (4) - ^
00:43:891 (7) - ^
00:44:304 (10) - Add a finish hitsound and remove clap hitsound[/color][/b][/spoilerbox]
Fixed , But I think (10) with finish and clap sound better~


Thanks for your mod!
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Hello~~ >.<

[Normal]
01:00:857 (2) Clap?

[All diff without Al2e and Hard]
00:44:719 - 00:48:029 insert Break. Especially [Redesign] is essential I think.


Generally I usually mod 4 diff and less than. But, Lover is very short song, then I modded.


Starred~!
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

Tanmak wrote:

Hello~~ >.<

[Normal]
01:00:857 (2) Clap?

[All diff without Al2e and Hard]
00:44:719 - 00:48:029 insert Break. Especially [Redesign] is essential I think.


Generally I usually mod 4 diff and less than. But, Lover is very short song, then I modded.


Starred~!
All Fixed =]
subarasikibuta
559 posts
Joined May 2009
subarasikibuta
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

3kinnagi wrote:

Cool song&map~
Thanks =]
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
My Modding !!

[Redesign]
- Remove New Combo
00:06:650 (1)
00:08:305 (1)
00:09:960 (1)
00:19:891 (1)
00:24:857 (1)
00:39:753 (1)
00:49:684 (1)
- New Combo
00:06:029 (7)
00:07:891 (7)
00:09:546 (5)
00:25:063 (2)
00:39:132 (8)
00:39:960 (2)
00:49:477 (10)
- Sound
00:10:374 (4) Why clap ?
Put some wistle on some of approprate note.

[Hard]
- Remove New Combo
00:24:857 (1)
00:28:167 (1)
00:29:822 (1)
00:34:788 (1)
00:36:443 (1)
00:38:098 (1)
00:46:374 (1)
00:51:339 (1)
- New Combo
00:25:270 (2)
00:27:960 (4)
00:29:408 (6)
00:35:201 (2)
00:37:477 (5)
00:45:960 (5)
00:50:719 (6)
- Sound
00:22:374 (4) Why clap again ~
00:24:857 (1) Finish

[AL2e's DIF]
Give you now ~~

[All]
- I just mod Hard and Redesign. Ane the New combo problem is too much.
I have a remiander for chinese :P
(New combo係一定要跟音樂的主音換)

- By the hit sound, you have to be make it better XD

Download: ND Lee - Lover (BS Style) (aesopl19193) [AL2e's DIF].osu
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

al2e10 wrote:

My Modding !!

[Redesign]
- Remove New Combo
00:06:650 (1)
00:08:305 (1)
00:09:960 (1)
00:19:891 (1)
00:24:857 (1)
00:39:753 (1)
00:49:684 (1)
- New Combo
00:06:029 (7)
00:07:891 (7)
00:09:546 (5)
00:25:063 (2)
00:39:132 (8)
00:39:960 (2)
00:49:477 (10)
- Sound
00:10:374 (4) Why clap ?
Put some wistle on some of approprate note.

[Hard]
- Remove New Combo
00:24:857 (1)
00:28:167 (1)
00:29:822 (1)
00:34:788 (1)
00:36:443 (1)
00:38:098 (1)
00:46:374 (1)
00:51:339 (1)
- New Combo
00:25:270 (2)
00:27:960 (4)
00:29:408 (6)
00:35:201 (2)
00:37:477 (5)
00:45:960 (5)
00:50:719 (6)
- Sound
00:22:374 (4) Why clap again ~
00:24:857 (1) Finish

[AL2e's DIF]
Give you now ~~

[All]
- I just mod Hard and Redesign. Ane the New combo problem is too much.
I have a remiander for chinese :P
(New combo係一定要跟音樂的主音換)

- By the hit sound, you have to be make it better XD
All fixed~
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Easy~
Fine.

~Normal~
01:22:167 (2) - move 1/4 left

~Hard~
Fine.

~AL2e's DIF~
00:07:477 (6) - move 1/4 left
00:09:339 (6) - move 1/4 right
00:09:753 (7) - delete
00:15:546 (4) - move 1/4 right
00:16:167 (6) - move 1/4 left and remove repeat
00:17:305 (3,4) - move 1/4 right
00:20:098 (1,2,3) - move 1/4 left
00:20:615 - add circle
00:42:546 (5) - move 1/4 right
00:42:753 (6) - delete
00:45:339 (3,4) - umm... too far & unexpected jump

~Redesign~
Change the name to other instead of "Redesign", it's not fit.
Map is fine but IMO it's really bad, because notes are not fit the song.


+Star
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
All fixed but waiting for al2e10 to mod his dif =]
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for the second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Normal hitsound sounds better than the soft hitsound.

[Easy]
You should add some finish at certain points.
00:24:857 (1) - Add finish.
00:31:478 (1) - ^
00:34:788 (1) - ^
00:38:098 (1) - ^
00:39:754 (1) - ^
00:41:409 (3,4) - ^
00:48:030 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
00:57:961 (1) - ^

[Normal]
You should add some finish at certain points. (Well, this is the example of finish usage. Nice effect IMO)
00:31:478 (1,2) - Add finish.
00:33:133 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
00:34:167 (2,3,1) - Add finish.
00:35:202 (2) - Add finish at the beginning.
00:36:443 (1) - ^
00:37:478 (2) - Add finish at the whole slider.
00:38:098 (1,2,3) - Add finish.
00:39:754 (1) - ^
00:40:167 (2) - Add finish at the third repeat and the end.
00:41:409 (1) - Add finish.
00:58:788 (2) - Add clap at the end.

[Hard]
00:31:478 (1,2) - Add finish at the beginning.
00:33:133 (1) - ^
00:34:167 (3) - ^
00:34:581 (4) - Go backward one 1/4 tick. Add finish.
00:34:788 (5) - Add finish at the beginning.
00:35:201 (1) - ^
00:36:443 (1) - ^
00:37:478 (1) - Add finish at the whole slider.
00:38:098 (2,3,4) - Add finish.
00:39:754 (1) - ^
00:40:167 (2) - Add finish at the third repeat and the end.
00:56:615 - Add note here.
01:00:236 (2) - Is it just me or the repeat placement is odd?

[Al2e's DIF]
1. Decrease Slider Tick Rate to 1.
2. Map all the breaks. Also, map the rest of the song. It's kinda odd if you let it un-mapped.
00:07:374 (6) - Go backward one 1/4 tick.
00:45:960 (5,7) - Move one tiny grid right. So it will be right on the (3).

[Insane]
This diff is okay without the finish. But will be better with the finish.
Star.
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
[quote="VanMoNky"]
Easy
All fixed and changed to normal hitsound

Normal
00:40:167 (2) - Add finish at the third repeat and the end.
-here I just add finish at the end

Hard
00:40:167 (2) - Add finish at the third repeat and the end.
-here I just add finish at the end
00:56:615 - Add note here.
-no
01:00:236 (2) - Is it just me or the repeat placement is odd?
-?

Al2e's
Waiting for him to mod his dif...too

Insane
-Some finish are added

Thanks for your sound mod =]
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
Only suggestion: Do you think you can incoporate a Love-Heart Shaped Slider in some/all of your diffs?
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

YGOkid8 wrote:

Only suggestion: Do you think you can incoporate a Love-Heart Shaped Slider in some/all of your diffs?
I don't know how to draw Love-Heart Shaped Slider XD
and.. where can I put it ~"~?
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8

aesopl19193 wrote:

YGOkid8 wrote:

Only suggestion: Do you think you can incoporate a Love-Heart Shaped Slider in some/all of your diffs?
I don't know how to draw Love-Heart Shaped Slider XD
and.. where can I put it ~"~?
I was thinking anywhere from 1:11:201 ~ 1:21:132, around there.

But if you don't know how to draw one, that's fine, only a suggestion. But, there are some beatmaps which you could take a look at that has Love-Heart Shaped Sliders in them.

Here's one of them I know:
Nickelback - Far Away
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
MY MODDD !!

Download: ND Lee - Lover (BS Style) (aesopl19193) [AL2e's DIF].osu
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

al2e10 wrote:

MY MODDD !!
updated , thanks!=]

YGOkid8 wrote:

I was thinking anywhere from 1:11:201 ~ 1:21:132, around there.

But if you don't know how to draw one, that's fine, only a suggestion. But, there are some beatmaps which you could take a look at that has Love-Heart Shaped Sliders in them.

Here's one of them I know:
Nickelback - Far Away
oh, i don't like making slider like this =[
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Star for a great beatmap set

[Easy]

00:43:064 (1) - I really feel like long stacks should be avoided in easy diffs at all costs, since only new players tend to really play easy, and its hard to read if you are new.

Apart from that no problems! Good job.

[Normal]

Just a suggestion, feel free to ignore

SPOILER

Nice diff :3

[Hard]

00:19:064 (4) - New Combo?
00:48:857 (3) - ^

[AL2e's DIF]

00:22:374 (4,1) - jump that doesn't make sense? no tempo change, no extra beats, nothing, no reason to make a jump IMO.

01:02:305 (5) - new combo
01:08:926 (6) - ^

Interesting diff :3 some weird spacing

[Insane]

No problems! Great job
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
[quote="Teara"]Star for a great beatmap set

[Easy]

00:43:064 (1) - I really feel like long stacks should be avoided in easy diffs at all costs, since only new players tend to really play easy, and its hard to read if you are new.
It is changed =]

[Normal]

It is changed by following your advice =]

[Hard]

00:19:064 (4) - New Combo?
00:48:857 (3) - ^
-no

[AL2e's DIF]
waiting for him to mod his dif =]

Thanks for your mod ! ^^
lovescone
4 posts
Joined January 2010
lovescone
Good map :)

Star!
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- BG color to Black, all difficulties.
-- Could you resize "lover.png" to 800x600 or 1024x768 it would look better.
-- The Brown and sandy color blend in with the video, maybe make the colors stand out more?

Easy:

-- Map in soft like Normal it sounds better.

00:45:029 - Consider mapping this break.

Normal:

00:45:029 - Map this break?

Hard:

01:02:719 (8,1) - Make this a returning slider?

AL2e's DIF:

-- Why capital "A" and "L"? Shouldn't it be "al2e's Difficulty"?

00:47:201 (1) - Anti jump... respace?
00:53:822 (5,6,7,8) - Stack is difficulty to see because of the color.
00:58:167 - Odd break, map this?
01:10:788 - Ends in a weird place. Maybe map to the end?

Some of the jumps and spacing are difficult to read and predict, using a consistent distance snap for each jump would help, but it's doable so I guess it's ok.

Insane:

00:07:270 (3) - Too close.
00:42:546 (6) - Didn't like this, almost impossible to see, consider a different pattern?
00:45:029 - Map this? You did it in Hard. (Or for consistency I guess you could delete the mapped part of Hard.)
01:23:615 (1,2,3,4) - Huge jump.


Pretty nice maps, I like the video. ~ Star.
johnlaw
2 posts
Joined April 2009
johnlaw
多謝分享
希望盡快改善完成
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

Shulin wrote:

General
-- Could you resize "lover.png" to 800x600 or 1024x768 it would look better.
- I don't know how to do that .. I cannot cut it to 4:3 since it is 16:9...

Easy:
00:45:029 - Consider mapping this break.
-no

Normal:
00:45:029 - Map this break?
Mapped now ! =] can you try ?

Hard:
01:02:719 (8,1) - Make this a returning slider?
-no

AL2e's DIF:
wait him to mod~

Insane:
00:07:270 (3) - Too close.
-fixed
00:42:546 (6) - Didn't like this, almost impossible to see, consider a different pattern?
-no
00:45:029 - Map this? You did it in Hard. (Or for consistency I guess you could delete the mapped part of Hard.)
Mapped ! (I really don't want to follow vocal)
01:23:615 (1,2,3,4) - Huge jump.
-fixed (it is very huge now because there are 1/8 ...
Sushi
osu! Alumni
2,989 posts
Joined October 2008
Sushi
Make hitsounds louder.

[Easy]
00:28:167 (1,3) - Align? or unalign (2) and (4)

[Normal]
00:39:754 (1,2) - align?

[Hard]
00:43:064 (1,2,3,4) - symetry

[Al2e's]
The intro of this diff is... weird. timing of notes is weird, and the rhythm you create is weird. seems that you want to follow the back synth, but many notes are notes timed on in : result : a rhythm that sounds weird.
00:09:339 (6) - Sounds very very bad.
I hope all the unalignment were on purpose. i won't point them, but if they weren't, correct them.
01:01:477 (1) - Why new combo here?

[Insane]
00:44:926 (1) - Why new combo?
00:46:727 (TS) - I disapprove this almost silenced... silenced Timing Section. you can't even hear how you're doin it!
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
Easy and Normal
Fine

Hard
00:44:512 - add an inherited timing section to change to soft sounds, 00:44:719 - use this one for the kiai time

Insane
00:04:995 - 00:14:719 - this part don't follow the music. imo, here are some suggestions of what yo can do to fit the music well:
00:05:201 (2) - move to the next blue tick
00:06:029 (1) - remove one repeat, and move to the next blue tick
00:07:580 (6) - remove
00:07:684 (6) - move to the next blue tick
00:09:339 (6) - same
00:12:649 (8) - remove one repeat, and move to the next blue tick
00:14:201 (5) - remove
00:14:304 (6) - move to the next blue tick
00:15:960 (4) - same
you can see if you like :)
00:48:029 - put this inherited timing section half beat earlier
01:23:097 (3) - move to the next white tick
01:23:304 (4) - remove
01:23:615 (1,2,3,4) - i found this combo to drastic O.O in you don't want to reduce the spacing, maybe put the prev combo more separated between them so the last combo can be more predictable

AL2e's DIF
you should put a spinner to variety scores
00:09:339 (6) - move to the next blue tick
00:10:684 (2,3,4,5,6) - (suggestion) (2) end point at 00:11:098, (3) move to the prev white tick, (5) remove
00:14:926 - add note
00:16:167 (6) - move to the prev blue tick, remove one repeat and place a note here 00:16:788
00:17:305 (3,4) - move to the next white tick, and add note here 00:17:615

Nice map, nice song :)
Star!
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

Lissette wrote:

Easy and Normal
Fine

Hard
00:44:512 - add an inherited timing section to change to soft sounds, 00:44:719 - use this one for the kiai time

Fixed , But ... why should I add it ? It has no problems it I do not change it...

Insane
00:04:995 - 00:14:719 - this part don't follow the music. imo, here are some suggestions of what yo can do to fit the music well:
00:05:201 (2) - move to the next blue tick
00:06:029 (1) - remove one repeat, and move to the next blue tick
00:07:580 (6) - remove
00:07:684 (6) - move to the next blue tick
00:09:339 (6) - same
00:12:649 (8) - remove one repeat, and move to the next blue tick
00:14:201 (5) - remove
00:14:304 (6) - move to the next blue tick
00:15:960 (4) - same

-Fixed =]
actually , When I mapping it session, I think that it will be too difficult and bad feeling if I just follow the music deadly.

you can see if you like :)
00:48:029 - put this inherited timing section half beat earlier

-Fixed , But why? It has no any problems if I do not change it?

01:23:097 (3) - move to the next white tick
01:23:304 (4) - remove
-no
01:23:615 (1,2,3,4) - i found this combo to drastic O.O in you don't want to reduce the spacing, maybe put the prev combo more separated between them so the last combo can be more predictable
-Fixed ~

AL2e's DIF
Wait him to mod~
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
Hi~


Nice map, nothing found, have a star!
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Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Remove the .osb.
Remove the audio track from the video.

00:48:029 - Start kiai here instead? It feels weird on Easy how you start kiai...right into a break.

[Easy]

00:57:133 (3,1) - I guess you could space these out a bit more. Not really necessary though.

Looks fine. :)

[Normal]

Hard to read, especially 00:38:098 (1,2,3,4); use more sliders there?

[Hard]

01:04:581 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Could be a lot neater.

[Al2e's DIF] (what's up with the capitalization here?)

I found the part before the first break really hard to read. (the doublets throughout the song were kinda weird, imo)

00:46:788 (8,1) - Mean antijump.

I recommend mapping this to the end; you're almost there.

[Insane]

00:44:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Please don't have this many silent notes in such a confusing rhythm.

Man, the harder the diffs got, the more confusing the rhythms became. XD Maybe it's the song, or maybe it was intentional. Star~
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
hii!!
[mod]

[Insane]
I love this map >w< <3

[AL2e's DIF]
00:08:512 (4,5,6) - time this sliders properly according to what you hear in the music
all is nice xD

[Hard]
<3

No prob on other diffs~
LOVER's STAR!!!
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Hi~
Nice map~
No big things to pick out,just a little suggestion~
Set preview time at 00:44:719 as it in DJMAX?

[AL2e's DIF]
Add kiai time~

Others fine~
Star~
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
Fixed , al2e's dif wait him to mod~
Thanks all=]
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
Easy
00:29:823 (1,2,1) - like this
01:04:581 (1) - line this up with (2)

Normal
00:36:443 (1) - extend this slider to the white tick

ale2
00:09:339 (6) - make this 1/4 tick later
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
MANY MOD @.@ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok,,, I mod it ><

Teara :
- I think your point is not getting right >< Sorry, no.

Shulin :
- First, my IP name is want to call to AL2e10, but that is some problem that make it ........
So, I make my name to AL2e's DIF
- All fix without the break ><

Sushi971 :
I don't think it weird =3=

Lissette :
Fixed all without
00:16:167 (6) - move to the prev blue tick, remove one repeat and place a note here 00:16:788

Kytoxid :
Fixed

WyndII :
Fixed

kino77 :
FixedDownload: ND Lee - Lover (BS Style) (aesopl19193) [AL2e's DIF].osu


Download: ND Lee - Lover (BS Style) (aesopl19193) [AL2e's DIF].osu
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

ouranhshc wrote:

Easy
00:29:823 (1,2,1) - like this
01:04:581 (1) - line this up with (2)
Fixed~

Normal
00:36:443 (1) - extend this slider to the white tick
- No
Thanks =]
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