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ND Lee - Lover (BS Style)

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Teara
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Teara
Star for a great beatmap set

[Easy]

00:43:064 (1) - I really feel like long stacks should be avoided in easy diffs at all costs, since only new players tend to really play easy, and its hard to read if you are new.

Apart from that no problems! Good job.

[Normal]

Just a suggestion, feel free to ignore

SPOILER

Nice diff :3

[Hard]

00:19:064 (4) - New Combo?
00:48:857 (3) - ^

[AL2e's DIF]

00:22:374 (4,1) - jump that doesn't make sense? no tempo change, no extra beats, nothing, no reason to make a jump IMO.

01:02:305 (5) - new combo
01:08:926 (6) - ^

Interesting diff :3 some weird spacing

[Insane]

No problems! Great job
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
[quote="Teara"]Star for a great beatmap set

[Easy]

00:43:064 (1) - I really feel like long stacks should be avoided in easy diffs at all costs, since only new players tend to really play easy, and its hard to read if you are new.
It is changed =]

[Normal]

It is changed by following your advice =]

[Hard]

00:19:064 (4) - New Combo?
00:48:857 (3) - ^
-no

[AL2e's DIF]
waiting for him to mod his dif =]

Thanks for your mod ! ^^
lovescone
4 posts
Joined January 2010
lovescone
Good map :)

Star!
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- BG color to Black, all difficulties.
-- Could you resize "lover.png" to 800x600 or 1024x768 it would look better.
-- The Brown and sandy color blend in with the video, maybe make the colors stand out more?

Easy:

-- Map in soft like Normal it sounds better.

00:45:029 - Consider mapping this break.

Normal:

00:45:029 - Map this break?

Hard:

01:02:719 (8,1) - Make this a returning slider?

AL2e's DIF:

-- Why capital "A" and "L"? Shouldn't it be "al2e's Difficulty"?

00:47:201 (1) - Anti jump... respace?
00:53:822 (5,6,7,8) - Stack is difficulty to see because of the color.
00:58:167 - Odd break, map this?
01:10:788 - Ends in a weird place. Maybe map to the end?

Some of the jumps and spacing are difficult to read and predict, using a consistent distance snap for each jump would help, but it's doable so I guess it's ok.

Insane:

00:07:270 (3) - Too close.
00:42:546 (6) - Didn't like this, almost impossible to see, consider a different pattern?
00:45:029 - Map this? You did it in Hard. (Or for consistency I guess you could delete the mapped part of Hard.)
01:23:615 (1,2,3,4) - Huge jump.


Pretty nice maps, I like the video. ~ Star.
johnlaw
2 posts
Joined April 2009
johnlaw
多謝分享
希望盡快改善完成
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

Shulin wrote:

General
-- Could you resize "lover.png" to 800x600 or 1024x768 it would look better.
- I don't know how to do that .. I cannot cut it to 4:3 since it is 16:9...

Easy:
00:45:029 - Consider mapping this break.
-no

Normal:
00:45:029 - Map this break?
Mapped now ! =] can you try ?

Hard:
01:02:719 (8,1) - Make this a returning slider?
-no

AL2e's DIF:
wait him to mod~

Insane:
00:07:270 (3) - Too close.
-fixed
00:42:546 (6) - Didn't like this, almost impossible to see, consider a different pattern?
-no
00:45:029 - Map this? You did it in Hard. (Or for consistency I guess you could delete the mapped part of Hard.)
Mapped ! (I really don't want to follow vocal)
01:23:615 (1,2,3,4) - Huge jump.
-fixed (it is very huge now because there are 1/8 ...
Sushi
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Sushi
Make hitsounds louder.

[Easy]
00:28:167 (1,3) - Align? or unalign (2) and (4)

[Normal]
00:39:754 (1,2) - align?

[Hard]
00:43:064 (1,2,3,4) - symetry

[Al2e's]
The intro of this diff is... weird. timing of notes is weird, and the rhythm you create is weird. seems that you want to follow the back synth, but many notes are notes timed on in : result : a rhythm that sounds weird.
00:09:339 (6) - Sounds very very bad.
I hope all the unalignment were on purpose. i won't point them, but if they weren't, correct them.
01:01:477 (1) - Why new combo here?

[Insane]
00:44:926 (1) - Why new combo?
00:46:727 (TS) - I disapprove this almost silenced... silenced Timing Section. you can't even hear how you're doin it!
Lissette
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Lissette
Easy and Normal
Fine

Hard
00:44:512 - add an inherited timing section to change to soft sounds, 00:44:719 - use this one for the kiai time

Insane
00:04:995 - 00:14:719 - this part don't follow the music. imo, here are some suggestions of what yo can do to fit the music well:
00:05:201 (2) - move to the next blue tick
00:06:029 (1) - remove one repeat, and move to the next blue tick
00:07:580 (6) - remove
00:07:684 (6) - move to the next blue tick
00:09:339 (6) - same
00:12:649 (8) - remove one repeat, and move to the next blue tick
00:14:201 (5) - remove
00:14:304 (6) - move to the next blue tick
00:15:960 (4) - same
you can see if you like :)
00:48:029 - put this inherited timing section half beat earlier
01:23:097 (3) - move to the next white tick
01:23:304 (4) - remove
01:23:615 (1,2,3,4) - i found this combo to drastic O.O in you don't want to reduce the spacing, maybe put the prev combo more separated between them so the last combo can be more predictable

AL2e's DIF
you should put a spinner to variety scores
00:09:339 (6) - move to the next blue tick
00:10:684 (2,3,4,5,6) - (suggestion) (2) end point at 00:11:098, (3) move to the prev white tick, (5) remove
00:14:926 - add note
00:16:167 (6) - move to the prev blue tick, remove one repeat and place a note here 00:16:788
00:17:305 (3,4) - move to the next white tick, and add note here 00:17:615

Nice map, nice song :)
Star!
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

Lissette wrote:

Easy and Normal
Fine

Hard
00:44:512 - add an inherited timing section to change to soft sounds, 00:44:719 - use this one for the kiai time

Fixed , But ... why should I add it ? It has no problems it I do not change it...

Insane
00:04:995 - 00:14:719 - this part don't follow the music. imo, here are some suggestions of what yo can do to fit the music well:
00:05:201 (2) - move to the next blue tick
00:06:029 (1) - remove one repeat, and move to the next blue tick
00:07:580 (6) - remove
00:07:684 (6) - move to the next blue tick
00:09:339 (6) - same
00:12:649 (8) - remove one repeat, and move to the next blue tick
00:14:201 (5) - remove
00:14:304 (6) - move to the next blue tick
00:15:960 (4) - same

-Fixed =]
actually , When I mapping it session, I think that it will be too difficult and bad feeling if I just follow the music deadly.

you can see if you like :)
00:48:029 - put this inherited timing section half beat earlier

-Fixed , But why? It has no any problems if I do not change it?

01:23:097 (3) - move to the next white tick
01:23:304 (4) - remove
-no
01:23:615 (1,2,3,4) - i found this combo to drastic O.O in you don't want to reduce the spacing, maybe put the prev combo more separated between them so the last combo can be more predictable
-Fixed ~

AL2e's DIF
Wait him to mod~
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
Hi~


Nice map, nothing found, have a star!
Last edited by sesito71 , edited 1 time in total.
Kytoxid
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Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Remove the .osb.
Remove the audio track from the video.

00:48:029 - Start kiai here instead? It feels weird on Easy how you start kiai...right into a break.

[Easy]

00:57:133 (3,1) - I guess you could space these out a bit more. Not really necessary though.

Looks fine. :)

[Normal]

Hard to read, especially 00:38:098 (1,2,3,4); use more sliders there?

[Hard]

01:04:581 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Could be a lot neater.

[Al2e's DIF] (what's up with the capitalization here?)

I found the part before the first break really hard to read. (the doublets throughout the song were kinda weird, imo)

00:46:788 (8,1) - Mean antijump.

I recommend mapping this to the end; you're almost there.

[Insane]

00:44:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Please don't have this many silent notes in such a confusing rhythm.

Man, the harder the diffs got, the more confusing the rhythms became. XD Maybe it's the song, or maybe it was intentional. Star~
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
hii!!
[mod]

[Insane]
I love this map >w< <3

[AL2e's DIF]
00:08:512 (4,5,6) - time this sliders properly according to what you hear in the music
all is nice xD

[Hard]
<3

No prob on other diffs~
LOVER's STAR!!!
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Hi~
Nice map~
No big things to pick out,just a little suggestion~
Set preview time at 00:44:719 as it in DJMAX?

[AL2e's DIF]
Add kiai time~

Others fine~
Star~
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
Fixed , al2e's dif wait him to mod~
Thanks all=]
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
Easy
00:29:823 (1,2,1) - like this
01:04:581 (1) - line this up with (2)

Normal
00:36:443 (1) - extend this slider to the white tick

ale2
00:09:339 (6) - make this 1/4 tick later
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
MANY MOD @.@ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok,,, I mod it ><

Teara :
- I think your point is not getting right >< Sorry, no.

Shulin :
- First, my IP name is want to call to AL2e10, but that is some problem that make it ........
So, I make my name to AL2e's DIF
- All fix without the break ><

Sushi971 :
I don't think it weird =3=

Lissette :
Fixed all without
00:16:167 (6) - move to the prev blue tick, remove one repeat and place a note here 00:16:788

Kytoxid :
Fixed

WyndII :
Fixed

kino77 :
FixedDownload: ND Lee - Lover (BS Style) (aesopl19193) [AL2e's DIF].osu


Download: ND Lee - Lover (BS Style) (aesopl19193) [AL2e's DIF].osu
yeahyeahyeahhh
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Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

ouranhshc wrote:

Easy
00:29:823 (1,2,1) - like this
01:04:581 (1) - line this up with (2)
Fixed~

Normal
00:36:443 (1) - extend this slider to the white tick
- No
Thanks =]
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- Preview time on Al2e's Dif is different to the others, please change this.

Hard:

00:55:685 (6,7,8) - These stacks are a pain to read with the brown color, change the color or new combo or something.
01:10:374 (5,6,7,8) - Reduce the distance on this zig zag stream (or stack it), also maybe make it go vertically?
01:02:512 (7) - Up one square.
01:02:719 (8,1) - Throws the beat off too much imo, maybe just extend 8 to the same place as 1?
01:23:616 (5,6,7,8) - Reduce distance between circles, make it go horizontal?

Al2e's

00:04:995 - Remove the bookmark here.
00:56:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing, the jump at 2 is weird, the rest is an anti jump.

The rest is readable :D

Insane:

00:34:166 (8,9,10,11,12) - Oddly shaped stream.
00:41:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Confusing.
00:49:063 (7) - Spacing.
01:23:615 (1,2,3,4) - Jump is too big.

The rest is good, I still like the video :D
climbb65588
435 posts
Joined August 2008
climbb65588
I love this song and map!

I have made a taiko map, hope you like it. :)

Download: ND Lee - Lover (BS Style) (aesopl19193) [Climbb's Taiko].osu
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

climbb65588 wrote:

I love this song and map!

I have made a taiko map, hope you like it. :)
Added ! But I think your map is too hard ..Orz
Could you make it easier ?
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
Add "climbb65588" and "climbb" into the tags.

[Al2e's DIF]
"Al2e's DIF"? Shouldn't it be "AL2e's DIFFICULTY", or at least "AL2e's DIFF"?
"DIF" is pretty weird :P
00:19:270 (4) - Move a bit down?
[00:58:167] - Break in strange place. Please map this part.

[Insane]
00:42:132 (4) - New combo please.

+star
aesopl19193
572 posts
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Topic Starter
aesopl19193
Add "climbb65588" and "climbb" into the tags.
added clumbb65588

[Al2e's DIF]
"Al2e's DIF"? Shouldn't it be "AL2e's DIFFICULTY", or at least "AL2e's DIFF"?
"DIF" is pretty weird :P
00:19:270 (4) - Move a bit down?
[00:58:167] - Break in strange place. Please map this part.
He said : no ~

[Insane]
00:42:132 (4) - New combo please.
-no

Thanks for your mod =]
Zerostarry
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Here since the beginning
Zerostarry
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
aesopl19193
572 posts
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Topic Starter
aesopl19193

Zerostarry wrote:

It's all good, but I think Insane is a bit overmapped...I also don't know what the policy is on Taiko maps.. i'll clear that up soon.

Star though.
Thanks =]

But I think Insane is playable ..
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
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James2250
delete osb file in folder and do full submit
audio on the maps seemed pretty low in general (on the notes) might want to go through all of them and check that...maybe im just deaf

easy:
seems fine

normal:
seems fine

hard:
seems fine

AL2e:
01:21:132 (1) - I would separate start and end point slightly more..

taiko:
meh what do I know about taiko..

insane:
seems fine

Apart from I don't like the volume it all looks pretty good to me
(might want to get a MAT to pubble that knows the taiko map is ok) >_>
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
needs taiko mod?
(underlined is important to me, and gray is not important.)

Climbb's Taiko
-Difficulty? Since it's Oni, it is hard for most of players. and I think this worth ★X8(or 9, but I think it's better to be 8), and that means this map is somewhat hard. (at least I could fc...)
-Patterns seems nice. But sometimes it's better to use slightly repetitive pattern.
-Using D/K is kinda irregular. (ex)Compare 00:21:546 (111) & 00:23:201 (122) with 00:26:512 (144) & 00:28:167 (153)) It doesn't need to be regular, but sometimes using D/K regularly can be better.
-00:07:477 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - K->k or dkkkd K d -> dkk K kkd or something like that.

It seems there's no critical part to fix.

Nice taiko map. star~
Sushi
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2,989 posts
Joined October 2008
Sushi
Modded on IRC :
SPOILER
11:08 To aesopl19193: : Normal
11:08 To aesopl19193: : 00:45:546 (2,3,4) - i hope this wasn't supposed to be symetric
11:08 To aesopl19193: : 00:51:754 (2,3) -  (suggestion) align?
11:10 From aesopl19193: : sorry I don't know what is mean by symetric ... (Sorry for my poor English but I can't find it in 
11:10 From aesopl19193: : dictionary
11:10 To aesopl19193: : hurr...
11:10 To aesopl19193: : wait, let's see if google knows
11:11 To aesopl19193: : i don't know if this is the right word
11:11 To aesopl19193: : 对称性
11:11 From aesopl19193: : Oh thx =]
11:11 To aesopl19193: : so, talking about symetry
11:11 To aesopl19193: : in Hard
11:11 To aesopl19193: : 00:43:064 (1,2,3,4) - symetry
11:15 From aesopl19193: : yes it is symetry
11:15 To aesopl19193: : make it more symetric, i mean
11:16 To aesopl19193: : in Al2e's diff
11:16 From aesopl19193: : I see your point , but... how can I do that ? increase distance snap?
11:16 To aesopl19193: : no, no, just ignore distance snap for symetry issues
11:17 To aesopl19193: : then just verify the position of the notes by using CTRL+H or CTRL+J
11:17 To aesopl19193: : so, i was saying
11:17 To aesopl19193: : in Al2e's diff
11:17 To aesopl19193: : 01:21:132 (1) -  we don't know where this slider will start, but I think it's good
11:19 From aesopl19193: : oh
11:20 From aesopl19193: : so I don't need to change it , right ?
11:20 To aesopl19193: : i think it's ok, let it as it is
11:20 From aesopl19193: : ok =]
11:23 To aesopl19193: : taiko diff is okay~
11:23 To aesopl19193: : delete .osb file and full submit
11:23 From aesopl19193: : oic~
11:23 From aesopl19193: : I did it ...
11:23 To aesopl19193: : :o
11:23 To aesopl19193: : i may have an old version, my bad
11:23 To aesopl19193: : oh yeah, I already moded that
11:24 From aesopl19193: : yes I know =]
11:24 To aesopl19193: : okay, you win your pubble

You got a pubble, Bro~
aesopl19193
572 posts
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Topic Starter
aesopl19193
Thanks !!><
happy30
Featured Artist
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happy30
nice map :D

star
Andrea
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Andrea
[Easy]

00:18:236 (1) - Add a finish.
00:48:030 (1) - Start kiai on this slider. Much better.

[Normal]

00:18:236 (1) - Same as easy.
00:48:030 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:18:236 (1) - Same as easy.
00:48:030 (1) - ^

[AL2e's DIF]

Why different kiai here? I suggest to use the same.

01:21:132 (1) - Slider start is hard to read. Make it more noticeable.

[Climbb's Taiko]

00:48:029 (94) - Start kiai time here.

[Insane]

00:48:029 (1) - Start kiai time here, too.
01:23:615 (1,2,3,4) - Wrong spacing and too evil, IMO.

EDIT: Looks good now! Bubbled~
ztrot
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ztrot
Diff spread is bonkers you have 4 Insane diffs. Remove one or make one easier.
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193

ztrot wrote:

Diff spread is bonkers you have 4 Insane diffs. Remove one or make one easier.
0.0...
deepsea
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855 posts
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deepsea

ztrot wrote:

Diff spread is bonkers you have 4 Insane diffs. Remove one or make one easier.
Seriously [Hard] is much easier than Al2's dif and Insane, if you really play the map.


Also, [Hard] , I don't like distance between 00:31:06(7) and 00:31:47(1) that much.

other than that it's all good for me, have a star.
aesopl19193
572 posts
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Topic Starter
aesopl19193

deepsea wrote:

ztrot wrote:

Diff spread is bonkers you have 4 Insane diffs. Remove one or make one easier.
Seriously [Hard] is much easier than Al2's dif and Insane, if you really play the map.


Also, [Hard] , I don't like distance between 00:31:06(7) and 00:31:47(1) that much.

other than that it's all good for me, have a star.
Fixed~
Thanks for your star =)
xierbaliti
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maxlaka
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maxlaka
star. <<<
NOIR-MADLAX
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NOIR-MADLAX
i like your map :) star
DJNightmare
882 posts
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DJNightmare
Starred!
Keep working on it =3
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Come on~!
aesopl19193
572 posts
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aesopl19193
I gave up to find BAT. :o
KanaRin
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KanaRin
STAR~~
henry912
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henry912
GIVE YOU~
matthewhln
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matthewhln
don't give up
kino77
909 posts
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kino77
Don't give up~!
The map is soooo good~!
aesopl19193
572 posts
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aesopl19193

kino77 wrote:

Don't give up~!
The map is soooo good~!
:(
DJNightmare
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DJNightmare
THIS HAS GOTTA BE RANKED U KNOW
Kudosu Star! =D
al2e10
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咁耐都未rank真係想講粗口=.=
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193
:(
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