This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 22 December 2016 at 06:51:59

Artist: P*Light
Title: YELLOW SPLASH!!
Source: REFLEC BEAT groovin'!!
Tags: pending cup konami bemani plus MUSIC PACK 67
BPM: 185
Filesize: 3385kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:

1. FUTSUU!! (2.23 stars, 290 notes)
2. INNER ONI!! (6.26 stars, 849 notes)
3. KANTAN!! (1.47 stars, 163 notes)
4. MUZUKASHII!! (3.05 stars, 453 notes)
5. ONI!! (4.31 stars, 613 notes)

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CIPRATAN KENCINK!!!

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nice badge, man

>Seng utama
* HP neng low diff karo high diffne mavokkk. ubah muzu sama oni HP 6, si Inner 5

>Inner
* 00:02:221 - iki kan nada utama, mending seng neng tick biru kui geser neng kene wae.. soale jelas banget suarane. 00:07:330 - tor iki iso di keep soale wes rame pengiring musike
* 00:09:519 (41,42,43,44) - nopo ra dkdk? soale jelas2 si snare suarane ngono, neng pola selanjutne wes ono seng pas kok anggo kdkkddk
* 00:14:546 (92,93) - swap, 00:14:870 - kat iki? seng 3plet kui nadane podo kabeh, 94 kui nada tinggi
* seko 00:11:951 - kene kok karo iki 00:17:140 - bedo polane? di gawe podo lah
* 00:20:384 (1,2,3,4) - mending iki di gawe kkkd, sense to vibration pls. 00:20:546 - nada ne iki smoth
* kalau seng duwor di applied, 00:20:627 (5,6) - swap iki ben 00:20:708 - iki entok penekanane
* 00:24:762 (40,41,42,43,44) - nah iki bener, sebelumne malah kkd k d kwkwkw
* 00:33:113 - anjer kurang gawean, gaya2 anggo suara whisTLER :V
* 00:41:140 - wohhggggggggggggg!?!?!??! anjer, 00:41:357 (117,118) - save us from this horrible FLYING PAN, SO SPoky. *delet wae, ben neken xxxx 1/6 sebagai pola taikotok. 00:41:627 (120,121,122,123) - had 4 notes too. mirror but different snap ww
* 00:42:600 (127,128) - pilih mana yang mau dikasih kat, finisher atau yang biasa, mending yang biasa. 00:42:438 (126,127) - nadane podo
* 00:47:789 - don buat beatnya? 00:47:465 (165,166) - biar nadanya keteken
* 00:59:140 (3,4) - swap biar flow dari vokal/musiknya maknyus, kdkdk ga ngeh.. (ga ada nada yg sama di katnya kalau kdkdk)
* 01:00:357 (2,3) - swap? sinkron nih sama vokal di katnya, sama 01:00:438 (3,4) - ni nada
* 01:02:140 - hapus tu 2 not, nadanya cuma ini orz
* 01:17:951 - N I S H I T MAPPER CONFIRMED!
* 01:22:167 - sperti di 2nd point
* 01:33:032 (94,95,96,97,98,99) - ples.. I felt this dem, kkkd d k pls
good diff, no eek!

>Oni chan
* 00:02:221 - a
* 00:04:816 - b
* 00:10:573 (11) - delete, kepanjangan buat oni dan drumnya samar. ya kali masih deket kek Inner cuma 1 not aja yg beda -.-
* 00:14:384 (37,38,39,40,41) - ye
* 00:15:357 (43,44) - swap, 00:15:519 - atau kat ini biar jari tengah nangis >:3
* 00:19:735 (73,74,75) - warnanya mirror
* 00:21:276 - delete? 00:20:870 (83,84,85,86) - this enough for dijah dijah yellow
* 00:25:735 (114,115) - gimana?
* 00:30:681 - delete aaaa
* 00:41:059 - ye, 00:40:816 (59,60,61) - biar keteken sama main nadanya itu
* 00:47:789 - kek di Inner
* deket akhir kiai.. kok ngeri amat, panjang2... polanya...?
* 01:33:924 - ;w; .. karna ini masih mirip kek di Inner, jadi reduce ya...
* 01:43:330 - e
pola2nya masih ngeri bener..

>Mizuki
* 00:10:411 - please...
* 00:20:870 - tambahin kat ga? soalnya oni rada panjang.. jauh sih sprid dsini
* 00:31:248 (102,103,104,105,106,107) - rip, tick biru kanan di delete lah, di Oni mirip polanya ( bukan warna pls.. )
* 01:00:438 - dlt
* 01:12:032 - this
* 01:22:816 - hmm?
* 01:33:599 (8,11) - same on 3rd point
panjang panjang.. kek anu...

>Footshoe
* nice diff!

>Katana Ketan (cintailah, froduk foroduk Indonesia desuhh. *K E T A N)
* Good Luck!!

hi!!! M4M req oo


[Kantan]

- mmm add this note 00:05:140 (3) - k cuz in that part can be better add one note :^) following the piano sound, and is better open to next couple of notes
- add finish here 00:16:816 (20) - can be better for that stong sound
- change to k 00:18:113 (21) - is better trust me i'm not a hentai mapper yet
- add a k here 00:21:681 (29) - for CLAP! sound
- you can add two kats here 00:33:032 (49) - and here 00:34:330 (51) - i guess, sounds good but... is kantan so idk if is possible add this two notes
- add k here too 00:42:438 (65) - for CLAP! sound :3
- add finisher 00:42:762 (66) -
- change to d 00:55:735 (88) - sounds better and follow the patter d d d
- add finisher 01:03:519 (101) -
- change to K 01:34:654 (1) - yes a K!

is good but... idk i feel some parts needs more notes but can be futsu if you add too much notes so XD it's perfec (Y)

[Futsuu]

- move this 00:10:816 (17) - to 00:10:492 (16) - (Y) is good
- FINISHER!!!!!!!!! 00:11:627 (20) -
- same has before 00:42:438 (112) - add k for CLAP!! sound
- FINISH! 00:42:762 (113) -
- add k 01:03:194 (181) - CLAP :3
- add k 01:44:708 (47) - cuz ... CLAP!! xD

well clap sound is too asfjahsj to map right? :C

[Muzukashii]

- 00:11:627 (12) - fi fi finisher

yep only that this idff looks AWEASOME !

[Oni]

- here add this 00:03:681 (11) - and move this 00:03:357 (9) - to 00:03:438 (9) - and put this note here 00:03:276 (9) - k :3 sounds better and follow the music
- add k here 00:41:951 (68) - this can help the next k d d
- add finish 00:42:438 (70) -

woah... this is 10/10 bru :O is pretty fun xD

[Inner Oni]

this one is fine for me... is fun the notes are 10/10 and the spread is too good xD

GL ranking this great song dude :B

Surono wrote:

CIPRATAN KENCINK!!!

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nice badge, man

>Seng utama
* HP neng low diff karo high diffne mavokkk. ubah muzu sama oni HP 6, si Inner 5

>Inner
* 00:02:221 - iki kan nada utama, mending seng neng tick biru kui geser neng kene wae.. soale jelas banget suarane. 00:07:330 - tor iki iso di keep soale wes rame pengiring musike ngga, jelas jelas instrumennya di 00:02:140 -
* 00:09:519 (41,42,43,44) - nopo ra dkdk? soale jelas2 si snare suarane ngono, neng pola selanjutne wes ono seng pas kok anggo kdkkddk karena di tangan gw enakan kdkk
* 00:14:546 (92,93) - swap, 00:14:870 - kat iki? seng 3plet kui nadane podo kabeh, 94 kui nada tinggi yang bagian depan emang agak beda. tadinya mau bikin kkk juga tapi rasanya gak pas sama pattern2 sbelumnya. smoga perasaan ini tidak menipu
* seko 00:11:951 - kene kok karo iki 00:17:140 - bedo polane? di gawe podo lah yang bagian kedua buat persiapan masuk stream panjang.
* 00:20:384 (1,2,3,4) - mending iki di gawe kkkd, sense to vibration pls. 00:20:546 - nada ne iki smoth biar akhirannya konsisten dengan 00:20:870 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - dan menurut gw flownya lebih enak kddk. tapi bisa jadi pertimbangan
* kalau seng duwor di applied, 00:20:627 (5,6) - swap iki ben 00:20:708 - iki entok penekanane
* 00:24:762 (40,41,42,43,44) - nah iki bener, sebelumne malah kkd k d kwkwkw karena ada suara vokal yang kayak kejepit pintu disini, sebelumnya cuma musik
* 00:33:113 - anjer kurang gawean, gaya2 anggo suara whisTLER :V
* 00:41:140 - wohhggggggggggggg!?!?!??! anjer, 00:41:357 (117,118) - save us from this horrible FLYING PAN, SO SPoky. *delet wae, ben neken xxxx 1/6 sebagai pola taikotok. 00:41:627 (120,121,122,123) - had 4 notes too. mirror but different snap ww justru malah kagok kalo 1/6 nya gak diselesaikan sampai akhir.
* 00:42:600 (127,128) - pilih mana yang mau dikasih kat, finisher atau yang biasa, mending yang biasa. 00:42:438 (126,127) - nadane podo yang biasa saja
* 00:47:789 - don buat beatnya? 00:47:465 (165,166) - biar nadanya keteken suara perkusinya masih sama dengan sebelumnya
* 00:59:140 (3,4) - swap biar flow dari vokal/musiknya maknyus, kdkdk ga ngeh.. (ga ada nada yg sama di katnya kalau kdkdk) disimpan dulu untuk pertimbangan
* 01:00:357 (2,3) - swap? sinkron nih sama vokal di katnya, sama 01:00:438 (3,4) - ni nada
* 01:02:140 - hapus tu 2 not, nadanya cuma ini orz buat suara synth-nya
* 01:17:951 - N I S H I T MAPPER CONFIRMED!
* 01:22:167 - sperti di 2nd point
* 01:33:032 (94,95,96,97,98,99) - ples.. I felt this dem, kkkd d k pls
good diff, no eek!

>Oni chan
* 00:02:221 - a
* 00:04:816 - b
* 00:10:573 (11) - delete, kepanjangan buat oni dan drumnya samar. ya kali masih deket kek Inner cuma 1 not aja yg beda -.- fixed
* 00:14:384 (37,38,39,40,41) - ye
* 00:15:357 (43,44) - swap, 00:15:519 - atau kat ini biar jari tengah nangis >:3 changed to k *nangis*
* 00:19:735 (73,74,75) - warnanya mirror
* 00:21:276 - delete? 00:20:870 (83,84,85,86) - this enough for dijah dijah yellow no
* 00:25:735 (114,115) - gimana? changed to k
* 00:30:681 - delete aaaa b
* 00:41:059 - ye, 00:40:816 (59,60,61) - biar keteken sama main nadanya itu
* 00:47:789 - kek di Inner
* deket akhir kiai.. kok ngeri amat, panjang2... polanya...?
* 01:33:924 - ;w; .. karna ini masih mirip kek di Inner, jadi reduce ya...
* 01:43:330 - e
pola2nya masih ngeri bener.. reduced some. rip 4.44 star

>Mizuki
* 00:10:411 - please... this is allowed
* 00:20:870 - tambahin kat ga? soalnya oni rada panjang.. jauh sih sprid dsini added
* 00:31:248 (102,103,104,105,106,107) - rip, tick biru kanan di delete lah, di Oni mirip polanya ( bukan warna pls.. )
* 01:00:438 - dlt
* 01:12:032 - this
* 01:22:816 - hmm?
* 01:33:599 (8,11) - same on 3rd point
panjang panjang.. kek anu... revised some long pattern.

>Footshoe
* nice diff!

>Katana Ketan (cintailah, froduk foroduk Indonesia desuhh. *K E T A N)
* Good Luck!!

tyty

[_Chichinya_] wrote:

hi!!! M4M req oo


[Kantan]

- mmm add this note 00:05:140 (3) - k cuz in that part can be better add one note :^) following the piano sound, and is better open to next couple of notes it is the same part as 00:02:546 - so better leave it empty
- add finish here 00:16:816 (20) - can be better for that stong sound still considering
- change to k 00:18:113 (21) - is better trust me i'm not a hentai mapper yet fixed
- add a k here 00:21:681 (29) - for CLAP! sound might be too complex for kantan
- you can add two kats here 00:33:032 (49) - and here 00:34:330 (51) - i guess, sounds good but... is kantan so idk if is possible add this two notes not changed
- add k here too 00:42:438 (65) - for CLAP! sound :3 same as 00:21:681
- add finisher 00:42:762 (66) - fixed
- change to d 00:55:735 (88) - sounds better and follow the patter d d d
- add finisher 01:03:519 (101) - fixed
- change to K 01:34:654 (1) - yes a K! retained for consistency with 00:22:005 -

is good but... idk i feel some parts needs more notes but can be futsu if you add too much notes so XD it's perfec (Y)
next time you can delete the combo number in the timestamp as it might leads to another note c:

[Futsuu]

- move this 00:10:816 (17) - to 00:10:492 (16) - (Y) is good nice
- FINISHER!!!!!!!!! 00:11:627 (20) - still considering because it's neither weak nor strong
- same has before 00:42:438 (112) - add k for CLAP!! sound added
- FINISH! 00:42:762 (113) -
- add k 01:03:194 (181) - CLAP :3
- add k 01:44:708 (47) - cuz ... CLAP!! xD

well clap sound is too asfjahsj to map right? :C

[Muzukashii]

- 00:11:627 (12) - fi fi finisher

yep only that this idff looks AWEASOME !

[Oni]

- here add this 00:03:681 (11) - and move this 00:03:357 (9) - to 00:03:438 (9) - and put this note here 00:03:276 (9) - k :3 sounds better and follow the music might be too dense, and i prefer to follow the instrument solely
- add k here 00:41:951 (68) - this can help the next k d d a longer rest here is intended because of the long sequences before
- add finish 00:42:438 (70) - hmm..no

woah... this is 10/10 bru :O is pretty fun xD

[Inner Oni]

this one is fine for me... is fun the notes are 10/10 and the spread is too good xD

GL ranking this great song dude :B

thanks for mod

Heya, random mod

1. Not sure if so much kiai time is a good idea, yes the song is kind of intense all the way through but I think you could use it better in connection with the higher note density at the end of the song only from 01:26:870 to 01:45:032 and remove the other two kiai times.

Good luck

[Kantan]

those are minor suggestions not crucial

00:40:816 (58) - kat
01:05:465 (98) - don
01:22:654 (117) - delete and add a kat at 01:22:324
01:45:033 (19) - add Finish

[Futsuu]

00:28:654 - add a kat, sync with synth
00:35:789 (92) - kat
01:19:086 (223) - replace with spinner
01:41:303 - add a kat
01:43:248 - add a don

[Muzu]

00:05:627 (12) - move to 00:05:465
00:14:221 (21,22,23,24) - (d ddd k d)
00:19:411 (44,45,46,47,48) - (k ddd k d)
00:20:465 (50) - delete, sync with synth

[Oni]

01:00:762 (55,56,57) - d k
01:01:573 (62,63) - kkd

[Inner Oni]

00:32:059 - add a kat, sync with sampling voice
00:33:519 (37) - better delete

snowball112 wrote:

Heya, random mod

1. Not sure if so much kiai time is a good idea, yes the song is kind of intense all the way through but I think you could use it better in connection with the higher note density at the end of the song only from 01:26:870 to 01:45:032 and remove the other two kiai times it's fine.

Kantan

1. I think it would sound and transition better to the next part if you move 00:11:303 (10) to 00:10:654 and change to d for the drums and then change 00:11:627 (11) to D to make it similar to 00:22:005 (28). fixed
2. I think 00:16:167 (18,19) - ctrl+g would sound better for the high sound here, 00:16:167 is lower. retained to make the end of sequence as d to have consistency with next sequence
3. 00:20:384 (25,26) ctrl+g and 00:21:357 k as well, you have fairly strong sounds here in the music. no change to make it consistent with other diffs
4. You may want to remove 00:30:762 for better emphasis of the 3k starting at 00:31:086, also the density is relatively high otherwise. fixed
5. I think you could remove the note at 00:39:519, it feels nicer for structure in this part. nope, the intensity is increasing
6. I think you could change both 00:36:924 and 00:40:816 to k for better emphasis of the high sounds here. only change 00:40:816 - , because 00:36:924 has same sound with 00:36:276 (50,51) -
7. 00:44:059 (62,63,64) and 00:49:248 (71,72,73) have the same sounds, so I think you should use similar patterns. How about 00:44:059 (62,63,64) ddk and then 00:45:357 (65,66,67,68,69,70) d k d kdk? I feel like the sounds on 00:46:005 (66,68) are stronger than those on 00:45:357 (65,67), and kdk at the end would be nice for emphasis of the strong sound on 00:47:951. changed in alternative way
8. How about having 00:51:519 (76,77) as dK and 00:53:140 D? not changed
9. Not sure why there is a note on 00:54:113 if you have a fairly strong long sound starting at 00:53:789, I'd suggest you move this note to 00:54:762 instead. I also think 00:55:735 would sound better as d for better emphasis of the use of k around this note. retained to follow the bg vocal
10. I think the whole part from 00:58:330 to 01:02:221 would sound better if you do something similar to what I recommended for the part of 00:37:573, but in reverse. In contrast to that part, there is an additional high sound on 00:58:330 (88,89) for example, so I think it would be better if you: ctrl+g 00:57:681 (87,88) and then remove the note on 01:00:276 and change 00:59:627 to k as well for better emphasis of this. Lastly, you could make 01:00:924 (91,92,93,94,95) kkddk in contrast to the ddkkd from before and give your map some better overall structure imo. You should end up with d k k kkddk starting from 00:57:681. only swapped 00:57:681 (87,88)
11. I feel like you could change 01:08:059 to d, the sounds here are slightly lower than in the 3-note 2/1 patterns around it, and I think this would be more interesting than three dkd patterns after each other. fixed
12. I think it would sound better if you remove 01:23:303 and ctrl+g 01:23:627 (119,120), it feels like the stronger finish is on 01:24:276. no

Futsuu

1. How about 00:10:978 k and remove 00:11:303 and put a finish on 00:11:627? I think this would help to transition to the next part of the song. retained for better spread with muzu (only add finish)
2. I think it would sound much better if you move 00:16:167 to 00:16:330 and then have 00:15:843 (33,34,35,36,37) as dk kd k for better emphasis of the claps and the strong sound on the last note of this pattern. moved but change to dkd for more simple patterm
3. Maybe try 00:13:573 d, the strong claps are on the two notes after this one, so I think dkk would fit better. You could also remove 00:13:248 for some more generous spacing. no change, the claps are same imo
4. 00:22:005 - Add finish? Would sound nice for transition to the new part. fixed

Muzukashii

1. I think it would sound much better if stuff like 00:20:708 (52,53,54,55,56) is kdkdk for emphasis of the claps and higher sounds on the white ticks. dkdkd is fine for the drum in white tick
2. Maybe 00:14:546 k? I think it would work nicely to have kkd dkk here no, dkd can also fits with the instrument
3. I think 00:19:411 (44,45,46,47,48) would sound better as ddkkd to keep the 1/1 dkdk structure in this part.not sounds good to me

Oni

1. The beginning of this diff kind of bothers me, I think you should move 00:02:140 to 00:02:221 and 00:04:735 to 00:04:816 to follow the stronger sounds OR change 00:01:897 and 00:04:492 to d to make it clear that you're following the background instrument here. Background instrument lands on the blue tick, the strong high sounds on the white if you listen carefully. Similar with Inner Oni. no change, i prefer to use k as primary color. also i think it is obvious that the sound is in blue tick
2. How about 00:13:735 (31,32,33,34) as kkdk? I think this works better to spread emphasis on the strong sound of 00:14:221 better, 00:14:059 feels lower in my opinion. Similar with 00:18:924 (65,66,67,68) etc. current color can emphasis the clap better

Good luck

thank you for mod

Nyan wrote:

[Kantan]

those are minor suggestions not crucial

00:40:816 (58) - kat yes
01:05:465 (98) - don no, changed 01:08:059 - instead
01:22:654 (117) - delete and add a kat at 01:22:324 nice
01:45:033 (19) - add Finish fixed

[Futsuu]

00:28:654 - add a kat, sync with synth keep for simplicity
00:35:789 (92) - kat no
01:19:086 (223) - replace with spinner ok
01:41:303 - add a kat keep
01:43:248 - add a don ^

[Muzu]

00:05:627 (12) - move to 00:05:465 hmm no
00:14:221 (21,22,23,24) - (d ddd k d) not changed for better spread with futsuu
00:19:411 (44,45,46,47,48) - (k ddd k d) ^
00:20:465 (50) - delete, sync with synth ^

[Oni]

01:00:762 (55,56,57) - d k fixed
01:01:573 (62,63) - kkd
fixed

[Inner Oni]

00:32:059 - add a kat, sync with sampling voice keep to just follow the woob woob sound
00:33:519 (37) - better delete keep

thank you for mod

Hi, from my mod queue.

d = don, red note
k = kat, blue note
D = don finisher, big red note
K = kat finisher, big blue note


Hope it helps

Invective wrote:

Hi, from my mod queue.

d = don, red note
k = kat, blue note
D = don finisher, big red note
K = kat finisher, big blue note

mod

General
Toggle off Widescreen Support in the lower diffs? It's already done in Inner Oni. fixed

Kantan
00:20:708 - This little bit here is mapped differently to similar sections in the rest of the song (for example 00:31:086 and 01:33:357 and the end of the song which all use 3 k's). Make them consistent? In other difficulties you followed an ABAB pattern with regards to how you mapped these 4 sections. fixed. good catch

Futsuu
00:27:843 - I think the notes in their current positions sound weird. If you take 00:27:843 (71) it's the first beat in a 'group' (idk what to call it) of two, where as 00:28:816 (73,74) have both been mapped to the second beat of each of their 'groups' and imo it sounds off. Maybe move both 00:28:816 (73,74) back a 1/2 tick? no change, 00:28:330 - have a strong beat while the other following a simple beat so the position is ok
01:40:492 - Same idea as above if you make that change. same as above

Muzukashii
00:07:492 (17) - I'm guessing this should go on the following red tick and not the blue tick it's on right now. my bad. fixed
00:13:573 (19) - Change to d to match 00:18:762 (42) ? fixed

Oni
00:14:546 (37) - Change to k? Given it's a repeated note, I think kkk fits better than kkd unless you were partially following drums. Other sections in the song use k here too, like 00:24:924 (108), the start of the last kiai and 01:37:573 (23). yeah, i'm partially following drum in the kiai while in other section following pure repeated sound. variation is nice
00:16:816 (52) - Change to k? You seem to start most of these sections/phrases with k (for example 00:11:627 (18) and 00:22:005 (89) and 00:27:194 (124) use k). nope, it is the same with 01:29:465 - d will give more emphasis after the previous k

Nice set

Hope it helps

thanks for mod! it helps

　

Hi, this is my part of m4m, sorry for the lateness

[General]

1. Make the spinner start at the same part for all the diffs (Futsuu and above). You have the spinner at 01:19:086 (1) - on Futsuu, but then it starts half a beat later in Muzu and it apparently goes back 1/4 of a beat in the hardest diffs. Not very neat.
2. yes I can see these things c:
3. You can add the full name of 'REFLEC BEAT plus' to tags if you want, though remove 'MUSIC PACK 67' from tags, there's no point having it in tags of a song (that's not part of the game name, it just says which music pack you have to buy from KONAMI's overpriced shop to get the song).
4. Diff gap between Muzu and Oni is slightly larger than what would be ideal spread, though you can probably just ignore that as star rating isn't always best for gauging actual difficulty.

[KANTAN!!]

1. This is my opinion but I think the finishers are placed unjustly. For example, based on your logic of a heavy sound at points like 00:06:438 (3) - and 00:07:735 (4) - , shouldn't notes such as 00:16:816 (21) - and 00:18:113 (22) - have them as well?
2. 00:25:897 (35) - Why not just use red note here? I think 00:25:248 (34,35,36) - are similar sounding enough that they can just be monocolour for a Kantan diff, not to mention that it would emphasise these: 00:24:600 (32,33) - more.
3. 00:45:357 (65) - Maybe use red note here as well, it sounds similar to 00:46:005 (66) - .
4. 00:47:951 (72) - Probably could add a finisher here like you have done on 00:42:762 (63) - , these both have pitch changing in the music (can't describe it well so feel free to decline if you don't accept it)
5. 00:53:140 (80) - Add a finisher here? You're even starting a new kiai here, so I think it would be good to show this part as a new section.
6. 01:21:681 (118) - I would say a finish here is unnecessary, it would emphasise 01:22:978 (120,121,122) - these more (and some other reason which I can't really describe well w)
7. 01:25:248 (124) - Move this 1/2 of a beat 01:25:411 , I know you can really put one note here for kantan but I still think it's more suited to be put on the second beat.

[FUTSUU!!]

1. 00:16:816 (37) - Why is this note kat? It's a don note in every other diff.
2. 00:34:167 - What about adding a kat here and change 00:33:681 (86) - to don? I think this section would make it contrast well with 00:32:384 (83,84,85) - .
3. 00:53:140 (148) - Similar with kantan.
4. This is just a general statement and I do understand that you were trying to put some variation into the map here, but I don't understand the choice of not putting any beats on the solid white lines in the section from 00:53:140 (148) - to 00:57:357 (162) - . It just sounds a bit strange and awkward to play for the player. I would say either fill the gaps in or do something similar to the previous kiai.
5. 01:14:546 (212,214) - These could probably just be left as don note since they have similar background sounds to 01:13:897 (211,213) - .

[MUZUKASHII!!]

1. 00:16:816 (34) - Starting to think that you could add a finisher here for flow (and maybe to the previous easier diffs as well).
2. 00:35:951 (14,15,16) - I would suggest a triple kat pattern here, these sound more similar to the previous two 1/2 kats in my opinion. Triple-don notes sound a bit flat here imo.
3. 00:45:194 (58,59) - I'd suggest swapping these two and changing 00:45:681 (60) - to a kat, it *just* makes use of the synthesised sounds better.
4. 00:50:384 (81,82,83) - Same here.
5. 01:05:140 - y u no put note here ;w;
6. 01:27:843 (26,27) - I would swap these, to make it sound more unique compared to 01:26:870 (20,21) - .

[ONI!!]

1. Increase HP drain to 6 or something, 5 is too Muzu like and easy imo
2. 00:15:194 (40,41) - Maybe swap these two, I think it's better for flow (even if you say don-kat because of music pitch or something).
3. 00:16:816 (52) - Same as Muzu
4. 00:47:789 (95,96) - Swap these two, I think in this case it's better to follow pitch.
5. 01:38:222 (26,27) - Same as the first suggestion for Oni diff.

[INNER ONI!!]

1. Increase HP drain to 6, 4 makes it too easy to pass imo (I basically didn't press anything whenever I saw 1/6 or a stream longer than a few notes and I still passed it)
2. 00:41:140 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - Maybe you can change the first note or first three of this 1/6 to dons instead, this entire sound effect sounds more like it increases in pitch.
3. 00:47:789 (167) - Change this to a don note, I think with having three kats before 00:47:951 (168) - this finisher becomes very forced to play, and it doesn't really match well (won't consider the fact that only your Inner Oni diff has a finisher here).
4. 00:49:248 (177,178,179,180,181) - This pattern feels a bit forced to play, not sure what you're trying to match in the music here to be honest.
5. 01:13:573 (18,19,20,21) - Probably unnecessary to have four kat notes to lead into the finisher note there, you don't even have anything mapped before the finisher in your easier diffs. Just a simple note or two here would suffice.

That's all, good luck and I hope my mod was worth the wait lol

ur sikc meme pict on uzerpaeg pls, FlyingPan xd

btw, si Nyen modnya sampe skarang pun masih best ya om kkwkwkw

I'm so sorry for late.

[KANTAN!!]

1. 00:09:032 (7,8,9,10,11) - It would be more fit the music that using K d kkd.
2. 00:20:384 (27) - Although it is kiai time, this is starting part and similar to 00:29:789. removing this note would be more better feeling for all.

[FUTSUU!!]

1. 00:16:816 (37) - It was d on other difficulties. it should be changed for consistency imo.
2. 00:47:140 (128) - It is awkward to hear. how about moving to 00:47:465?
3. 00:54:438 - 00:57:032 - Why are there no notes? it may makes people is confused by empty feeling. you should have removed other notes if you want little break.
4. 01:26:546 (12) - I think it would be not bad removing this note.

[MUZUKASHII!!]

1. 00:31:573 (101,102,103) - It's not bad idea using kkk on here. actually this sound is similar as prev and higher than around.
2. 00:36:276 (17,18,19,20,21) - It seems to be mapped in reverse order. i think kdkdk would be more fit the music.
3. 00:55:086 (10) - 01:00:276 (35) - Move by 1/2 forward to follow melody.
4. 01:05:140 - 01:07:735 - 01:10:330 - Empty feeling Dx
5. 01:26:870 (20) - Add finish?

[ONI!!]

1. As said by -[ Dumpling ]-, some people may feel diff gap between Muzu and Oni. because some streams make it seems to be a little high density compared to Muzukashii. probably you better reduce density a little just in case.
2. 01:19:167 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5828421 there is no problem to play but it looks not good imo. how about starting spinner on 01:19:248?

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-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:

Hi, this is my part of m4m, sorry for the lateness

[General]

1. Make the spinner start at the same part for all the diffs (Futsuu and above). You have the spinner at 01:19:086 (1) - on Futsuu, but then it starts half a beat later in Muzu and it apparently goes back 1/4 of a beat in the hardest diffs. Not very neat. moved the spinner at hardest diffs
2. yes I can see these things c:
3. You can add the full name of 'REFLEC BEAT plus' to tags if you want, though remove 'MUSIC PACK 67' from tags, there's no point having it in tags of a song (that's not part of the game name, it just says which music pack you have to buy from KONAMI's overpriced shop to get the song). since REFLECT BEAT already in the source, it would be redundant so i keep it for now
4. Diff gap between Muzu and Oni is slightly larger than what would be ideal spread, though you can probably just ignore that as star rating isn't always best for gauging actual difficulty.

[KANTAN!!]

1. This is my opinion but I think the finishers are placed unjustly. For example, based on your logic of a heavy sound at points like 00:06:438 (3) - and 00:07:735 (4) - , shouldn't notes such as 00:16:816 (21) - and 00:18:113 (22) - have them as well? fixed
2. 00:25:897 (35) - Why not just use red note here? I think 00:25:248 (34,35,36) - are similar sounding enough that they can just be monocolour for a Kantan diff, not to mention that it would emphasise these: 00:24:600 (32,33) - more. k would reflect the change in pitch better imo
3. 00:45:357 (65) - Maybe use red note here as well, it sounds similar to 00:46:005 (66) - . fixed
4. 00:47:951 (72) - Probably could add a finisher here like you have done on 00:42:762 (63) - , these both have pitch changing in the music (can't describe it well so feel free to decline if you don't accept it) hmm finisher would be overpowered here imo
5. 00:53:140 (80) - Add a finisher here? You're even starting a new kiai here, so I think it would be good to show this part as a new section. retained for consistency with other diffs
6. 01:21:681 (118) - I would say a finish here is unnecessary, it would emphasise 01:22:978 (120,121,122) - these more (and some other reason which I can't really describe well w) fixed
7. 01:25:248 (124) - Move this 1/2 of a beat 01:25:411 , I know you can really put one note here for kantan but I still think it's more suited to be put on the second beat. retained for more simple beat

[FUTSUU!!]

1. 00:16:816 (37) - Why is this note kat? It's a don note in every other diff. fixed
2. 00:34:167 - What about adding a kat here and change 00:33:681 (86) - to don? I think this section would make it contrast well with 00:32:384 (83,84,85) - .fixed
3. 00:53:140 (148) - Similar with kantan. since it is in the middle of a sequence i think a finisher not sounds good
4. This is just a general statement and I do understand that you were trying to put some variation into the map here, but I don't understand the choice of not putting any beats on the solid white lines in the section from 00:53:140 (148) - to 00:57:357 (162) - . It just sounds a bit strange and awkward to play for the player. I would say either fill the gaps in or do something similar to the previous kiai. in this part i focused on the sampling voice
5. 01:14:546 (212,214) - These could probably just be left as don note since they have similar background sounds to 01:13:897 (211,213) - . the contrast made with k sounds better imo

[MUZUKASHII!!]

1. 00:16:816 (34) - Starting to think that you could add a finisher here for flow (and maybe to the previous easier diffs as well). fixed
2. 00:35:951 (14,15,16) - I would suggest a triple kat pattern here, these sound more similar to the previous two 1/2 kats in my opinion. Triple-don notes sound a bit flat here imo. the drum sounds is lower than previous 2 kats so don is fine
3. 00:45:194 (58,59) - I'd suggest swapping these two and changing 00:45:681 (60) - to a kat, it *just* makes use of the synthesised sounds better. retained since 00:44:870 (56,57,58) - has same sound
4. 00:50:384 (81,82,83) - Same here. same
5. 01:05:140 - y u no put note here ;w; i want to make the pace lower in this part
6. 01:27:843 (26,27) - I would swap these, to make it sound more unique compared to 01:26:870 (20,21) - . fixed

[ONI!!]

1. Increase HP drain to 6 or something, 5 is too Muzu like and easy imo changed to 5.5
2. 00:15:194 (40,41) - Maybe swap these two, I think it's better for flow (even if you say don-kat because of music pitch or something). ok
3. 00:16:816 (52) - Same as Muzu fixed
4. 00:47:789 (95,96) - Swap these two, I think in this case it's better to follow pitch. retained for consistency with 00:44:870 (77,78,79,80) -
5. 01:38:222 (26,27) - Same as the first suggestion for Oni diff. fixed

[INNER ONI!!]

1. Increase HP drain to 6, 4 makes it too easy to pass imo (I basically didn't press anything whenever I saw 1/6 or a stream longer than a few notes and I still passed it) fixed
2. 00:41:140 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - Maybe you can change the first note or first three of this 1/6 to dons instead, this entire sound effect sounds more like it increases in pitch. hmm simplicity is better here imo
3. 00:47:789 (167) - Change this to a don note, I think with having three kats before 00:47:951 (168) - this finisher becomes very forced to play, and it doesn't really match well (won't consider the fact that only your Inner Oni diff has a finisher here). the drum sounds is the same with previous kat, so not changed
4. 00:49:248 (177,178,179,180,181) - This pattern feels a bit forced to play, not sure what you're trying to match in the music here to be honest. i don't think it is forced, it is fits with the flow imo
5. 01:13:573 (18,19,20,21) - Probably unnecessary to have four kat notes to lead into the finisher note there, you don't even have anything mapped before the finisher in your easier diffs. Just a simple note or two here would suffice. i think it is fine for the highest diff

That's all, good luck and I hope my mod was worth the wait lol

Sylphi wrote:

I'm so sorry for late.

[KANTAN!!]

1. 00:09:032 (7,8,9,10,11) - It would be more fit the music that using K d kkd. retained for simplicity
2. 00:20:384 (27) - Although it is kiai time, this is starting part and similar to 00:29:789. removing this note would be more better feeling for all. gap with futsuu will be larger so not changed

[FUTSUU!!]

1. 00:16:816 (37) - It was d on other difficulties. it should be changed for consistency imo.fixed
2. 00:47:140 (128) - It is awkward to hear. how about moving to 00:47:465? oh, nice
3. 00:54:438 - 00:57:032 - Why are there no notes? it may makes people is confused by empty feeling. you should have removed other notes if you want little break. put in consideration
4. 01:26:546 (12) - I think it would be not bad removing this note. ok

[MUZUKASHII!!]

1. 00:31:573 (101,102,103) - It's not bad idea using kkk on here. actually this sound is similar as prev and higher than around. ddd is also good for variation imo
2. 00:36:276 (17,18,19,20,21) - It seems to be mapped in reverse order. i think kdkdk would be more fit the music. i prefer end it with d
3. 00:55:086 (10) - 01:00:276 (35) - Move by 1/2 forward to follow melody. i tried to follow the sampling voice but will consider again
4. 01:05:140 - 01:07:735 - 01:10:330 - Empty feeling Dx for better spread with futsuu and oni and lower pace in the part :c
5. 01:26:870 (20) - Add finish? hmm would be awkward with next sequence

[ONI!!]

1. As said by -[ Dumpling ]-, some people may feel diff gap between Muzu and Oni. because some streams make it seems to be a little high density compared to Muzukashii. probably you better reduce density a little just in case. i think pattern in oni is already simple and density spread is acceptable
2. 01:19:167 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5828421 there is no problem to play but it looks not good imo. how about starting spinner on 01:19:248? fixed

thanks for mods~

Sorry for late
[ General]

1. 00:32:384 - kiai time should be extended until here.
2. 01:45:032 - ^
3. 00:42:762 - 00:53:140 - Consider removing kiai time

[ Kantan]

1. 00:10:654 (10,11) - Consider removing these notes to emphasize kiai start time.
2. 00:12:276 - I recommend adding a note, kiai doesn't need too many breaks.
3. 00:17:465 - 00:22:654 - ^. Then removed 00:20:059 (26,27) - to make a break?
4. 00:45:032 (66) - Maybe move to 00:45:681 - ? it would be more natural imo.
   00:50:221 (75) - ^. Then adjust colors.
   
5. 01:17:789 (113,114,115,116,117) - seems bit too hard for Kantan. I recommend removing 01:18:762 (116) - this note.
6. 01:25:248 (124) - should be moved to 1/2 right for the consistency with 01:25:897 (125) -. You followed second sound of 1/2 doublet rhythm at 125.
7. 01:26:870 (127) - Why not Finish?
8. 01:30:113 - add a note for the same reason?

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:11:303 (20) - remove? It looks dense
2. 00:51:843 (144,145,146,147,148) - Dense too, consider removing 00:52:492 (146,147) -?
3. 00:53:140 (149) - Finish?
4. 01:03:194 (184) - Finish would fit to the clap sound as well
5. 01:25:248 (9) - same as Kantan, move to 1/2 right.
6. 01:34:654 (17) - Finish too

[ Muzukashii]

1. I'm worry about difficulty spread, between M-O is huger than F-M. Muzukashii should have more triplets and Oni can be easier a little. Following timestamps are able to be placed 1/4 notes.
2. 00:14:384 - 00:19:573 - 00:24:762 -
3. 00:51:519 -
4. 01:37:411 -
5. 01:03:194 (49) - Finish?
6. 01:34:330 (12) - 01:44:708 (60) - ^

tasuke912 wrote:

Sorry for late
[ General]

1. 00:32:384 - kiai time should be extended until here.
2. 01:45:032 - ^
3. 00:42:762 - 00:53:140 - Consider removing kiai time
   fixed

[ Kantan]

1. 00:10:654 (10,11) - Consider removing these notes to emphasize kiai start time. i think it will give more impact like this. i mean, when you raised the intensity, and then BAM! end it with a finisher.
2. 00:12:276 - I recommend adding a note, kiai doesn't need too many breaks. ofc the break here is necessary because ^
3. 00:17:465 - 00:22:654 - ^. Then removed 00:20:059 (26,27) - to make a break? added note at 00:17:465 -
4. 00:45:032 (66) - Maybe move to 00:45:681 - ? it would be more natural imo.moved and changed to d
   00:50:221 (75) - ^. Then adjust colors. fixed
   
5. 01:17:789 (113,114,115,116,117) - seems bit too hard for Kantan. I recommend removing 01:18:762 (116) - this note. fixed
6. 01:25:248 (124) - should be moved to 1/2 right for the consistency with 01:25:897 (125) -. You followed second sound of 1/2 doublet rhythm at 125. remain unchanged because the rhythm will be a bit hard for beginner, so i put it in white tick for simplicity
7. 01:26:870 (127) - Why not Finish? fixed
8. 01:30:113 - add a note for the same reason? fixed

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:11:303 (20) - remove? It looks dense fixed
2. 00:51:843 (144,145,146,147,148) - Dense too, consider removing 00:52:492 (146,147) -? ^
3. 00:53:140 (149) - Finish? ^
4. 01:03:194 (184) - Finish would fit to the clap sound as well might be too loud, k is also fine imo
5. 01:25:248 (9) - same as Kantan, move to 1/2 right. remain unchanged for same reason
6. 01:34:654 (17) - Finish too fixed

[ Muzukashii]

1. I'm worry about difficulty spread, between M-O is huger than F-M. Muzukashii should have more triplets and Oni can be easier a little. Following timestamps are able to be placed 1/4 notes.
2. 00:14:384 - 00:19:573 - 00:24:762 - added 1/4
3. 00:51:519 - ^
4. 01:37:411 - ^
5. 01:03:194 (49) - Finish? kept
6. 01:34:330 (12) - 01:44:708 (60) - ^ ^ because i think adding a finisher will lower the impact at 01:45:032 -

thanks tasuke!

additional changes in oni:
> removed notes at 00:30:194 - , 00:35:546 - , 00:38:384 - , 00:39:681 - , 00:52:005 - , 00:55:897 - , 00:59:789 - , 00:59:870 - , 01:42:843 -

Hello, via M4M~~
and sorry to late

[Kantan]

1. 00:08:708 - uum… remove? It plays better as beginners.
2. 00:09:681 - same, not strong sounds after finisher.
3. 00:18:762 - change to k? make a consistent with before kkd and make a inconsistent (gap)with after dkd.
4. 01:31:411 - same.
5. 00:12:924 - , 00:18:113 - ...d? same as 01:35:951 - ?
6. 00:30:762 - can add d imo,
7. 00:38:870 - change k? to emphasized to sounds up than 00:33:681 - (drum roll).
8. 00:54:113 - move to 00:54:762 - ? its early following 1/1 triple imo.
9. 00:55:735 (86,87) - dk?
10. 01:11:951 - add note on purpose? same as other diffs.
11. 01:19:086 - no spinner?
12. 01:22:978 (121,122,123) - remove the finishres? its kind to play as beginners .
    
    
13. 01:27:194 - ,01:25:897 (126,127) - remove , 01:26:546 - add k instead? there’re high dense. I think its better to make a lower dense and simple rhythm.
    
    

[Futsuu]

1. 00:08:059 - remove or move to 00:07:411 -
2. 00:13:573 (24,25,26,27) - change to ddk-k instead? to focus the more main part pitch.
3. 00:18:762 (40,41,42) - ddk?
4. 00:23:627 (55,56,57,58,59) - change to like… same patterns? (k-ddk-k or k-kkk (for variation with bach chorus))
5. 01:31:411 (6,7) - dd?
6. 01:36:276 (21,22,23,24,25,26) - same as others.
7. Either? from 00:30:113 - it sounds noisy but you dont put on. I think you can add notes more somewhere, imo.
   
   • A 00:28:816 - move to ½ left, 00:28:978 - add don? .I guess you can put some redlines . Its not bad way.
     B.00:28:816 - remove , 00:30:113 - add d, 00:30:924 - move to 00:30:600 - ?
8. from 01:41:465 - ~~ , same as above.
   
   
9. 00:39:843 - remove...? umm.. lol plays a bit better imo, there’re no reasons.
10. 00:40:654 - move to 00:41:303 - and change to k? felt the early appeared ½ pattern imo.
11. 00:52:167 - bit oversounded as Futsuu imo…? 00:50:546 (138,139,140,141,142,143) - dkd-dkd change to dkddk-k or dkdkd-k?
12. like Muzukashii, 01:03:843 - move to 01:05:140 - and 01:05:465 - change d?
13. 01:06:438 - , 01:09:032 - , 01:10:654 - same .
14. 01:19:086 - no big notes?
15. 01:27:194 - change to k?
    
    

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:02:708 (4,5) - , 00:05:627 - remove? feel many notes a bit imo.
   00:22:978 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - ,01:35:627 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - Inconsistency rhythm? change to kd-dkkd-k? (or kd-dkkddk)
2. 00:15:367 - remove? I think its lower priority to put on there comparing with the diff-spread.
   
   • And, suggest them.
   1. 00:16:248 - remove , from 00:15:681 - - , add ¼ kat triple, and 00:15:843 - change k instead?
3. 00:31:573 (107,108,109) - , 01:44:222 (59,60,61) - kkk ?
4. 00:32:059 - add k? lol to make aconsistenty with 00:21:681 - 01:44:708 - , It follows the little splash sounded.
5. 00:36:032 - remove and 00:36:113 - change k? refer to Oni.
6. 00:45:681 - ,00:50:870 - change to k, to make a consistent with 00:43:086 - .
7. 00:52:978 - remove? drum sounds not well.
   
   • |00:52:492 - can remove too imo, to make a break and emphasized to next lack o f don parts lol.
8. 01:04:492 (5,6) - remove , and 01:04:978 - ,01:05:140 - add d, k? Its more clean with 4/4 rhythm and break time.
9. 01:07:086 (16,17) - same
10. hmm… from 01:17:951 - all k that joined the finisher Dons, remove is better for overall difficulty.
    
    • If you applied ^, sugegst this.
    1. 01:19:086 - not bad to change K like kantan.

[Oni]

1. 00:02:140 - , 00:03:357 - , 00:04:735 - ,00:05:627 - remove? feel many notes a bit imo.
2. 00:07:330 - move to ¼ right?
3. 00:32:059 - add k? lol to make aconsistenty with 00:21:681 - 01:44:708 - , It follows the little splash sounded.
4. 00:35:789 (17,18,19,20,21,22) - change to kkd-k-d? it sounds better to express the little quiet part to make the simple( abekobe).
5. 00:45:519 (77,78,79) - change to ddk ? to make a consistent with ½ colors 00:43:086 (62,63,64,65,66) - , and make a inconsistent with ½ colors 00:46:816 (85,86,87) - to express the variation.
6. 00:55:573 - move to 00:55:897 - ? to make a consistent with …backsounds rhythm.
7. 00:57:438 - move to 00:57:924 - ? same as above.
8. 00:59:627 - change to k ? same as above, to make a consistent with cymbals hits on before and after bars?
   |01:09:843 - I have a question, k is on purpose?
   
   
   01:28:167 - ~~ ½ colors kkdkkddkd sounds very questionable…. Either?
   
   • A.01:28:654 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - kdkkd-d-k change to kdk-k-ddk?
     B.01:29:140 - change to k?
     C.01:28:167 - ~~ change to k-kkd-k-kkddk-k-d? * 01:28:735 - If you wont ignore , plz igonore, but it sounds the best imo as Oni.

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:06:276 - k? backsounds up.
2. 00:06:924 - ~~ add more? like… 00:06:924 - ,00:07:248 - , 00:07:411 - , 00:07:978 - ,
   00:08:059 - . Its lack of following the drum part imo.
   
   1. and, 00:08:870 - remove for making a break instead?
3. 00:13:492 - remove? no strong reverb bass and overempasized the main slar imo.
4. 00:17:870 - same.
5. 00:17:627 - uum… not similar as00:11:627 (69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - .
   How about D-d-k-ddkkd-k-k from 00:16:816 - ? the reason is ↓
   1. 00:17:221 - move to 00:17:384 - and change to d?
   2. 00:17:708 - remove
   3. 00:17:627 - d not same as 00:17:303 - rogic.
   4. 00:17:546 - change to k to make a consistent with 1st 00:12:357 - ?
6. 00:16:573 - move to 00:16:411 - ? 00:16:654 (113,114) - no joined the 1/4 notes sounds better to play such a high dense imo.
   
7. 00:24:194 - add d? can follow the more.. backchorus up.
8. 00:25:492 - add d? can follow the more.. lower synthesizer.
9. 00:27:681 (64,65,66,1) - dddk? and 00:28:816 (5,6,7,8) - kkkd? instead?
   1st, not fits on there with high pitch noise sounds imo .
   2nd, On the other side of synthesizer , it sounds and plays not well ...
   
   00:32:059 - I really want to put on k … sounds the little splash…
   
10. 00:41:870 - remove? not sounds well.
11. 00:42:600 - splash sounds still slar. k sounds better?
12. 01:02:059 (16,17,18) - change ¼ kkd? not sounds well over ¼ sound.
13. from 01:03:519 - part, Its a bit over working imo. It can make more nerf (lower frequency of ¼), consider again plz…
    
14. 01:24:600 - , 01:24:924 - add kd , 01:25:248 - change k? lol
    
15. 01:36:843 - add d , 01:38:140 - add d? same as 1st.
16. 01:40:330 (2,3,4,1) - dddk? and 01:41:465 (2,3,4,5) - kkkd?
    
    
    01:17:303 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - omg… dkdddkdddkddkkkddkkkddkkkddkkkd orz lol

I guess Inner Oni still can improve, call me back after improved the Inner (maybe...bout 1~2mods+.. and yourselfmod? lol)
Good luck (¦3[___]

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello, via M4M~~
and sorry to late

Introduction

1. Inner Oni can still improve imo, and sme questionable 1/6.
2. Oni ~ Muzukashii Intro still over working imo. plz consider again.
3. Diff-Spread is relatively large, but not big issues imo.

Symbol meaning

　

1. >> Normal suggestion.
   Big text >> Strong suggestion.
   >> Questionable imo.
   >>> Needs to improve some. (Rhythm is not good , plays or sounds weird)
   No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on the other place.

　or JUST MY OPINION.

[Kantan]

1. 00:08:708 - uum… remove? It plays better as beginners. fixed.
2. 00:09:681 - same, not strong sounds after finisher. ^ fixed
3. 00:18:762 - change to k? make a consistent with before kkd and make a inconsistent (gap)with after dkd.
4. 01:31:411 - same.
5. 00:12:924 - , 00:18:113 - ...d? same as 01:35:951 - ?
   whoa all above point is complement each other and good. fixed.
6. 00:30:762 - can add d imo, hmm i want to make a difference with 00:20:384 - where there is more noise there
7. 00:38:870 - change k? to emphasized to sounds up than 00:33:681 - (drum roll). i think the drum sound still same until synth sound going up
8. 00:54:113 - move to 00:54:762 - ? its early following 1/1 triple imo. fixed, and changed to d to emphasis the higher pitch at 00:55:086 - better
9. 00:55:735 (86,87) - dk? fix
10. 01:11:951 - add note on purpose? same as other diffs. ok
11. 01:19:086 - no spinner? wanted to make break in lower diff. but reconsidered and added the spinner.
12. 01:22:978 (121,122,123) - remove the finishres? its kind to play as beginners . sure
    
13. 01:27:194 - ,01:25:897 (126,127) - remove , 01:26:546 - add k instead? there’re high dense. I think its better to make a lower dense and simple rhythm. fixed

[Futsuu]

1. 00:08:059 - remove or move to 00:07:411 - removed!
2. 00:13:573 (24,25,26,27) - change to ddk-k instead? to focus the more main part pitch. kkk is more simple and fits the drum well so i prefer to keep it.
3. 00:18:762 (40,41,42) - ddk? same as ^
4. 00:23:627 (55,56,57,58,59) - change to like… same patterns? (k-ddk-k or k-kkk (for variation with bach chorus)) changed to k-kkk
5. 01:31:411 (6,7) - dd? kk
6. 01:36:276 (21,22,23,24,25,26) - same as others. fixed
7. Either? from 00:30:113 - it sounds noisy but you dont put on. I think you can add notes more somewhere, imo.
   
   • A 00:28:816 - move to ½ left, 00:28:978 - add don? .I guess you can put some redlines . Its not bad way.
     B.00:28:816 - remove , 00:30:113 - add d, 00:30:924 - move to 00:30:600 - ?
   A is good~
8. from 01:41:465 - ~~ , same as above.
   
   
9. 00:39:843 - remove...? umm.. lol plays a bit better imo, there’re no reasons. lol it's noisy here so i think it's ok combined with below mod is good. fixed
10. 00:40:654 - move to 00:41:303 - and change to k? felt the early appeared ½ pattern imo. fixed
11. 00:52:167 - bit oversounded as Futsuu imo…? 00:50:546 (138,139,140,141,142,143) - dkd-dkd change to dkddk-k or dkdkd-k? dkddk-k is nice~
12. like Muzukashii, 01:03:843 - move to 01:05:140 - and 01:05:465 - change d? fixed
13. 01:06:438 - , 01:09:032 - , 01:10:654 - same . ^
14. 01:19:086 - no big notes? yeah added K
15. 01:27:194 - change to k? the melody is going up at 01:27:357 - so i think d here can reflect it better

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:02:708 (4,5) - , 00:05:627 - remove? feel many notes a bit imo. ok
   00:22:978 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - ,01:35:627 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - Inconsistency rhythm? change to kd-dkkd-k? (or kd-dkkddk) changed kd-dkkddk~
2. 00:15:367 - remove? I think its lower priority to put on there comparing with the diff-spread.
   
   • And, suggest them.
   1. 00:16:248 - remove , from 00:15:681 - - , add ¼ kat triple, and 00:15:843 - change k instead?
   fixed
3. 00:31:573 (107,108,109) - , 01:44:222 (59,60,61) - kkk ? got same suggestion before, so applied.
4. 00:32:059 - add k? lol to make aconsistenty with 00:21:681 - 01:44:708 - , It follows the little splash sounded. at 00:21:681 - 01:44:708 - ,the music is continuous, while at 00:32:059 it has a pause so not putting note there
5. 00:36:032 - remove and 00:36:113 - change k? refer to Oni. sure
6. 00:45:681 - ,00:50:870 - change to k, to make a consistent with 00:43:086 - . fixed
7. 00:52:978 - remove? drum sounds not well.
   
   • |00:52:492 - can remove too imo, to make a break and emphasized to next lack o f don parts lol.
   fixed. and i made some don in that part lol.
8. 01:04:492 (5,6) - remove , and 01:04:978 - ,01:05:140 - add d, k? Its more clean with 4/4 rhythm and break time. fixed
9. 01:07:086 (16,17) - same ^
10. hmm… from 01:17:951 - all k that joined the finisher Dons, remove is better for overall difficulty. hmm i prefer to keep it to reflect the stroke sound.
    
    • If you applied ^, sugegst this.
    1. 01:19:086 - not bad to change K like kantan. but K is nice~

continuation...

JUDYDANNY wrote:

[Oni]

1. 00:02:140 - , 00:03:357 - , 00:04:735 - ,00:05:627 - remove? feel many notes a bit imo. ok
2. 00:07:330 - move to ¼ right? hmm i think this position more accurate
3. 00:32:059 - add k? lol to make aconsistenty with 00:21:681 - 01:44:708 - , It follows the little splash sounded. same reason as muzu, to emphasis the pause
4. 00:35:789 (17,18,19,20,21,22) - change to kkd-k-d? it sounds better to express the little quiet part to make the simple( abekobe). fixed
5. 00:45:519 (77,78,79) - change to ddk ? to make a consistent with ½ colors 00:43:086 (62,63,64,65,66) - , and make a inconsistent with ½ colors 00:46:816 (85,86,87) - to express the variation. remain unchanged because the don at 00:45:681 - is to follow main melody, like 00:45:357 - and 00:46:005 -
6. 00:55:573 - move to 00:55:897 - ? to make a consistent with …backsounds rhythm. good~ fixed
7. 00:57:438 - move to 00:57:924 - ? same as above. ^
8. 00:59:627 - change to k ? same as above, to make a consistent with cymbals hits on before and after bars? fixed
   |01:09:843 - I have a question, k is on purpose? no, it's an accident lol fixed
   
   
   01:28:167 - ~~ ½ colors kkdkkddkd sounds very questionable…. Either?
   
   • A.01:28:654 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - kdkkd-d-k change to kdk-k-ddk?
     B.01:29:140 - change to k?
     C.01:28:167 - ~~ change to k-kkd-k-kkddk-k-d? * 01:28:735 - If you wont ignore , plz igonore, but it sounds the best imo as Oni.
   hmm i would like to make 1/4 kdkkd for pattern variation there. rearranged a bit from C point. (make k-kkd-k-kdkkd-k-d)

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:06:276 - k? backsounds up. d is consistenft with 00:03:681 - tho
2. 00:06:924 - ~~ add more? like… 00:06:924 - ,00:07:248 - , 00:07:411 - , 00:07:978 - ,
   00:08:059 - . Its lack of following the drum part imo. added, but not at 00:07:978 - , 00:08:059 - made break here instead
   
   1. and, 00:08:870 - remove for making a break instead? because this note is joined with finishers
3. 00:13:492 - remove? no strong reverb bass and overempasized the main slar imo. hmm it flows good to me.
4. 00:17:870 - same. rearranged here
5. 00:17:627 - uum… not similar as00:11:627 (69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - .
   How about D-d-k-ddkkd-k-k from 00:16:816 - ? the reason is ↓
   1. 00:17:221 - move to 00:17:384 - and change to d?
   2. 00:17:708 - remove
   3. 00:17:627 - d not same as 00:17:303 - rogic.
   4. 00:17:546 - change to k to make a consistent with 1st 00:12:357 - ?
   fixed... i think. a bit confused so made some change myself too lol
6. 00:16:573 - move to 00:16:411 - ? 00:16:654 (113,114) - no joined the 1/4 notes sounds better to play such a high dense imo. fixed
   
7. 00:24:194 - add d? can follow the more.. backchorus up. fixed
8. 00:25:492 - add d? can follow the more.. lower synthesizer. ^
9. 00:27:681 (64,65,66,1) - dddk? and 00:28:816 (5,6,7,8) - kkkd? instead?
   1st, not fits on there with high pitch noise sounds imo .
   2nd, On the other side of synthesizer , it sounds and plays not well ...
   fixed
   
   00:32:059 - I really want to put on k … sounds the little splash… how about d? throbbing sound still same
   
10. 00:41:870 - remove? not sounds well. blame backsound vocal lol
11. 00:42:600 - splash sounds still slar. k sounds better? hmm.. i prefer d to emphasis crash sound at 00:42:438 -
12. 01:02:059 (16,17,18) - change ¼ kkd? not sounds well over ¼ sound. fixed
13. from 01:03:519 - part, Its a bit over working imo. It can make more nerf (lower frequency of ¼), consider again plz…
    removed some weak notes
14. 01:24:600 - , 01:24:924 - add kd , 01:25:248 - change k? lol loll i think is better to leave empty to emphasis the stronger beat
    
15. 01:36:843 - add d , 01:38:140 - add d? same as 1st. fixed
16. 01:40:330 (2,3,4,1) - dddk? and 01:41:465 (2,3,4,5) - kkkd? fixed
    
    
    01:17:303 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - omg… dkdddkdddkddkkkddkkkddkkkddkkkd orz lol
    is hard, but still DTable for yumuya lol

I guess Inner Oni still can improve, call me back after improved the Inner (maybe...bout 1~2mods+.. and yourselfmod? lol)
Good luck (¦3[___]

thanks a lot JuDa~

will look for 1 additional mod on inner first selfmod instead ._.

Hihi o)7

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Note: Remember that they are just tips, you apply them as you wish.

Note #2(?): You map very well, I'll do my best, but it's difficult. qwq

KANTAN!!

FUTSUU!!

MUZUKASHII!!

ONI!!