tasuke912 wrote:

Sorry for late
[ General]

1. 00:32:384 - kiai time should be extended until here.
2. 01:45:032 - ^
3. 00:42:762 - 00:53:140 - Consider removing kiai time
   fixed

[ Kantan]

1. 00:10:654 (10,11) - Consider removing these notes to emphasize kiai start time. i think it will give more impact like this. i mean, when you raised the intensity, and then BAM! end it with a finisher.
2. 00:12:276 - I recommend adding a note, kiai doesn't need too many breaks. ofc the break here is necessary because ^
3. 00:17:465 - 00:22:654 - ^. Then removed 00:20:059 (26,27) - to make a break? added note at 00:17:465 -
4. 00:45:032 (66) - Maybe move to 00:45:681 - ? it would be more natural imo.moved and changed to d
   00:50:221 (75) - ^. Then adjust colors. fixed
   
5. 01:17:789 (113,114,115,116,117) - seems bit too hard for Kantan. I recommend removing 01:18:762 (116) - this note. fixed
6. 01:25:248 (124) - should be moved to 1/2 right for the consistency with 01:25:897 (125) -. You followed second sound of 1/2 doublet rhythm at 125. remain unchanged because the rhythm will be a bit hard for beginner, so i put it in white tick for simplicity
7. 01:26:870 (127) - Why not Finish? fixed
8. 01:30:113 - add a note for the same reason? fixed

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:11:303 (20) - remove? It looks dense fixed
2. 00:51:843 (144,145,146,147,148) - Dense too, consider removing 00:52:492 (146,147) -? ^
3. 00:53:140 (149) - Finish? ^
4. 01:03:194 (184) - Finish would fit to the clap sound as well might be too loud, k is also fine imo
5. 01:25:248 (9) - same as Kantan, move to 1/2 right. remain unchanged for same reason
6. 01:34:654 (17) - Finish too fixed

[ Muzukashii]

1. I'm worry about difficulty spread, between M-O is huger than F-M. Muzukashii should have more triplets and Oni can be easier a little. Following timestamps are able to be placed 1/4 notes.
2. 00:14:384 - 00:19:573 - 00:24:762 - added 1/4
3. 00:51:519 - ^
4. 01:37:411 - ^
5. 01:03:194 (49) - Finish? kept
6. 01:34:330 (12) - 01:44:708 (60) - ^ ^ because i think adding a finisher will lower the impact at 01:45:032 -

1. 00:08:708 - uum… remove? It plays better as beginners.
2. 00:09:681 - same, not strong sounds after finisher.
3. 00:18:762 - change to k? make a consistent with before kkd and make a inconsistent (gap)with after dkd.
4. 01:31:411 - same.
5. 00:12:924 - , 00:18:113 - ...d? same as 01:35:951 - ?
6. 00:30:762 - can add d imo,
7. 00:38:870 - change k? to emphasized to sounds up than 00:33:681 - (drum roll).
8. 00:54:113 - move to 00:54:762 - ? its early following 1/1 triple imo.
9. 00:55:735 (86,87) - dk?
10. 01:11:951 - add note on purpose? same as other diffs.
11. 01:19:086 - no spinner?
12. 01:22:978 (121,122,123) - remove the finishres? its kind to play as beginners .
    
    
13. 01:27:194 - ,01:25:897 (126,127) - remove , 01:26:546 - add k instead? there’re high dense. I think its better to make a lower dense and simple rhythm.
    
    

1. 00:08:059 - remove or move to 00:07:411 -
2. 00:13:573 (24,25,26,27) - change to ddk-k instead? to focus the more main part pitch.
3. 00:18:762 (40,41,42) - ddk?
4. 00:23:627 (55,56,57,58,59) - change to like… same patterns? (k-ddk-k or k-kkk (for variation with bach chorus))
5. 01:31:411 (6,7) - dd?
6. 01:36:276 (21,22,23,24,25,26) - same as others.
7. Either? from 00:30:113 - it sounds noisy but you dont put on. I think you can add notes more somewhere, imo.
   
   • A 00:28:816 - move to ½ left, 00:28:978 - add don? .I guess you can put some redlines . Its not bad way.
     B.00:28:816 - remove , 00:30:113 - add d, 00:30:924 - move to 00:30:600 - ?
8. from 01:41:465 - ~~ , same as above.
   
   
9. 00:39:843 - remove...? umm.. lol plays a bit better imo, there’re no reasons.
10. 00:40:654 - move to 00:41:303 - and change to k? felt the early appeared ½ pattern imo.
11. 00:52:167 - bit oversounded as Futsuu imo…? 00:50:546 (138,139,140,141,142,143) - dkd-dkd change to dkddk-k or dkdkd-k?
12. like Muzukashii, 01:03:843 - move to 01:05:140 - and 01:05:465 - change d?
13. 01:06:438 - , 01:09:032 - , 01:10:654 - same .
14. 01:19:086 - no big notes?
15. 01:27:194 - change to k?
    
    

1. 00:02:708 (4,5) - , 00:05:627 - remove? feel many notes a bit imo.
   00:22:978 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - ,01:35:627 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - Inconsistency rhythm? change to kd-dkkd-k? (or kd-dkkddk)
2. 00:15:367 - remove? I think its lower priority to put on there comparing with the diff-spread.
   
   • And, suggest them.
   1. 00:16:248 - remove , from 00:15:681 - - , add ¼ kat triple, and 00:15:843 - change k instead?
3. 00:31:573 (107,108,109) - , 01:44:222 (59,60,61) - kkk ?
4. 00:32:059 - add k? lol to make aconsistenty with 00:21:681 - 01:44:708 - , It follows the little splash sounded.
5. 00:36:032 - remove and 00:36:113 - change k? refer to Oni.
6. 00:45:681 - ,00:50:870 - change to k, to make a consistent with 00:43:086 - .
7. 00:52:978 - remove? drum sounds not well.
   
   • |00:52:492 - can remove too imo, to make a break and emphasized to next lack o f don parts lol.
8. 01:04:492 (5,6) - remove , and 01:04:978 - ,01:05:140 - add d, k? Its more clean with 4/4 rhythm and break time.
9. 01:07:086 (16,17) - same
10. hmm… from 01:17:951 - all k that joined the finisher Dons, remove is better for overall difficulty.
    
    • If you applied ^, sugegst this.
    1. 01:19:086 - not bad to change K like kantan.

1. 00:02:140 - , 00:03:357 - , 00:04:735 - ,00:05:627 - remove? feel many notes a bit imo.
2. 00:07:330 - move to ¼ right?
3. 00:32:059 - add k? lol to make aconsistenty with 00:21:681 - 01:44:708 - , It follows the little splash sounded.
4. 00:35:789 (17,18,19,20,21,22) - change to kkd-k-d? it sounds better to express the little quiet part to make the simple( abekobe).
5. 00:45:519 (77,78,79) - change to ddk ? to make a consistent with ½ colors 00:43:086 (62,63,64,65,66) - , and make a inconsistent with ½ colors 00:46:816 (85,86,87) - to express the variation.
6. 00:55:573 - move to 00:55:897 - ? to make a consistent with …backsounds rhythm.
7. 00:57:438 - move to 00:57:924 - ? same as above.
8. 00:59:627 - change to k ? same as above, to make a consistent with cymbals hits on before and after bars?
   |01:09:843 - I have a question, k is on purpose?
   
   
   01:28:167 - ~~ ½ colors kkdkkddkd sounds very questionable…. Either?
   
   • A.01:28:654 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - kdkkd-d-k change to kdk-k-ddk?
     B.01:29:140 - change to k?
     C.01:28:167 - ~~ change to k-kkd-k-kkddk-k-d? * 01:28:735 - If you wont ignore , plz igonore, but it sounds the best imo as Oni.

1. 00:06:276 - k? backsounds up.
2. 00:06:924 - ~~ add more? like… 00:06:924 - ,00:07:248 - , 00:07:411 - , 00:07:978 - ,
   00:08:059 - . Its lack of following the drum part imo.
   
   1. and, 00:08:870 - remove for making a break instead?
3. 00:13:492 - remove? no strong reverb bass and overempasized the main slar imo.
4. 00:17:870 - same.
5. 00:17:627 - uum… not similar as00:11:627 (69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - .
   How about D-d-k-ddkkd-k-k from 00:16:816 - ? the reason is ↓
   1. 00:17:221 - move to 00:17:384 - and change to d?
   2. 00:17:708 - remove
   3. 00:17:627 - d not same as 00:17:303 - rogic.
   4. 00:17:546 - change to k to make a consistent with 1st 00:12:357 - ?
6. 00:16:573 - move to 00:16:411 - ? 00:16:654 (113,114) - no joined the 1/4 notes sounds better to play such a high dense imo.
   
7. 00:24:194 - add d? can follow the more.. backchorus up.
8. 00:25:492 - add d? can follow the more.. lower synthesizer.
9. 00:27:681 (64,65,66,1) - dddk? and 00:28:816 (5,6,7,8) - kkkd? instead?
   1st, not fits on there with high pitch noise sounds imo .
   2nd, On the other side of synthesizer , it sounds and plays not well ...
   
   00:32:059 - I really want to put on k … sounds the little splash…
   
10. 00:41:870 - remove? not sounds well.
11. 00:42:600 - splash sounds still slar. k sounds better?
12. 01:02:059 (16,17,18) - change ¼ kkd? not sounds well over ¼ sound.
13. from 01:03:519 - part, Its a bit over working imo. It can make more nerf (lower frequency of ¼), consider again plz…
    
14. 01:24:600 - , 01:24:924 - add kd , 01:25:248 - change k? lol
    
15. 01:36:843 - add d , 01:38:140 - add d? same as 1st.
16. 01:40:330 (2,3,4,1) - dddk? and 01:41:465 (2,3,4,5) - kkkd?
    
    
    01:17:303 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - omg… dkdddkdddkddkkkddkkkddkkkddkkkd orz lol

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello, via M4M~~
and sorry to late

Introduction

1. Inner Oni can still improve imo, and sme questionable 1/6.
2. Oni ~ Muzukashii Intro still over working imo. plz consider again.
3. Diff-Spread is relatively large, but not big issues imo.

Symbol meaning

　

1. >> Normal suggestion.
   Big text >> Strong suggestion.
   >> Questionable imo.
   >>> Needs to improve some. (Rhythm is not good , plays or sounds weird)
   No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on the other place.

　or JUST MY OPINION.

[Kantan]

1. 00:08:708 - uum… remove? It plays better as beginners. fixed.
2. 00:09:681 - same, not strong sounds after finisher. ^ fixed
3. 00:18:762 - change to k? make a consistent with before kkd and make a inconsistent (gap)with after dkd.
4. 01:31:411 - same.
5. 00:12:924 - , 00:18:113 - ...d? same as 01:35:951 - ?
   whoa all above point is complement each other and good. fixed.
6. 00:30:762 - can add d imo, hmm i want to make a difference with 00:20:384 - where there is more noise there
7. 00:38:870 - change k? to emphasized to sounds up than 00:33:681 - (drum roll). i think the drum sound still same until synth sound going up
8. 00:54:113 - move to 00:54:762 - ? its early following 1/1 triple imo. fixed, and changed to d to emphasis the higher pitch at 00:55:086 - better
9. 00:55:735 (86,87) - dk? fix
10. 01:11:951 - add note on purpose? same as other diffs. ok
11. 01:19:086 - no spinner? wanted to make break in lower diff. but reconsidered and added the spinner.
12. 01:22:978 (121,122,123) - remove the finishres? its kind to play as beginners . sure
    
13. 01:27:194 - ,01:25:897 (126,127) - remove , 01:26:546 - add k instead? there’re high dense. I think its better to make a lower dense and simple rhythm. fixed

[Futsuu]

1. 00:08:059 - remove or move to 00:07:411 - removed!
2. 00:13:573 (24,25,26,27) - change to ddk-k instead? to focus the more main part pitch. kkk is more simple and fits the drum well so i prefer to keep it.
3. 00:18:762 (40,41,42) - ddk? same as ^
4. 00:23:627 (55,56,57,58,59) - change to like… same patterns? (k-ddk-k or k-kkk (for variation with bach chorus)) changed to k-kkk
5. 01:31:411 (6,7) - dd? kk
6. 01:36:276 (21,22,23,24,25,26) - same as others. fixed
7. Either? from 00:30:113 - it sounds noisy but you dont put on. I think you can add notes more somewhere, imo.
   
   • A 00:28:816 - move to ½ left, 00:28:978 - add don? .I guess you can put some redlines . Its not bad way.
     B.00:28:816 - remove , 00:30:113 - add d, 00:30:924 - move to 00:30:600 - ?
   A is good~
8. from 01:41:465 - ~~ , same as above.
   
   
9. 00:39:843 - remove...? umm.. lol plays a bit better imo, there’re no reasons. lol it's noisy here so i think it's ok combined with below mod is good. fixed
10. 00:40:654 - move to 00:41:303 - and change to k? felt the early appeared ½ pattern imo. fixed
11. 00:52:167 - bit oversounded as Futsuu imo…? 00:50:546 (138,139,140,141,142,143) - dkd-dkd change to dkddk-k or dkdkd-k? dkddk-k is nice~
12. like Muzukashii, 01:03:843 - move to 01:05:140 - and 01:05:465 - change d? fixed
13. 01:06:438 - , 01:09:032 - , 01:10:654 - same . ^
14. 01:19:086 - no big notes? yeah added K
15. 01:27:194 - change to k? the melody is going up at 01:27:357 - so i think d here can reflect it better

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:02:708 (4,5) - , 00:05:627 - remove? feel many notes a bit imo. ok
   00:22:978 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - ,01:35:627 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - Inconsistency rhythm? change to kd-dkkd-k? (or kd-dkkddk) changed kd-dkkddk~
2. 00:15:367 - remove? I think its lower priority to put on there comparing with the diff-spread.
   
   • And, suggest them.
   1. 00:16:248 - remove , from 00:15:681 - - , add ¼ kat triple, and 00:15:843 - change k instead?
   fixed
3. 00:31:573 (107,108,109) - , 01:44:222 (59,60,61) - kkk ? got same suggestion before, so applied.
4. 00:32:059 - add k? lol to make aconsistenty with 00:21:681 - 01:44:708 - , It follows the little splash sounded. at 00:21:681 - 01:44:708 - ,the music is continuous, while at 00:32:059 it has a pause so not putting note there
5. 00:36:032 - remove and 00:36:113 - change k? refer to Oni. sure
6. 00:45:681 - ,00:50:870 - change to k, to make a consistent with 00:43:086 - . fixed
7. 00:52:978 - remove? drum sounds not well.
   
   • |00:52:492 - can remove too imo, to make a break and emphasized to next lack o f don parts lol.
   fixed. and i made some don in that part lol.
8. 01:04:492 (5,6) - remove , and 01:04:978 - ,01:05:140 - add d, k? Its more clean with 4/4 rhythm and break time. fixed
9. 01:07:086 (16,17) - same ^
10. hmm… from 01:17:951 - all k that joined the finisher Dons, remove is better for overall difficulty. hmm i prefer to keep it to reflect the stroke sound.
    
    • If you applied ^, sugegst this.
    1. 01:19:086 - not bad to change K like kantan. but K is nice~

JUDYDANNY wrote:

[Oni]

1. 00:02:140 - , 00:03:357 - , 00:04:735 - ,00:05:627 - remove? feel many notes a bit imo. ok
2. 00:07:330 - move to ¼ right? hmm i think this position more accurate
3. 00:32:059 - add k? lol to make aconsistenty with 00:21:681 - 01:44:708 - , It follows the little splash sounded. same reason as muzu, to emphasis the pause
4. 00:35:789 (17,18,19,20,21,22) - change to kkd-k-d? it sounds better to express the little quiet part to make the simple( abekobe). fixed
5. 00:45:519 (77,78,79) - change to ddk ? to make a consistent with ½ colors 00:43:086 (62,63,64,65,66) - , and make a inconsistent with ½ colors 00:46:816 (85,86,87) - to express the variation. remain unchanged because the don at 00:45:681 - is to follow main melody, like 00:45:357 - and 00:46:005 -
6. 00:55:573 - move to 00:55:897 - ? to make a consistent with …backsounds rhythm. good~ fixed
7. 00:57:438 - move to 00:57:924 - ? same as above. ^
8. 00:59:627 - change to k ? same as above, to make a consistent with cymbals hits on before and after bars? fixed
   |01:09:843 - I have a question, k is on purpose? no, it's an accident lol fixed
   
   
   01:28:167 - ~~ ½ colors kkdkkddkd sounds very questionable…. Either?
   
   • A.01:28:654 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - kdkkd-d-k change to kdk-k-ddk?
     B.01:29:140 - change to k?
     C.01:28:167 - ~~ change to k-kkd-k-kkddk-k-d? * 01:28:735 - If you wont ignore , plz igonore, but it sounds the best imo as Oni.
   hmm i would like to make 1/4 kdkkd for pattern variation there. rearranged a bit from C point. (make k-kkd-k-kdkkd-k-d)

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:06:276 - k? backsounds up. d is consistenft with 00:03:681 - tho
2. 00:06:924 - ~~ add more? like… 00:06:924 - ,00:07:248 - , 00:07:411 - , 00:07:978 - ,
   00:08:059 - . Its lack of following the drum part imo. added, but not at 00:07:978 - , 00:08:059 - made break here instead
   
   1. and, 00:08:870 - remove for making a break instead? because this note is joined with finishers
3. 00:13:492 - remove? no strong reverb bass and overempasized the main slar imo. hmm it flows good to me.
4. 00:17:870 - same. rearranged here
5. 00:17:627 - uum… not similar as00:11:627 (69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - .
   How about D-d-k-ddkkd-k-k from 00:16:816 - ? the reason is ↓
   1. 00:17:221 - move to 00:17:384 - and change to d?
   2. 00:17:708 - remove
   3. 00:17:627 - d not same as 00:17:303 - rogic.
   4. 00:17:546 - change to k to make a consistent with 1st 00:12:357 - ?
   fixed... i think. a bit confused so made some change myself too lol
6. 00:16:573 - move to 00:16:411 - ? 00:16:654 (113,114) - no joined the 1/4 notes sounds better to play such a high dense imo. fixed
   
7. 00:24:194 - add d? can follow the more.. backchorus up. fixed
8. 00:25:492 - add d? can follow the more.. lower synthesizer. ^
9. 00:27:681 (64,65,66,1) - dddk? and 00:28:816 (5,6,7,8) - kkkd? instead?
   1st, not fits on there with high pitch noise sounds imo .
   2nd, On the other side of synthesizer , it sounds and plays not well ...
   fixed
   
   00:32:059 - I really want to put on k … sounds the little splash… how about d? throbbing sound still same
   
10. 00:41:870 - remove? not sounds well. blame backsound vocal lol
11. 00:42:600 - splash sounds still slar. k sounds better? hmm.. i prefer d to emphasis crash sound at 00:42:438 -
12. 01:02:059 (16,17,18) - change ¼ kkd? not sounds well over ¼ sound. fixed
13. from 01:03:519 - part, Its a bit over working imo. It can make more nerf (lower frequency of ¼), consider again plz…
    removed some weak notes
14. 01:24:600 - , 01:24:924 - add kd , 01:25:248 - change k? lol loll i think is better to leave empty to emphasis the stronger beat
    
15. 01:36:843 - add d , 01:38:140 - add d? same as 1st. fixed
16. 01:40:330 (2,3,4,1) - dddk? and 01:41:465 (2,3,4,5) - kkkd? fixed
    
    
    01:17:303 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - omg… dkdddkdddkddkkkddkkkddkkkddkkkd orz lol
    is hard, but still DTable for yumuya lol

I guess Inner Oni still can improve, call me back after improved the Inner (maybe...bout 1~2mods+.. and yourselfmod? lol)
Good luck (¦3[___]

KANTAN!!

FUTSUU!!

MUZUKASHII!!

ONI!!

1. 00:01:573 (2) - 00:04:167 (10) - and 00:06:762 (18) - d I think sound better. eve
2. 00:36:843 (26,27) - ctrl + g

The rest of the diff seems fine. And the Inner is very good, I can not find anything. Good luck!

1. 00:06:762 - move to 00:06:600 - ? biar konsisten sama di 00:07:897
2. 00:06:924 - ganti ke k kalo apply yg atas, biar konsisten juga
3. 00:16:654 (111,112) - swap jadi d K biar konsisten sama di 00:11:627 - yang awalnya pake kat
4. 0021:843 (16,17,18) - delete ? buat pembeda antara kiai sama non kiai. masa non kiai sama sulitnya di kiai akhir ?? (01:34:492 - )
5. 00:27:032 (59,60,61) - swap color to ddk sama kek diatas, pitch di 00:27:194 - akhirannya di kat kek yg lu buat di awal kiai
6. 00:28:005 (2,3,4) - kasih big note aja buat emphasis di sini, sounds better for single note
7. 00:31:897 - kurangin volume hitsound di triplet ini, mungkin jadi 80%. kalo 90% gw ngerasa hitsound bukannya ngiringin lagu malah ketiban
8. 00:33:032 (32,33,34,35,36,37) - sama kek diatas (00:34:330 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - 00:37:248 (68,69,70,71) - 00:41:627 (118,119,120,121,122,123) - )
9. 00:40:492 - ganti jadi kat aja di sini, for better flows like kiai
10. 00:42:600 - ga kasih break aja di sini ? also buat nekenin big note di 00:42:762
11. 00:51:519 - personally gw lebih suka kddkkd dibanding kkkkkd, lebih bervariasi warnanya.
12. 01:01:897 - same as above
13. 01:05:627 - ganti ke don aja ? buat nekenin kat di quintuplet selanjutnya
14. 01:19:248 - kurangin volume spinnernya ? mungkin jadi 70%
15. 01:29:303 - kalo buat konsisten seharusnya akhiran 1/6 ini sih kat, mungkin ganti ke dddk atau kddk (kalo mau buat variasi) ?
16. 01:34:654 - kok abis dari sini kesulitan notenya berkurang dari sebelumnya ? atau sama kesulitannya kek non kiai ? mungkin tambahin beberapa note buat mempersulit, buat klimaks lagunya juga
17. 01:40:654 (2,3,4) - sama kaya 00:28:005

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi Volta
as you requested me through chat, only inner oni

[INNER ONI!!]

1. 00:06:762 - move to 00:06:600 - ? biar konsisten sama di 00:07:897 kalo di 00:06:762 konsisten sama melodi di 00:06:762 , 00:04:167 - jadi no change
2. 00:06:924 - ganti ke k kalo apply yg atas, biar konsisten juga ^
3. 00:16:654 (111,112) - swap jadi d K biar konsisten sama di 00:11:627 - yang awalnya pake kat mempertimbangkan ada suara tinggi di 00:16:654 - rasanya lebih pas k D
4. 0021:843 (16,17,18) - delete ? buat pembeda antara kiai sama non kiai. masa non kiai sama sulitnya di kiai akhir ?? (01:34:492 - ) sama-sama kiai kok, biar konsisten
5. 00:27:032 (59,60,61) - swap color to ddk sama kek diatas, pitch di 00:27:194 - akhirannya di kat kek yg lu buat di awal kiai tp lebih pas pasang k di 00:27:032 - karna suara drum dan pitch tingginya
6. 00:28:005 (2,3,4) - kasih big note aja buat emphasis di sini, sounds better for single note rasanya emphasis ke 00:29:465 - jadi berkurang kalo begitu
7. 00:31:897 - kurangin volume hitsound di triplet ini, mungkin jadi 80%. kalo 90% gw ngerasa hitsound bukannya ngiringin lagu malah ketiban ok, diganti jadi 70% biar lebih kerasa perbedaannya
8. 00:33:032 (32,33,34,35,36,37) - sama kek diatas (00:34:330 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - 00:37:248 (68,69,70,71) - 00:41:627 (118,119,120,121,122,123) - ) ok
9. 00:40:492 - ganti jadi kat aja di sini, for better flows like kiai ok
10. 00:42:600 - ga kasih break aja di sini ? also buat nekenin big note di 00:42:762 hmm rasanya lebih enak disambungin sama main melodynya
11. 00:51:519 - personally gw lebih suka kddkkd dibanding kkkkkd, lebih bervariasi warnanya. gw juga lebih suka ternyata
12. 01:01:897 - same as above fixed
13. 01:05:627 - ganti ke don aja ? buat nekenin kat di quintuplet selanjutnya betul juga. di 01:10:816 - juga d
14. 01:19:248 - kurangin volume spinnernya ? mungkin jadi 70% ok
15. 01:29:303 - kalo buat konsisten seharusnya akhiran 1/6 ini sih kat, mungkin ganti ke dddk atau kddk (kalo mau buat variasi) ? kkkd lebih enak menurut gw karena alasan sebelumnya
16. 01:34:654 - kok abis dari sini kesulitan notenya berkurang dari sebelumnya ? atau sama kesulitannya kek non kiai ? mungkin tambahin beberapa note buat mempersulit, buat klimaks lagunya juga hmm oke, dicoba
17. 01:40:654 (2,3,4) - sama kaya 00:28:005 sama

semoga membantu, good luck

1. 01:04:816 - Either remove(Futsuu) or add(Kantan , Muzukashii) finish?
   
2. 01:26:546 (8,9) - Eitehr unify?
   Kantan K - d
   Futsuu, Muzukashii , Oni k - D
   I think unified the k>D seems better for spread to make a consistent with 00:11:627 - .

1. 01:21:681 - remove the finish? other diffs no appeared.

1. kindly, 00:29:465 - , 01:42:113 - remove the finisher seems better as Muzukashii player imo.

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Recheck.
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1. 01:04:816 - Either remove(Futsuu) or add(Kantan , Muzukashii) finish?
   umm wrong timestamp? no finish in every diff there. maybe you mean 01:02:221 - , removed finish in futsuu
   
   
2. 01:26:546 (8,9) - Eitehr unify?
   Kantan K - d
   Futsuu, Muzukashii , Oni k - D
   I think unified the k>D seems better for spread to make a consistent with 00:11:627 - .
   changed to k-D + invert color of 01:27:843 (26,27,28) - in muzukashii (kdk --> dkd)

[Futsuu]

1. 01:21:681 - remove the finish? other diffs no appeared. fixed

[Muzukashii]

1. kindly, 00:29:465 - , 01:42:113 - remove the finisher seems better as Muzukashii player imo. i think no problem, to emphasis the 'GO!' shouting for mid~higher diffs

Call me back after you solved them (¦3[___]

Nishizumi wrote:

wow 2fastandfurious
gratz anyway

Surono wrote:

dem boi xd

it seems the mapper have a own choice to filling finisher, where is needed finisher or not. I mean, entire of sounds like that doesn't need to be as finisher at all.

Nishizumi wrote:

wow 2fastandfurious
gratz anyway

meme yang ngeeeeeeeeeeeeenggggggggggg

gratz gratz panci cacad peyok!1!

Davin Fortune wrote:

Cot sur :U