00:11 smallboat: 能不能跟杏仁求簡單摸
00:11 happy623: ;w;
00:11 happy623: 什麼圖
00:11 smallboat:   /np
00:12 smallboat: 出不來!
00:12 smallboat: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/201502
00:21 happy623: !
00:21 happy623: 一會看
00:21 happy623: 急嗎;w;
00:30 smallboat: 還好
00:44 happy623: 唔
00:44 happy623: 要看全部麼
00:45 smallboat: 都可以
00:45 happy623: ;w;
00:45 smallboat: ww
00:45 happy623: 可以不看嗎
00:45 happy623: 有點懶orz
00:45 smallboat: 速摸挑幾個就好(?
00:45 smallboat: 哭哭
00:45 smallboat: 好 先慢來
00:46 smallboat: 現在不摸也沒關係
00:46 happy623: 慢來船爺都rank了
00:48 happy623: 你的Insane不上8.5麼
00:49 smallboat: 能上?
00:49 happy623: 感覺kiai 可以難點也沒問題
00:49 smallboat: 低bpm一般不都最高8?
00:49 happy623: 一般已經
00:49 happy623: 而已*
00:49 happy623: 不過也是不上好了
00:50 happy623: 感覺不太難orz
00:51 smallboat: 恩@_@
00:51 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/477089 Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta (Anime Ver.) [Hard]]
00:51 happy623: 01:11:080 (3) - 這裡加個note吧0 0
00:52 happy623: 始終那鼓也有點響
00:52 smallboat: 诶 這裡是放1/2滑條
00:52 happy623: BPM低不會有問題
00:53 smallboat: 哦不沒事
00:53 smallboat: 看錯
00:53 happy623: ;w;
00:53 happy623: 忘了刪 (3)字了
00:53 smallboat: ww
00:53 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/477091 Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta (Anime Ver.) [Normal]]
00:53 happy623: 00:41:252 (5) - NC
00:53 happy623: 00:41:933 (7) - 這個放的有點太密(?
00:54 happy623: 可以放開點
00:54 happy623: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1933619
00:54 happy623: 或者其他的滑條看你喜歡
00:54 smallboat: 好
00:55 happy623: 00:52:161 (5) - NC啊
00:55 happy623: 因為你Kiai之前的都是1節1NC了
00:55 happy623: kiai才2節1個
00:56 smallboat: 對哦~
00:56 happy623: 01:22:160 (8) - 雖然會毀了NC pattern
00:57 happy623: 但我覺得這裡加個也好0 0
00:57 happy623: 給人聽到節奏改變
00:57 smallboat: 好0.0
00:57 smallboat: 說的也堆
00:57 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/477088 Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta (Anime Ver.) [Easy]]
00:58 happy623: 00:08:524 (1) - 刪NC keep pattern
00:58 smallboat: 好
00:58 happy623: 00:28:979 (2) - 這個off screen不好看 放下一點
00:59 happy623: 00:41:933 (5) - ;w; 這個放的有點怪啊
00:59 happy623: 這樣擺? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1933640
01:00 smallboat: 好 可以
01:01 happy623: 00:54:888 (1) - 其實我在想這個刪不刪走好 感覺這個節奏換的在easy不太好按 不過如果你喜歡就keep吧 新手注意看應該沒問題的
01:02 happy623: 01:05:114 (5) - 同樣off screen問題
01:02 happy623: 01:14:660 (3) - ^
01:02 smallboat: 好
01:02 happy623: 01:21:478 (5) - 如果你Normal有加個NC這裡也加~
01:04 smallboat: 好
01:04 smallboat: 看到是沒加  那就keep
01:04 happy623: okay
01:05 happy623: 感覺Insane那些突然的跳怪怪的w''
01:05 happy623: 等我看看
01:05 smallboat: 好w
01:06 smallboat: 其餘兩個也會講嗎0.0
01:06 happy623: 不了 w
01:06 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/477090 Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta (Anime Ver.) [Insane]]
01:06 happy623: 00:33:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
01:06 happy623: 這裡不跳後面卻跳起來
01:07 happy623: 不..
01:07 happy623: 00:35:456 (9,10) - 這2個建議不要跳
01:07 happy623: 00:35:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這樣這個梗就不會怪了
01:09 happy623: 試試這個
01:09 happy623: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1933656
01:10 happy623: 00:36:479 (5,6) - 由於前面的跳 這裡ds突然很小的話就好像很爽的時候給停了 很失落的;w;
01:10 happy623: 建議跟前的 00:36:308 (4,5) - 的ds一致, 或者你喜歡的其他跳
01:12 happy623: 00:41:933 (4,5,6) - nazi一下  這個6跟45的不是直線啊;w;
01:12 happy623: 你好了叫我
01:21 happy623: 唔 我還是繼續
01:21 happy623: 01:06:478 (6) - 這裡NC不? 如果覺得沒什麼用就不了
01:24 happy623: 01:11:421 (5) - 這裡漏了很多音;w; 自己聽一下吧
01:25 happy623: 沒了;w;

rinsukir wrote:

[Yuki's Insane]
00:22:161 (1,2,3) - 改成这样? 后面也是 听起来感觉怪怪的
00:23:524 (3,4,5,6) - 改成弧线会不会好一些.. 这个也没啥差别
01:06:648 (2,3,4) - 试试这样? 的确可以，不过我想保持

ts8zs wrote:

[Yuki's Insane]
00:54:206 (1) - a little overmap XD
00:55:399 (2) - NC?for stopped 不
01:03:069 (1) - Ctrl+G?better flow,40,240? 这里ctrl+g我觉得5和1就不是好flow了
01:06:478 (1,2) - swap nc.better for read 没啥必要

Regraz wrote:

Yuki's Insane

Overall: Nice work. I especially appreciate the nnotes/rhythm in te section before the Kiai time very very much! They are fantastic!
Rhythm:
1. 00:33:752 (3) - Maybe better if you: http://puu.sh/aYnTP/e274a1c4db.jpg ?
2. 00:36:479 (3,4) - Maybe betterif you: http://puu.sh/aYnVh/843181e519.jpg ? 这里停顿是故意的，我个人也比较喜欢这个梗，不改
3. 00:55:399 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 太帅太帅！忍不住说一句! 曲子的感觉一下就出来了
4. 01:06:137 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 01:18:069 (1,2) - Feels that single notes with small jumps are better for both vocal and rhythm. (感觉四个单点加点小跳更好一点) 不知道摆哪里好了
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:01:024 (1) - Move to 225|202 for perfect stack. fixed
2. 01:04:432 (1,3) - Check the stack ^
Hitsounds:
1. 00:29:661 (3) - whistle? 想了想没加
2. 00:30:343 (1) - Add another whistle to emphasize? ^
Other issues:
1. Unsnapped http://puu.sh/aYobJ/a107814344.png fixed

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rinsukir wrote:

hi Hi

[General]
两个gd都关掉宽屏支持? 好
删掉sc1的whistle? 虽然和默认的有差别但是差别好像不大.. 沒關係 保持這樣

[Easy]
直滑条有点少啊..考虑把一些曲线滑条改成直的? 考慮
00:22:161 - 无用绿线? ok刪了
01:17:898 - ^ ^
00:54:888 (1) - 删掉? 恩想了一下，刪掉好了
01:07:160 (1) - ds有点问题.. Fixed.

[Normal]
00:01:024 (3) - 修一下blanket? 后面好像还有一些.. 好
00:04:433 (8) - 头的whistle放到尾巴? 不了
00:07:161 (2) - 尾巴的whistle放到头上? 好
01:24:546 (2,3,4,5) - 试试这样? 好

[Hard]
00:04:433 (1) - 修一下形状? 考慮
00:03:752 (3) - 往上放一些? 好
00:25:911 (4) - 改成在00:26:252结束的滑条? 感覺還ok
00:33:752 (3) - 改成这样可能好一些? 后面也是 好
00:48:752 (2,3) - 考虑改成两个1/4滑条? 雖然可以，但想keep it ,這就用在m醬那邊.
01:06:478 (5,6,1) - ctrl+g? 或者5不折返 然后在01:06:819放一个note? Fixed,選擇加了note

[Insane]
感觉ar有点高_(:з」∠)_ ar8应该没问题吧.. 可以
00:19:263 - 感觉这里应该也要放一个note.. 選擇延伸了slider
00:23:354 - ^ 換了slider
00:26:081 - ^ 這個還好
00:34:263 - ^ 后面有两处也是.. 也還可以
00:27:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里好像可以做成一个五角星 先保持
00:58:978 (1) - 可能不叠会比较好? 保持
01:16:364 (5) - 复制前面的3然后放在3的附近可能会好一些? 保持

goodluck~ :D

Thanks rinsukir ~ !

Regraz wrote:

船业教我找mod和dog啊 下次

Hi! Chuanye！ hi
•This is Regraz's mod. Note that I am rather new to modding/mapping, so I am sorry if this cannot provide real help.
•This color means things that I highly suggest. But all the mods are just ideas, feel free to deny these because as to mapping, we need various ideas, right?
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The 0004 map modded since using the new modding framwork. (Dont care about this number , it is just used to remind me the number of maps I've modded.)

General and Song Setup

Fine

Easy

Overall: Solid work. Maybe patterns seem a little boring, but they are fine.
Consider using 2.5 CS or reduce Normal's CS to 3.2. A 2.0 to 3.5's CS jump is not a good spread.Use Easy CS2.5 now,but Normal keep it.
Rhythm:
Fine, plain 1/2 seems a little boring anyway.Nothing,just do this.
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:41:933 (5,2) - They are in the same direction, which is not neat and also breaks the flow a little, consider this? : http://puu.sh/aX8Xs/38b2040ac3.jpg Also you need adjust 3's position. http://puu.sh/aX8ZZ/fe3dfaa259.jpg Fixed the 2 position.
2. 00:49:433 (1,2) - Better if you improve this blanket. http://puu.sh/aX92A/8d14001ecf.jpg Moved a bit.
3. 01:05:114 (5,1) - Avoid this overlap, it is to some extend not beautiful. Keep it
Hitsounds:
Slidertick ruins the hitsounds, consider reducing slidertick rate. Will consider to this
1. Feels that using 24 whistle in the start part of the diff is not apprioprate, maybe following the piano's high pitch to add whistle is better. For example, 00:05:797 (1) - This slidertick-whistle is not at piano, whihc sounds a little weird. Why not add whistle at both the head and the reverse-point of this slider, since this slider is 3/2. Feel fine now,perhap will consider this.
Other issues:
Feels like several greenline are not necessary, consider deleting them.Will consider to this

Normal

Overall: Better than Normal imo, nice flow, really a solid work.
Rhythm:
Nice.
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:46:706 (1) - Consider changing thi place for a elbow flow here: http://puu.sh/aXtrd/2dd49178a2.jpg Fixed
2. 00:48:070 (3,4,1) - Nicer flow may be like this: http://puu.sh/aXttV/5064e8d172.jpg Fixed
3. 00:50:115 (2,3,4) - Same comment as 00:46:706 (1) - :http://puu.sh/aXtv4/b26f71a5a7.jpg Fixed
4. 01:13:296 (3,4) - Better if you fix this blanket. http://puu.sh/aXtCh/ed6dc230af.jpg Fixed
5. 01:23:523 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not very beautiful imo. Feel fine now.
Hitsounds:
Also same comment as Easy.
1. 00:03:070 (6) - Add whistle to follow the piano? Cool,added.
Other issues:
1. 00:03:070 (6) - NC because of the piano's pitch.
2. 00:13:979 (5) - NC because of the vocal here. Added.
3. 00:19:433 (5) - ^ Added.
4. 00:24:888 (5) - ^ Added.
These 4 NCs is meant to be consistent with your next sections.[/color] Fixed.
5. 00:58:978 (6) - - NC? Added.
6. 01:04:432 (6) - ^ Added.
Wont repeat same point. Just a suggestion.Okay.

Hard

Overall: Also a solid work, rhythm are nice, also player-friendly.
Rhythm:
1. 00:17:047 (2) - Maybe follow the vocal is better? Just imo. http://puu.sh/aYj9E/c6a051b993.jpg Also stack 1 and 2 to emphasize the vocal. Changed
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:03:070 (1,2,3) - Make the space consistent. http://puu.sh/aYj2e/aec1adae06.png Fixed.
2. 00:19:433 (1,2) - Better if you use blanet here.Feel fine now.
3. 00:41:933 (3,4) - ^ ^
4. 00:45:342 (4,5,6) - This kind of overlap seems not appropriate in Hard.It's okay to me.
5. 00:58:296 (7,1,2) - Why not make a circle? http://puu.sh/aYjop/cfb17dbad6.jpg Although can use this,but I think that pattern is fine.
Hitsounds:
Nice, though slidertick sounds weird at some degree.Perhaps will check and fix it.
Other issues:
None

Insane

Overall: Fine, kinda old style lol. LOL
Nearly fine, cannot mod it. So nothing to say here.Okay.

•That's all.
•In general, this map is so experiened. Also great work indeed! Yes.
•Finally, good luck on ranking! And take my star~

Thanks Regraz mod and star ~ !

Awaken wrote:

aaa
[Easy]
真是得说 几乎整张图都是1/2 kiai这样倒没什么 主歌比较柔和的部分更好的应该用1/1甚至3/2来代替
Easy也没啥可说的 我就写blanket好了好

SPOILER

00:35:797 (4,5) -
00:00:343 (1,2) -
00:38:524 (1,2) -
00:49:433 (1,2) -

移動了一點
00:00:343 (1,2) -
00:08:524 (2) - 这个和前面的节奏是一样的 为什么不插同样的绿线做相同的音效？0.0 忘了
00:41:252 (4,5) - 类似这种的排列 我觉得flow不怎么好 这种就应该顺着摆下来是最佳 把5 Ctrl+g了
我怀疑这easy十分钟做完 花了一小吧
[Normal]
00:27:615 (1,3) - 虽然是个没啥用的nazi 不过最好把3往左略偏移一下 与1和2之间的距离相等 移動了一點
00:28:638 (2,3,1,2) - 现在这样节奏真不怎么样;_; 我建议这样 更符合歌曲

SPOILER

不喜歡尾端放大白線，或許這能考慮下
然后是关于kiai的NC 如果按照前面的NC方法来看 应该是属于太长 可以改变一下NC格局 比如这里01:04:432 (6) - 可以加个NC 后面类似
不过由于是在kiai 不改也没啥关系 也可以说是两个部分做个分割 恩，照Regeaz那個mod加NC了
[Hard]
00:24:888 (1,2,3,4) - 这这这 太突然啦;_; 我建议把00:25:399 (2,3) - 结合成一个折返滑条 然后00:25:911 (4,5) - 做一个1/2slider 好
[Insane]
00:28:979 (5) - 可能是我个人 不过我觉得摆个五角星更好啊 玩家在玩的时候能感受到你画五角星的美丽（。再考慮
01:06:478 (1,2) - 这里有几个鼓 所以我觉得还是摆几个单点的好 好
01:11:421 (5,6,7,1) - 我怎么老是读成1/2 01:12:103 这个位置还是加个单点或者重新摆下节奏比较好 这个距离容易读成你是为了摆滑条与单点之间的跳 好 重擺了 然後那邊加了單點
01:26:251 (1) - 放底下呗 美观 x261y381 這不太美觀阿，不過放在 310 370了

Good Luck for rank ~

謝了阿瓦肯~ !