00:16:717 - there is technically no note here, maybe shift this to 00:16:846 for the drums? (can also do 3 triplets here for the drum beats, i.e. add 00:16:588 as well)
similarly, shift 00:18:305 to 00:18:039 and maybe do K finishers for 00:18:105 and 00:18:372?
(for example 00:17:839 - kdddK d K d K, or can do something else if you like)
i kinda noticed that some of the svs for the lower diffs might be a bit fast (e.g. 1.2x sv for 254 bpm in muzu), you could try to adjust the base sv to fix this?
maybe try:
kantan (easy): 1.0x
futsuu (normal): 1.1x
muzu (hard): 1.2x
oni (expert): 1.3x
inner (master): 1.4x
this looks a bit better imo