Daijobu Desu ka?

00:05:910 - quite minor but i think this note could be d like 00:05:620 cuz they're similar in pitch? kinda also avoid same color to finisher as well

00:12:878 00:14:620 - remove
00:14:233 00:15:201 - add a note

doing this will help emphasize a line of lyrics with a full chain and cutting chain on moving over to the next line?

00:13:943 - no reason why sv should go lower like this, it kinda ruins the structure you established at 00:09:297 00:11:039 00:12:588

make it go upper like the other 3 would make this nicer and more consistent

00:16:717 - there is technically no note here, maybe shift this to 00:16:846 for the drums? (can also do 3 triplets here for the drum beats, i.e. add 00:16:588 as well)

similarly, shift 00:18:305 to 00:18:039 and maybe do K finishers for 00:18:105 and 00:18:372?
(for example 00:17:839 - kdddK d K d K, or can do something else if you like)

00:20:781 - 00:22:656 - maybe try mapping the swing 1/3 drums here?

imo it would be more interesting and fitting to the song here, compared to the 1/2 mapping currently

(can also do the same for oni)

00:37:476 - i think you can add a note here for vocal. you dont seem to avoid 1/4 finishers all that much (evidenced by 02:08:900 02:20:238)

00:39:217 - adding a kat here would make this small little section go mirror it looks kinda cool imo

00:40:557 - pretty clear 1/4 synth here, add note?

00:58:972 - think u can start sv from 1.1x instead? the 0.07x jump here feels kinda random and a bit jumpscary imo

01:02:722 - would be nicer to invert this chain to ddddddddk so d could go with drums? kats feel kinda weird on drum imo, esp whenyou're going for a mono like this

01:02:722 - starting the sv from 1.1x feels less drastic and feels more smooth imo. current looks a bti forced with how fast the svs are accelerating, and it kinda makes the chain feel disconnected too

01:07:008 - i think the gradual svs here make no sense. it's not a buildup or anything that warrants a keep-going effect if u know what i mean

if u still wanna sv this small part i feel like a sharp sv jump 1.1x from 01:07:008 to 01:07:543 would make this funny vocal part stand out better than the current gradual accel

01:08:213 01:08:280 - quite clear 1/4 drums, add notes?

01:08:615 - bump sv on finisher like 01:04:329?

01:08:749 - a bit kinda weird that you mapped 01:08:749 on nothing then nothing goes on actual drum spot at 01:08:883. would recommend moving 01:08:749 -> 01:08:883 and delete 01:08:949 to highlight vocal

01:14:641 -> 01:14:842 would help highlighting the blue tick vocal at 01:14:708 better with a gap imo

01:18:592 - maybe add note. having this triplet for 1/2 vocal but leaving 01:18:659 out does feel weird imo

01:21:472 01:22:542 01:23:567 01:24:058 - just my idea personally, but i think it would be nicer to finisher these notes as a signal of bpm change, and also quite loud crashes too

01:25:376 - maybe a note? no reason to leave this drum unmapped imo

01:25:494 - maybe bump the sv smooth from 01:25:494 to 1.3x so the speed compared to 01:25:258 will be more noticeable?

01:32:227 01:32:404 - these could be removed to represent the drums better. currently there's no drums on said notes

additionally could also map 01:32:935 a kat for drum?

01:34:116 - the vocal is on 1/12 tick
01:34:195 01:34:274 - you can map this to fit vocal more

01:34:589 - this note is not really emphasizing any particular sound, would suggest moving to 01:34:766 for vocal

01:36:183 -> 01:36:538? doing so will help transitioning to vocal note there, and this chain could fully embrace the 1/4 drums in the background too

01:40:317 - i hear 1/4 drum, add note?

01:57:502 - subjective, but could maybe fill in the 1/1 rest here with a d note? same for 02:11:912 and 02:12:857

i personally prefer to not have too many 1/1 rests for the most intense part of the song

02:14:215 - maybe could remove for 02:14:274~02:14:628 vocal could stay 1/2

02:17:050 - 1/4 drum?