01:55:064 (1) - Nothing to click on here (unlike 01:38:953)
00:12:205 (5,1,2) - I don't think the burst satisfies the rhythm as even turning music volume to 100% and effects to 0%, the sound your trying to emphasize is far too quiet.
I recommend 2 kick sliders on the The rhythm to emphasize more prominent sounds.
I take it you are a newer mapper and probably need direction for your mapping.
For this difficulty, Take some inspiration from this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/469434#osu/1105879
This is the same star rating, now presented in a more comprehensive map.