02:56:135 - not sure if repeating 02:59:332 (1,2,3) - here is good choice. i would make it differ a little just to make it more interesting.
00:55:064 (2,3) - about the rhythm. not only in this part. it feels like these two should be swapped places because im pretty sure that the "can't" feels shorter compared to the following "stop". https://niyuji.s-ul.eu/76HrRwC9