Papercut

00:12:310 (5) - would use this http://prntscr.com/lgrpg9 patterning
to emphasize the snare the circle is mapped to

00:14:907 (3) - http://prntscr.com/lgrq6k looks nicer
especially since the curved triple has inconsistent spacing

00:22:099 - http://prntscr.com/lgrrgm this kind of triangular pattern works better for groups of 3 imo

00:24:292 (1,2,3) - funky ds

00:24:697 (4,6), 00:27:893 (4,6) - kinda bad blankets would reccommend to ctrl-shift-r by 15 degrees for this one 00:25:296 (6) - and -10 degrees for this one 00:28:492 (6) -

00:25:890 (1) - do any of these sounds have any pattern cuz for such a strong sound it /seemingly/ seems like u don't know whether to place them farther from the previous object or closer (talkin about 00:25:291 (6,1) - 00:28:487 (6,1) - 00:31:684 (6,1) - 00:34:881 (6,1) - and so on). would feel nicer if you had some sort of consistency or smth goin on to compliment your hitsounds better

00:30:690 (1) - http://prntscr.com/lgrsvr maybe map this rhythm so that you dont miss the triple of the main melody
but keep the percussion triple? it repeats throughout the whole section aswell

00:33:887 - rhythm could be altered here to emphasize the vocal maybe? throughout entire section up until this part you repeat the same rhythmic pattern, it feels underwhelming

00:35:385 - this gap could be filled. maybe undo the reverse slider and put a 1/4 slider here 00:35:285 - move it closer to 00:35:485 (1) -

00:38:682 - this overlap looks kinda ugly for skins w/o slider ends
i get that its supposed to repeat the same overlap
but perfectly stacking works way better here imo

00:40:180 - missed sound

00:40:180 - again theres a triple from the main melody

00:42:677 (1,2) - kinda big spacing, isn't consistent to 00:50:469 (6,7) - an example; also would ctrl-h 00:42:677 (1) -

00:43:471 (1,6) - good lord this stack

00:47:472 - 1/16 actually starts here i was kinda surprised that there is 1/16 at all but there is however
it starts here so ye

00:53:666 (4,5,6) - it's kinda sad that you broke ccw flow

00:55:459 (4) - 01:00:054 (3) - funky

00:57:861 - would use a 3/4 repeat slider since i dont think vocals are strong enough
to be worth overmapping them

00:59:859 (2,3) - pretty big spacing imo

01:18:040 (5) - kinda ugly looking slider; would suggest smth like this https://imgur.com/a/ScTxbVa

01:21:031 (4,5) - seems like this should have an nc, no?

01:25:627 (5) - this'd be cuter with an nc don't u think :O

01:26:630 (1) - is the wide angle here intentional? it emphasizes 3 fine although id still change it
as the map doesnt really use angles this way to emphasize sounds

01:33:223 (2,3) - some parts like this where 01:33:223 (2) - is very close to 01:33:423 (3) - feels inconsistent. i think that the kiai part should be more intense than the rest of the song

01:34:222 - this flows really meh id continue the sliders motion or stack it

01:38:018 - the 3/4 gap to this object is really weird and hard to acc. id either tinker with rhythm
or make this a slider utilizing sliderhead leniency to make this more intuitive

01:54:795 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - i would die for u

01:54:800 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe triangles are a bit overused in nowadays' mapping, but i think that this visual representation https://niyuji.s-ul.eu/6MsQfMEm expresses the music better

02:17:976 - strong beat here which i wouldn't miss out on

02:30:462 (9,1) - why didn't you keep the same spacing? it's looks like the ds between 1 tick objects an example 02:32:161 (3,5) -

02:47:344 (4,5) - would blanket instead of overlap (this also will make flow smoother)

02:56:530 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - yes