I think mapping this without finisher is weird and the sound is strong. So maybe change this into finishers.
00:21:271 - 00:21:554 - 00:22:403 - 00:22:686 - 00:23:535 - 00:23:818 - 00:24:667 - 00:24:950 - 00:57:498 (add a note since the sound here is noticable) - 01:00:186 - 01:01:318 - 01:19:432 - 01:19:573 - 01:27:922 - 01:28:913 - 01:52:969 - 01:56:224 - add a note here w/ finisher 02:20:139 - 02:31:460 - 02:32:592 - 02:33:724 - 02:34:149 - 02:34:573 - could add a finisher note here 02:59:762 instead of spinner end - 03:14:337 - could add a note here 03:37:969 - instead of spinner start, can move the spinner here instead 03:38:111 - 1/2 spinner is fine.
Also, I think it's best if the first note on the start of kiai is a finisher since if you listen to it closely. The sound there is strong enough to be a finisher.
00:11:082 - 01:03:158 - 02:02:026 and 03:15:611
Don't forget to delete 00:11:153 - 01:03:229 - 02:02:097 and 03:15:682 - so it's not complicated to hit.