Kirameki Inokori Daisenshou

Can turn this finisher off 00:05:705 - 00:05:988 - 00:06:271 - 00:07:969 - 00:09:950 - 00:10:233 and 00:10:516 because the sound here isn't strong enough to be a finisher so would change this into a normal note instead.

I wonder if this spinner 00:09:101 (1) - make any senses, i think you would remove it and add note on 00:09:101

That's would be good if you remove that to make short break there ?

00:17:592 and 00:17:733 - feels weird to leave this behind since the instrument here are loud and is noticeable.

Can delete this note 00:19:007 - 00:19:078 and 00:19:219 - the start of the vocal is on 00:19:149 - and there's no sound at 00:19:007 - 00:19:078 and 00:19:219 - and add a note here 00:19:502 - for the vocal 5plet sound.

Can delete this 00:19:573 and 00:20:139 - kiai sv so it merge into one since the sound here can be kiai.

Can add a 9plet around 00:20:705 to 00:21:271 - the sound here is noticable.

00:47:592 (269,270) I'd suggest to turn these two notes into don to emphasize the following kat and turn this 00:48:441 (275) into kat finisher to follow drums better

I don't really understand the purpose of these three notes 00:53:606 (295,296,297), probably this one 00:53:535 (294) is enough to represent the vocals

01:21:271 ~ 01:30:045
The music intensity here is still very high and I recommend you buff it more, also you can decrease the density until 01:30:045 for contrast

01:36:979 - Could remove this to emphasize the vocal on 01:37:120 since you was following it

I would add a kat here 01:51:554 to follow vocals and drums + make the pattern more linear by ending it on a white tick

I know you're trying to follow the vocal on 02:46:318, but the vocal is not on 1/3. You can move 02:46:271 (1009,1010,1011,1012) - to 02:46:318

02:57:498 - This part could be mapped more so please consider to remove spinner on 02:57:498

You can end this spinner here 02:58:630 to follow the drums. It's not wrong how it is now tho so you can decide

If you mapped on 03:02:026 - so why you don't do that on 03:00:045 too ? Otherwise, if you want a break here you can try to remove from 02:59:762 to 03:08:535 but i'm not recommend it

Add a kat here 03:29:196 and make this a don, I think it sounds good and it's better to play

Remove the last spinner 03:38:111 (1) as it doesn't really follow anything