1. Deif's Rain (5 stars, 313 notes)
2. Easy (1,58 stars, 76 notes)
3. Hard (4,68 stars, 140 notes)
4. Insane (4,99 stars, 223 notes)
5. Normal (3,22 stars, 91 notes)

-Bakari- wrote:

hi-hi~ Hi hi

[General]
Combo1 : 250,160,245
Combo2 : 156,210,96
Combo3 : 75,65,33

fits with bg much better, imo Fixed

[Easy]
00:20:138 (1) - don't really like NC stuff. but imo you'd better keep consistent comboing (NC every 2nd big white line) that's why i want you to remove NC here. Fixed
00:28:126 (1) - ^ same here. i think these NCs arre extra ones. remove them to make patterns look better Fixed
00:36:780 - circle here? this empty space confusing for beginners, imo Disaggree, in the cute main-melody there isn't a note here
01:09:400 (1,2) - NC swap. reason same as above. inconsistent comboing and remove NC here 01:12:063 (1) You messed a bit here, but fixed the NC-pattern here
01:17:388 (1,1) - and remove NCs here. orz

[Normal]
AR5 fits much better here, don't you think so? Changed
seems good

[Hard]
00:30:955 (4,6) - overmap ( i hear 1/4 beats here 00:29:458. maybe it'll be good idea to move 1/2 notes here?) It's not an overmap. I can clearly hear notes on every circle (background melody)
00:56:252 (5,7) - ^ ^

[Insane]
first two spinners are too short. use sliders instead of them, please They aren't too short, they fit the ranking-criteria. I'll keep them

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

short mod lol

-Bakari- wrote:

hi-hi~ \o/

[Koka's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:57:417 (1) - D? It already is big Don. D:

[Koka's Taiko Oni]
seems clear /o/

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

short mod lol indeed

1. 00:17:724 (2,3) Me parece que pusiste este jump así a proposito, pero creo que esta demasiado dificil, considerando que mueves (2) un grid a la derecha y se convierte en Hdash, disminuye un poco el espacio entre ellas por favor.
2. 00:18:806 - Puedes inclinar un poco los sliders aqui? creo que se supone que debe hacerse sin Hdash y a mi me cuesta un poco sin usarlo, ademas considerando que luego en esta parte 00:44:103 - usas el Hdash todo el tiempo creo que estaria bien.

• • I think is not necessary to put the Audio Lead-In to 500, put 0?

• - 00:16:143 (3) - To follow your combo pattern, add a new combo please
  - 00:20:138 (3) - Same ^

• - 00:48:763 (3) - Add a whistle here for consistency, sounds better in my opinion

• -- Good job

• - 00:17:475 (7) - A new combo here looks nice to follow the music
  - 00:42:772 (7) - Same ^
  - 01:08:068 (7) - Same too ^

1. Why Dedede in tags? You may add Gameboy too since this theme appeared also in Kirby's Dreamland for Gameboy
   
2. Why not add Taiko and CtB to Tags? It is easier to find maps with CtB (or Taiko) then?
3. You could add KIAI time from 00:21:469 - to 00:31:455 - and from 00:46:766 - 00:56:751 - + 01:12:063 - 01:22:714 -

1. Nothing bad here. I only think that these sliders from 00:44:103 (1,2) - and 01:09:400 (1,2) - don't really fit there D: At lest the sliderend sounds really awkward to me.
2. Overall spacing may seem a bit high but i think it is okay

1. 00:16:143 (3) - hard to say. If this slider belongs to this background noise I would recommend a repeat. But if it is mapped to the "whistle" I would end it at 00:16:976 -
2. 00:17:475 (4,5) - They also feel weird. I know they belong to the background noise this dud dud. But the this "whistle dominates. So either make the first slider two normal notes and the second slider to a stack of two notes or let the first slider the same and add 1/2 beat to the beginning of the 2nd
   slider so it ends the same and starts at 00:17:974 - (may do something with the gap between (5,1) then)
3. 00:42:772 (4,5) - ^
4. 01:08:068 (4,5) - ^
5. 00:41:440 (3) - sounds weird again. add repeat or add 1/2 at the end
6. 01:06:737 (3) - ^

1. 00:19:472 (3) - I miss a repeat here D:
2. 00:20:803 (3) - ^
3. 00:44:769 (3) - ^
4. 00:46:100 (3) - ^
5. 01:10:066 (3) - ^
6. 01:11:397 (3) - ^
7. 00:26:462 - 00:26:628 - add notes. Music is for notes to obvious here for a hard
8. 00:51:759 - 00:51:925 - ^
9. 01:17:055 - 01:17:222 - ^
10. 00:41:440 (7) - I miss a repeat or anything for the following gap here D:
11. 01:06:737 (9) - ^

1. Everything is fine. But I think that the flow were better if your jumps were a bit shorter D:

1. 00:11:816 - 00:11:983 - I miss notes there D: or at least at 11:816
2. 00:37:113 - + 00:37:280 - ^

1. 00:06:822 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - I don't know I think some triplets wouldn't hurt for example at 00:07:988 (7,1) - / 00:11:983 (7,1) - or so. I think this long 1/2 stream with so many k in a row is a bit boring
2. 00:32:120 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - ^
3. 00:31:787 - d?

1. I miss a difficulty name D: I would say "Rain"
2. HDrain - 1?
3. I am not a fan of these super short HDashes
4. Last spinner seems a bit long for me ... It is to short to end it at 01:22:048 - :/ Maybe 2 Spinner? But that doesn't help either, because the first spinner doesn't do a sound then :/

bomber34 wrote:

[General]

1. Why Dedede in tags? You may add Gameboy too since this theme appeared also in Kirby's Dreamland for Gameboy
   
2. Why not add Taiko and CtB to Tags? It is easier to find maps with CtB (or Taiko) then? Changed
3. You could add KIAI time from 00:21:469 - to 00:31:455 - and from 00:46:766 - 00:56:751 - + 01:12:063 - 01:22:714 - Disaggree

[Easy]

1. Nothing bad here. I only think that these sliders from 00:44:103 (1,2) - and 01:09:400 (1,2) - don't really fit there D: At lest the sliderend sounds really awkward to me. The correct way to end them would be 1/2 before the other one, but for an easy, that's not acceptable imo. So I'll keep them
2. Overall spacing may seem a bit high but i think it is okay

[Normal]

1. 00:16:143 (3) - hard to say. If this slider belongs to this background noise I would recommend a repeat. But if it is mapped to the "whistle" I would end it at 00:16:976 - It's to the whistle, but ending it at 00:16:976 - sounds awkward for me.
2. 00:17:475 (4,5) - They also feel weird. I know they belong to the background noise this dud dud. But the this "whistle dominates. So either make the first slider two normal notes and the second slider to a stack of two notes or let the first slider the same and add 1/2 beat to the beginning of the 2nd
   slider so it ends the same and starts at 00:17:974 - (may do something with the gap between (5,1) then) Disaggree here, sorry
3. 00:42:772 (4,5) - ^ ^
4. 01:08:068 (4,5) - ^ ^
5. 00:41:440 (3) - sounds weird again. add repeat or add 1/2 at the end ^
6. 01:06:737 (3) - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. 00:19:472 (3) - I miss a repeat here D: There could be a repeat, but I prefer it this way to keep a little gap to the next notes
2. 00:20:803 (3) - ^ ^
3. 00:44:769 (3) - ^ ^
4. 00:46:100 (3) - ^ ^
5. 01:10:066 (3) - ^ ^
6. 01:11:397 (3) - ^ ^
7. 00:26:462 - 00:26:628 - add notes. Music is for notes to obvious here for a hard Absolutely disaggree If I do a note at 00:26:462, I would have to add one at 00:26:712 as well, because those two sounds belong together. But I don't want 1/4 notes in my hard with 180 BPM.
8. 00:51:759 - 00:51:925 - ^ ^
9. 01:17:055 - 01:17:222 - ^ ^
10. 00:41:440 (7) - I miss a repeat or anything for the following gap here D: No "cute" melody here, so no note, sorry
11. 01:06:737 (9) - ^ ^

A bit empty for a hard imo :/

[Insane]

1. Everything is fine. But I think that the flow were better if your jumps were a bit shorter D:

I hope there was something useful in my mod ^^

RobotoRaccoon wrote:

General:
• I think the brown combo colour is a bit hard to see, perhaps make it lighter or change it completely. Disaggree
• In fact, I don't really like the combo colours at all. They're just "too different" from each other. Since when do combo colours have to be kinda the same? Then people would complain that they look too equal. And in fact combo colours have to fit the bg, not each other.

Easy:
00:48:097 (1) - Remove New Combo Changed
00:49:429 (4) - Add NC Changed
00:50:760 (1) - Remove NC Changed
Previous 3: I feel as though it follows the combo patterns with the rest of the map much better.

Normal:
00:17:475 (1) - Add NC Dis-
00:42:772 (1) - ^ -ag-
01:08:068 (1) - ^ -gree

Hard:
Nothing I feel like poking at that isn't stated below.

Insane:
00:17:475 (1) - Add NC Dis-
00:42:772 (1) - ^ -ag-
01:08:068 (1) - ^ -gree

--

The mapping style is not one that I would use myself. I feel it's just "too random", if you will, for my liking. I think your 3 ranked beatmaps on a whole are are much more enjoyable to play (and look at) than this one, but don't stop working on this one. "Don't stop working on it?" All I will do in fact is adding mods (or not). There won't be any big changes. If I had to pick out what I didn't "like" and post it, a lot of it would be the sliders. You have lots of long ones, that just go to waste with simplicity. So simplicity is something bad? Well, I like it. As much as I like uncommon sliders, but on this one I do have my "simple" sliders.
That's enough for my rant. I hope you and your map go far.

• 00:06:824 (1) - end could be bettered out (when you select it and go to 00:06:740 in time, you will notice the distance of the sliderarc to the approach circle variates, please try to align it perfectly); also, what is the reason for this shape? as a start-button for the map, okay but to the song... I don't really find redpoints much fitting there
  00:08:488 (4,5,6) - I sense larger spacing here since you got high sounds in the music which suggest something like a jumpy pattern
  00:13:813 (5,6) - ^
  00:16:143 (6) - well this curve can be bettered out, better use 3 sliderpoints here (currently, the end is very unbalanced when compared to the beginning of the slider)
  00:17:475 (7) - a) new combo, b) I suggest splitting this up so you follow the music better, 00:17:724 and 00:17:808 sound as if they required a beat, so please consider adding some and replacing this slider
  00:20:138 (1) - i find this hitnormal a bit sudden, sounds better on 20-25% volume | Please apply this in all diffs.
  00:27:378 (5,6) - suggesting to CTRL-R this, I somewhat like that better
  00:28:709 (11,12) - ^
  00:30:456 (5) - that slider seems kinda loose and unconnected to anything else which makes it feel unflowy; replace with something that suits the song better and flows with the objects before?
  00:33:785 (4,5) - similar to the beginning, suggesting higher spacing
  00:39:110 (5,6,7) - ^
  00:41:440 (6) - the red sliderpoint in the center is still somewhat noticable, could you try to smooth the slider more out?
  00:42:772 (7) - as in the earlier example, new combo and map the aditional beats on 00:43:021 and 00:43:105
  00:45:434 (1) - 20-25% volume sounds better here, as in previous example for that | Please apply this in all diffs.
  00:50:095 (4) - where does that whistle come from all of a sudden
  00:52:674 (5,6,11,12) - suggesting to each CTRL-R the pairs here again as in previous example
  00:52:757 (6) - seems a bit harshly loud imo, also, where does the whistle come from
  00:55:087 (3) - that curve feels meeh, the beginning is too harsh and the end is too boring, place the sliderpoint more central to have it more balanced
  00:55:753 (5) - again, I don't see the connection and inbound to/in the map's flow in this, please do something about that
  00:58:749 (1) - that jump is kinda huge compared to the previous mapping
  01:00:080 (1) - ^
  01:01:411 (3) - the curve feels a bit unbalanced, move the first sliderpoint more to the top-right or use 3 points smooth it more out
  01:04:074 (1) - dem jumz
  01:05:406 (1,2,3) - that pattern is interesting but there is an issue with it: to get to 1, you will have to completely break against the flow of the previous pink combo which results in an awkward movement, also, the jumps in-between the sliders feel quite very sudden compared to their actual speed so I am somewhat concerned about this combo
  01:08:068 (4) - new combo as in previous examples (also, i don't really find this shape sooo fitting there, might be me tho)
  01:10:731 (1) - 20-25% volume is better | Please apply this in all diffs.
  01:21:050 (5) - as in previous examples, there is no real flow or anything to this :<

• 00:06:824 (1) - i do not enjoy this bow, smooth it out with more sliderpoints as you did in Insane
  00:10:818 (7) - could be a bit better by moving the end more top-rightish
  00:32:120 (1) - the curve feels very unbalanced, the beginning is too curvy and the end is too plain
  00:36:115 (7) - wow... that one... is ugly... sorry, please redesign that :/
  00:37:446 (1) - ^
  00:50:760 (5) - moving the sliderpoint 4 grids right, 1-2 down will make the curve feel a lot smoother (size 4)
  00:56:086 (4,5,6,7,8) - that combo feels better if you use the following coordinates: 112|104, 152|84, 196|80, 240|88, 280|108
  01:16:057 (4) - moving the second sliderpoint 2-3 grids down and the first one to the left (size 4) will make the slider look smoother, you should do that

• 00:06:824 (1) - sliderpoint 2-3 grids down, 1 to the left, makes it look smoother
  00:08:155 (2) - re-adjust to 1's endpoint, make it blanket it properly (suggesting to use 3 sliderpoints instead of 2 for more detailed adjustments)
  00:12:149 (1) - that could blanket the previous slider better, I am sure (use 3 sliderpoints) o3o
  00:13:481 (2) - ^
  00:36:115 (3) - I do not enjoy this shape, the end feels totally unfitting to the beginning - you start of with a somewhat strong curve and go into a nearly linear ending, please change that (make it blanket 2's end)
  00:37:446 (1) - similar
  00:52:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I do not see an idea behind this, give it one?
  01:06:737 (3) - as in a previous example, make it blanket 2's end better

• 00:18:141 (4,1,2,3,4) - I do not see a flow or idea behind this, really
  00:26:795 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this could form a much smoother shape, for example, a hexagon - feels too loose right now
  00:44:103 (1,2) - I don't like putting two slidershapes that are about the same following to each other, especially like this, it doesn't contain any flow; suggesting to let 1 lead back into the playfield's center and let 2 catch the motion and continuing it
  01:05:406 (1) - you could just use one sliderpoint here, two of them take away the curvyness in this example, they're too linearly played