Aya Uchida - afraid... [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Shirokane Rinko

Joined December 2016

Topic Starter

Shirokane Rinko 2017-05-08T19:48:46+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 8 августа 2018 г. at 11:26:53

Artist: Aya Uchida
Title: afraid...
Tags: Bitter Kiss Xetopia -Hex- Sinnoh alienflybot Celektus
BPM: 180
Filesize: 21156kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:

AFB's Platter (2,85 stars, 247 notes)
Hex's Cup (1,45 stars, 125 notes)
Salad (2,05 stars, 186 notes)
Sinnoh's Overdose (4,49 stars, 310 notes)
Xetopia's Rain (3,89 stars, 275 notes)

Download: Aya Uchida - afraid...
Download: Aya Uchida - afraid... (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Read please

Hello all, I return to work on this map, and I again try rank it (haaaaaa), so, I reworked my salad (full) and deleted platter & overdose (sorry gaaraati and onelove) cup and rain would be reworked. I will delete it after rank

Cup - By -Hex- [100%]

Salad - By Shirokane Rinko [100%]

Platter - By alienflybot [100%]

Rain - By Xetopia [100%]

Overdose - By Sinnoh [100%]

Hitsounds : By Celektus

Beatmap Banner : By Luisina

METADATA

Background video - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z7QRsGAGIr4
Official singer site - https://aya-uchida.net/

Last edited by Shirokane Rinko 2018-08-08T08:27:32+00:00, edited 123 times in total.

Negri_sk

298 posts

Joined January 2013

Negri_sk 2017-05-13T11:42:39+00:00

Hello

[afraid...]
00:15:132 (1) - Move this to x432 to make it a hyper and therefore make this jumping section more fun.
00:19:131 (5) - Move this to x512 since moving to the right after a kickslider to the left feels a lot more natural.
00:36:465 (1) - CTRL+G if you CTRL+G it feels more natural and fun to play. Also move it to x128
00:36:965 (2) - Same problems as ^ but basicaly CTRL+G and move it to x384
00:39:131 (1) - CTRL+G to remove the antiflow then you move 00:38:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - all these 2-3 ticks to the right with the current grid level 3.
00:45:298 (7,9) - Move these 2 to x104 to trigger the hyper effect on this strong beat!
00:47:131 (2,4) - I would strongly recommend moving these 2 to x408 this does remove the "back and forwards" pattern but honestly it really does not fit there, you should really only do it in a longer stream section and probably with less distance!
00:53:131 (2) - Move this to x88 since this antiflow triple pattern in the middle of the stream just feels awkward af to play.
01:08:131 (7) - Going into a slider with a hyper feels better to me here so I suggest moving this to x464
01:10:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would strongly suggest to just redo this whole pattern, however if you don't feel like it just move 01:10:298 (2) - to x168 and 01:10:631 (4) - to x400 to remove the awkward random hypers here.
01:15:131 (7) - Move this to x16 seriously, this feels a lot better than without a hyper if you try it out.
01:15:131 (7) - Exact same reason as this ^ only this time around you're suppose to move it to x496
01:22:631 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can probably make this stream pattern into something more interesting! Look at the other streams in the map.
01:28:298 (13,14) - CTRL+G, no questions asked, just do it.
01:27:631 (6) - x408 to make this fruit become a hyper into the stream that begins right after.

[Shano's Rain]
00:18:799 (3,4,5,6) - You could curve this stream a bit more since it's on a strong beat.
00:20:798 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:05:798 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:06:465 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:27:798 (4,5,6,7) - Especially on this part since there is a much more curved stream right after it.

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2017-05-13T15:10:31+00:00

Hi.

Rather than going into details I decided to give some general feedback instead because your map need that above anything else at this point.

[General]

The mp3 file has ~15sec empty part before the song starts, please remove this and set your preview point to a more suitable place.

Add the guest mapper's name to the tags please. Furthermore there is no need for "uchida, aya, afraid, short, japan" there. The source is not Aya Uchida either, leave it empty. We only use that if the song comes from a video game.

I took a look at all difficulty and noticed the same thing everywhere, which are the inconsistent timeline (rhythm usage) and their inconsistent distances. What am I want to say with this you might ask. My point here is that, if you take a look at the part between 00:29:797 and 00:40:464 and listen it a few times you should notice the pattern which repeats itself in the music. This pattern is a line from the lyrics then 4 drum hit repeated four times. This means, you should follow this and have a repetitive timeline as well. Like this:

When the timeline is done you can go and decide how the distances will be used. For example, (we are still at the same section by the way) on my screenshot whenever the vocal steps in I used a long 1/1 slider and that slider could be placed a bit away from the previous note because it is the introduction of a new verse. This could be 2.00x up to a HyperJump, it is your decision BUT because it repeats itself you need to stick with this distance at the similar parts of this section (or later as well if the rhythm comes back again). Drums can have jumps or Hyperjumps as well.

I hope this amount of explanation was enough to understand my point, if not feel free to contact me and I will try to explain it better. Moreover, this small paragraph applies to all difficulties in this set, not just the easiest or hardest. All of you guys made the same mistakes all over. Please try to fix it.

Few more thing:
[afraid]

00:19:131 to 00:29:797 - Why this part has a break? It is a strong instrumental one with guitar and drums. You should not leave it empty on the highest difficulty at all.
00:43:131 (6) - I am personally not a big fan of these kind of slider usage. It covers and ignores important instruments from the song.
00:47:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - You used this kind of jump pattern a LOT of times which not just makes your map kinda boring but can completely be out of place as well, like here by the way. Also 00:47:214 (3,5) - are mapped to nothing.
[]

tr;dr With fixing that timeline and distance you guys saves a lot of time to others and might get this map ranked sooner. And while many modder and player probably won't care too much about them, the members of the BNG will notice it and point it out. Having a small inconsistently is fine as long as you can explain it though.

Good luck!

Shirokane Rinko

150 posts

Joined December 2016

Topic Starter

Shirokane Rinko 2017-05-13T17:22:41+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Hi.

Rather than going into details I decided to give some general feedback instead because your map need that above anything else at this point.

[General]

The mp3 file has ~15sec empty part before the song starts, please remove this and set your preview point to a more suitable place.

Add the guest mapper's name to the tags please. Furthermore there is no need for "uchida, aya, afraid, short, japan" there. The source is not Aya Uchida either, leave it empty. We only use that if the song comes from a video game.

I took a look at all difficulty and noticed the same thing everywhere, which are the inconsistent timeline (rhythm usage) and their inconsistent distances. What am I want to say with this you might ask. My point here is that, if you take a look at the part between 00:29:797 and 00:40:464 and listen it a few times you should notice the pattern which repeats itself in the music. This pattern is a line from the lyrics then 4 drum hit repeated four times. This means, you should follow this and have a repetitive timeline as well. Like this:

When the timeline is done you can go and decide how the distances will be used. For example, (we are still at the same section by the way) on my screenshot whenever the vocal steps in I used a long 1/1 slider and that slider could be placed a bit away from the previous note because it is the introduction of a new verse. This could be 2.00x up to a HyperJump, it is your decision BUT because it repeats itself you need to stick with this distance at the similar parts of this section (or later as well if the rhythm comes back again). Drums can have jumps or Hyperjumps as well.

I hope this amount of explanation was enough to understand my point, if not feel free to contact me and I will try to explain it better. Moreover, this small paragraph applies to all difficulties in this set, not just the easiest or hardest. All of you guys made the same mistakes all over. Please try to fix it.

Few more thing:
[afraid]

00:19:131 to 00:29:797 - Why this part has a break? It is a strong instrumental one with guitar and drums. You should not leave it empty on the highest difficulty at all.
00:43:131 (6) - I am personally not a big fan of these kind of slider usage. It covers and ignores important instruments from the song.
00:47:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - You used this kind of jump pattern a LOT of times which not just makes your map kinda boring but can completely be out of place as well, like here by the way. Also 00:47:214 (3,5) - are mapped to nothing.
[]

tr;dr With fixing that timeline and distance you guys saves a lot of time to others and might get this map ranked sooner. And while many modder and player probably won't care too much about them, the members of the BNG will notice it and point it out. Having a small inconsistently is fine as long as you can explain it though.

Good luck!

Dear Kurokami.
Thanks for mod, I tells about him to my friend. You say remove 15 second part before song, but it`s need, because map sounds was taken from video, and in video have 15 second part, so i think that it`s need dor map. Soon my friend write you about mod,waht he fix and what no.

Shirokane Rinko

150 posts

Joined December 2016

Topic Starter

Shirokane Rinko 2017-05-13T17:24:58+00:00

Negri_sk wrote:
Hello

[afraid...]
00:15:132 (1) - Move this to x432 to make it a hyper and therefore make this jumping section more fun.
00:19:131 (5) - Move this to x512 since moving to the right after a kickslider to the left feels a lot more natural.
00:36:465 (1) - CTRL+G if you CTRL+G it feels more natural and fun to play. Also move it to x128
00:36:965 (2) - Same problems as ^ but basicaly CTRL+G and move it to x384
00:39:131 (1) - CTRL+G to remove the antiflow then you move 00:38:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - all these 2-3 ticks to the right with the current grid level 3.
00:45:298 (7,9) - Move these 2 to x104 to trigger the hyper effect on this strong beat!
00:47:131 (2,4) - I would strongly recommend moving these 2 to x408 this does remove the "back and forwards" pattern but honestly it really does not fit there, you should really only do it in a longer stream section and probably with less distance!
00:53:131 (2) - Move this to x88 since this antiflow triple pattern in the middle of the stream just feels awkward af to play.
01:08:131 (7) - Going into a slider with a hyper feels better to me here so I suggest moving this to x464
01:10:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would strongly suggest to just redo this whole pattern, however if you don't feel like it just move 01:10:298 (2) - to x168 and 01:10:631 (4) - to x400 to remove the awkward random hypers here.
01:15:131 (7) - Move this to x16 seriously, this feels a lot better than without a hyper if you try it out.
01:15:131 (7) - Exact same reason as this ^ only this time around you're suppose to move it to x496
01:22:631 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can probably make this stream pattern into something more interesting! Look at the other streams in the map.
01:28:298 (13,14) - CTRL+G, no questions asked, just do it.
01:27:631 (6) - x408 to make this fruit become a hyper into the stream that begins right after.

[Shano's Rain]
00:18:799 (3,4,5,6) - You could curve this stream a bit more since it's on a strong beat.
00:20:798 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:05:798 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:06:465 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:27:798 (4,5,6,7) - Especially on this part since there is a much more curved stream right after it.

Dear Negri_sk
Thanks for mod, I tell my friends about him and soon they write what they fix, and what no

Xetopia

240 posts

Joined June 2015

Xetopia 2017-05-13T18:26:48+00:00

Negri_sk wrote:
Hello

[Shano's Rain]
00:18:799 (3,4,5,6) - You could curve this stream a bit more since it's on a strong beat.
00:20:798 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:05:798 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:06:465 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:27:798 (4,5,6,7) - Especially on this part since there is a much more curved stream right after it.

Everything was fixed!, thanks

and update:

uwu

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 0
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.4
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Title:afraid... (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:afraid... (Short Ver.)
Artist:Uchida Aya
ArtistUnicode:内田 彩
Creator:Goddess Aqua
Version:Shano's Rain
Source:Uchida Aya
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BeatmapID:1289549
BeatmapSetID:610541

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Memoriola

80 posts

Joined July 2015

Memoriola 2017-05-13T19:30:57+00:00

Last edited by Memoriola 2018-06-20T18:01:18+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Memoriola

80 posts

Joined July 2015

Memoriola 2017-05-13T19:50:04+00:00

Last edited by Memoriola 2018-06-20T18:01:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Emiru

257 posts

Joined September 2013

Emiru 2017-05-14T15:45:51+00:00

afraid....

17:10 Emiru: oh so it's way easier we can do IRC mod right now if you want
17:11 OneLoveOneLife: :thinking:
17:11 OneLoveOneLife: okay
17:12 OneLoveOneLife: Don't forget to save our chat
17:12 Emiru: sure
17:13 Emiru: Okay first AR is kinda low maybe ? like 9.4 is better i think
17:13 OneLoveOneLife: Hmm
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: I really don't know, because every AR less than 10 is slow for me
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: But okay
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: Done
17:14 Emiru: 00:16:965 (3) -
17:14 Emiru: you should nerf this jump or make a HDash
17:15 OneLoveOneLife: nerfed
17:16 Emiru: 00:17:798 (3) -
17:16 Emiru: mayeb curved is slider is way better for the aesthetic of the map
17:17 OneLoveOneLife: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087472 like this?]
17:17 OneLoveOneLife: Or what do you mean
17:19 Emiru: 00:17:798 (3) - x:416 and stream 00:18:465 (1,2,3,4) - first note x:80
17:19 Emiru: it look way better
17:19 Emiru: yeah i guess it's ok maybe just normal curved slider like
17:20 Emiru: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087492
17:20 Emiru: 00:20:964 - note here ?
17:21 Emiru: to make a good looking triplet like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087509
17:22 OneLoveOneLife: Here's no sounds
17:23 OneLoveOneLife: I want to put here something, but other modders will be angre
17:23 OneLoveOneLife: agrhh >:З
17:24 Emiru: so just put little slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087527
17:24 Emiru: 00:23:714 (2,3) - same here
17:26 OneLoveOneLife: Maybe Im little stupid, but whats the difference between slider and 2 notes?
17:27 Emiru: aesthetic again
17:27 Emiru: your patern look kinda ugly :d and it play better i think
17:28 OneLoveOneLife: Hmm, okay, let it be
17:29 Emiru: 00:29:047 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087582
17:29 Emiru: same here with the little slider
17:30 Emiru: 00:32:965 (2,3,4,5,6) - make more movement on this it's 2 easy for overdose
17:31 Emiru: 00:40:298 (5) - HDash here
17:32 OneLoveOneLife: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087598 like this?]
17:32 Emiru: yeah maybe a little more
17:33 Emiru: 00:43:131 (6) - this slider make no sense aha
17:34 OneLoveOneLife: Everyone said it's weird
17:34 OneLoveOneLife: What have I put here
17:35 Emiru: how about velocity 1,20 for this slider and form like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087632
17:35 Emiru: i think you can keep it just make him with a good form like curved
17:36 Emiru: 00:46:965 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - make them two triplet reverse arrows like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087646
17:36 OneLoveOneLife: Gimeme 1 min
17:36 Emiru: 00:50:465 (1) - antiflow reverse him
17:37 Emiru: and put number 2 way more to the left
17:38 OneLoveOneLife: Idk how to change velocity only for this slider(
17:38 Emiru: F6
17:38 Emiru: + green and 1.20
17:38 Emiru: when it's finish just at the end put 1.o or the number you want
17:41 Emiru: kiai is pretty decent
17:41 Emiru: 01:28:464 (15) - same curve more with more velocity
17:42 OneLoveOneLife: Im too stipud for this
17:42 OneLoveOneLife: I'll call creator of own mapset to help. It's his work

17:42 Emiru: ok
17:42 Emiru: i have to eat now ;w;
17:43 OneLoveOneLife: well, is this all?
17:43 OneLoveOneLife: I mean, end of the mod
17:44 Emiru: yep

Shirokane Rinko

150 posts

Joined December 2016

Topic Starter

Shirokane Rinko 2017-05-14T16:16:20+00:00

Emiru wrote:
afraid....
17:10 Emiru: oh so it's way easier we can do IRC mod right now if you want
17:11 OneLoveOneLife: :thinking:
17:11 OneLoveOneLife: okay
17:12 OneLoveOneLife: Don't forget to save our chat
17:12 Emiru: sure
17:13 Emiru: Okay first AR is kinda low maybe ? like 9.4 is better i think
17:13 OneLoveOneLife: Hmm
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: I really don't know, because every AR less than 10 is slow for me
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: But okay
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: Done
17:14 Emiru: 00:16:965 (3) -
17:14 Emiru: you should nerf this jump or make a HDash
17:15 OneLoveOneLife: nerfed
17:16 Emiru: 00:17:798 (3) -
17:16 Emiru: mayeb curved is slider is way better for the aesthetic of the map
17:17 OneLoveOneLife: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087472 like this?]
17:17 OneLoveOneLife: Or what do you mean
17:19 Emiru: 00:17:798 (3) - x:416 and stream 00:18:465 (1,2,3,4) - first note x:80
17:19 Emiru: it look way better
17:19 Emiru: yeah i guess it's ok maybe just normal curved slider like
17:20 Emiru: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087492
17:20 Emiru: 00:20:964 - note here ?
17:21 Emiru: to make a good looking triplet like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087509
17:22 OneLoveOneLife: Here's no sounds
17:23 OneLoveOneLife: I want to put here something, but other modders will be angre
17:23 OneLoveOneLife: agrhh >:З
17:24 Emiru: so just put little slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087527
17:24 Emiru: 00:23:714 (2,3) - same here
17:26 OneLoveOneLife: Maybe Im little stupid, but whats the difference between slider and 2 notes?
17:27 Emiru: aesthetic again
17:27 Emiru: your patern look kinda ugly :d and it play better i think
17:28 OneLoveOneLife: Hmm, okay, let it be
17:29 Emiru: 00:29:047 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087582
17:29 Emiru: same here with the little slider
17:30 Emiru: 00:32:965 (2,3,4,5,6) - make more movement on this it's 2 easy for overdose
17:31 Emiru: 00:40:298 (5) - HDash here
17:32 OneLoveOneLife: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087598 like this?]
17:32 Emiru: yeah maybe a little more
17:33 Emiru: 00:43:131 (6) - this slider make no sense aha
17:34 OneLoveOneLife: Everyone said it's weird
17:34 OneLoveOneLife: What have I put here
17:35 Emiru: how about velocity 1,20 for this slider and form like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087632
17:35 Emiru: i think you can keep it just make him with a good form like curved
17:36 Emiru: 00:46:965 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - make them two triplet reverse arrows like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087646
17:36 OneLoveOneLife: Gimeme 1 min
17:36 Emiru: 00:50:465 (1) - antiflow reverse him
17:37 Emiru: and put number 2 way more to the left
17:38 OneLoveOneLife: Idk how to change velocity only for this slider(
17:38 Emiru: F6
17:38 Emiru: + green and 1.20
17:38 Emiru: when it's finish just at the end put 1.o or the number you want
17:41 Emiru: kiai is pretty decent
17:41 Emiru: 01:28:464 (15) - same curve more with more velocity
17:42 OneLoveOneLife: Im too stipud for this
17:42 OneLoveOneLife: I'll call creator of own mapset to help. It's his work
17:42 Emiru: ok
17:42 Emiru: i have to eat now ;w;
17:43 OneLoveOneLife: well, is this all?
17:43 OneLoveOneLife: I mean, end of the mod
17:44 Emiru: yep

Thanks you very much for mod.
I reworked two sliders about which you wrote.

The Last

20 posts

Joined June 2014

The Last 2017-05-15T15:35:24+00:00

Cup

Для начала хотел бы сказать, что меня смущают несколько слайдеров:
00:45:797 (1) - и 01:15:131 (1) - мне кажется, что стоит немного выгнуть их, так как слайдеры такой формы могут помешать поймать все дроплеты.

Пикрелейтед

01:20:464 (1) - дроплеты летят слева от остальной составляющей, соответственно поймать все дроплеты может быть тоже затруднительно (в рамках самой простой сложности).

Пикрелейтед

Salad

00:18:465 (7) - это нужно срочно заменить! В саладе нельзя использовать стримы длиной более чем в один BPM с шагом в 1/4, т.е. не более чем 5 нот в одном стриме. Если заменить его на что-то подобное (пикрелейтед), то нужно сделать слайдер как новое комбо т.к. комбо учитывая все реверсы составит 11, а допустимое 10.

Пикрелейтед

01:27:797 (6) - на всех слайдерах такого типа советую немного уменьшить наклон.
00:32:797 (8) - бью тревогу! Обнаружено наложение объектов друг на друга. Стоит просто убрать круг №8

Shirokane Rinko

150 posts

Joined December 2016

Topic Starter

Shirokane Rinko 2017-05-15T15:43:28+00:00

The Last wrote:
Salad

00:18:465 (7) - это нужно срочно заменить! В саладе нельзя использовать стримы длиной более чем в один BPM с шагом в 1/4, т.е. не более чем 5 нот в одном стриме. Если заменить его на что-то подобное (пикрелейтед), то нужно сделать слайдер как новое комбо т.к. комбо учитывая все реверсы составит 11, а допустимое 10. - Исправлено, спасибо.
Пикрелейтед
01:27:797 (6) - на всех слайдерах такого типа советую немного уменьшить наклон. - Исправлено.
00:32:797 (8) - бью тревогу! Обнаружено наложение объектов друг на друга. Стоит просто убрать круг №8 - Забыл его убрать ранее,
спасибо, что напомнили, 8 ноту удалил.

Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Gordon123 2017-05-15T18:30:36+00:00

@The Last's mod

>при испоьзовании обычного скина у меня не возникло никаких проблем с тем что бы поймать все дроблеты :

00:45:797 (1) -

01:15:131 (1) -

Но всё же я внемлю требованиям на счёт первого,так что 00:45:797 (1) - немного исправлен.
~~~~~~~
>Опять же,у меня всё нормально получается,но хорошо,немного подправил! ээх

01:20:464 (1) -

Thx for mod

Celektus

730 posts

Joined April 2014

Celektus 2017-05-17T17:10:40+00:00

From Celektus' Hitsounding Queue

Here is the Code for the top diffs Hitsounds and a link to My Skin in case you'd like to add my Hitsounds as Customs. After you've applied the Hitsounds just copy them to other diffs with this tool

afraid..

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 13798
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.6

[Metadata]
Title:afraid... (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:afraid... (Short Ver.)
Artist:Uchida Aya
ArtistUnicode:内田 彩
Creator:Goddess Aqua
Version:afraid..
Source:Uchida Aya
Tags:Bitter Kiss The Last Shanofanboy Gordon123 OneLoveOneLife
BeatmapID:1296239
BeatmapSetID:610541

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:9.4
ApproachRate:9.4
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"video.avi"
0,0,"bg2.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
13798,333.333333333333,4,2,0,30,1,0
13798,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
19132,-111.111111111111,4,2,0,40,0,0
29798,-111.111111111111,4,2,0,50,0,0
43131,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,50,0,0
45798,-125,4,2,0,25,0,0
55798,-125,4,2,0,45,0,0
56465,-111.111111111111,4,2,0,50,0,0
65798,-111.111111111111,4,2,0,50,0,0
67131,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
88464,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 54,154,254
Combo2 : 210,113,253
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[afraid..]

I have also some small suggestions or questions

between these notes I think are some important sounds that should be mapped 00:57:465 (5,1) - in this first one there's a Vocal on the red tick before and in the slider. the slider head still has the crash on it so I think there might be a better solution. Similar thing here 01:02:797 (4,5,1) - also on both red before and after 5
why didn't you map this stream? 01:17:131 (4,5,6,7) -
wouldn't a spinner in the end fit? just an idea since the song fades out. You could then even fade out the volume of the spinner
now I also have 2 more things I'm confused about as a std mapper. in std It's more common to start new combos on big white ticks and not out of these since they are usually the section changes. is there a reason for that in ctb?

2. thing there's a thing in std I think called tick relevancy which essentially states that most music has it's strong sounds naturally on odd ticks. I assume you maybe saw a video from Pishifat talking about and if not maybe do that if you're curious 1 3 2 4.

So starting jump pattern on like red ticks is considered less ideal and gets pointed out... I don't know if this applies to ctb tho so I'm just guessing I should ask and point it out that you do that ;_; 01:13:964 (1,2) -
also... use 3 dots for afraid.. since that's more Anime/LN/VN stereotype-ish... also maybe before the Afraid or maybe use a question mark and yes I'm actually suggesting things about the diffname cause 2 dots trigger me deep inside or something

Last edited by Celektus 2017-05-25T12:13:48+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Shirokane Rinko

150 posts

Joined December 2016

Topic Starter

Shirokane Rinko 2017-05-17T18:53:48+00:00

Celektus wrote:
From Celektus' Hitsounding Queue

Thanks so much, it`s hitsounds so good

Memoriola

80 posts

Joined July 2015

Memoriola 2017-05-17T19:30:39+00:00

Last edited by Memoriola 2018-06-20T18:01:36+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Dea ex machina

535 posts

Joined January 2014

Dea ex machina 2017-05-18T19:41:52+00:00

General

Tags

Good!

Metadata

It's already been mentioned but remove Uchida Aya from the source box. This is not what that is for.

Spread/Other

It'd be better for the Cup to be cs2.5, hp 3, and approach rate AT LEAST ar5 to properly fit the spread. As it stands right now, all three values are questionable
Please lower the Salad hp to 4, and consider raising the Overdose hp to 7. These are the default values for a full spread

Hitsounds

General Hitsounding

Good!

Gordon's Cup

General

Why is the cup's sv set at 1.40? That's kind of high for a cup difficulty
Looking through the cup, there's a fair amount of quality issues that I think should be addressed before you push this any more forward. The distances are odd consistently throughout the mapset, and the combos can be halved as they are currently, and the biggest issue of all is that this is way too dense at many parts, such as 00:39:797 (3,4) - , 00:45:297 (4,5,6) - , and 01:23:131 (1,2,3) - . Going back to the distances quickly, we can see that in numerous places notes are FAR too close together and deserve a lot more space, even for a cup difficulty. Here are a few examples; 00:15:798 (2,3) - , 00:18:464 (4,1) - , 00:32:131 (6,1) - , 00:34:797 (6,1) - , 00:51:797 (2,3) - , 00:58:797 (4,1) - , and 01:01:797 (1,2) -, to name a few.

While I want to help you out, there's a lot that needs to be done before you're ready for the modding stage.

Salad

General

This difficulty suffers much of the same problems as the one before it. Odd distances, awkward flow, though the density is fine for the most part (but there are certain places where you go a bit overboard, such as 00:54:297 (4,5,1,2,3) - ...). It'd be almost pointless to mod this at this point, since it'd be mostly remapping sections and doing a lot of the work for you.

The Last's Platter

General

Starting to sense a trend here This difficulty has all the same problems that the other two did, with the addition of hyperdash errors and far larger combos.
00:23:881 - There's no note here, no need to place a circle here
Again, this would be pointless to mod as it is.

Shano's Rain

General

This difficulty has a lot more proper structure and spacing, so I can do a proper mod on it
00:16:299 (1) - Remove the NC here and place it on 00:16:465 (2) - .
00:20:465 (1,2) - Having a hyper between these two notes is pretty overkill, since you just had a hyper going to (1) and (2) isn't really that strong of a note.
00:21:132 (6) - Remove the NC here and place it on 00:21:798 (3) -
00:25:132 (3,4) - The distance between these notes should be a bit greater! It deserves a small jump at least
00:25:798 (5) - Place a NC here and remove the one on 00:26:298 (1) -
00:27:131 (5) - Place a NC here and remove the one on 00:28:131 (3) - , and then place another on 00:28:465 (1) -
00:28:798 (3) - This curved slider doesn't work so well. The flow going off of it doesn't feel nice to play. Consider making it more horizontal.
00:31:131 (5) - Place a NC here please.
00:34:465 (6) - Make this more horizontal please. The slight angle it has is just annoying to play and doesn't do much good.
00:45:798 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - You have more hypers in this section than you did in the last section, which doesn't make sense since this one is more quiet and soft. Please reduce the hyper count where you see fit.
00:58:798 (10,1) - Put a hyper here please! This is a really good spot for one.
01:15:131 (3,4,5) - The hyper is completely different from 01:15:798 (6,7) - , which is the exact same sound in the song. You two circles with a hyper connecting them in the first pattern, and a regular slider in the second. Make them consistent!
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - Try a more rounded approach for this stream. This current stream is ugly.
01:33:465 (4,5) - Uh... why is there a hyper here? Quite literally the quietest part of the song.
Around halfway through the song I stopped noticing the NCs because they were all wrong. Look at a few maps/guides quickly and then fix them, it shouldn't be hard

afraid..

General

And this difficulty has all the problems that the rest of them do. Sorry, but I don't think it's a good idea for me to mod this right now

If you want a 100% mod, shoot me a message once you've addressed my concerns and I'll take a look again.

Shirokane Rinko

150 posts

Joined December 2016

Topic Starter

Shirokane Rinko 2017-05-19T11:55:24+00:00

-wwwww wrote:
General

Metadata
It's already been mentioned but remove Uchida Aya from the source box. This is not what that is for. - Done

Please lower the Salad hp to 4 - Done

Salad

General

This difficulty suffers much of the same problems as the one before it. Odd distances, awkward flow, though the density is fine for the most part (but there are certain places where you go a bit overboard, such as 00:54:297 (4,5,1,2,3) - ...). It'd be almost pointless to mod this at this point, since it'd be mostly remapping sections and doing a lot of the work for you. - I Reworked distances in many moments, little reworked NC, thanks for mod, and sorry for this miss

Xetopia

240 posts

Joined June 2015

Xetopia 2017-05-19T12:44:34+00:00

-wwwww wrote:
Shano's Rain

General

This difficulty has a lot more proper structure and spacing, so I can do a proper mod on it
00:16:299 (1) - Remove the NC here and place it on 00:16:465 (2) - . - done
00:20:465 (1,2) - Having a hyper between these two notes is pretty overkill, since you just had a hyper going to (1) and (2) isn't really that strong of a note. - fixed
00:21:132 (6) - Remove the NC here and place it on 00:21:798 (3) - done
00:25:132 (3,4) - The distance between these notes should be a bit greater! It deserves a small jump at least - fixed
00:25:798 (5) - Place a NC here and remove the one on 00:26:298 (1) - done
00:27:131 (5) - Place a NC here and remove the one on 00:28:131 (3) - , and then place another on 00:28:465 (1) - done
00:28:798 (3) - This curved slider doesn't work so well. The flow going off of it doesn't feel nice to play. Consider making it more horizontal. - done
00:31:131 (5) - Place a NC here please. - done
00:34:465 (6) - Make this more horizontal please. The slight angle it has is just annoying to play and doesn't do much good. - - removed slider and added four notes to create another pattern. I thought that slider looks bad in here
00:45:798 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - You have more hypers in this section than you did in the last section, which doesn't make sense since this one is more quiet and soft. Please reduce the hyper count where you see fit. - fixed
00:58:798 (10,1) - Put a hyper here please! This is a really good spot for one. - fixed
01:15:131 (3,4,5) - The hyper is completely different from 01:15:798 (6,7) - , which is the exact same sound in the song. You two circles with a hyper connecting them in the first pattern, and a regular slider in the second. Make them consistent! - fixed
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - Try a more rounded approach for this stream. This current stream is ugly. - fixed
01:33:465 (4,5) - Uh... why is there a hyper here? Quite literally the quietest part of the song. - fixed
Around halfway through the song I stopped noticing the NCs because they were all wrong. Look at a few maps/guides quickly and then fix them, it shouldn't be hard - ok, i'll fix NCs

Thanks for mod <333
and update

^.^

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CLSW

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CLSW 2017-05-19T13:19:13+00:00

purace horuda

Gordon123

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Gordon123 2017-05-19T14:09:32+00:00

-wwwww wrote:
General

Spread/Other
It'd be better for the Cup to be cs2.5, hp 3, and approach rate AT LEAST ar5 to properly fit the spread. As it stands right now, all three values are questionable awwwwwww my bad,i forget it! fix

Gordon's Cup

General

Why is the cup's sv set at 1.40? That's kind of high for a cup difficulty so now its 1.15
Looking through the cup, there's a fair amount of quality issues that I think should be addressed before you push this any more forward. The distances are odd consistently throughout the mapset, and the combos can be halved as they are currently, and the biggest issue of all is that this is way too dense at many parts, such as 00:39:797 (3,4) - not fix only it,because I do not agree that we need to change this point, because I think that here it is suitable as in any way way+i like it, 00:45:297 (4,5,6) - , and 01:23:131 (1,2,3) - . Going back to the distances quickly, we can see that in numerous places notes are FAR too close together and deserve a lot more space, even for a cup difficulty. Here are a few examples; 00:15:798 (2,3) - , 00:18:464 (4,1) - , 00:32:131 (6,1) - , 00:34:797 (6,1) - , 00:51:797 (2,3) - , 00:58:797 (4,1) - , and 01:01:797 (1,2) -, to name a few.
While I want to help you out, there's a lot that needs to be done before you're ready for the modding stage.

All the rest I applied! thx for mod

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CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2017-05-19T16:32:23+00:00

Alright, let's go!

[Rain]
00:28:465 (2,3) - Try to add more movements, it has enough potential to get larger distance due to the music flow, try to move 00:28:465 (2) - more left.
00:43:797 (3,4) - Movement here feels pretty awkward, you may try to move 00:44:131 (4) - on right side. But it'll force HDash on its tail so if you don't like to add HDash on there try like this:

SPOILER

01:05:882 (2) - Not a good idea to place this type of streams, basically it's Rain diff not Overdose which is completely freedom, try to move this around x:95 or somewhere.
01:16:131 (7) - At least try to move this to the right side for the better flow. The longer distance is needed for this section.
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - Similar reason as above, but if you really wanna make more distance between 01:17:465 (3,4,5) - try to make larger distance.

[afraid..]
00:42:465 (4,5) - Not a good idea to stack them all, at least I wanna see some movements there
00:48:631 (2,3) - Uncomfortable dash pattern, I think (3) needs HDash
00:49:798 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Obvious overmap, there're no beats on every blue ticks. Change them to 1/2s.
00:52:465 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - same as above
00:54:965 (8) - Similar reason as 00:42:465 (4,5) - , and I think it needs longer distance as common jump pattern due to the previous ones.
01:11:965 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This should be not 123/123, 12/12/12 or 12/1234. It means the jumps should exist on 01:12:048 (2,3) - and 01:12:215 (1,2) - , not 01:12:130 (3,1) - .

Not really reachable quality for being qualified imo, it needs more improvements.

Xetopia

240 posts

Joined June 2015

Xetopia 2017-05-19T17:31:54+00:00

CLSW wrote:
Alright, let's go!

[Rain]
00:28:465 (2,3) - Try to add more movements, it has enough potential to get larger distance due to the music flow, try to move 00:28:465 (2) - more left. - I tried. result: full screen jump Kappa. But i still thinking about this.
00:43:797 (3,4) - Movement here feels pretty awkward, you may try to move 00:44:131 (4) - on right side. But it'll force HDash on its tail so if you don't like to add HDash on there try like this: - done.
SPOILER
01:05:882 (2) - Not a good idea to place this type of streams, basically it's Rain diff not Overdose which is completely freedom, try to move this around x:95 or somewhere. - ok
01:16:131 (7) - At least try to move this to the right side for the better flow. The longer distance is needed for this section. - done
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - Similar reason as above, but if you really wanna make more distance between 01:17:465 (3,4,5) - try to make larger distance. - okay

Thanks for mod clsw! <3<3<3

update:

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Tags:Bitter Kiss The Last Shanofanboy Gordon123 OneLoveOneLife
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Memoriola

80 posts

Joined July 2015

Memoriola 2017-05-20T04:54:45+00:00

Last edited by Memoriola 2018-06-20T18:02:00+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

SYAHME 2017-05-20T14:04:35+00:00

Random mod, not from my modding queue.
[General]

HP - for overdose, you can change to 7 but HP 6 is okay to me, it is up to you.
CS - for consistency, please change CS for cup to 2.5 & salad to 3.0, don't make the size same as platter.
AR/OD - all diffs are okay but please change AR/OD cup to 6 for consistency and high BPM.
Please unchecked widescreen support in platter, rain & overdose.
It will be nice if you can resize BG to 1920x1080 but the current one is okay too.

[Gordon's Cup]

What did I see in this diff is your mapping style is similar to standard pattern.
00:29:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I advise you to change this pattern and make a movement by make the sliders more horizontal, 00:31:131 (3,4,5,6) - 00:33:797 (3,4,5,6) - to me these stacks are not suit enough, make some distance between them.
00:43:131 (1) - you can hear a strong sound here, so stack doesn't emphasize the sound well, you can make some jump here.
00:44:464 (3,4) - make this slider and reverse slider close to each other.
00:58:797 (4) - move this to x:208.
01:09:797 (1,2) - this, 01:09:797 (1) - move 1 to x:240 to make a jump to emphasize the strong sound & 01:10:464 (2) - move this also to x:400.
01:12:131 (5) - move to x:368 to emphasize the strong sound.
01:19:131 (3,4) - not good to make a stack here, consider a change to the new pattern.
01:24:464 (4,5) - ^.
01:27:131 (3,4) - ^ by move 01:28:131 (4) - to x:212.

[Salad]

I can catch all notes w/o using the dash button, please create suitable jumps at the suitable strong sound.
Some part is kinda repetitive, you might need to check again.
00:16:298 (1,2) - you might want to make a jump here, it is suitable because of strong sound.
00:18:465 (1) - plain pattern, make some variety, please.
00:20:798 (4,5,1) - not too fun stack, 00:21:298 (2) - move to x:152 to make the distance of 00:21:132 (1,2,3) - 3 notes here same.
00:24:298 (1,2) - make some distance please, the stack will make less movement in ctb.
00:29:047 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - nyan, stacks again!
00:39:798 (3) - plain pattern, make some variety, please.
00:55:798 (3) - ^.
01:03:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - you must love stack so much, you can change this pattern to "C' or anything that is fun.
01:05:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is good.
01:11:798 (1) - lazy pattern.
01:11:798 (1,2) - stack again, you suppose to make the distance larger according to the timeline.
01:22:464 (1) - lazy pattern.
01:27:797 (1) - lazy pattern and it is kinda big to catch by the plate.

Good luck on ranked this.

Shirokane Rinko

150 posts

Joined December 2016

Topic Starter

Shirokane Rinko 2017-05-20T15:18:45+00:00

SYAHME wrote:
Random mod, not from my modding queue.
[General]
HP - for overdose, you can change to 7 but HP 6 is okay to me, it is up to you. - Yes, I think it better, done
CS - for consistency, please change CS for cup to 2.5 & salad to 3.0, don't make the size same as platter. - Done
AR/OD - all diffs are okay but please change AR/OD cup to 6 for consistency and high BPM. - Done
Please unchecked widescreen support in platter, rain & overdose. - Done
It will be nice if you can resize BG to 1920x1080 but the current one is okay too.
- Okay, resize
[Salad]
I can catch all notes w/o using the dash button, please create suitable jumps at the suitable strong sound. - Okay
Some part is kinda repetitive, you might need to check again.
00:16:298 (1,2) - you might want to make a jump here, it is suitable because of strong sound. - Done
00:18:465 (1) - plain pattern, make some variety, please. - Rework
00:20:798 (4,5,1) - not too fun stack, 00:21:298 (2) - move to x:152 to make the distance of 00:21:132 (1,2,3) - 3 notes here same. - Done
00:24:298 (1,2) - make some distance please, the stack will make less movement in ctb. - Done
00:29:047 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - nyan, stacks again! - Done
00:39:798 (3) - plain pattern, make some variety, please. - Rework
00:55:798 (3) - ^. - Done
01:03:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - you must love stack so much, you can change this pattern to "C' or anything that is fun. - Rework
01:05:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is good. - Thanks
01:11:798 (1) - lazy pattern. - Rework
01:11:798 (1,2) - stack again, you suppose to make the distance larger according to the timeline. - Done
01:22:464 (1) - lazy pattern. - Rework
01:27:797 (1) - lazy pattern and it is kinda big to catch by the plate. -Rework
Good luck on ranked this, I stop here because of there a lot of mod for upper diffs.

So much thanks for mod

Shirokane Rinko

150 posts

Joined December 2016

Topic Starter

Shirokane Rinko 2017-05-20T15:29:24+00:00

-wwwww wrote:
The Last's Platter

General

Starting to sense a trend here This difficulty has all the same problems that the other two did, with the addition of hyperdash errors and far larger combos. - I reworked it at him
00:23:881 - There's no note here, no need to place a circle here - Delete
Again, this would be pointless to mod as it is. - Sorry him about this

Thanks for mod again

Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Gordon123 2017-05-20T19:27:59+00:00

SYAHME wrote:
[Gordon's Cup]
About CS/AR/OD so : CS=2 (not changed,because i not think what this diff need in 2.5) AR=6 and OD=6 fix
What did I see in this diff is your mapping style is similar to standard pattern. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
00:29:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I advise you to change this pattern and make a movement by make the sliders more horizontal fix only circles, 00:31:131 (3,4,5,6) - 00:33:797 (3,4,5,6) - to me these stacks are not suit enough, make some distance between them. yeeaah
00:43:131 (1) - you can hear a strong sound here, so stack doesn't emphasize the sound well, you can make some jump here. sure
00:44:464 (3,4) - make this slider and reverse slider close to each other. only (4) and lil fix distanse
00:58:797 (4) - move this to x:208. ok
01:09:797 (1,2) - this, 01:09:797 (1) - move 1 to x:240 to make a jump to emphasize the strong sound & 01:10:464 (2) - move this also to x:400. sure,why not!
01:12:131 (5) - move to x:368 to emphasize the strong sound. okay
01:19:131 (3,4) - not good to make a stack here, consider a change to the new pattern. ah,okay fix
01:24:464 (4,5) - ^. awww,ok
01:27:131 (3,4) - ^ by move 01:28:131 (4) - to x:212.
yea

Thx for mod

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Sakary

868 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-05-21T05:12:10+00:00

As you requested.

First of all, these are mostly suggestions. It's up to you if you want to follow everything I have said.
And sorry for the bad english.

General

Remove "(Short Ver.)" on the title of the song. It is unlikely recommended. Maybe put it on tags instead?
The background size is unrankable. Resize it to 1366x768.
I don't know about you, but I think the map's offset is a bit off. 13790 is the correct offset? I'm not sure. Maybe consult a time checker.
About the preview point, 01:04:964 - seems the most appropriate part in placing preview point.

afraid...

Are you sure about AR9.4? I think it's too fast for 180bpm overdose.
00:13:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Circles here were spammed; also, some dashes doesn't fit with the song either. I suggest you to remap this part and add some sliders.
As a guide, these are the timings (notes) that have potential hdashes:
1. 00:14:632 (6) -
2. 00:14:965 (2) -
3. 00:16:298 (7) -
4. 00:17:298 (5) -
5. 00:17:631 (2) -
In case you really want to remap this part, here are some patterns you might like to use:
1. Curve (Letter C) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8140245
2. Curve (Inverted C) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8140250
3. Diagonals - 00:13:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
4. and others...
00:18:631 (2,3,4,5) - Confusing.
00:20:464 (1) - Maybe ctrl+g?
00:21:048 (2) - Make this vertical.
00:25:464 (4) - I think you misplaced this.
00:30:297 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is too hard at this moment. Curve circle pattern has a good place here.
00:32:964 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same with this one.
00:36:131 (2) - Move it here: x:304
00:37:465 (4,5) - This pattern seems awkward. Remove this pattern then copy 00:37:131 (3) - then paste it on 00:37:465 then ctrl+h.
00:40:798 (1) - x:360
00:42:465 (4) - Put the tail on the red tick. It sounds better.
00:42:965 (6) - Too close from 00:42:798 (5) - . Move it farther away from 5 to make it hdash with 00:43:131 (7) - .
00:43:131 (7) - I don't recommend this super long slider. Map this part instead.
00:46:965 (1) - Too close from 00:46:798 (6) - . Add more distance.
00:47:047 (2) - Put this close to 00:46:965 (1) - .
Some parts of the diff have unnecessary jumps which are confusing to play. Though, the map is playable.
Also, slider arts like 01:21:631 (1) - and 00:27:131 (1) - doesn't apply too much on the play mode. If you want to add crazy sliders, make it horizontal. A good example is this 00:43:131 (7) - .
You can do better

Shano's Rain

I like your mapping style, to be honest.
00:13:632 (1,2) - Make 1 hdash. It is better that way.
00:32:798 (2) - Too close from 00:32:465 (1) - . Add more distance.
00:34:964 (9) - Move to x:424 for smoother curve.
00:38:798 (4) - 1/1 slider makes the rhythm off. Why not make it a repeat slider instead?
00:40:714 (2,3,4,5,6) - This a bit overmapped. Remove 2 instead?
00:41:631 - Blank space.
00:56:215 (5,6) - Move these here: x:408.
01:00:131 (4) - Same issue with 00:38:798 (4) -: Based on the rhythm here 01:01:131 (2,3,4) -.
01:06:131 (1) - Reduce its distance a little bit.
01:06:798 (5) - New combo, based on this pattern 01:06:131 (1,2) - .
01:15:465 (2,3) - Why not make the pattern like 01:14:798 (8,1) - too?
01:17:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern (01:17:465 (3,4,5,6)) - fits to be first rather than 01:17:131 (1,2) - ?
01:27:131 (2) - Add distance.
01:28:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Okay, I know your effort here, but I suggest to make this part spinner -- like other of the difficulties?

This is it for now.
I might continue this next time.
A very good luck with the ranking!!!

Last edited by Sakary 2017-05-21T09:16:44+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Shirokane Rinko

150 posts

Joined December 2016

Topic Starter

Shirokane Rinko 2017-05-21T07:25:35+00:00

Hi_Hello wrote:
General
Remove "(Short Ver.)" on the title of the song. It is unlikely recommended. Maybe put it on tags instead? - Hm, I think it better.
The background size is unrankable. Resize it to 1366x768. - Okay, thanks
I don't know about you, but I think the map's offset is a bit off. 13790 is the correct offset? I'm not sure. Maybe consult a time checker. - It`s true offset
About the preview point, 01:04:964 - seems the most appropriate part in placing preview point. - Rework, thanks
This is it for now.
I might continue this next time.
A very good luck with the ranking!!!

Thanks a lot for mod!

Memoriola

80 posts

Joined July 2015

Memoriola 2017-05-21T08:24:18+00:00

Last edited by Memoriola 2018-06-20T18:02:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

SYAHME 2017-05-21T09:27:34+00:00

p/5571699

Shirokane Rinko

150 posts

Joined December 2016

Topic Starter

Shirokane Rinko 2017-05-21T09:41:35+00:00

SYAHME wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5571699

oh, thanks a lot.

Xetopia

240 posts

Joined June 2015

Xetopia 2017-05-21T12:00:38+00:00

Hi_Hello wrote:
Shano's Rain
I like your mapping style, to be honest. thanks <3
00:13:632 (1,2) - Make 1 hdash. It is better that way. - ok
00:32:798 (2) - Too close from 00:32:465 (1) - . Add more distance. - ok
00:34:964 (9) - Move to x:424 for smoother curve. - ok
00:38:798 (4) - 1/1 slider makes the rhythm off. Why not make it a repeat slider instead? - besides the vocals there's nothing there.
+ curve slider emphasized this vocal
00:40:714 (2,3,4,5,6) - This a bit overmapped. Remove 2 instead? - ok
00:41:631 - Blank space.
00:56:215 (5,6) - Move these here: x:408. - ok
01:00:131 (4) - Same issue with 00:38:798 (4) -: Based on the rhythm here 01:01:131 (2,3,4) -.- then i agree
01:06:131 (1) - Reduce its distance a little bit. - ok
01:06:798 (5) - New combo, based on this pattern 01:06:131 (1,2) - . - ok
01:15:465 (2,3) - Why not make the pattern like 01:14:798 (8,1) - too? - already did it
01:17:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern (01:17:465 (3,4,5,6)) - fits to be first rather than 01:17:131 (1,2) - ? - to emphasize vocal beat first are sliders
01:27:131 (2) - Add distance. - ok
01:28:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Okay, I know your effort here, but I suggest to make this part spinner -- like other of the difficulties? - I think if put a spinner in there it will be too boring

Thanks for mod <33
update:

nya~

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 13798
Countdown: 0
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Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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TitleUnicode:afraid...
Artist:Uchida Aya
ArtistUnicode:内田 彩
Creator:Goddess Aqua
Version:Shano's Rain
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Tags:Bitter Kiss The Last Shanofanboy Gordon123 OneLoveOneLife
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360,200,56381,1,8,0:2:0:0:
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384,136,57631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,88,57798,1,4,1:2:0:0:
248,64,57965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,58131,1,8,0:2:0:0:
264,72,58298,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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216,136,60297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,120,60464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,60631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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328,112,61298,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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336,72,61631,1,8,0:2:0:0:
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160,96,63631,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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104,144,64298,1,4,3:1:0:0:
140,220,65798,5,2,0:1:0:0:
95,191,65882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,144,65965,1,8,2:2:0:0:
168,136,66048,1,8,2:2:0:0:
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464,80,66632,1,8,3:2:0:0:
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320,128,67965,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,72,68131,1,8,3:2:0:0:
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248,208,68798,1,8,3:2:0:0:
120,248,68965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,152,72465,6,0,P|448:120|488:40,2,195,6|8|2,1:1|3:2|1:1,0:0:0:0:
208,152,73298,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,128,73465,1,8,3:2:0:0:
384,96,73631,2,0,P|448:128|384:208,1,195,2|0,3:1|3:0,0:0:0:0:
272,208,74131,1,8,3:2:0:0:
392,209,74298,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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48,96,75798,2,0,L|160:96,1,97.5,4|0,0:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76131,2,0,P|368:88|296:80,1,195,8|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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328,80,77131,6,0,L|392:80,1,48.75,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,240,79298,1,8,3:2:0:0:
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120,128,80131,2,0,L|104:8,1,97.5,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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368,224,81131,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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360,168,81631,2,0,L|368:56,1,97.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,48,81965,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,80,82131,2,0,P|384:112|344:200,1,146.25,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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140,60,84965,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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Shirokane Rinko

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Shirokane Rinko 2017-05-22T14:20:06+00:00

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Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

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Nelly 2017-05-23T10:05:15+00:00

This Overdose was a mistake

Shirokane Rinko

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Shirokane Rinko 2017-05-23T11:12:38+00:00

Nelly wrote:
This Overdose was a mistake

I not think so.

-Ken

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-Ken 2017-05-31T00:34:43+00:00

mod as requested from OneLove
afraid...
00:31:631 - I'd suggest you add a note here and in similar ones like 00:32:297 - 00:34:297 - 00:34:964 -
00:47:297 (1,2,3) - move to x:192
01:02:964 - add note here
01:03:297 - same here
01:03:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fix spacing here , I suggest this : 01:03:631 (2) - 456 / 01:03:965 (4) - x:288
01:17:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I like this pattern c:
01:25:798 (7,8,1,1,2,1) - you need to fix spacing here (01:25:965 (8) - x:320 / 01:26:465 (2) - x:192 / 01:26:965 (2) - x:320)

sorry for taking so long
and gl

Memoriola

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Memoriola 2017-05-31T09:13:30+00:00

Last edited by Memoriola 2018-06-20T18:02:20+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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DeletedUser_6709840 2017-06-06T22:50:05+00:00

NM from my queue, hopefully my suggestions weren't sniped.

General

Why is there 13 seconds of no sound at the beginning of the audio track? I highly suggest you have that clipped from the audio track (and video clipped because you shouldnt have just no sound for a long period of time) in Audacity, adjust timing offset and them re-adjust the diffs to fit the new audio track. (Unless I have an older version of map, this needs to be fixed)

All the diffs should have a consistent ending spot and it seems this is a problem for all diffs. End the last spinner at all diffs at 01:32:464 – to be consistent and to end at a reasonable time.

No video on highest diff, be sure to apply.

Perhaps change your BG to a JPEG format to reduce filesize.

Unsnapped timing lines in the Platter at the follow points:

00:19:094
00:29:760
00:45:760
00:55:760
00:56:427
01:05:761

Gordon's Cup

00:13:798 (1,2) – Move the reverse so it points towards (2). It will make this distance play a little cleaner.

00:16:464 (3) – This movement is very awkward to play, just use the slider you did at 00:13:798 (1) – but have it's reverse flow left.

00:20:465 (2,3,4) – If you're using 0.7x as your walking distance, please use it as your walking distance throughout the whole map. The 0.5x between (3,4) breaks consistency.

00:24:465 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^Same here, fix your distances and throughout the map

00:29:797 (1,2) – This anti flow is very awkward to play because a new player isn't expecting the distance change. Move (2) to X=192

00:39:797 (3,4) – Avoid using ½ patterns on a Cup, they're a bit intimidating to new players.

00:45:297 (4) - ^ Same

I didn't mod whole diff because you repeat the same issues over and over. To save my sanity, I think you can fix the rest yourself.

Salad

In General, avoid ¼ patterns. They don't play well in Salads and don't contribute well. Also, only put dashes on downbeats (large white ticks) unless a sound is very strong. I don't have the patience to point them all out in a NM so I'll point one instance of the issue and you fix the rest.

Also, you;re going to have to fix all your distances because the flow is chaotic to say the least. For plate-walking, you should use 1.00x or Distance Snap tool. Your dashes at 1/1 rhythm are readable at 1.8. Your ½ dashes are readable at 2.40x snap.

00:13:798 (1,2) – Use 1.00x or 0.80x spacing for the walking distance. This doesn't flow well because the player has to stop to catch (2).

00:16:131 (7,1,2) – You should use 0.70x distance between (6,7) to make the curve of the previous pattern flow nice and then flip the next patterns to flow to the right instead.

00:18:131 (5,1,2,3,4,5) – Avoid antiflow patterns like this in Salads, it's awkward to play for a new player, flip this pattern to flow to the right.

00:18:964 (4,5,6) – The dash should be to (5), to emphasize the drum.

00:24:798 (2,3,4,5) – Do not do dashes into antiflow, that is unrankable because it's hard for another player to change distances quick.

01:11:797 (3,4,5,6) – Do not use consecuative dashes in Salads, too hard for a newer player to land.

The salad needs a lot of work and I don't wanna write an essay, so good luck.

The Last's Platter

This feels extremely undermapped. For example, everything after 00:19:131 – should be consistent ½ rhythm until the end of the song. The 1/1 patterns make this map feel like a glorified Salad.

Spacing is also an issue with this diff as well. When mapping, have a walking distance, a dashing distance and a hyper dash distance. Just as I said for the other diffs.

I won't even look at the rest of this diff until spacing and rhythm is fixed since that very base of this diff needs fixed.

I'm gonna stop here because I can tell there's problems down to the base of the map and I'm too stressed at this point in time to give you a proper mod. Sorry and good luck

Shirokane Rinko

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Shirokane Rinko 2017-06-07T13:55:42+00:00

RoseusJaeger wrote:
NM from my queue, hopefully my suggestions weren't sniped.

General

Why is there 13 seconds of no sound at the beginning of the audio track? I highly suggest you have that clipped from the audio track (and video clipped because you shouldnt have just no sound for a long period of time) in Audacity, adjust timing offset and them re-adjust the diffs to fit the new audio track. (Unless I have an older version of map, this needs to be fixed) - fix........

All the diffs should have a consistent ending spot and it seems this is a problem for all diffs. End the last spinner at all diffs at 01:32:464 – to be consistent and to end at a reasonable time. - Hm, I talk about this with my friends

No video on highest diff, be sure to apply. - fix

Perhaps change your BG to a JPEG format to reduce filesize. - I guess about it
Salad

In General, avoid ¼ patterns. They don't play well in Salads and don't contribute well. Also, only put dashes on downbeats (large white ticks) unless a sound is very strong. I don't have the patience to point them all out in a NM so I'll point one instance of the issue and you fix the rest.

Also, you;re going to have to fix all your distances because the flow is chaotic to say the least. For plate-walking, you should use 1.00x or Distance Snap tool. Your dashes at 1/1 rhythm are readable at 1.8. Your ½ dashes are readable at 2.40x snap.

00:13:798 (1,2) – Use 1.00x or 0.80x spacing for the walking distance. This doesn't flow well because the player has to stop to catch (2). - Use 0.80x

00:16:131 (7,1,2) – You should use 0.70x distance between (6,7) to make the curve of the previous pattern flow nice and then flip the next patterns to flow to the right instead. - Okay

00:18:131 (5,1,2,3,4,5) – Avoid antiflow patterns like this in Salads, it's awkward to play for a new player, flip this pattern to flow to the right. - Okay

00:18:964 (4,5,6) – The dash should be to (5), to emphasize the drum. - Okay

00:24:798 (2,3,4,5) – Do not do dashes into antiflow, that is unrankable because it's hard for another player to change distances quick. - Okay

01:11:797 (3,4,5,6) – Do not use consecuative dashes in Salads, too hard for a newer player to land. - Okay

The salad needs a lot of work and I don't wanna write an essay, so good luck. - Thanks a lot for mod

Gordon123

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Gordon123 2017-06-10T10:14:27+00:00

RoseusJaeger wrote:
Gordon's Cup

00:13:798 (1,2) – Move the reverse so it points towards (2). It will make this distance play a little cleaner. k

00:16:464 (3) – This movement is very awkward to play, just use the slider you did at 00:13:798 (1) – but have it's reverse flow left. no

00:20:465 (2,3,4) – If you're using 0.7x as your walking distance, please use it as your walking distance throughout the whole map. The 0.5x between (3,4) breaks consistency. lil fix

00:24:465 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^Same here, fix your distances and throughout the map k^

00:29:797 (1,2) – This anti flow is very awkward to play because a new player isn't expecting the distance change. Move (2) to X=192 It makes no sense

00:39:797 (3,4) – Avoid using ½ patterns on a Cup, they're a bit intimidating to new players. In a small measure you can use such places to maintain the rhythm

00:45:297 (4) - ^ Same no

I didn't mod whole diff because you repeat the same issues over and over. To save my sanity, I think you can fix the rest yourself. -_-

thx for mod

JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

JierYagtama 2017-06-12T13:26:49+00:00

Welp you kiiinda need to balance the spread between platter and rain

Salad

00:35:505 (3,4,5,6) - feels a bit too clumped up hmm maybe buff up the spacing a bit?
00:54:838 (10,11,12,13,14) - try this rhythm cos i kinda think you're emphasizing vocals so e welp since its a rhythm choice mod up to u if you wanna go this route and copy paste this rhythm orr say no since you think its ok rip

00:08:339 (3,4) - space this put a little bit like this for a little bit of consistency of patterns like you did in the beggining

00:51:505 - why not put a spinner here xd
Only concern is rhythm choice since its kinda not consistent imo

platter

00:00:839 (1,2) - nice blanket btw
00:05:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe change the hitsounds for this as drums?
00:22:172 (6) - kinda space this out till x:260 to emphasize that finish a bit more
01:04:005 - missing note
this one's ok owo)b

welp as I said still a bit new in ctb modding so please bear with me for this short shitmod xd
gl

Shirokane Rinko

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Shirokane Rinko 2017-06-12T19:46:29+00:00

JeirYagtama wrote:
Salad
00:35:505 (3,4,5,6) - feels a bit too clumped up hmm maybe buff up the spacing a bit? - little fix
00:54:838 (10,11,12,13,14) - try this rhythm cos i kinda think you're emphasizing vocals so e welp since its a rhythm choice mod up to u if you wanna go this route and copy paste this rhythm orr say no since you think its ok rip - little fix

00:08:339 (3,4) - space this put a little bit like this for a little bit of consistency of patterns like you did in the beggining

00:51:505 - why not put a spinner here xd - I think there not need spiner
Only concern is rhythm choice since its kinda not consistent imo - >~<

Thanks a lot for mod.

The Last

20 posts

Joined June 2014

The Last 2017-06-13T15:40:40+00:00

JeirYagtama wrote:
Welp you kiiinda need to balance the spread between platter and rain
platter
00:00:839 (1,2) - nice blanket btw What do you mean under "Blanket"?
00:05:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe change the hitsounds for this as drums? Ok, I'm going to annoy Goddess Aqua and ask to find drum hitsound
00:22:172 (6) - kinda space this out till x:260 to emphasize that finish a bit more It's done
01:04:005 - missing note Do you think so? I think that there is no sound.
this one's ok owo)b

Lacrima

377 posts

Joined September 2014

Lacrima 2017-06-24T14:21:46+00:00

охо, а вот и я:). насколько понимаю, здесь все русские, так что напишу все так)

[Gordon's Cup]

00:12:839 (3,4,1) - попытаешься объяснить, с чего вдруг здесь такое маленькое расстояние между объектами, если сравнивать с 00:11:506 (1,2,3) -? Выглядит очень плохо, в добавок 00:13:839 (4,1) - здесь должен быть спейсинг больше, ибо довольно сильный звук на (1).
00:15:505 (2,1) - Опять, для такого сильного звука на (1) + начала вокала расстояние должно быть чуть больше
00:20:172 (2,3) - Опять тот же вопрос, с чего такое маленькое расстояние?
00:21:838 (6,1) - ^
00:23:839 (4,1) - ^
00:24:838 (1,2,3) - ^, и так далее, и так далее. Я думаю суть ясна, что расстояния между объектами в капе должны быть зафиксированы примерно на одном уровне, как и должны выражать какие либо звуки/вокал. В данном случае, никакого выделения в этой дифе не наблюдается. Советую использовать определенный дистанс снап, а также если ты ставишь объект выше какого либо (00:23:839 (4,1) - как (1) после (4)), то в любом случае сохраняй ту же дистанцию по оси x, ибо так выходит очень странно и неприятно для игры. Дам небольшие примеры: 00:27:506 (1,2,1) -, 00:54:172 (1,2,3) - расстояния между объектами у этих паттернов выглядит довольно солидно, хотя тоже есть небольшие недочеты. В общем, мое пожелание - на начальном этапе маппинга старайся мапать на одной горизонтальной поверхности, то есть на одном уровне по координате y. Таким образом, дистанс снап будет использован всегда правильно, и таких проблем с расстояниями не будет.
00:32:338 (4) - Что за странный реверс? если подразумевался антифлоу, то в капе он неразрешен, если просто паттерн, требующей остановки,
то тоже играется довольно плохо на капе, ибо здесь остановки надо делать реще, так как используется 1/2 снап. Советую переделать этот паттерн.
Небольшая подсказка на то, что можно сделать - 00:32:338 (4,1) - если отразить этот паттерн (CTRL + H), то именно этот паттерн играется неплохо.
Однако не забывай про то, что после него также идут ноты.
На этом я пожалуй закончу, так как дифа нуждается в полной переработке. Изменяй и фиксируй все дистанции между объектами, не забывая про выделение сильных звуков и вокала, как и о том, что они должны быть согласованы друг с другом, и должно выйти лучше. Когда изменишь сей недочет - чекну дифу еще раз, дабы указать на другие ошибки. Сейчас этого сделать не могу, так как ошибка лежит на ошибке, в данном случае на неправильном расстоянии.

[Salad]

00:02:172 (4,5) - ох, опять. Объяснишь, почему здесь нету никакого движения? Вот и я думаю, что нет. Нету совершенно никаких изменений в музыке, что ставить такое, в добавок (5) даже лежит на даунбите, поэтому наоборот нуждается в выделении больше, чем остальные ноты.
00:03:338 (2,3) - Немного непонятно, что ты здесь подразумевал - проходимую без деша дистанцию, или джамп. В любом случае, это можно поймать, не используя деш. Либо увеличь дистанцию, чтобы было больше понятно, что здесь джамп, либо уменьшай, чтобы можно было без проблем ее пройти без деша.
00:03:506 (3,4) - Опять не наблюдаю логики за этим паттерном. Можно поймать не двигая платформу вовсе, но в музыке нет ничего такого, что требует остановки.
00:06:755 (3,4,5,6) - Во - первых, все это можно поймать, не используя деш, так что такое же решение проблемы сюда подойдет и из второго предложения. Однако, если ты решишь сделать здесь джамп, то нужно изменить паттерн, ибо 1/2 деш (00:06:839 (4,5) - ), после которого идет анти флоу паттерн (00:07:005 (5,6) - ) не разрешен в использовании в салате.
00:15:505 (4,5) - Опять, с чего такое маленькое расстояние? начиная отсюда, больше не буду перечислять это, ибо вроде бы проблема ясна. по сути, все тоже самое, что и в капе - переделывай дистанции так, как я сказал это Гордону.
00:16:338 (1,2,3) - Опять немного непонятно, подразумевался ли здесь джамп или нет. Ссылайся на 4 предложение
00:21:838 (3,4) - Как по мне, отличное место для джампа, но его здесь нет. Советую поставить.
00:32:338 (4,5) - ^
Секция с 00:32:838 (5) - по 00:43:505 (5) - с чего ты так часто стал использовать 1/2 паттерны? Никакого изменения в музыке и в вокале нету,
лишь более приглушенная музыка, но это не повод начинать ставить 1/2 паттерны. Сделай эту секцию более согласованной и похожей с тем, что было раньше.
00:55:172 (3,4,5) - Джамп должен был быть 00:55:172 (3,4) - здесь, а не 00:55:338 (4,5) - здесь, так как и вокал, и музыка опираются на 00:55:338 (4) -, а не на 00:55:838 (5) -.
00:58:505 (2,3,4,5) - Деш между (2) и (3), а затем анти флоу, начинающийся с (3), как я уже говорил ранее, не разрешен в салате.
01:09:505 (7,8) - ^, также можно поймать, не используя деш.
В общем, сложность также нуждается в полной переработке, связанной с расстояниями. Они должны быть более согласованными друг с другом,
а также, они должны выражать что то в музыке/вокале.

[The Last's Platter]

Я не вижу никакой необходимости нарушать диф сприд выставлением AR8,3, как и таковой необходимости в нем. Стоит изменить AR на 8,
что сохранит диф сприд.
00:03:172 (1,2) - Я так понимаю, что здесь подразумевался деш. Увеличь расстояние между ними, тогда это будет более согласованно с 00:01:839 (3,4) -.
00:24:672 (3,4) - Деш тоже нужно поставить, будет более согласованно со всеми остальными дешами.
00:26:839 (3,4) - ^
00:32:338 (4,5) - ^
00:40:672 (2,3) - ^, и так далее, и тому подобное.
И в этой дифе я наблюдаю ту же самую ситуацию, что с остальными. Переделывай дистанции, делай их более согласованными друг с другом, не забывая про то, что они должны выражать что - то в музыке/вокале.

[Shano's Rain]

00:06:088 (6,1) - Этот анти флоу после 1/4 гипер деша очень некомфортен для игры на рейнах. Советую отразить (1) (CTRL + G).
00:28:088 (5,1) - Я не думаю, что здесь есть что - то такое в музыке, что заслуживает 1/4 гипер дещ. Убери его
00:42:006 (4,5) - Тааак, постараетесь объяснить мне сей маленькое расстояние? Вы сговорились что ли хддд
В общем, самая логичная дифа в этом мапсете. Однако, она довольно сложная, чтобы называться рейном, советую пересмотреть всю идею паттернов и использования гипер дешей, ибо по мне, все слишком сложно. Но, я не БН, так что особо судить не буду.

[afraid...]

Тупое название, как по мне, совершенно неуместно. Я вроде не называл рейн на шелтере шелтером? Overdose вполне нормально, если ты мне только не сможешь объяснить, почему именно это название, а не Overdose. в этом я только могу пожелать удачи :>. И еще, вроде это ведь ванлав сделал, так что OneLove's Overdose тоже пойдет. я вот например бы не понял, что дифа сделана им
00:06:005 (6,7) - Как по мне, норм место для гипер деша. Мое предложение - 00:06:172 (7) - CTRH + H, затем поставить это на ~x192.
00:22:172 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Втф. Объяснишь, почему использовал такие больше расстояния для этих нот, не следуя 00:17:338 (2,3,4,5,6) - и 00:20:005 (2,3,4,5,6) - ? Вот и я думаю, что нет. Ничего в этом моменте в музыке и вокале нет, что заслуживает такого резкого изменения в расстоянии между нотами.
00:26:172 (1,2) - Аааа, что за странное положене (2)? Я думаю будет лучше, если после ловли (1) ты пойдешь ловить что - то в левой стороне игрового поля, в прочем, именно так я и сделал. Но не тут то было, не понятный антифлоу нота (2) резко появилась в правой стороне. Думаю, суть ясна, что нужно сделать
00:30:172 (1,2,3,4) - Тебе не кажется, что во - первых, это довольно несогласованный паттерн, а во - вторых, что это довольно легко для овердоза?
00:32:839 (1,2) - waaaa, не хотю, сделай расстояние не таким убийственным
00:37:838 (2,3,4) - Деш должен быть не между (2) и (3), а между (3) и (4), ибо музыка делает акцента на (4).
00:43:505 (1,2) - Очередное стоп движение. Объяснишь, почему здесь нужен паттерн, который останавливает движение игрока? Вот и я думаю,
что нет. Исправляй. Оу, и деш между 00:43:839 (2,3) - слишком сильный. Можешь поставить 00:43:839 (2) - на x264, решит сразу две проблемы. Но я все равно думаю, что это слишком легко для овердоза, так что советую вообще поменять паттерн
00:45:339 (2,3) - Хватит абузить едж джампы в паре с гипер дешами. Уменьши расстояние
01:02:338 (9,1) -; 01:03:005 (2,1) - Опять, останавливающие паттерны совершенно не к месту.
01:07:172 (6,1) - Уменьши немного расстояние

Хм, и так, что я хочу сказать об этом мапсете. По сути дела, во всех дифах одна и та же проблема - несогласованные друг с другом паттерны, расстояния, неправильное использование дистанс снапа в некоторых из них и так далее. Скажу прямо - я совершенно уверен, что мапсет в том виде, в каком он сейчас никогда не получит ранкед статус. Совершенно все дифы нуждаются в как таковой переработке паттернов и расстояний, а в этом я помочь уже сильно не могу. Все, что смог сделать я - указать определенные ошибки. Не думайте, что ошибки, которые я указал - единственные в ваших дифах. Их куда больше, просто я не вижу смысла указывать одно и тоже несколько раз подряд. Мой вам совет - это продолжать мапать, модить другие карты и не зацикливаться слишком долго на одной из них, как, возможно, вы хотите сделать на этой.

удачи вам

Xetopia

240 posts

Joined June 2015

Xetopia 2017-06-24T14:36:29+00:00

Myle wrote:
охо, а вот и я:). насколько понимаю, здесь все русские, так что напишу все так)

[Shano's Rain]
00:06:088 (6,1) - Этот анти флоу после 1/4 гипер деша очень некомфортен для игры на рейнах. Советую отразить (1) (CTRL + G).
00:28:088 (5,1) - Я не думаю, что здесь есть что - то такое в музыке, что заслуживает 1/4 гипер дещ. Убери его
00:42:006 (4,5) - Тааак, постараетесь объяснить мне сей маленькое расстояние? Вы сговорились что ли хддд
В общем, самая логичная дифа в этом мапсете. Однако, она довольно сложная, чтобы называться рейном, советую пересмотреть всю идею паттернов и использования гипер дешей, ибо по мне, все слишком сложно. Но, я не БН, так что особо судить не буду.

Все пофиксил, спасибо.

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184,208,75089,1,8,0:2:0:0:
360,232,75172,2,0,L|424:232,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
408,232,75339,2,0,L|328:232,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
128,248,75506,6,0,P|152:152|288:96,1,233.999992858887,12|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,88,76006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,88,76172,2,0,L|112:224,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,216,76506,2,0,L|96:216,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,200,76839,2,0,P|400:120|264:56,1,233.999992858887,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,77339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,64,77422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,77506,2,0,L|280:64,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,77839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,120,78006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,160,78172,6,0,P|176:112|352:40,1,233.999992858887,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,40,78672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,312,79506,2,0,L|56:312,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,248,79839,6,0,L|376:128,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,80172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,120,80339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,88,80672,1,0,0:0:0:0:

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Memoriola

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Memoriola 2017-06-24T15:09:39+00:00

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autofanboy

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autofanboy 2017-07-01T11:25:30+00:00

Hello there! I am not feeling well, I will just mod the Overdose and pinpoint some general issues.

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

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General]

Design

Uncheck 'Widescreen Support' in Shano's Rain.

Metadata
I am uncertain about the singer's name, is it 'Aya Uchida' or 'Uchida Aya'? Perhaps you can check it up or ask some metadata professionals.

Combo Colors
Combo Color 2 (Dark purple) might be too dark, I think players may miss easily if they play with a dimmed background.
Since Combo Color 1 is purple, maybe you can change Combo Color 2 to Grey/White tone.

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The Last's Platter]

Difficulty

AR=OD for all osu!catch difficulty. In this case, the OD of your Platter should be 8.3 instead of 6 to cohere with the value of AR (8.3).

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afraid...]

After my first testplay, I feel that this difficulty still need some improvements before going on. I will leave some general comments below so you can fix them and try to avoid making such mistakes again.

Some jumps are quite large. This is because the distance between the corresponding notes are too big, but they are not supported by hyperdashes. For instance:

00:01:505 (5,6) - The distance between them is too large, it is nearly impossible for players to spot the jump in their first play, reducing it will be a good solution.
00:04:505 (6,7) - ^
00:32:839 (1,2) - Really easy to miss (2) here because the movement of 00:32:672 (5,1) - may distract players, while the jump at (1,2) here is quite large, almost calling for a hyperdash. Please reduce the distance of (1,2).
00:43:839 (2,3) - There are some space left between these two notes here, but it may not be enough, it is still so easy to miss, basically because players may not be ready for this kind of edge-screen jumps. If you want to make use of this jump, you can increase the distance of 00:43:505 (1,2) - so players will be more ready for the jumping section. Yet I recommend reducing the distance here to a comfortable one (You can reach this by testing a few times after fixing, trial-and-error).

Some parts of the map have bizarre rhythms. This may affect player's rhythm sense as they tap dashes or movement keys with a different frequency, also not matching the song itself's rhythm. For example:
00:02:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - You started 1/2 sliders a half beat late, which already caused the dash timing to delay for a bit. Would be better if you start 1/2 sliders from 00:02:172 - , or you add one more circle at 00:02:338 - before using 1/2 slider at 00:02:505 - .
00:40:672 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Strange note pattern here. I think the stanza begins at 00:40:838 - so it will match the song more if you remove 00:40:672 (2) - , then add a circle at 00:40:672 - ; 00:40:838 - and 00:41:006 (1,2,3) - are some curve circle patterns or 1/2 sliders, and 00:41:505 (4,5,6,7) - is the same with this kind of pattern (maybe you can do symmetry). The current one is bizarre and it doesn't match the song's main beats.
01:09:672 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Strange stream pattern, better if you cut the stream into parts of 1/4 sliders/2 circles. One of the examples: *Screenshot. Doing these stream patterns can match the song's main beats and rhythm.

Some patterns are way too hard. What I mean hard is that they may cause fails if the players are unable to follow for a few notes. This is usually brought about by the multiple hyperdash patterns in this map. For instance:
00:53:838 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Firstly, for 00:53:838 (1,1) - the sudden change in the dashing direction will definitely confuse players, and due to such inward movement, players oftenly miss and may even lose track of the upcoming hyperdash jumping part. Don't do this kind of change, unless the pattern earlier has something similar that allow players to get ready. Secondly, for 00:54:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not a big fan of this kind of jumping, it can be harsh and cause a fail if you missed a hyperdash move. Better if you use other 1/2 slider patterns, or some jumping that consist of normal dashes and hyperdashes.
00:59:422 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - For 00:59:422 (2,1,2) - the hyperdash distances are similar but the timeline distance of 00:59:422 (2,1) - is different from 00:59:505 (1,2) - , which can trick players and miss very easily after this jump. Also, for 00:59:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has the same issue above.

Odd emphasis can be found. Hyperdashes are always used to emphasis main beats of the song, or the cymbal hitsounds around the whole map. For example:
00:06:005 (6,7) - There should be a hyperdash between them because (7) here is the start of another stanza (You can hear that because it is the start of another instrument). Also you can fix the pattern of 00:05:672 (2,3,4,5) - , kind of antiflow between 00:05:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - which bring about uncomfortable jumping.
00:34:006 (1,2,3) - Strange to have hyperdash between (1,2) here. Can't see why (2) is a beat that should be emphasized strongly. In fact, I think (3) is the main beat here (mostly main beats are at red tick or white tick). You can change to this if you want: *Screenshot.
Not going to pinpoint more, but the major tip here: Mostly hyperdashes are placed every 4 white ticks; start of Kiai/chorus; notes with Finish hitsound (cymbals).

New Combo (NC) issues. Try to separate notes into combos by stanzas / every 2 or 4 white ticks. For example:
00:04:839 (8) - This should be NC'ed because it is the start of another 4 white tick timeline. You can observe this by looking at 00:00:839 - 00:04:672 - , NCs are made every 4 white ticks.
00:06:172 (7) - NC.
00:23:006 (1) - Remove NC.
00:24:839 (5,1) - Add NC at (5) and remove the existing one at (1).
00:27:505 (6,1) - Add NC at (6) and remove the existing one at (1).
00:34:006 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - You can group them into a combo, players may be confused if there are too many fruit splashes over the board.
00:36:838 (1,1,2) - Group this part if you did the same above at 00:34:006 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - .
00:38:172 (4,1) - Add NC at (4) and remove the one at (1).
There are more but I think you can find them out yourself.

Good luck!

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-Hex- 2017-07-08T11:09:30+00:00

Hello . Can I make Cup Diff ? Good song

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