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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 8 августа 2018 г. at 11:26:53

Artist: Aya Uchida
Title: afraid...
Tags: Bitter Kiss Xetopia -Hex- Sinnoh alienflybot Celektus
BPM: 180
Filesize: 21156kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. AFB's Platter (2,85 stars, 247 notes)
  2. Hex's Cup (1,45 stars, 125 notes)
  3. Salad (2,05 stars, 186 notes)
  4. Sinnoh's Overdose (4,49 stars, 310 notes)
  5. Xetopia's Rain (3,89 stars, 275 notes)


Download: Aya Uchida - afraid...
Download: Aya Uchida - afraid... (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hello all, I return to work on this map, and I again try rank it (haaaaaa), so, I reworked my salad (full) and deleted platter & overdose (sorry gaaraati and onelove) cup and rain would be reworked. I will delete it after rank


Cup - By -Hex- [100%]
Salad - By Shirokane Rinko [100%]
Platter - By alienflybot [100%]
Rain - By Xetopia [100%]
Overdose - By Sinnoh [100%]


Hitsounds : By Celektus
Beatmap Banner : By Luisina


posted
Hello

[afraid...]
00:15:132 (1) - Move this to x432 to make it a hyper and therefore make this jumping section more fun.
00:19:131 (5) - Move this to x512 since moving to the right after a kickslider to the left feels a lot more natural.
00:36:465 (1) - CTRL+G if you CTRL+G it feels more natural and fun to play. Also move it to x128
00:36:965 (2) - Same problems as ^ but basicaly CTRL+G and move it to x384
00:39:131 (1) - CTRL+G to remove the antiflow then you move 00:38:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - all these 2-3 ticks to the right with the current grid level 3.
00:45:298 (7,9) - Move these 2 to x104 to trigger the hyper effect on this strong beat!
00:47:131 (2,4) - I would strongly recommend moving these 2 to x408 this does remove the "back and forwards" pattern but honestly it really does not fit there, you should really only do it in a longer stream section and probably with less distance!
00:53:131 (2) - Move this to x88 since this antiflow triple pattern in the middle of the stream just feels awkward af to play.
01:08:131 (7) - Going into a slider with a hyper feels better to me here so I suggest moving this to x464
01:10:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would strongly suggest to just redo this whole pattern, however if you don't feel like it just move 01:10:298 (2) - to x168 and 01:10:631 (4) - to x400 to remove the awkward random hypers here.
01:15:131 (7) - Move this to x16 seriously, this feels a lot better than without a hyper if you try it out.
01:15:131 (7) - Exact same reason as this ^ only this time around you're suppose to move it to x496
01:22:631 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can probably make this stream pattern into something more interesting! Look at the other streams in the map.
01:28:298 (13,14) - CTRL+G, no questions asked, just do it.
01:27:631 (6) - x408 to make this fruit become a hyper into the stream that begins right after.

[Shano's Rain]
00:18:799 (3,4,5,6) - You could curve this stream a bit more since it's on a strong beat.
00:20:798 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:05:798 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:06:465 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:27:798 (4,5,6,7) - Especially on this part since there is a much more curved stream right after it.
posted
Hi.

Rather than going into details I decided to give some general feedback instead because your map need that above anything else at this point.

[General]

The mp3 file has ~15sec empty part before the song starts, please remove this and set your preview point to a more suitable place.

Add the guest mapper's name to the tags please. Furthermore there is no need for "uchida, aya, afraid, short, japan" there. The source is not Aya Uchida either, leave it empty. We only use that if the song comes from a video game.

I took a look at all difficulty and noticed the same thing everywhere, which are the inconsistent timeline (rhythm usage) and their inconsistent distances. What am I want to say with this you might ask. My point here is that, if you take a look at the part between 00:29:797 and 00:40:464 and listen it a few times you should notice the pattern which repeats itself in the music. This pattern is a line from the lyrics then 4 drum hit repeated four times. This means, you should follow this and have a repetitive timeline as well. Like this:

When the timeline is done you can go and decide how the distances will be used. For example, (we are still at the same section by the way) on my screenshot whenever the vocal steps in I used a long 1/1 slider and that slider could be placed a bit away from the previous note because it is the introduction of a new verse. This could be 2.00x up to a HyperJump, it is your decision BUT because it repeats itself you need to stick with this distance at the similar parts of this section (or later as well if the rhythm comes back again). Drums can have jumps or Hyperjumps as well.

I hope this amount of explanation was enough to understand my point, if not feel free to contact me and I will try to explain it better. Moreover, this small paragraph applies to all difficulties in this set, not just the easiest or hardest. All of you guys made the same mistakes all over. Please try to fix it.

Few more thing:
[afraid]

00:19:131 to 00:29:797 - Why this part has a break? It is a strong instrumental one with guitar and drums. You should not leave it empty on the highest difficulty at all.
00:43:131 (6) - I am personally not a big fan of these kind of slider usage. It covers and ignores important instruments from the song.
00:47:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - You used this kind of jump pattern a LOT of times which not just makes your map kinda boring but can completely be out of place as well, like here by the way. Also 00:47:214 (3,5) - are mapped to nothing.
[]

tr;dr With fixing that timeline and distance you guys saves a lot of time to others and might get this map ranked sooner. And while many modder and player probably won't care too much about them, the members of the BNG will notice it and point it out. Having a small inconsistently is fine as long as you can explain it though.

Good luck!
posted

Kurokami wrote:

Hi.

Rather than going into details I decided to give some general feedback instead because your map need that above anything else at this point.

[General]

The mp3 file has ~15sec empty part before the song starts, please remove this and set your preview point to a more suitable place.

Add the guest mapper's name to the tags please. Furthermore there is no need for "uchida, aya, afraid, short, japan" there. The source is not Aya Uchida either, leave it empty. We only use that if the song comes from a video game.

I took a look at all difficulty and noticed the same thing everywhere, which are the inconsistent timeline (rhythm usage) and their inconsistent distances. What am I want to say with this you might ask. My point here is that, if you take a look at the part between 00:29:797 and 00:40:464 and listen it a few times you should notice the pattern which repeats itself in the music. This pattern is a line from the lyrics then 4 drum hit repeated four times. This means, you should follow this and have a repetitive timeline as well. Like this:

When the timeline is done you can go and decide how the distances will be used. For example, (we are still at the same section by the way) on my screenshot whenever the vocal steps in I used a long 1/1 slider and that slider could be placed a bit away from the previous note because it is the introduction of a new verse. This could be 2.00x up to a HyperJump, it is your decision BUT because it repeats itself you need to stick with this distance at the similar parts of this section (or later as well if the rhythm comes back again). Drums can have jumps or Hyperjumps as well.

I hope this amount of explanation was enough to understand my point, if not feel free to contact me and I will try to explain it better. Moreover, this small paragraph applies to all difficulties in this set, not just the easiest or hardest. All of you guys made the same mistakes all over. Please try to fix it.

Few more thing:
[afraid]

00:19:131 to 00:29:797 - Why this part has a break? It is a strong instrumental one with guitar and drums. You should not leave it empty on the highest difficulty at all.
00:43:131 (6) - I am personally not a big fan of these kind of slider usage. It covers and ignores important instruments from the song.
00:47:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - You used this kind of jump pattern a LOT of times which not just makes your map kinda boring but can completely be out of place as well, like here by the way. Also 00:47:214 (3,5) - are mapped to nothing.
[]

tr;dr With fixing that timeline and distance you guys saves a lot of time to others and might get this map ranked sooner. And while many modder and player probably won't care too much about them, the members of the BNG will notice it and point it out. Having a small inconsistently is fine as long as you can explain it though.

Good luck!
Dear Kurokami.
Thanks for mod, I tells about him to my friend. You say remove 15 second part before song, but it`s need, because map sounds was taken from video, and in video have 15 second part, so i think that it`s need dor map. Soon my friend write you about mod,waht he fix and what no.
posted

Negri_sk wrote:

Hello

[afraid...]
00:15:132 (1) - Move this to x432 to make it a hyper and therefore make this jumping section more fun.
00:19:131 (5) - Move this to x512 since moving to the right after a kickslider to the left feels a lot more natural.
00:36:465 (1) - CTRL+G if you CTRL+G it feels more natural and fun to play. Also move it to x128
00:36:965 (2) - Same problems as ^ but basicaly CTRL+G and move it to x384
00:39:131 (1) - CTRL+G to remove the antiflow then you move 00:38:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - all these 2-3 ticks to the right with the current grid level 3.
00:45:298 (7,9) - Move these 2 to x104 to trigger the hyper effect on this strong beat!
00:47:131 (2,4) - I would strongly recommend moving these 2 to x408 this does remove the "back and forwards" pattern but honestly it really does not fit there, you should really only do it in a longer stream section and probably with less distance!
00:53:131 (2) - Move this to x88 since this antiflow triple pattern in the middle of the stream just feels awkward af to play.
01:08:131 (7) - Going into a slider with a hyper feels better to me here so I suggest moving this to x464
01:10:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would strongly suggest to just redo this whole pattern, however if you don't feel like it just move 01:10:298 (2) - to x168 and 01:10:631 (4) - to x400 to remove the awkward random hypers here.
01:15:131 (7) - Move this to x16 seriously, this feels a lot better than without a hyper if you try it out.
01:15:131 (7) - Exact same reason as this ^ only this time around you're suppose to move it to x496
01:22:631 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can probably make this stream pattern into something more interesting! Look at the other streams in the map.
01:28:298 (13,14) - CTRL+G, no questions asked, just do it.
01:27:631 (6) - x408 to make this fruit become a hyper into the stream that begins right after.

[Shano's Rain]
00:18:799 (3,4,5,6) - You could curve this stream a bit more since it's on a strong beat.
00:20:798 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:05:798 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:06:465 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:27:798 (4,5,6,7) - Especially on this part since there is a much more curved stream right after it.
Dear Negri_sk
Thanks for mod, I tell my friends about him and soon they write what they fix, and what no
posted

Negri_sk wrote:

Hello

[Shano's Rain]
00:18:799 (3,4,5,6) - You could curve this stream a bit more since it's on a strong beat.
00:20:798 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:05:798 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:06:465 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:27:798 (4,5,6,7) - Especially on this part since there is a much more curved stream right after it.
Everything was fixed!, thanks

and update:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 0
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:afraid... (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:afraid... (Short Ver.)
Artist:Uchida Aya
ArtistUnicode:内田 彩
Creator:Goddess Aqua
Version:Shano's Rain
Source:Uchida Aya
Tags:Aya, Uchida, Bitter, Kiss, short, afraid, Japan
BeatmapID:1289549
BeatmapSetID:610541

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9
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SliderTickRate:2

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afraid....
17:10 Emiru: oh so it's way easier we can do IRC mod right now if you want
17:11 OneLoveOneLife: :thinking:
17:11 OneLoveOneLife: okay
17:12 OneLoveOneLife: Don't forget to save our chat
17:12 Emiru: sure
17:13 Emiru: Okay first AR is kinda low maybe ? like 9.4 is better i think
17:13 OneLoveOneLife: Hmm
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: I really don't know, because every AR less than 10 is slow for me
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: But okay
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: Done
17:14 Emiru: 00:16:965 (3) -
17:14 Emiru: you should nerf this jump or make a HDash
17:15 OneLoveOneLife: nerfed
17:16 Emiru: 00:17:798 (3) -
17:16 Emiru: mayeb curved is slider is way better for the aesthetic of the map
17:17 OneLoveOneLife: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087472 like this?]
17:17 OneLoveOneLife: Or what do you mean
17:19 Emiru: 00:17:798 (3) - x:416 and stream 00:18:465 (1,2,3,4) - first note x:80
17:19 Emiru: it look way better
17:19 Emiru: yeah i guess it's ok maybe just normal curved slider like
17:20 Emiru: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087492
17:20 Emiru: 00:20:964 - note here ?
17:21 Emiru: to make a good looking triplet like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087509
17:22 OneLoveOneLife: Here's no sounds
17:23 OneLoveOneLife: I want to put here something, but other modders will be angre
17:23 OneLoveOneLife: agrhh >:З
17:24 Emiru: so just put little slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087527
17:24 Emiru: 00:23:714 (2,3) - same here
17:26 OneLoveOneLife: Maybe Im little stupid, but whats the difference between slider and 2 notes?
17:27 Emiru: aesthetic again
17:27 Emiru: your patern look kinda ugly :d and it play better i think
17:28 OneLoveOneLife: Hmm, okay, let it be
17:29 Emiru: 00:29:047 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087582
17:29 Emiru: same here with the little slider
17:30 Emiru: 00:32:965 (2,3,4,5,6) - make more movement on this it's 2 easy for overdose
17:31 Emiru: 00:40:298 (5) - HDash here
17:32 OneLoveOneLife: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087598 like this?]
17:32 Emiru: yeah maybe a little more
17:33 Emiru: 00:43:131 (6) - this slider make no sense aha
17:34 OneLoveOneLife: Everyone said it's weird
17:34 OneLoveOneLife: What have I put here
17:35 Emiru: how about velocity 1,20 for this slider and form like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087632
17:35 Emiru: i think you can keep it just make him with a good form like curved
17:36 Emiru: 00:46:965 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - make them two triplet reverse arrows like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087646
17:36 OneLoveOneLife: Gimeme 1 min
17:36 Emiru: 00:50:465 (1) - antiflow reverse him
17:37 Emiru: and put number 2 way more to the left
17:38 OneLoveOneLife: Idk how to change velocity only for this slider(
17:38 Emiru: F6
17:38 Emiru: + green and 1.20
17:38 Emiru: when it's finish just at the end put 1.o or the number you want
17:41 Emiru: kiai is pretty decent
17:41 Emiru: 01:28:464 (15) - same curve more with more velocity
17:42 OneLoveOneLife: Im too stipud for this
17:42 OneLoveOneLife: I'll call creator of own mapset to help. It's his work :D
17:42 Emiru: ok
17:42 Emiru: i have to eat now ;w;
17:43 OneLoveOneLife: well, is this all?
17:43 OneLoveOneLife: I mean, end of the mod
17:44 Emiru: yep
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Emiru wrote:

afraid....
17:10 Emiru: oh so it's way easier we can do IRC mod right now if you want
17:11 OneLoveOneLife: :thinking:
17:11 OneLoveOneLife: okay
17:12 OneLoveOneLife: Don't forget to save our chat
17:12 Emiru: sure
17:13 Emiru: Okay first AR is kinda low maybe ? like 9.4 is better i think
17:13 OneLoveOneLife: Hmm
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: I really don't know, because every AR less than 10 is slow for me
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: But okay
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: Done
17:14 Emiru: 00:16:965 (3) -
17:14 Emiru: you should nerf this jump or make a HDash
17:15 OneLoveOneLife: nerfed
17:16 Emiru: 00:17:798 (3) -
17:16 Emiru: mayeb curved is slider is way better for the aesthetic of the map
17:17 OneLoveOneLife: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087472 like this?]
17:17 OneLoveOneLife: Or what do you mean
17:19 Emiru: 00:17:798 (3) - x:416 and stream 00:18:465 (1,2,3,4) - first note x:80
17:19 Emiru: it look way better
17:19 Emiru: yeah i guess it's ok maybe just normal curved slider like
17:20 Emiru: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087492
17:20 Emiru: 00:20:964 - note here ?
17:21 Emiru: to make a good looking triplet like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087509
17:22 OneLoveOneLife: Here's no sounds
17:23 OneLoveOneLife: I want to put here something, but other modders will be angre
17:23 OneLoveOneLife: agrhh >:З
17:24 Emiru: so just put little slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087527
17:24 Emiru: 00:23:714 (2,3) - same here
17:26 OneLoveOneLife: Maybe Im little stupid, but whats the difference between slider and 2 notes?
17:27 Emiru: aesthetic again
17:27 Emiru: your patern look kinda ugly :d and it play better i think
17:28 OneLoveOneLife: Hmm, okay, let it be
17:29 Emiru: 00:29:047 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087582
17:29 Emiru: same here with the little slider
17:30 Emiru: 00:32:965 (2,3,4,5,6) - make more movement on this it's 2 easy for overdose
17:31 Emiru: 00:40:298 (5) - HDash here
17:32 OneLoveOneLife: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087598 like this?]
17:32 Emiru: yeah maybe a little more
17:33 Emiru: 00:43:131 (6) - this slider make no sense aha
17:34 OneLoveOneLife: Everyone said it's weird
17:34 OneLoveOneLife: What have I put here
17:35 Emiru: how about velocity 1,20 for this slider and form like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087632
17:35 Emiru: i think you can keep it just make him with a good form like curved
17:36 Emiru: 00:46:965 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - make them two triplet reverse arrows like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087646
17:36 OneLoveOneLife: Gimeme 1 min
17:36 Emiru: 00:50:465 (1) - antiflow reverse him
17:37 Emiru: and put number 2 way more to the left
17:38 OneLoveOneLife: Idk how to change velocity only for this slider(
17:38 Emiru: F6
17:38 Emiru: + green and 1.20
17:38 Emiru: when it's finish just at the end put 1.o or the number you want
17:41 Emiru: kiai is pretty decent
17:41 Emiru: 01:28:464 (15) - same curve more with more velocity
17:42 OneLoveOneLife: Im too stipud for this
17:42 OneLoveOneLife: I'll call creator of own mapset to help. It's his work :D
17:42 Emiru: ok
17:42 Emiru: i have to eat now ;w;
17:43 OneLoveOneLife: well, is this all?
17:43 OneLoveOneLife: I mean, end of the mod
17:44 Emiru: yep
Thanks you very much for mod.
I reworked two sliders about which you wrote.
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Cup

Для начала хотел бы сказать, что меня смущают несколько слайдеров:
00:45:797 (1) - и 01:15:131 (1) - мне кажется, что стоит немного выгнуть их, так как слайдеры такой формы могут помешать поймать все дроплеты.

01:20:464 (1) - дроплеты летят слева от остальной составляющей, соответственно поймать все дроплеты может быть тоже затруднительно (в рамках самой простой сложности).


Salad

00:18:465 (7) - это нужно срочно заменить! В саладе нельзя использовать стримы длиной более чем в один BPM с шагом в 1/4, т.е. не более чем 5 нот в одном стриме. Если заменить его на что-то подобное (пикрелейтед), то нужно сделать слайдер как новое комбо т.к. комбо учитывая все реверсы составит 11, а допустимое 10.

01:27:797 (6) - на всех слайдерах такого типа советую немного уменьшить наклон.
00:32:797 (8) - бью тревогу! Обнаружено наложение объектов друг на друга. Стоит просто убрать круг №8
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The Last wrote:

Salad

00:18:465 (7) - это нужно срочно заменить! В саладе нельзя использовать стримы длиной более чем в один BPM с шагом в 1/4, т.е. не более чем 5 нот в одном стриме. Если заменить его на что-то подобное (пикрелейтед), то нужно сделать слайдер как новое комбо т.к. комбо учитывая все реверсы составит 11, а допустимое 10. - Исправлено, спасибо.

01:27:797 (6) - на всех слайдерах такого типа советую немного уменьшить наклон. - Исправлено.
00:32:797 (8) - бью тревогу! Обнаружено наложение объектов друг на друга. Стоит просто убрать круг №8 - Забыл его убрать ранее,
спасибо, что напомнили, 8 ноту удалил.
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@The Last's mod

>при испоьзовании обычного скина у меня не возникло никаких проблем с тем что бы поймать все дроблеты :

Но всё же я внемлю требованиям на счёт первого,так что 00:45:797 (1) - немного исправлен.
~~~~~~~

>Опять же,у меня всё нормально получается,но хорошо,немного подправил! ээх

Thx for mod ;)
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From Celektus' Hitsounding Queue


Here is the Code for the top diffs Hitsounds and a link to My Skin in case you'd like to add my Hitsounds as Customs. After you've applied the Hitsounds just copy them to other diffs with this tool


osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 13798
Countdown: 0
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.6

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Title:afraid... (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:afraid... (Short Ver.)
Artist:Uchida Aya
ArtistUnicode:内田 彩
Creator:Goddess Aqua
Version:afraid..
Source:Uchida Aya
Tags:Bitter Kiss The Last Shanofanboy Gordon123 OneLoveOneLife
BeatmapID:1296239
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OverallDifficulty:9.4
ApproachRate:9.4
SliderMultiplier:1.6
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[afraid..]

I have also some small suggestions or questions


  1. between these notes I think are some important sounds that should be mapped 00:57:465 (5,1) - in this first one there's a Vocal on the red tick before and in the slider. the slider head still has the crash on it so I think there might be a better solution. Similar thing here 01:02:797 (4,5,1) - also on both red before and after 5

  2. why didn't you map this stream? 01:17:131 (4,5,6,7) -

  3. wouldn't a spinner in the end fit? just an idea since the song fades out. You could then even fade out the volume of the spinner

  4. now I also have 2 more things I'm confused about as a std mapper. in std It's more common to start new combos on big white ticks and not out of these since they are usually the section changes. is there a reason for that in ctb?

    2. thing there's a thing in std I think called tick relevancy which essentially states that most music has it's strong sounds naturally on odd ticks. I assume you maybe saw a video from Pishifat talking about and if not maybe do that if you're curious 1 3 2 4.

    So starting jump pattern on like red ticks is considered less ideal and gets pointed out... I don't know if this applies to ctb tho so I'm just guessing I should ask and point it out that you do that ;_; 01:13:964 (1,2) -

  5. also... use 3 dots for afraid.. since that's more Anime/LN/VN stereotype-ish... also maybe before the Afraid or maybe use a question mark and yes I'm actually suggesting things about the diffname cause 2 dots trigger me deep inside or something
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Celektus wrote:

From Celektus' Hitsounding Queue
Thanks so much, it`s hitsounds so good
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posted
General


Tags
  1. Good!


Metadata
  1. It's already been mentioned but remove Uchida Aya from the source box. This is not what that is for.


Spread/Other
  1. It'd be better for the Cup to be cs2.5, hp 3, and approach rate AT LEAST ar5 to properly fit the spread. As it stands right now, all three values are questionable
  2. Please lower the Salad hp to 4, and consider raising the Overdose hp to 7. These are the default values for a full spread


Hitsounds

  • General Hitsounding
  1. Good!
Gordon's Cup


General



  1. Why is the cup's sv set at 1.40? That's kind of high for a cup difficulty
  2. Looking through the cup, there's a fair amount of quality issues that I think should be addressed before you push this any more forward. The distances are odd consistently throughout the mapset, and the combos can be halved as they are currently, and the biggest issue of all is that this is way too dense at many parts, such as 00:39:797 (3,4) - , 00:45:297 (4,5,6) - , and 01:23:131 (1,2,3) - . Going back to the distances quickly, we can see that in numerous places notes are FAR too close together and deserve a lot more space, even for a cup difficulty. Here are a few examples; 00:15:798 (2,3) - , 00:18:464 (4,1) - , 00:32:131 (6,1) - , 00:34:797 (6,1) - , 00:51:797 (2,3) - , 00:58:797 (4,1) - , and 01:01:797 (1,2) -, to name a few.

While I want to help you out, there's a lot that needs to be done before you're ready for the modding stage.
Salad


General



  1. This difficulty suffers much of the same problems as the one before it. Odd distances, awkward flow, though the density is fine for the most part (but there are certain places where you go a bit overboard, such as 00:54:297 (4,5,1,2,3) - ...). It'd be almost pointless to mod this at this point, since it'd be mostly remapping sections and doing a lot of the work for you.
The Last's Platter


General



  1. Starting to sense a trend here :( This difficulty has all the same problems that the other two did, with the addition of hyperdash errors and far larger combos.
  2. 00:23:881 - There's no note here, no need to place a circle here
  3. Again, this would be pointless to mod as it is.
Shano's Rain


General



  1. This difficulty has a lot more proper structure and spacing, so I can do a proper mod on it
  2. 00:16:299 (1) - Remove the NC here and place it on 00:16:465 (2) - .
  3. 00:20:465 (1,2) - Having a hyper between these two notes is pretty overkill, since you just had a hyper going to (1) and (2) isn't really that strong of a note.
  4. 00:21:132 (6) - Remove the NC here and place it on 00:21:798 (3) -
  5. 00:25:132 (3,4) - The distance between these notes should be a bit greater! It deserves a small jump at least
  6. 00:25:798 (5) - Place a NC here and remove the one on 00:26:298 (1) -
  7. 00:27:131 (5) - Place a NC here and remove the one on 00:28:131 (3) - , and then place another on 00:28:465 (1) -
  8. 00:28:798 (3) - This curved slider doesn't work so well. The flow going off of it doesn't feel nice to play. Consider making it more horizontal.
  9. 00:31:131 (5) - Place a NC here please.
  10. 00:34:465 (6) - Make this more horizontal please. The slight angle it has is just annoying to play and doesn't do much good.
  11. 00:45:798 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - You have more hypers in this section than you did in the last section, which doesn't make sense since this one is more quiet and soft. Please reduce the hyper count where you see fit.
  12. 00:58:798 (10,1) - Put a hyper here please! This is a really good spot for one.
  13. 01:15:131 (3,4,5) - The hyper is completely different from 01:15:798 (6,7) - , which is the exact same sound in the song. You two circles with a hyper connecting them in the first pattern, and a regular slider in the second. Make them consistent!
  14. 01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - Try a more rounded approach for this stream. This current stream is ugly.
  15. 01:33:465 (4,5) - Uh... why is there a hyper here? Quite literally the quietest part of the song.
    Around halfway through the song I stopped noticing the NCs because they were all wrong. Look at a few maps/guides quickly and then fix them, it shouldn't be hard
afraid..


General



  1. And this difficulty has all the problems that the rest of them do. Sorry, but I don't think it's a good idea for me to mod this right now

If you want a 100% mod, shoot me a message once you've addressed my concerns and I'll take a look again.
posted

-wwwww wrote:

General


Metadata
It's already been mentioned but remove Uchida Aya from the source box. This is not what that is for. - Done

Please lower the Salad hp to 4 - Done


Salad


General



This difficulty suffers much of the same problems as the one before it. Odd distances, awkward flow, though the density is fine for the most part (but there are certain places where you go a bit overboard, such as 00:54:297 (4,5,1,2,3) - ...). It'd be almost pointless to mod this at this point, since it'd be mostly remapping sections and doing a lot of the work for you. - I Reworked distances in many moments, little reworked NC, thanks for mod, and sorry for this miss
posted

-wwwww wrote:

Shano's Rain


General



  1. This difficulty has a lot more proper structure and spacing, so I can do a proper mod on it
  2. 00:16:299 (1) - Remove the NC here and place it on 00:16:465 (2) - . - done
  3. 00:20:465 (1,2) - Having a hyper between these two notes is pretty overkill, since you just had a hyper going to (1) and (2) isn't really that strong of a note. - fixed
  4. 00:21:132 (6) - Remove the NC here and place it on 00:21:798 (3) - done
  5. 00:25:132 (3,4) - The distance between these notes should be a bit greater! It deserves a small jump at least - fixed
  6. 00:25:798 (5) - Place a NC here and remove the one on 00:26:298 (1) - done
  7. 00:27:131 (5) - Place a NC here and remove the one on 00:28:131 (3) - , and then place another on 00:28:465 (1) - done
  8. 00:28:798 (3) - This curved slider doesn't work so well. The flow going off of it doesn't feel nice to play. Consider making it more horizontal. - done
  9. 00:31:131 (5) - Place a NC here please. - done
  10. 00:34:465 (6) - Make this more horizontal please. The slight angle it has is just annoying to play and doesn't do much good. - - removed slider and added four notes to create another pattern. I thought that slider looks bad in here
  11. 00:45:798 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - You have more hypers in this section than you did in the last section, which doesn't make sense since this one is more quiet and soft. Please reduce the hyper count where you see fit. - fixed
  12. 00:58:798 (10,1) - Put a hyper here please! This is a really good spot for one. - fixed
  13. 01:15:131 (3,4,5) - The hyper is completely different from 01:15:798 (6,7) - , which is the exact same sound in the song. You two circles with a hyper connecting them in the first pattern, and a regular slider in the second. Make them consistent! - fixed
  14. 01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - Try a more rounded approach for this stream. This current stream is ugly. - fixed
  15. 01:33:465 (4,5) - Uh... why is there a hyper here? Quite literally the quietest part of the song. - fixed :D
    Around halfway through the song I stopped noticing the NCs because they were all wrong. Look at a few maps/guides quickly and then fix them, it shouldn't be hard - ok, i'll fix NCs
Thanks for mod <333
and update
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304,72,45465,1,12,0:3:0:0:
168,104,45631,1,12,0:3:0:0:
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112,192,48131,1,8,0:2:0:0:
208,200,48298,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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136,48,49631,1,4,3:0:0:0:
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112,192,49964,1,4,0:3:0:0:
200,208,50131,1,4,0:3:0:0:
304,208,50298,1,4,0:3:0:0:
192,256,50465,1,4,0:3:0:0:
312,256,50631,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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144,232,51631,2,0,L|136:152,1,78,10|0,3:3|2:0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,51965,2,0,L|288:48,1,78,0|8,1:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
128,64,52298,1,0,3:0:0:0:
206,64,52465,6,0,L|296:64,1,78,2|2,1:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
168,80,52798,2,0,L|64:80,1,78,2|4,1:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
296,48,53131,2,0,L|216:48,2,78,0|2|8,1:0|0:1|0:2,0:0:0:0:
192,40,53631,1,2,0:1:0:0:
472,144,53798,6,0,L|376:144,1,78,4|0,1:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
296,136,54131,2,0,L|408:136,1,78,8|8,3:3|3:3,0:0:0:0:
112,88,54465,2,0,L|16:88,2,78,8|8|8,3:3|3:3|3:2,0:0:0:0:
336,104,54965,1,0,1:0:0:0:
392,80,55131,2,0,P|296:72|256:24,2,156,4|0|0,1:2|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
168,64,55881,5,8,0:2:0:0:
136,96,55965,1,8,0:2:0:0:
128,144,56048,1,8,0:2:0:0:
360,136,56131,1,8,0:2:0:0:
392,152,56215,1,8,0:2:0:0:
392,184,56298,1,8,0:2:0:0:
360,200,56381,1,8,0:2:0:0:
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336,160,56798,2,0,L|440:168,1,87.7499973220826,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,120,57131,2,0,L|56:112,2,87.7499973220826,0|0|8,3:0|1:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
384,136,57631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,88,57798,1,4,1:2:0:0:
248,64,57965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,58131,1,8,0:2:0:0:
264,72,58298,1,0,3:0:0:0:
392,72,58465,2,0,L|288:72,1,87.7499973220826,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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328,200,59131,6,0,L|440:200,1,87.7499973220826,6|0,1:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,176,59465,2,0,L|184:176,1,87.7499973220826,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,168,59798,2,0,L|456:64,1,87.7499973220826,2|2,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
128,112,60131,2,0,L|304:112,1,175.499994644165,8|2,0:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
400,112,60631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,72,60798,6,0,L|56:72,1,87.7499973220826,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,61131,1,2,0:1:0:0:
328,112,61298,1,2,0:1:0:0:
240,72,61465,1,8,0:2:0:0:
336,72,61631,1,8,0:2:0:0:
56,72,61798,2,0,L|64:200,1,87.7499973220826,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,62131,2,0,L|192:312,1,87.7499973220826,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,62465,6,0,L|328:232,2,87.7499973220826,0|0|8,3:0|1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
112,224,62965,2,0,L|96:136,1,87.7499973220826,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
336,96,63298,2,0,L|224:96,1,87.7499973220826,0|8,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,63631,1,0,1:0:0:0:
392,152,63798,2,0,L|296:152,2,87.7499973220826,8|0|8,3:2|3:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
104,144,64298,1,4,3:1:0:0:
144,216,65798,5,2,0:1:0:0:
128,184,65882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,144,65965,1,8,2:2:0:0:
168,136,66048,1,8,2:2:0:0:
408,104,66132,6,0,L|465:104,1,43.8749986610413,8|8,3:2|2:2,0:0:0:0:
224,80,66298,2,0,L|176:80,1,43.8749986610413,8|8,3:2|2:2,0:0:0:0:
424,136,66465,5,8,3:2:0:0:
464,112,66547,1,8,2:2:0:0:
464,80,66632,1,8,3:2:0:0:
424,56,66715,1,8,2:2:0:0:
232,48,66798,2,0,L|184:48,1,43.8749986610413,8|8,3:2|2:3,0:0:0:0:
392,32,66965,2,0,L|440:32,1,43.8749986610413,4|4,2:3|2:3,0:0:0:0:
208,128,67131,6,0,P|104:128|32:48,2,195,6|10|2,1:1|3:2|1:1,0:0:0:0:
320,128,67965,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,72,68131,1,8,3:2:0:0:
128,80,68298,2,0,P|72:144|144:208,1,195,6|0,3:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,68798,1,8,3:2:0:0:
120,248,68965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,69131,2,0,L|416:112,1,97.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,96,69465,2,0,L|168:96,1,97.5,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,56,69797,6,0,L|360:56,1,97.5,6|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,32,70131,2,0,L|384:32,1,97.5,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,70465,2,0,L|16:128,2,97.5,0|0|8,3:0|3:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
400,96,70965,6,0,L|288:96,2,97.5,2|0|0,3:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,112,71465,2,0,P|40:176|88:304,1,195,8|0,3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
304,200,71965,2,0,L|360:200,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
352,168,72131,2,0,L|288:168,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
128,168,72298,2,0,L|48:168,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
336,152,72465,6,0,P|448:120|488:40,2,195,6|8|2,1:1|3:2|1:1,0:0:0:0:
208,152,73298,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,128,73465,1,8,3:2:0:0:
384,96,73631,2,0,P|448:128|384:208,1,195,2|0,3:1|3:0,0:0:0:0:
272,208,74131,1,8,3:2:0:0:
392,209,74298,1,0,3:0:0:0:
128,192,74465,2,0,L|104:80,1,97.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,74798,2,0,L|280:0,1,146.25,8|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
96,120,75131,6,0,L|88:16,1,97.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,64,75465,2,0,L|264:64,1,146.25,10|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,96,75798,2,0,L|120:192,1,97.5,4|0,0:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
184,192,76131,2,0,P|136:88|208:80,1,195,8|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
400,72,76631,2,0,L|504:72,2,97.5,0|8|0,3:0|3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
152,80,77131,6,0,L|88:80,1,48.75,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,48,77298,2,0,L|352:48,1,48.75,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,48,77465,1,8,0:2:0:0:
80,88,77548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,136,77631,1,8,0:2:0:0:
88,184,77715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,77798,5,6,3:1:0:0:
200,104,78131,1,8,3:2:0:0:
344,32,78465,1,2,1:1:0:0:
240,32,78631,1,0,1:0:0:0:
136,32,78798,1,8,3:2:0:0:
408,104,78964,2,0,L|432:224,1,97.5,2|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,240,79298,1,8,3:2:0:0:
96,240,79465,2,0,L|80:144,1,97.5,8|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,79798,2,0,L|104:136,1,97.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,128,80131,2,0,L|408:8,1,97.5,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,80465,6,0,P|112:88|176:184,1,195,4|8,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
256,184,80965,1,0,3:0:0:0:
144,224,81131,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,224,81298,2,0,L|432:112,1,97.5,0|8,1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
152,168,81631,2,0,L|144:56,1,97.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,48,81965,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,80,82131,2,0,P|384:112|344:200,1,146.25,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,82465,2,0,L|16:200,1,97.5,0|8,1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
328,160,82798,2,0,L|392:160,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
376,160,82965,2,0,L|312:160,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
88,168,83131,6,0,L|72:56,1,97.5,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
208,120,83465,2,0,L|184:-8,1,97.5,8|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
424,40,83798,2,0,L|496:136,2,97.5,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
192,168,84298,2,0,P|128:128|208:64,1,195,10|8,3:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
280,64,84798,1,8,3:2:0:0:
168,40,84965,1,0,3:0:0:0:
296,24,85131,2,0,L|320:144,1,97.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,85465,2,0,L|144:280,1,97.5,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,85798,6,0,L|288:224,2,97.5,2|2|8,1:1|3:1|3:2,0:0:0:0:
112,184,86298,1,2,3:1:0:0:
240,160,86465,2,0,L|128:160,1,97.5,2|0,1:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,86798,6,0,L|448:48,1,97.5,10|2,3:2|3:1,0:0:0:0:
344,48,87131,2,0,L|216:48,1,97.5,2|2,1:1|3:1,0:0:0:0:
360,40,87465,2,0,L|464:40,1,97.5,10|2,3:2|3:1,0:0:0:0:
160,120,87798,1,8,1:2:0:0:
104,120,87881,1,8,0:2:0:0:
128,184,87965,1,8,0:2:0:0:
184,208,88048,1,8,0:2:0:0:
360,232,88131,2,0,L|424:232,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
408,232,88298,2,0,L|328:232,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
128,248,88465,6,0,P|152:152|288:96,1,233.999992858887,12|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,88,88965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,88,89131,2,0,L|112:224,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,216,89465,2,0,L|96:216,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,200,89798,2,0,P|400:120|264:56,1,233.999992858887,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,90298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,64,90381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,90465,2,0,L|280:64,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,90798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,120,90965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,160,91131,6,0,P|176:112|352:40,1,233.999992858887,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,40,91631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,136,91798,2,0,L|112:264,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,92131,2,0,L|312:376,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,312,92465,2,0,L|56:312,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,248,92798,6,0,L|376:128,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,93131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,120,93298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,88,93465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,88,93631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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