1. Easy (1.55 stars, 110 notes)
2. Hard (3.33 stars, 287 notes)
3. Insane (4.11 stars, 352 notes)
4. Normal (1.91 stars, 170 notes)

Not Tomori wrote:

dibs on 4.5*+ insane :^)

FailureAtOsu wrote:

a
the lack of kiai time is disturbing i dont think this map needs kiai time cuz either literally half the song is kiai or none of it and i hate kiai time any way

Normal

really low stats for this diff, minus AR. i'd bump both hp and od to 3 for this SR lowkey hp is completely meaningless. od raised.
00:49:870 (4) - this is touching the hp bar i think that's bad wiggled some slider around and fixed
01:00:527 (4) - NC? :^) (but no seriously.) yeah good call

Hard

00:09:409 (1,3) - would be better parallel instead of 3 having the curve imo yeah fixed
01:24:212 (1,1,1) - this looks really, really ugly imo, i'd just redo it. do something like in the insane for them aesthetic s
changed shapes around

Insane

00:36:843 (4,5,6) - i have no idea why, but this flow felt really awkward when playing. probably just me being a dumbass i think it's because the angle is pretty high so it isnt a very sharp motion. but i don't think i could make it spaced properly if i made different flow. i'll see what other people say.
01:28:554 (1,2,3,4) - fuck you lol changed to triple

Sorry for useless mod ur good
i threw some useless stars to make up for it i guess?

Chewy-san wrote:

hel oi am moder!!

Hard

00:08:817 (6,1) - omg fxi blancet this is unplayble trash shtimap xd https://puu.sh/rrndA/d90dd86370.png this blanket is like perfect man
00:31:317 (4) - i would make this a stacked triple im trying to keep the triples to an absolute minimum in order to make this 3 diffs rankable spread =/
00:46:317 (4,5) - omg fxi blancet this is unplayble traash shtimap xd https://puu.sh/rrnrH/7085c9ecea.png moved 1 tiny grid line up
00:49:080 (4,1) - ^ https://puu.sh/rrntO/ca5d687434.png moved 1 tiny grid line down
00:51:646 (2,3) - ^ https://puu.sh/rrnvX/d4ba352547.png ugh i had to turn off grid snap for that one
01:25:001 (1) - remove nc !!!! HSFUIEAUIBG slider velocity change mandates a NC
01:28:554 (1,2) - this is ugly pls fix ur mom is ugly changed to triple

Insane

AR TOO HIGH CHANGE TO AR 8 PLS meh
OD TOO HIGH CHANGE TO OD 7-7.5 PLS rip pp
00:05:462 (5,6,7,8) - these stacks rt ooo confusing to oraed,, plase fix!! i t,hik teyreh fine as is, w'ell see laert. i dont want to putjgu mps there.
00:43:949 (6) - i wo uld change to circle,, , u maeks slider end 5% vvolume!! icoud,bbu t the soud lasts longrthan that and i medgy
00:54:014 (2) - iwoudl change to circle,,, it feel bbetter! frao that oen hi cwatnedto make ta tileb tu i oculdtn aintitn he ysmemtrical spacin so nolwitsa 1/4 sldier ._.
01:25:001 (1) - REMOVE nc !!!! dhfhusdaighu sv change again

sorry for bad englishs,,, ,i am from india ! kys

Nao Tomori wrote:

Chewy-san wrote:

hel oi am moder!!

Hard

00:08:817 (6,1) - omg fxi blancet this is unplayble trash shtimap xd https://puu.sh/rrndA/d90dd86370.png
00:31:317 (4) - i would make this a stacked triple
00:46:317 (4,5) - omg fxi blancet this is unplayble traash shtimap xd https://puu.sh/rrnrH/7085c9ecea.png
00:49:080 (4,1) - ^ https://puu.sh/rrntO/ca5d687434.png
00:51:646 (2,3) - ^ https://puu.sh/rrnvX/d4ba352547.png
01:25:001 (1) - remove nc !!!! HSFUIEAUIBG
01:28:554 (1,2) - this is ugly pls fix

Insane

AR TOO HIGH CHANGE TO AR 8 PLS
OD TOO HIGH CHANGE TO OD 7-7.5 PLS
00:05:462 (5,6,7,8) - these stacks rt ooo confusing to oraed,, plase fix!!
00:43:949 (6) - i wo uld change to circle,, , u maeks slider end 5% vvolume!!
00:54:014 (2) - iwoudl change to circle,,, it feel bbetter!
01:25:001 (1) - REMOVE nc !!!! dhfhusdaighu

sorry for bad englishs,,, ,i am from india !

This mod gave me terminal cancer

chparkkim wrote:

Hello from my queue~!

Hard

00:08:620 (5,1) - overlap
00:16:317 (3,4) - you can fix the blanket~. 00:17:106 (5) - this is perfect, so you should just copy+paste this
00:17:896 (6,7) - ^
00:30:330 (7,3) - stack
00:39:606 (7,8) - should blanket
00:39:606 (7,1) - also stack
00:42:764 (6,4) - overlap changed to stack
01:08:027 (4,5) - blanket (end of 5 should be slightly further from end of 4)
01:18:291 (6,7) - it can blanket <- dont have to this one is too flat and i dont want change shape =/
01:20:264 (3,4) - ^ <-should ^
01:21:054 (1,2) - ^ <-would look really nice, especially if also done with 01:21:646 (2,3)
01:25:791 (1) - .25x SV is frowned upon i believe (may even be unrankable. read this --> t/31518 ) not unkrankble, i think there is a constant slowdown so it isnt too hard to read either. we'll see.
01:28:554 (1,2,3) - not aligned. also, it would be better to just stack them to give the slider a bit more prominent visual

fixed all stack blanket etc.

Insane

00:05:067 (4,7,8) - ugly overlap either stack end of 4 with 7, or make end of 4 evenly spaced out with 7 and 8 fixed, 7 under 4
00:05:659 (6,7) - ctrl+g would make this part a bit more interesting. just an opinion so feel free to stand by your choice~ dont want the jumps here, prefer stacking
00:09:606 (2,3,5) - you can probably shape this better (equal spacing) i think it looks close enough, the spacing is off by like .3 but there's a circle in the middle anyway
00:14:343 (7,1) - should stack
00:20:264 (3,6) - ^
00:21:449 (8,1) - can make better blanket i'd have to change the shape of 8, but i like it atm. the circle is centered
00:32:106 (3,6) - kinda overlaps. maybe stack end of 3 with start of 6? they are not on screen at the same time, if you look in editor they are but not in test/\
00:43:949 (6,1) - overlap. stack 1 on either start or end of 6 (most likely should be stacked with the start of 6)
00:57:172 (9,10,1) - equal spacing
00:57:962 (2,3,4) - ^
01:06:449 (9,10,11,12,1) - 1 doesn't align with the rest
01:08:422 (6,7) - blanket 6 is blanketed on 2, i made it as close as i could without 7 spacing being messed up though
01:09:606 (10,11,1) - spacing (also doesn't align) close enough
01:10:594 (2,3,4) - ^
01:12:370 (9,1) - stack
01:18:488 (6,7,8) - spacing
01:25:791 (1) - .25 SV... see above
01:28:554 (1,2,3) - people wont be able to tell that the last one is a slider. best solution i can come up with is to stack them this is a triple, i made it a triple cuz a quad was cancerous, i think people can play a triple and if they play a quad they would probably get the 1/4 slider anyway so whatever

that's all~

gl with mapping!

Nao Tomori wrote:

01:28:554 (1,2,3) - people wont be able to tell that the last one is a slider. best solution i can come up with is to stack them this is a triple, i made it a triple cuz a quad was cancerous, i think people can play a triple and if they play a quad they would probably get the 1/4 slider anyway so whatever

haha i think you misunderstood me. what i was thinking about was along the line of this -- https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6204051 where 1,2, and the start of 3 are stacked. i also changed sv to make the slider a bit more prominent. i felt that what you currently have makes it look like a quad (which i agree that it would be cancerous), and that the slider looked very... insignificant. but ofc, mapping style and design tendencies differ for each person, so feel free to stand by what you have now~ i just wanted to share how i might have approached it

LawL4Ever wrote:

Hey, from my q.

SPOILER

Insane

00:10:396 (4) - How about stacking these directly on top of each other (might have to lower stack leniency for this I'm not sure)? There's not much need to offset them for reading imo, and I think it'd look nicer. every fuckign time i updatee the map some randomstack gets changed and then i want to kill myself

00:12:962 (3) - While you're overall emphasizing the piano here, with the strong vocals + that percussion sound that's heard for the first time this could use some higher spacing imo. good idea

00:46:514 (2,3) - Kinda weird to have the spacing this low when you previously had it rather high for these strong vocals. changed a little bit, i dont want to stick too much emphasis on a repeat slider and that one vocal before it was stronger imo

00:50:659 (4,5,6) - I don't think this looks good tbh. i do

01:10:791 (4,6) - Should be curved the same imo (still in opposite directions, just same radius), would look better. ye

01:27:172 (2) - Would look nicer if there was equal distance to the sliderend and start of the stream yeah

01:28:652 (2) - move this 1 px to the left so the stack is aligned properly GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

Hm I like this song. Should I watch Charlotte?
real talk the show is kind of bad because it got rushed super hard. it felt like they planned a 24 episode show and then randomly it got changed to a 12 episode one so a lot of pacing is really fucked up
[box=Hard]This diff doesn't have a preview point.
fuck
Will you hate me if I point out blanket errors? I'll just do it because I don't think I'll find much else, ignore them if it's not important to you.
aesthetics are important =P
00:07:830 (3,4) - blanket

00:24:212 (6,7) - ^ this one looks fine to me

00:44:738 - Couldn't this part (basically the entirety of what will probably become the kiai) use some jumps to make it more interesting? It's allowed in a hard, just keeping the spacing the same is a bit boring imo. added some jumps, i wante this diff to be kind of easy so that i could avoid mapping an easy difficulty =/ we'll see if i have to anyway

01:03:291 (3,4) - blanket

01:18:291 (6,7) - could make this a blanket if you want

Normal

00:25:001 (1,2) - Make this blanket maybe? Or at least aligned so that the sliderstart- and endcircle of (1) are the same distance from (2)?

00:26:580 (3,4) - ^

01:01:317 (2,3) - pls fix blanket

Couldn't really find much, it's a nice map. Hope it was helpful anyway. Good Luck!

thanks

Cl9n wrote:

SPOILER

From #modhelp (yesterday )

General
WHERE THE HITSOUNDS AND KIAI TIME AT???
Aren't normal diffs supposed to be only 1x ds?

Normal

00:15:527 (1,2,3) - change the design of these (maybe blanket instead?). pattern looks ugly i think it is just an aesthetic choice, i like it
00:25:001 (1,2) - blanket
00:26:580 (3,4) - ^
00:28:751 (2,3) - flow ruined. move 00:29:343 (3) - to the corner this would mess up spacing massively and i want to make it flow into 4 better. besides, i dont think there is enough space.
00:29:738 (4,5) - ^. move 00:30:330 (5) - closer to the edge making this overlap in normal might make it confusing since 3 to 5 is smaller than 3 to 4
00:31:712 (1) - curve this more no this would ruin the map and cause a global nuclear winter
00:34:672 (1) - place a note here. that part is still mapping the vocals there's already a note here ?_?
00:35:264 (2) - have this curve the other way. or curve 00:35:856 (3) - the other way fixed
00:37:435 (2) - curve more dont think i need to
00:41:383 (3) - curve other way this would kill the symmetry
00:49:870 (4,5) - blanket fixed
00:54:212 (6) - move this so 00:52:633 (4,5,6) - form a triangle yeah
00:59:935 (3,1) - blanket rip spacing if i do that
01:14:738 (3,4,1) - too much overlap
01:21:054 (2,3,4) - fix blanket
01:27:962 (2) - why is this one the only one with hitsounds?
fixed other stuff

Hard

00:19:870 (4,5,6) - make these blanket better (just curve the sliders more) fixed
00:35:462 (8,1) - fix blanket
00:41:580 (3,5,6) - make these blanket
00:54:014 (1,2) - swap their places i like z shape better imo
01:25:001 (1) - why is this one the only one with hitsounds? -_-
01:27:764 (2,2) - i don't like the position of these two i think this is the most readable without being a jump, it should be fine even though it doesnt look that good i guess

Insane

00:04:080 (1) - move this lower
00:05:659 (6,8) - ds error. 00:06:054 (8) is further from 00:05:856 (7) compared to 00:05:462 (5,6) changed
00:07:238 (2,3) - blanket these are straight sliders ho y l
00:32:106 (3,4) - curve these more no
01:13:949 (3) - move red slider point further up added red point
01:28:751 (3) - this is technically fine, but can be mistaken as a 4 note burst
sucks to suck, i increased the spacing to make it easier to read

Katyusha wrote:

SPOILER

Hey!

M4M from my Q!

GENERAL:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 175,128,80
Combo2 : 175,209,209
Combo3 : 213,60,64
Combo4 : 84,131,182

Try these combo colors, or a variation of them, I took in consideration the colors of the background and the Anime character's ones too
thanks for the suggestions! i used them.

Normal:

00:04:080 (1) - This NC should be here 00:03:685 (4) - , taking in consideration the music section, the NC on 00:03:685 (4) - makes more sense fixed

00:10:001 (5) - Try this http://i.imgur.com/7YpKF3J.png for improved flow ok

00:11:185 (7) - This slider feels weird because the strong beat is in the tail, while yes, it start with a voice pattern, it still feels off because the tail is on a strong beat, try this http://i.imgur.com/mDg6Q3I.png You would need to delete this 00:11:975 (8) - , but in my opinion, this beat is not that strong to make it be a note rather than a slider end

aaah i spent like 15 minutes trying to make this but it keeps messing up my spacing... i think it would be pretty complex for lowest difficulty in a mapset and i could just stick to 1/1 mapping here, sorry >w<

00:16:712 (1) - New Combo
00:44:738 - Shouldn't a Kiai section start here?
00:49:080 (2) - Following what you're mapping, this should be a 1/2 slider that 1/1 slider follows the vocals very hard, like the rest of the map
00:49:870 (4,5) - They're overlapping, try to blanket this 00:49:870 (4) - a bit more separated ok i moved it like 2 pixls but NOBODY SI GOING TO NOTICE THAT holy

00:52:633 (4) - new combo
01:28:554 (3) - This slider should end here 01:28:949 - that's where the music stops the snare drum which i followed on hard and insane ends on that blue tick, it would be hard to justify mapping anything more in those, so i will just end them all on the same place with this one.


Hard

00:13:159 - This slider should be only 1/2 and a note should be here 00:13:554 - , this taking in consideration what you're mapping and what you're not
changed to circle + 1/2 slider
00:17:896 (1) - NC
00:19:475 (1) - NC (Music section starting, etc etc)
00:27:764 (5) - Why the jump 1.75 here? this is a very weak area and you did a much weaker jump on 00:25:396 (2) - even when it was a more intense part and is only 1.55, make them constant
good call, changed to be more consistent.

00:28:751 (1) - And then we have a 1.95 jump here, again, keep it constant.
00:32:106 (6) - Funny enough, this is the contrary, such an intense beat but is on normal DS, it could use a smal jump changed
00:55:791 (1) - NC
01:08:422 (5) - NC
01:11:580 (1) - NC

(repeat the pattern for similar areas)

01:19:080 (8) - 2.21 kickslider to stream? What, make it a stream, this feels overdone yes
01:25:791 (1) - There's no reason for such an extreme slowdown, especially when the BGM picks ups the drums and stuff in this part. see insane
Also, this 01:25:001 (1) - should have the same speed as 01:24:212 - , both parts are pretty much the same. this is just my interpretation, it makes it seem more "grand" like the final ending of a fanfare or something.

01:27:370 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Take a loot at the DS in this part, try to make it constant because right now feels a bit "messy" because the DS is all over the place. fixed



INSANE

00:03:291 (1) - combo dont think i need to nc so much, it would just increase drain for no reason... i might make it more consistent though
00:05:462 (5) - This shouldn't be a jump, the beats you're using for a jump starts at 00:05:659 (6) -
Also, this slider feels silent because is on a red tick 00:05:067 (4) -
slider follows a guitar chord, the jump is for the snare that happens on where 5 is.
I believe you could:

00:05:067 - Note
00:05:264 - 1/2 slider
00:05:462 (5) - Delete this
Jumps starts here 00:05:659 (6) -
this rhythm works well too, but i think mine is better.
00:15:330 (1) - delete NC
00:15:527 (2) - NC
00:21:054 (1) - NC

00:32:106 (3) - This should be a much bigger jump, the intensity of the voicce is much bigger, like in 00:35:462 (7) - buffed to similar jump
01:08:422 (1) - NC
01:11:580 (6) - NC
01:14:738 (5) - same here

01:14:738 (5) - What I said in the hard, this part is when the music speeds ups, pay attention to the BGM. there shouldn't be a slow down here.
i would disagree, i think with the strong vocals that clearly go longer and longer, i interpret it as a slowdown. so i will keep my patterning here. if even more people disagree, it may change but for now i think my interpretation is fine.
Awesome diff <3


That's it for now, hope it helps you a bit

Sorry if a timeline copypaste doesn't fit or IMGUR link doesn't, good luck!

Miryle wrote:

M4M (I think?) from my queue:

Normal

00:30:330 (5,1) - Stack is slightly off. k

00:49:870 (4,5) - Imperfect blanket, it's pretty noticeable too. k

01:08:422 (3) - Touches the HP bar. i'm not sure this is actual an unrankable issue or something, we'll see.

01:27:370 (1,2) - Why not curve these like 01:28:554 (3)? idk im edgy or something
i like how it looks better /runs

01:14:738 (3,4,1) - Doesn't look as good as 01:21:054 (2,3,4) does because of how slider anchors work. The pointy parts of the sliders overlap slightly and don't quite fit in as well as 01:21:054 (2,3,4). close enough

Not much to say here really, it's pretty good imo.

Hard

00:35:856 (1) - Touches the HP bar. Consider moving this. it would mess up the blanket, and it's minor overlap anyway.

00:42:370 (5,2) - Stack is off, ignore this if it was intentional.

01:28:751 (3) - Could just be normal hitcircles. I don't get why it's a slider. quads are cancer triples are not

Really well done difficulty. Nothing more to say here from me.

Insane

00:24:212 (7,9,1) - Stack is slightly off. this is due to stack leniency, i am not mazzerin so unchanged.

00:39:606 (5) - Dangerously close to the HP bar. I won't say it's bad, but... you know. Consider moving it a little bit. nobody actually follows sliders that far anyway yolo

00:50:955 (5) - Move this down slightly to make it look less jagged? ((334,305) perhaps) k

01:28:751 (3) - Why? Normal hitcircles would work fine here. see above

Again, really well made, so not much I can say.

thanks, it helped

Underdogs wrote:

m4m or not, give me kds fgt

Normal

Despite copypasting most of the part, the flow is pretty meh. But hey, I did that as well at some part

00:48:093 missing beat its easy diff, i dont think i could put note there with the stack and have it be easy enough.
01:02:896 (4,5) - bad flow, i suggest a downward flow yeah
01:08:422 (3,4) - I'll point this out at first, but i see this as an overlap rather than blanketing it looks like blanket to me hmm
01:14:738 (3,4,1) - ^ this one is low spacing, but i think it's still readable. we'll see.
01:28:554 (3) - straight slider better i wanted to fill in the gap and have it look nice, i think it's fine

Hard

00:00:922 (2) - better stack with first note k
00:18:883 (1) - X:464 Y:160 k
00:19:870 (4,5,6) - Bad symmetrical flow imo, maybe cuz u didnt make them in the middle i think it's fine, i moved 5 down to make it more flow-y i guess
00:34:277 (5) - imperfect blanket coz the end slider. drag the end slider a bit to the bottom right to make it look good yeap
00:49:870 (2,3) - this is better i dont think the back and forth is a good idea here, it works fine in my opinion
01:09:409 (7) - ctrl+h mk
01:11:580 (4,7) - bad match, better make it like before, the one with 1/2 1/1 slider blanket, the ones like this

changed but not exactly to that. that goes slightly off the playfield from my testing.

Insane

00:13:949 (6,9) - i think if these are mirrored, it'll look better this is copied from a few measures ago exact same pattern tbh xD
00:20:462 (4) - ctrl+g this put too much emphasis on 5 imo, it would mess up spacing =/
00:21:449 (8) - straight vertical slider if you choose to make the suggestion above me
00:24:804 (9,1) - didnt look like it stack with 00:24:212 (7) - fixed
00:41:580 (2) - not good flow with 00:41:185 (1) - i suggest ctrl+h ctrl+j haah? i think this is fine, or i don't understand what you mean

ur welcome :v

FailureAtOsu wrote:

change od to 8 again fuck chewy and his anti-pp bullshit :^)

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44639
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Rakuen made
TitleUnicode:Rakuen made
Artist:Nishimori Yusa (CV. Uchida Maaya)
ArtistUnicode:Nishimori Yusa (CV. Uchida Maaya)
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Version:Not Tomori's Insane
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Nao Tomori wrote:

I will have to reject this because I think my mapset is complete without another Insane. Also I want to make all my diffs on my first map. Sorry.

Seni wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue. Definitely a very nice song.

Insane

Just in general, I'm not very sure about those NCs. ncs are placed on the beginning of every other "phrase," if you think it could be improved please suggest it and don't just say "oh i don't like them."

00:17:896 (2,3) - This is not very intuitive spacing since the slider end of 2 and 3 are just as spaced as if they were 1/2 and not 1/1. I suggest you stack the slider end and 3, or just increase the spacing since it definitely doesn't reflect what's happening in the song. (00:43:949 (6,1) - like this for example)

if someone can't read this then it's their own fault, the song picks up in intensity suddenly so the spacing increases suddenly.

It doesn't make much sense musically to map 00:47:896 (1,2,3,4,5,1) and 00:55:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) differently. I suggest you map both the same way you mapped 00:55:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) since it emphasizes the vocals much better than just sliders. Also during 00:47:896 (1,2,3,4,5,1) you ignore some triples. hmm.. i dont think that i ignored triples on that first phrase. i mapped it differently here because of the prominence of the triples at 55, and i interpreted it as being more intense > more clickable objects

01:02:699 (3) - There are a lot of sliders like this one throughout the whole map. Sliders starting on a red tick when there is a very strong sound on the slider end. It doesn't feel good when playing and it doesn't emphasize the music very well.
01:02:106 (1,2,3,4) - You could remap it this way https://puu.sh/rv4GZ/b5838b35d3.png and use the two sliders to emphasize the vocals instead of just using them as 1/2 spam. You could do the same thing in some other parts of the map. good idea. this plays better.

01:25:791 (1,2) - I don't think doing this with SV is rankable. Also it really doesn't fit well.
i think it fits well with the music lowering in intensity before the final bursts appear suddenly.

gl

Nao Tomori wrote:

Seni wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue. Definitely a very nice song.

Insane

Just in general, I'm not very sure about those NCs. ncs are placed on the beginning of every other "phrase," if you think it could be improved please suggest it and don't just say "oh i don't like them."

DavidEd wrote:

• Insane: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6234699
  - 00:00:922 (2) - Use x1.0 distance snaps on notes like these to keep the flow moving smoothly. k
  - 00:03:093 (7) - ^
  - 00:02:699 (6,8,9) - They're not symmetrical (as shown in this picture) k
  - 00:04:475 (3,4) - Did you want to blanket this? it was blanketed but i wanted to reduce 3 > 4 spacing so now it isnt
  - 00:05:462 (6,7,8,9) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6234772 This will look better and has great impact with the song imo changed to different patternt
  - 00:07:238 (2,3) - Fix blanket stack leniency messs that up
  - 00:25:001 (1,3) - It would be better if they looked the same. ye
  - 00:26:580 (1) - Probably shouldn't leave out these vocal beats here. Replace with 2 circles ye
  - 00:32:106 (3,4) - Blanket? it is
  - 00:32:501 (4,6) - ^
  - 00:33:291 (6,7) - These two should be spread out because 7 is a major beat. It may affect your circle placement after this slider. But that's up to you. ctrl g on 7
  - 00:34:870 (2,3) - ^ but it wont affect your circle placement i want to emphasize the shift onto the guitar chord by having a jump to 4, i dont think 2 > 3 is that strong either
  - 00:43:949 (6,1) - Stack ontop of 6 slider head to get rid of that overlap small unnecessary overlaps are my mapping style please respect it!
  - 00:45:527 (4,1) - Fix stack
  - 01:09:014 (2,3,4) - Angle the sliders downwards like this, the current flow is hard to hit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6234852 k
  
  mmm when boys perfectly hitsound the drums
  i feel like we need a tumblr meme about that
  i'll make one for u bby
  
  Hard: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6234899
  - 00:05:659 (2) - Move to x:180 y:232 to finish the diamond shape you set up. Just make sure to reposition everything after that aswell. ye
  - 00:07:830 (3,5) - Fix blanket this blanket is fine
  - 00:15:527 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:16:317 (4) - k
  - 00:27:370 (4) - Missing whistle ye
  - 00:43:949 (4,1) - Same as insane, stack to get rid of the overlap my style makes objective sense, not your sense
  - 01:05:067 (3,4,5) - This is the only triple in the map, so it feels out of place. Do you have a special reason for it? i think it's the only guitar triple in the entire thing so i followed it
  - 01:19:080 (3,4,5,6,1) - Replace with a 1/4 repeat slider instead. Streams in hard difficulties are never used. k
  - 01:25:791 (1) - Too long of a slider, shorten it down to the next snare sound. Kind off like you did on your insane i think on hard i can just follow the vocal until louder drums kick in here, i'll see if others say the same thing
  - 01:28:554 (1,2,3) - I'd stack instead of spreading those legs. Triple stacks are usually pretty hard to hit, especually for people around this skill level. For more comfortable gameplay, a stack would be great. k
  
  
  
  You're gonna have to go back and polish on this difficulty. There's alot of potential shapes that are being ignored such as triangles. And see if there's any more NC issues. I don't usually look at that that much. Other than that, the hitsounding is great. alright, will do. check out thzz's maps they all have nice hitsounding too =)

Hope it was of any help. Good luck!

Knew I had this saved in my ps folder ^^

Osuology wrote:

Hi! From #modreqs I know you from modhelp anyways so

Insane

00:00:528 (1,2) - Distance between these seems a little small, I know it would be hard to change in the context, but I feel like 0.65x spacing between the 1 and 2 would do some magic here. unfortunately you modded right as i was reapplying the previous mod from some dumb osu! shenanigans resetting my map. so, this was already changed along with the next point. (and made it kind of hard to apply the mod x.x)

Your placing of combos isn't often enough, it kinda takes away from the structure of the song (which is 4/4/4/4 typical structure). Best recommendation is to put at least 1 combo every measure, if you want more than that fine but at least one per measure. Your other diffs also have this problem (although to a much lesser degree).

00:12:172 (9,1) - This distance is pretty small, it doesn't really fit how strong of a wave 1 plays as. increased

00:21:054 (6,7,8) - Probably could do some magic symmetry here with the 6 and 8 and have 7 in the exact middle. That would fix the spacing issue that is present here also, the 6-7 jump is a little smaller than 7-8 it's bothering to the eyes a little bit. fixed

00:25:593 (3,4,5) - This also has a spacing issue, the 3 to 4 jump is considerably smaller than most other jumps in this map. I would say try to look at your map with these types of issues in mind and try to fix as many as you can find. I'm not going to point them out from this point on. Also, keep in mind that your map can have variations in the DS when the song allows for it like here: 00:11:185 (7,8)

01:09:014 (7) - I can't tell whether this is supposed to be a blanket or not. If it is, you will have to tweak the slider a little to get it perfectly. To tell, use the approach circle of the hitcircle. it's too small spacing to blanket properly, it is equidistant from the head and tail though.

01:28:751 (3) - Personally, I think this would match the song better as hitcircles, rather than a slider. i agree, but others said that a quad is annoying and honestly i don't think it makes a big difference.

Hard

Again, distance with lot's of objects here are very inconsistent, even when they should be. I would recommend using Distance Snapping here and below to fix this as it's very easy. i did use DS for almost all of the diff except one or two jumps, everything is within a few .0x of 1.4

01:02:106 (5) - I don't like how this flows away from the next object. It's a stressful kind of flow, which I don't think matches song here, or map. yeah ctrl g by accident

Normal

Nothing to see here other than the NC issues I talked about in the insane. k

General

Looks like you have an unused hitsound normal-sliderslide.wav. Modding Assistant told me this though, so idk if it's completely true.
i'll doublecheck

Good luck with this map!

Hobbes2 wrote:

hey its me, ready to do like 10 mods in a row jk im lazy af

[General]

MA says normal-sliderslide.wav is unused, and I can't seem to find it anywhere. Sure you used it?

[Normal]

00:01:909 - There's not really a noticeable sound here, so I would just make 00:01:712 (3) - into a hit circle instead. Also lowers the note density, which is good because this is the easiest diff. This also lets you move 00:02:106 (1,2) - so that 00:02:698 (2) - isn't so close to 00:01:120 (2). hmm.. ok

00:13:554 - I would map this as a circle. This would make it so the gap between 00:13:949 (1) - and the previous object is 1/2 instead of 3/2 which is much more comfortable for the player. This would require to readjust your patterns, of course. i don't think so, if anything the red tick before 13:949 iss a better candidate. but i followed the vocals with the objects unless there was no vocal at all in the section

00:15:133 - ^

00:19:475 (1,2,3) - You could arrange these in an equilateral triangle? This way 00:19:475 (1,3) - aren't overlapping changed slightly, a miniscule overlap never hurt anyone...

00:25:001 (1,2) - If you curve 1 instead of keeping it flat, it looks nicer - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6243171 Not perfect but it gives you the idea. yea

00:26:580 (3,4) - Also, place a circle here for a similar reason as to what I said above regarding making the time between notes 1/1 instead of 3/2. It seems this issue comes up a lot, so whenever I see it I'll just say "Circle" and you should know what I mean. vocals

00:26:580 (3,4) - ^ Similar idea.

00:27:764 -

00:30:922 - Not sure about the small break here, the music isn't really stopping or anything (in fact, it's more intense than it usually is) so the break is out of place. added 1/2 repeat slider

00:35:264 (2) - NC should be here instead of 00:34:870 (1) - ?

00:36:449 - Circle

00:47:896 (6) - NC should be here.

00:49:870 (4,5) - Maybe do something like this instead - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6243182 seems fine to me, slightly adjusted blanket

00:54:212 (6) - NC, then remove nC on 00:55:001 (1) -

00:57:370 (5) - NC

01:08:422 (3,4) - Can't say I'm a big fan of this pattern, the overlap is just kinda yucky. If you are going to stick with this pattern, make sure the sliders are perfectly parallel to get it as neat as possible. As of now, they aren't. i think they work alright, if they overlap a little it isnt that big of a deal imo

01:10:001 (1,3) - Blanket - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6243188

01:19:475 (5) - NC this so the combo isn't 3 downbeats long. 01:20:659 (1) - - Remove this NC

01:22:633 (4) - NC, remove NC on 01:24:212 (1) -

01:25:791 (3) - NC

[Hard]

00:02:106 (1,2,3) - Might look neater if you wrap the sliders aren't the approach circle equally, like this - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6243200 they are, just closer together

00:05:264 - I would rather this be clickable due to the fact that it's a downbeat, I suggest making 00:05:067 (5) - a circle instead and then having 00:05:264 - be a 1/2 slider. i did this because 5 is a guitar chord, 1 is distinctly a different beat there that would get stuck under a sliderend

00:08:817 (2,3) - blanket

00:17:896 (4,5) - blanket

00:25:001 (4) - Might not be a big deal, but this slider is kinda out of place with the red node there, probably better as just a curved slider yeah

00:38:027 (2,3) - While gameplay wise it's true that you just hold down this kickslider, it's still much better to have the kickslider end so that it's adjacent to the next object, instead of ending opposite to it dont like how this would look. it's functionally identical anyway.

00:49:080 (4,1) - Improvable blanket

00:54:014 (1) - This is pretty out of place. There are a lot of places to map 1/4 in this part of the song and you randomly do it here with a slider that ends on the downbeat. I would just change this to be consistent with how you're not mapping to any of the 1/4 drums particularly. the reason for this one is because it is the only guitar triple i could find in the song.

00:55:988 (2) - ctrl+up arrow once so that it's perfectly stacked under 4

01:09:014 (2) - Make this a 1/4 slider to match 01:07:435 (2) - ?

01:24:212 (1,1,1) - These SV reductions are rather drastic, it's hard for the player to tell when to let go of 01:25:791 (1) - IMO and it's high chances they'll 100 this slider. Maybe do like .8, .6, .4? yeah makes sense

Nice diff.

[Insane]

00:00:528 (1,2) - Maybe having this (or at least 1) be symmetrical over the y axis would fit this part of the map yeah

00:08:422 (1,3,4) - Make the distance between these 3 the same to make this neater? yeah

00:15:330 (2,3,5) - If you arrange this pattern so that these 3 form an equal traingle it looks neater. yeah

00:16:317 (7) - I think the NC should be here? didnt want to nc for 2 notes, and current one is more intuitive imo

00:16:120 (6) - I like how you're placing the jumps to the sounds with pianos on them, but there's a jump here that feels out of place to me. It breaks the consistency of how you normally do the jumps, so what's this jump for? The vocal? At the least, I would space it less than 00:16:317 (7) - yeah originally it was because of the strong vocal but that doesnt fit the structure very well

00:29:738 (1) - Try a placement near x:376 y:268 so that this slider is complemented by the shape of 00:30:330 (4) - changed for 1 stacked on head of 4, otherwise it would put too much emphasis on 2 which is a weaker syllable imo

00:35:856 (3,1) - Give 3 more curve to make this a neater pattern - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6243268 Not perfect but you get the idea changed slightly

00:58:751 (6) - Move this up and the left a bit so its not as close to 00:58:159 (4), makes this area feel less dense hmm... i stacked 6 on 4's end and moved 1 down instead to make it into a back and forth with a triangle

Pretty cool difficulty, I like it. me too thanks

Good luck, let me know if you have any questions.

1. So first of all: I think you could increase OD and HP to 4 so it actually is a Normal. Also, the DS you used makes the map itself very clustered even though you have nice flow and decent aesthetics. Considering that you have to map an Easy diff anyway because you have a lot of 1/2 patterns and a quite high SV, you can increase it without any worries.
2. 00:03:291 (3,4) - I think it's almost unarguable (dunno if I spelt that right) that this pattern would look a lot cleaner if it would be like this. Since you used a lot of linear flow (or more like the objects always connected properly) the suggestion I gave makes a bit more sense.
3. 00:09:212 (4) - I feel like you could map to the vocals here already, feels wrong to only have a 1/1 slider that doesn't cover the vocals properly but then do it a little later. Additional to that a NC might be cool because of the density changes, which seems to be your NC structure if I'm not retarded.
4. 00:10:001 (5,6) - Flow is pretty counter-intuitive for the same reason as above.
5. 00:12:962 (2,1) - I think making it more intuitive would be a huge improvement. Especially for lager makes (basically pretty much anything above 1/1) people would follow the slidertail even more because they assume that the next object is there as they can't see any. So focusing on that direction makes it easier, if that explanation makes sense you to because I suck at explaining.
6. 00:18:883 (6) - Not reallyanything wrong with it, but it looks somewhat odd because it has a weird flow with the previous object. Would be completely fine if it was a proper blanket or something like that, but that's just a personal thing after all. But I guess I pointed enough flow issues to make you know what's "wrong" with your usage, so I'll focus on other issues now.
7. 00:30:330 (5,6) - First of all: Really ugly overlap here. And the guitar already starts on (5)'s slidertail, and they are really dominant so having (6) start on that red tick would be a lot better. I can see the reason you did it like you have done it, but the current slidertail of (6) doesn't have a really strong guitar sounds, it's more like an extended sound from the previous red tick. Maybe it's just my interpretation tho?
8. 00:31:712 (1) - There's a really strong cymbal on the downbeat, not having it clickable is really weird and counter-intuitive because song sounds keep the rhythm feeling.
9. 00:33:093 (1,2,3) - These vocals are really outstanding to the rest, so mapping it a more dense for a better emphasis would be pretty neat.
10. 00:38:422 (1,2) - I'm too lazy to go back but I'm almost sure that this is the first stack in the whole diff. Stacks should be consistent as well because else they surprise way too much and start confusing, which is the case as you never used any before.
11. 00:42:172 (1) - Personal thing: I dislike how you used the spinner. The best position to use one would be 00:42:172 (1) - or on the previous red tick of it so it fits the instruments / vocals better. Your current placement starts in the middle of both which makes it counter-intuitive. But anyway, you have really cool snares in the middle of the spinner that can be emphasized really good with sliders, so ignoring them and blatantly ignoring them with a spinner is lame and not recommended because a kiai without a proper emphasis before doesn't really feel like a kiai.
12. 00:47:896 (1,2) - Vocal-wise they seem to be the same as the ones I suggested you to make more dense, but right here you made them even less dense. So it's inconsistent as you mapped the same things different. But since this is the kiai you have a reason to make it even harder, but definitely not easier. Same goes for 00:54:212 (1,2,3).
13. 00:55:791 (5,6) - I'd be totally fine if it would look pretty, but that's not the case because there's no space to place it properly. ;_;
14. 01:00:527 (1,2) - Usually such sliders are used to emphasis the end of vocals or some special sounds, but both is not the case. So you do mind using normal sliders then?
15. 01:15:725 (4,1) - Please let them not overlapp when the previous ones weren't overlapping as well. I assume it's because you went out of space but for that you just have to find a different solution then.
16. 01:19:475 (1,2,3) - Such things are a big no-go for lower diffs, that's not an intuitive flow at all.

1. This diff also has quite some parts where the flow feels counter-intuitive because of the aestethics and so on. That's just a personal thing, but with that style you mapped it it's definitely recommandable to make the paths clearer (source: I map my Hards like this as well)
2. 00:00:528 (1) - I might be wrong but when listening to the blue tick with 25% it feels like its on a 1/12 or something, too lazy to check what exact snap but it really feels a little bit early.
3. 00:03:685 (1) - You mapped to the guitar in the previous measures so it feels wrong to have the guitar sound on something not clickable.
4. 00:05:659 (2) - DS error.
5. 00:07:830 (3) - Vocal mapping is nothing wrong, but the weird thing here is that you didn't map to the vocals properly at other places like 00:12:962 (4,1) - here or 00:14:343 (5,1) here for example.
6. 00:11:185 (4) - Because of the surrounding objects it feels a little bit forced you just have a straight slider imo.
7. 00:12:370 (3,4) - Inconsistent spacing. I know that you wanted to emphasize the vocals here as they are special, but you have never used any emphasises before. So if you want to keep it make sure to emphasize other strong vocals from before too.
8. 00:14:738 (1,2,3,4) - Looks bad and is weird to play because it's a back n forth pattern with an overlap and without a strong curve. Not having these things makes it really uncomfortable to play.
9. 00:15:922 (5) - Special emphasis in the vocals, why not using two clickable objects here?
10. 00:16:317 (1,2,3) - DS?
11. 00:25:593 (5,1) - Little reminder that you didn't place the emphasis on the vocal unlike 00:23:027 (2,3) - here for example. Just wanted to mention that, I don't think I need to point out every single inconsistent emphasis. :p
12. 00:24:212 (1,2,3) - I wonder what you thought when you were placing those. Like, there's no connection to the maps structure at all except I'm missing something because it's late.
13. 00:25:199 (4) - Missed hitsound on tail.
14. 00:30:330 (6,1,2) - Mentioning them as it's not a vocal emphasis. The high guitar pitch is (1) and not (2). So the bigger jump is supposed to be on (1) but you have the long jump on (2).
15. 00:45:330 (2) - Ignoring that triplet by mapping a 1/1 feels wrong because it's really audible.
16. 01:27:370 (1,2,1,2) - Could be placed a little bit cleaner.

Stjpa wrote:

sooooooooooooooooo
fuck mapping normal makes me want to neck myself

normal

[N]

1. So first of all: I think you could increase OD and HP to 4 so it actually is a Normal. Also, the DS you used makes the map itself very clustered even though you have nice flow and decent aesthetics. Considering that you have to map an Easy diff anyway because you have a lot of 1/2 patterns and a quite high SV, you can increase it without any worries.
2. 00:03:291 (3,4) - I think it's almost unarguable (dunno if I spelt that right) that this pattern would look a lot cleaner if it would be like this. Since you used a lot of linear flow (or more like the objects always connected properly) the suggestion I gave makes a bit more sense. yes
3. 00:09:212 (4) - I feel like you could map to the vocals here already, feels wrong to only have a 1/1 slider that doesn't cover the vocals properly but then do it a little later. Additional to that a NC might be cool because of the density changes, which seems to be your NC structure if I'm not retarded. yes
4. 00:10:001 (5,6) - Flow is pretty counter-intuitive for the same reason as above. yes
5. 00:12:962 (2,1) - I think making it more intuitive would be a huge improvement. Especially for lager makes (basically pretty much anything above 1/1) people would follow the slidertail even more because they assume that the next object is there as they can't see any. So focusing on that direction makes it easier, if that explanation makes sense you to because I suck at explaining. yes
6. 00:18:883 (6) - Not reallyanything wrong with it, but it looks somewhat odd because it has a weird flow with the previous object. Would be completely fine if it was a proper blanket or something like that, but that's just a personal thing after all. But I guess I pointed enough flow issues to make you know what's "wrong" with your usage, so I'll focus on other issues now. sudden loud sound = sharp angle
7. 00:30:330 (5,6) - First of all: Really ugly overlap here. And the guitar already starts on (5)'s slidertail, and they are really dominant so having (6) start on that red tick would be a lot better. I can see the reason you did it like you have done it, but the current slidertail of (6) doesn't have a really strong guitar sounds, it's more like an extended sound from the previous red tick. Maybe it's just my interpretation tho? yes
8. 00:31:712 (1) - There's a really strong cymbal on the downbeat, not having it clickable is really weird and counter-intuitive because song sounds keep the rhythm feeling.
9. 00:33:093 (1,2,3) - These vocals are really outstanding to the rest, so mapping it a more dense for a better emphasis would be pretty neat. yes
10. 00:38:422 (1,2) - I'm too lazy to go back but I'm almost sure that this is the first stack in the whole diff. Stacks should be consistent as well because else they surprise way too much and start confusing, which is the case as you never used any before. removed
11. 00:42:172 (1) - Personal thing: I dislike how you used the spinner. The best position to use one would be 00:42:172 (1) - or on the previous red tick of it so it fits the instruments / vocals better. Your current placement starts in the middle of both which makes it counter-intuitive. But anyway, you have really cool snares in the middle of the spinner that can be emphasized really good with sliders, so ignoring them and blatantly ignoring them with a spinner is lame and not recommended because a kiai without a proper emphasis before doesn't really feel like a kiai. remapped
12. 00:47:896 (1,2) - Vocal-wise they seem to be the same as the ones I suggested you to make more dense, but right here you made them even less dense. So it's inconsistent as you mapped the same things different. But since this is the kiai you have a reason to make it even harder, but definitely not easier. remapped again Same goes for 00:54:212 (1,2,3).
13. 00:55:791 (5,6) - I'd be totally fine if it would look pretty, but that's not the case because there's no space to place it properly. ;_; looks fine to me
14. 01:00:527 (1,2) - Usually such sliders are used to emphasis the end of vocals or some special sounds, but both is not the case. So you do mind using normal sliders then? remapped the entire fucking section cuz of ds and density things
15. 01:15:725 (4,1) - Please let them not overlapp when the previous ones weren't overlapping as well. I assume it's because you went out of space but for that you just have to find a different solution then. fixed
16. 01:19:475 (1,2,3) - Such things are a big no-go for lower diffs, that's not an intuitive flow at all. fixed

hard

[H]

1. This diff also has quite some parts where the flow feels counter-intuitive because of the aestethics and so on. That's just a personal thing, but with that style you mapped it it's definitely recommandable to make the paths clearer (source: I map my Hards like this as well)
2. 00:00:528 (1) - I might be wrong but when listening to the blue tick with 25% it feels like its on a 1/12 or something, too lazy to check what exact snap but it really feels a little bit early. i dont think snapping slider end to 1/12 would be very good practice
3. 00:03:685 (1) - You mapped to the guitar in the previous measures so it feels wrong to have the guitar sound on something not clickable. added circle
4. 00:05:659 (2) - DS error.
5. 00:07:830 (3) - Vocal mapping is nothing wrong, but the weird thing here is that you didn't map to the vocals properly at other places like 00:12:962 (4,1) - here or 00:14:343 (5,1) here for example. changed this away from vocal mapping because those other things aren't vocal mapping 8) 00:12:962 (4,1) following piano and 00:14:343 (5,1) same
6. 00:11:185 (4) - Because of the surrounding objects it feels a little bit forced you just have a straight slider imo. i just like how this looks
7. 00:12:370 (3,4) - Inconsistent spacing. I know that you wanted to emphasize the vocals here as they are special, but you have never used any emphasises before. So if you want to keep it make sure to emphasize other strong vocals from before too. changed back
8. 00:14:738 (1,2,3,4) - Looks bad and is weird to play because it's a back n forth pattern with an overlap and without a strong curve. Not having these things makes it really uncomfortable to play. ok
9. 00:15:922 (5) - Special emphasis in the vocals, why not using two clickable objects here? ok
10. 00:16:317 (1,2,3) - DS? fixed
11. 00:25:593 (5,1) - Little reminder that you didn't place the emphasis on the vocal unlike 00:23:027 (2,3) - here for example. Just wanted to mention that, I don't think I need to point out every single inconsistent emphasis. :p i didnt really emphasize vocals anywhere, this is what happened when i tried to follow guitar everywhere
12. 00:24:212 (1,2,3) - I wonder what you thought when you were placing those. Like, there's no connection to the maps structure at all except I'm missing something because it's late. these all follow guitar chords, which is consistent throughout the map like at 00:27:962 (3,4) - and 00:19:475 (3,4) - and 00:23:817 (4,1) - and other places
13. 00:25:199 (4) - Missed hitsound on tail. a
14. 00:30:330 (6,1,2) - Mentioning them as it's not a vocal emphasis. The high guitar pitch is (1) and not (2). So the bigger jump is supposed to be on (1) but you have the long jump on (2). fixed
15. 00:45:330 (2) - Ignoring that triplet by mapping a 1/1 feels wrong because it's really audible. 00:45:330 (2) - this follows the guitar chord, similar to 00:51:054 (1,2) - and 00:57:370 (1,2) - , besides other triples get ignored all over the place because theres like 1 triple in the entire map - like here 00:46:909 (3) - and 00:50:955 -
16. 01:27:370 (1,2,1,2) - Could be placed a little bit cleaner. changed

12:12 Nao Tomori: hi, i finished applying your mod and remapping normal and hard. could you help me with my insane when you get the chance?
12:13 Stjpa: normal still has that ugly low DS :v
12:14 Nao Tomori: :o
12:14 Nao Tomori: is it that bad for low ds?
12:14 Nao Tomori: i thought everything was spaced out decently with no overlaps =/
12:14 Stjpa: do u map with grid snap enabled
12:14 Nao Tomori: hm
12:15 Nao Tomori: no
12:15 Stjpa: 00:09:212 (4,5,1) - looks like that
12:15 Stjpa: normal diff
12:16 Nao Tomori: i'll go check it then 
12:16 Stjpa: well now insane
12:16 Nao Tomori: mmk
12:16 Stjpa: 00:14:343 (4,5,1) - is the same as 00:12:764 (4,5,1) - but for some reasons they have different emphasis
12:17 Nao Tomori: 00:12:962 (5) - this has a thingy on it but 00:14:541 (5) -  doesnt
12:17 Nao Tomori: so 12 has a jump
12:17 Stjpa: so u mapped it completely on instruments? ?_?
12:18 Nao Tomori: yea
12:18 Stjpa: 00:14:738 (1) - might wanna ctrl g this slider and place it a bit further away to the flow on the following objects isnt that screwed like it is now
12:19 Stjpa: if that slider was 3/4 or 1/1 the flow would be fine but with such a short back n forth movement it feels really uncomfortable
12:20 Nao Tomori: i see
12:20 Nao Tomori: i did https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6259669 
12:20 Stjpa: that works yup
12:21 Stjpa: 00:19:475 (1,2,3,4) - im legit confused about the flow usage here
12:21 Stjpa: the pattern itself is really cool
12:22 Stjpa: but i think ctrl j on (2,3,4) would fit better
12:22 Stjpa: just gotta re-arrange some jumps then
12:22 Nao Tomori: hmm
12:22 Nao Tomori: the way it is puts sharp angles for all the jumps except 4 to 5
12:23 Nao Tomori: but that would happen with ctrl j as well
12:23 Nao Tomori: and it would be circular
12:23 Nao Tomori: ok i see why it is better
12:24 Stjpa: :D
12:25 Stjpa: 00:22:633 (1,3,5) - tbh this looks really clustered und uncreative
12:25 Stjpa: testing around with a pattern wait a min
12:26 Stjpa: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6259720
12:28 Nao Tomori: hmm
12:29 Stjpa: 00:28:949 (5,6) - i like such patterns if there are 3 sliders, but dunno it looks like an unfinished pattern with only 2
12:29 Nao Tomori: the goal there was to put emphasis on 1
12:29 Nao Tomori: and still blanket 2
12:30 Nao Tomori: so it was hard to make a pattern that looked decent and still did that
12:31 Nao Tomori: that pattern up there is nice looking too but i would ctrl g 4 and 5 
12:31 Nao Tomori: other wise 3 to 4 is like a 3.0 ds jump
12:31 Stjpa: 00:46:909 (3,4) - i fucked up the triplet :p
12:31 Stjpa: u*
12:31 Nao Tomori: ._>
12:31 Nao Tomori: its 
12:31 Nao Tomori: a quint actually
12:32 Nao Tomori: hmm
12:32 Stjpa: even worse
12:32 Stjpa: lol
12:32 Stjpa: 00:54:014 (2,3) - using a kickslider with low DS to the next object is counter-intuitive if its not a slow part
12:33 Nao Tomori: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6259757
12:33 Stjpa: because the purpose of a kickslider is to emphasize 1/4 while working like a 1/2 circle
12:33 Nao Tomori: hmm
12:33 Nao Tomori: the reason i did that 
12:33 Nao Tomori: is because the voice sounds very sudden
12:33 Nao Tomori: and it does emphasize the 1/4 there with 1/2 spacing being equal
12:33 Nao Tomori: between 1 and 3
12:33 Stjpa: fair enough
12:34 Stjpa: 00:56:777 (2,3,4,5,1) - i wouldnt put more spacing on generic things than to a triplet + vocals
12:35 Nao Tomori: you're right
12:36 Stjpa: 01:02:106 (1,2) - i personally like having a strong emphasis on deep drums, but thats just subjective
12:36 Stjpa: deep drums arent common, so i always feel like emphasizing them more :D
12:36 Nao Tomori: that's hitsound though
12:37 Stjpa: o
12:37 Stjpa: ;_;
12:37 Nao Tomori: besides i didnt want to stick a 25 note stream in there like rizia did
12:39 Stjpa: 01:21:646 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - u are a fairly decent player, shouldnt u know that linear flow with larger gaps are uncomfortable to play? :v
12:39 Stjpa: that slow down on the triplet also makes it quite harder
12:39 Nao Tomori: hmm
12:39 Nao Tomori: yes, but this is 150 bpm 
12:39 Nao Tomori: so i didnt think people would flow aim to it anyway
12:40 Stjpa: theyd have to snap it then
12:40 Nao Tomori: and it is evenly spaced so it could be done without snapping too 
12:40 Stjpa: snapping linear objects?
12:40 Stjpa: well
12:40 Nao Tomori: ok ok change
12:40 Nao Tomori: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6259828
12:41 Stjpa: :ok_hand:
12:41 Stjpa: and u should copy ur hitsounds to ur easy diff lol
12:41 Nao Tomori: ya 
12:42 Nao Tomori: well i need to re hitsound it too cuz i changed a lot of rhythm
12:42 Stjpa: also, 1/1 objects shouldnt overlap in an Easy diff
12:42 Nao Tomori: wh
12:42 Nao Tomori: a
12:42 Stjpa: because thats extremely uncommon nowadays
12:42 Nao Tomori: where do they overlap
12:42 Nao Tomori: oh
12:42 Nao Tomori: hmm
12:42 Nao Tomori: the last time i made my DS large enough to avoid an overlap regraz said it was way too big
12:42 Stjpa: for Easy diff?
12:42 Stjpa: lol
12:43 Nao Tomori: yeah 
12:43 Nao Tomori: cuz i need to use like 1.6 ds
12:43 Stjpa: well with 0,7 DS on 152bpm obviously
12:43 Nao Tomori: hmm
12:43 Stjpa: 0.9 or 1.0 would be by far better
12:44 Nao Tomori: it's .9 DS with .7 SV
12:44 Nao Tomori: i guess i could do .9 SV to make them equal
12:45 Stjpa: or 0.9 SV with 1.0 ds
12:45 Nao Tomori: does it really matter that much it's easy diff D=
12:45 Stjpa: 0.9 DS would work too if really nothing overlaps, but that also reads more like a 1/2 pattern already
12:45 Stjpa: yup
12:45 Nao Tomori: argh 
12:45 Nao Tomori: ok

osuskrub wrote:

Hi! I'm pretty sure you know me. This is probably my first mod post on the forums so excuse me if they might not seem helpful or I might have weird opinions.
Anyways, lets get started!

Easy
Looks good to me!

Normal
I feel like you could make 00:18:883 (6) - better by stacking 2 circles instead of making a short slider. ya
00:40:396 - Without a circle here it feels like a random pause. I feel like its much better to place one there. (Also add a clap to the note) it follos the vocals here, there is not a vocal there so no circle
Might just be my opinion, but 01:24:212 (1,2,3) - seems like it could be too far of placement for a normal player despite its rhythmical difference. Suggest lowering bit. Especially from 2-3. distance snapped, we'll see. i lowered it but it might just be stuck back up there soon.
01:28:554 (4) - I don't understand why this slider is curved, I feel like it would be better if it's just straight. Then again, I don't think it matters too much.
it looks nice D=
Hard
Feel like there could be a slight more use of triples? Maybe at 01:07:435 (2) - or 01:13:751 (2) - ? i want to keep the rhythm intensity of this diff down for spread purposes, the insane maps all the triples and quints and whatnot
01:27:370 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Can't agree with having a triplet then the kick slider, would rather you have it as a kick slider alone.
Also, I agree with using a triple at 01:28:554 (1,2,3) - but I suggest lowering the spacing on it, kind of like what you did on 01:05:067 (4,5,1) -

i think having kicklsiders on that really loud part would be kind of lame. maybe if more people say something, i'll change it
Insane
00:43:949 (6) - I don't get the reasoning for this being a short slider. Making it either a circle or a short slider matches the rhythm somehow but, I feel like it should just be a circle because it sounds a bit smoother. This is debatable though, depends on your opinion. changed to 1/2 slider. i put 1/4 cuz im edgy but it rly doesnt fit so changed
While I am all for rhythm variety I don't feel 00:46:909 (3,4,5,6,7) - is very consistent with your patterns. I'd prefer just a triplet and a slider to better match consistency. ya changed, circle was there cuz of vocal but i ignored vocal everywhere else anyway and 4 notes + slider is standard here
But i'm okay with 01:15:330 (2,3,4,5,6) - due to it not having any other kind of pattern like that close by unlike above.
Ye XD
That's all I have. Good luck on getting this ranked!