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OMFG - Stardust

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DJ Fish
128 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
DJ Fish
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, 28 November 2016 at 1:35:50 PM

Artist: OMFG
Title: Stardust
Tags: _Stan _Yiiiii SkinnyJommy _Vanity Star Dust
BPM: 170
Filesize: 5151kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. _vanity & Jommy's Super MeGa JUmP MACHINE!!! (4.94 stars, 310 notes)
  2. Hard (3.38 stars, 194 notes)
  3. iiiii's Another (4.65 stars, 303 notes)
  4. Insane (4.4 stars, 283 notes)
  5. Stan's Normal (1.91 stars, 111 notes)
Download: OMFG - Stardust
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mapset done!

Normal: _Stan
Hard: Me
Insane: Me
Another: _Yiiiii
Super Mega Jump Machine: _vanity & SkinnyJommyF
Last edited by DJ Fish , edited 48 times in total.
Lumario
245 posts
Joined March 2016
Lumario
00:16:763 (1) - Try to add this one "orange" combo circle to the following "red" combo circle (me being picky :P)
00:17:116 (1) - Put this circle behind the one infront of it so you have to "double-tap" like you have to in the early part of this map [Fits the sound imo a better and makes it more confortable to play]
01:30:528 (1) - Maybe let the stream start already beginning with this circle so you have a nicer "flow" :D [alternative idea: You could delete the 2nd and 3rd circle do still have this short stop/pause feeling (ofc you have to edit the position of stream then ^.^)]

I liked the map and your ideas in general,
Good luck to get it ranked :P
Luma
DJ Fish
128 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
DJ Fish

KawaiiLuma wrote:

00:16:763 (1) - Try to add this one "orange" combo circle to the following "red" combo circle (me being picky :P)
00:17:116 (1) - Put this circle behind the one infront of it so you have to "double-tap" like you have to in the early part of this map [Fits the sound imo a better and makes it more confortable to play]
01:30:528 (1) - Maybe let the stream start already beginning with this circle so you have a nicer "flow" :D [alternative idea: You could delete the 2nd and 3rd circle do still have this short stop/pause feeling (ofc you have to edit the position of stream then ^.^)]

I liked the map and your ideas in general,
Good luck to get it ranked :P
Luma
Thanks alot! :) :)
Jakomo73
203 posts
Joined June 2013
Jakomo73
Hey! M4M from your queue :) Rip you edited and declined, whoops. Just consider it an NM ^^

General
Needs to be have hitsounds for ranked along with an easy or normal < 2* (but WIP so you're probably getting to that)
Insane you should raise the OD (I think for a 4.44* it should be like 7-8, and most ranked maps around there have that OD)
Hard has high AR, low OD and low HP drain. I would recommend 7.3 AR 6 OD and 5 HP
You have two mp3 files of the song in your folder, both of the diffs currently use audio.mp3 as the filename, so the other one can be deleted.
Need to add some tags :)
The BG image is 1085x768, but 1366x768 works best for the bg size

Insane
00:13:940 you're missing a big beat here, should add a circle imo
00:16:058 ^^
00:16:234 (1) - remove NC
00:16:763 (1) - ^
00:17:116 beat again
00:18:881 ^
00:19:587 ^^
00:19:763 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Make the 1's a curve
00:20:469 (1,2) - Make DS 2.0 instead of 1.9 for these, to keep the amt the DS increases the same
00:20:822 (1,2) - ^^ but 2.2
00:21:175 (1) - should place in the path that had been going so far with the NC's
00:21:705 - Note missed
00:23:293 - Should be mapped here imo
00:24:705 (4,5) - fix blanket
00:25:058 - This beat is dominant, should play around it instead of the current slider
00:26:293 (1) - Remove NC and make sure it doesn't overlap
00:27:175 (3,4) - Fix blanket
00:33:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This should blanket something, 6 beforehand imo
00:34:586 (1) - Remove NC
00:36:528 (9) - remove overlap
00:38:822 (6) - ^
00:42:352 (4,5,6) - ^^
00:43:763 (1) - ^^
00:46:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Should make these fit the slider's curve, prob will need to increase DS to 1.3 for that Rough estimate
00:30:705 (6,1) - Fix blanket
00:31:939 (2) - Overlap
00:52:234 - End break here imo
00:57:881 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Lots of notes missed like in beginning
Make sure you don't have any missed beats or overlaps! There are a few I didn't mention as well in the end (didn't want to spam you TOO much :P)

Hard
You're missing some of the notes on this diff as well, but I spammed you a bit too much with them in the insane diff, so most of those missed notes in insane are also missing in hard
00:13:410 (2) - curve this (and blanket 1), and ctrl + G for better flow
00:18:352 (1,2) - Kind of awkward flow, would consider flipping them around so 1 has 2's curve and vice versa
00:32:116 (1) - Match this with the pattern of red anchor in 00:32:469 (2,3,4,5) -
00:20:469 (3) - Put this between 1 and 2(like right in the middle), and bring down 4
00:35:293 (1) - Should have a slider where the slider end of 1 is, and have it end on where 2 currently is (timeline wise)
00:42:705 (7,8,1) - Stack all of these together
00:43:763 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Having all the NC's here I think is really confusing for a hard player
What I said about the break in Insane applies here too
01:00:705 (1) - Make this just a simple curve, keep the pattern of 1 is a blanket, 2 is a straight slider
01:04:940 (1) - Overlap here :(
01:10:587 - Big beat missed here imo (happens on the rest of the big white ticks too)
01:14:469 (2,1) - Increase DS here to avoid confusion with a shorter gap on the playfield when it's the same gap in the timeline
01:18:175 (2,4) - Overlap
01:19:763 (1) - Continue mapping this part
The big white ticks on the kiai section also got missed :(


Hopefully this helped and I didn't spam you too much with the same thing. I didn't really go into tooo much depth but if you want me to point out the smaller things as well, I can. GL with the map and your queue :)
onsaemiro
85 posts
Joined February 2014
onsaemiro
Hello from my queue~
Insane
00:19:763 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - why not continue with the pattern you had with the first 3 pairs? <- not 100% necessary to fix btw. just wondering
00:16:763 (1,1) - remove NC from one of them
00:28:763 (7,8,9) - really clustered, messy and confusing. people will lose combo because they can't see the rebound symbol
00:43:058 (8,1,1) - overlap
00:45:175 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ i dont recommend this pattern
00:58:410 - missing a beat here
00:59:822 - ^
00:57:881 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - beat is off. you are missing beats (red ticks and large white ticks) and you have inconsistent rhythm here (sometimes skipping red ticks and sometimes skipping white ticks although you should have missed neither). you should skip every small white ticks in this part and have a note at all other ticks.
01:03:528 (1) - i personally think this spinner is uncalled for, but if that's how you want to build up tension from the music then sure. also the spinner shouldnt end on a major note (big white tick). have something clickable there
01:06:528 (1,2,1,2) - inconsistent hold time (btw the first repeater should begin where your spinner currently ends. see ^)
01:21:881 - this is a major note you skipped. this is where your sliders should begin and they should end where your sliders currently begin
01:27:528 - 01:28:940 - 01:30:352 - ^
01:31:057 (7) - this is where stream should begin, not before

gl with mapping~!
DJ Fish
128 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
DJ Fish

jakomo73 wrote:

Hey! M4M from your queue :) Rip you edited and declined, whoops. Just consider it an NM ^^

General
Needs to be have hitsounds for ranked along with an easy or normal < 2* (but WIP so you're probably getting to that)
Insane you should raise the OD (I think for a 4.44* it should be like 7-8, and most ranked maps around there have that OD)
Hard has high AR, low OD and low HP drain. I would recommend 7.3 AR 6 OD and 5 HP
You have two mp3 files of the song in your folder, both of the diffs currently use audio.mp3 as the filename, so the other one can be deleted.
Need to add some tags :)
The BG image is 1085x768, but 1366x768 works best for the bg size

Insane
00:13:940 you're missing a big beat here, should add a circle imo
00:16:058 ^^
00:16:234 (1) - remove NC
00:16:763 (1) - ^
00:17:116 beat again
00:18:881 ^
00:19:587 ^^
00:19:763 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Make the 1's a curve
00:20:469 (1,2) - Make DS 2.0 instead of 1.9 for these, to keep the amt the DS increases the same
00:20:822 (1,2) - ^^ but 2.2
00:21:175 (1) - should place in the path that had been going so far with the NC's
00:21:705 - Note missed
00:23:293 - Should be mapped here imo
00:24:705 (4,5) - fix blanket
00:25:058 - This beat is dominant, should play around it instead of the current slider
00:26:293 (1) - Remove NC and make sure it doesn't overlap
00:27:175 (3,4) - Fix blanket
00:33:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This should blanket something, 6 beforehand imo
00:34:586 (1) - Remove NC
00:36:528 (9) - remove overlap
00:38:822 (6) - ^
00:42:352 (4,5,6) - ^^
00:43:763 (1) - ^^
00:46:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Should make these fit the slider's curve, prob will need to increase DS to 1.3 for that Rough estimate
00:30:705 (6,1) - Fix blanket
00:31:939 (2) - Overlap
00:52:234 - End break here imo
00:57:881 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Lots of notes missed like in beginning
Make sure you don't have any missed beats or overlaps! There are a few I didn't mention as well in the end (didn't want to spam you TOO much :P)

Hard
You're missing some of the notes on this diff as well, but I spammed you a bit too much with them in the insane diff, so most of those missed notes in insane are also missing in hard
00:13:410 (2) - curve this (and blanket 1), and ctrl + G for better flow
00:18:352 (1,2) - Kind of awkward flow, would consider flipping them around so 1 has 2's curve and vice versa
00:32:116 (1) - Match this with the pattern of red anchor in 00:32:469 (2,3,4,5) -
00:20:469 (3) - Put this between 1 and 2(like right in the middle), and bring down 4
00:35:293 (1) - Should have a slider where the slider end of 1 is, and have it end on where 2 currently is (timeline wise)
00:42:705 (7,8,1) - Stack all of these together
00:43:763 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Having all the NC's here I think is really confusing for a hard player
What I said about the break in Insane applies here too
01:00:705 (1) - Make this just a simple curve, keep the pattern of 1 is a blanket, 2 is a straight slider
01:04:940 (1) - Overlap here :(
01:10:587 - Big beat missed here imo (happens on the rest of the big white ticks too)
01:14:469 (2,1) - Increase DS here to avoid confusion with a shorter gap on the playfield when it's the same gap in the timeline
01:18:175 (2,4) - Overlap
01:19:763 (1) - Continue mapping this part
The big white ticks on the kiai section also got missed :(


Hopefully this helped and I didn't spam you too much with the same thing. I didn't really go into tooo much depth but if you want me to point out the smaller things as well, I can. GL with the map and your queue :)
Oops sorry for declining ): I should mod yours? Thanks for the mod anyway
btw I learned so much from your mod :)
Last edited by DJ Fish , edited 1 time in total.
DJ Fish
128 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
DJ Fish

chparkkim wrote:

Hello from my queue~
Insane
00:19:763 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - why not continue with the pattern you had with the first 3 pairs? <- not 100% necessary to fix btw. just wondering
00:16:763 (1,1) - remove NC from one of them
00:28:763 (7,8,9) - really clustered, messy and confusing. people will lose combo because they can't see the rebound symbol
00:43:058 (8,1,1) - overlap
00:45:175 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ i dont recommend this pattern
00:58:410 - missing a beat here
00:59:822 - ^
00:57:881 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - beat is off. you are missing beats (red ticks and large white ticks) and you have inconsistent rhythm here (sometimes skipping red ticks and sometimes skipping white ticks although you should have missed neither). you should skip every small white ticks in this part and have a note at all other ticks.
01:03:528 (1) - i personally think this spinner is uncalled for, but if that's how you want to build up tension from the music then sure. also the spinner shouldnt end on a major note (big white tick). have something clickable there
01:06:528 (1,2,1,2) - inconsistent hold time (btw the first repeater should begin where your spinner currently ends. see ^)
01:21:881 - this is a major note you skipped. this is where your sliders should begin and they should end where your sliders currently begin
01:27:528 - 01:28:940 - 01:30:352 - ^
01:31:057 (7) - this is where stream should begin, not before

gl with mapping~!
Thanks for the mod its really helpful
_Stan
Beatmap Nominator
767 posts
Joined June 2012
_Stan
Hey~ GD here

Stan's Normal
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35293
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Stardust
TitleUnicode:Stardust
Artist:OMFG
ArtistUnicode:OMFG
Creator:DJ Fish
Version:Stan's Normal
Source:
Tags:Stardust OMFG DJ Fish Star Dust
BeatmapID:0
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OverallDifficulty:4
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DJ Fish
128 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
DJ Fish

_Stan wrote:

Hey~ GD here

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Thanks! Nice work btw
Juiceys
530 posts
Joined June 2016
Juiceys
SPOILER
Normal

This difficulty didn't have technical problems but I do think that it was on the linear side of things
for example at 00:58:763 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part while not inaccurate could be changed to be more interesting if you understand what i mean
Instead of having all the sliders be symmetrical have them make a pattern or just move around the map more. Just a pentagon of sliders is sorta boring no?

Most of the map is good at not doing this but there are a few spots that could be made more interesting.

01:04:410 (2,3,4,5,6) - This could also be moved around to be more interesting, you could maybe flip some of them so they arent all in a straight line. :D

SPOILER
Hard


00:41:646 (1,2) - These circles seemed very awkward to me and when i played it I didn't hear anything that would give reason to why these were here. I would change them because they don't seem to follow any sound and they were awkward to hit when i did my test runs.

00:33:528 (5,1) - This would be a nice blanket :D

01:31:058 (1) - Combined with the length of this spinner and the maps BPM this spinner doesn't seem to have a purpose in the map. maybe change it to a long slider?

01:21:528 (4,5) - I do like this jump but I think it would be better if there were more of these in the kiai. Since it's the only jump in the kiai time its kinda weird to have, so you should add more jumps in this kiai

DJ Fish
128 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
DJ Fish

Juiceys wrote:

SPOILER
Normal

This difficulty didn't have technical problems but I do think that it was on the linear side of things
for example at 00:58:763 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part while not inaccurate could be changed to be more interesting if you understand what i mean
Instead of having all the sliders be symmetrical have them make a pattern or just move around the map more. Just a pentagon of sliders is sorta boring no?

Most of the map is good at not doing this but there are a few spots that could be made more interesting.

01:04:410 (2,3,4,5,6) - This could also be moved around to be more interesting, you could maybe flip some of them so they arent all in a straight line. :D

SPOILER
Hard


00:41:646 (1,2) - These circles seemed very awkward to me and when i played it I didn't hear anything that would give reason to why these were here. I would change them because they don't seem to follow any sound and they were awkward to hit when i did my test runs.

00:33:528 (5,1) - This would be a nice blanket :D

01:31:058 (1) - Combined with the length of this spinner and the maps BPM this spinner doesn't seem to have a purpose in the map. maybe change it to a long slider?

01:21:528 (4,5) - I do like this jump but I think it would be better if there were more of these in the kiai. Since it's the only jump in the kiai time its kinda weird to have, so you should add more jumps in this kiai
Thank you
_Stan
Beatmap Nominator
767 posts
Joined June 2012
_Stan
sorry for late.

stan's normal update
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DJMUKISOKU
31 posts
Joined June 2016
DJMUKISOKU
Hard

00:34:587 (2) - You need to move this note, it is difficult to see
00:43:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -It will be difficult to play a man who less than 50K, it is better in my opinion to do so
01:04:940 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe triangle?
01:21:528 (4,5) -We need to do less spacings
Insane

01:06:352 (1,2,1,2) - maybe stream?
DJMax
112 posts
Joined March 2015
DJMax
from my queue
Normal is good
Hard
一些单点距离太近了，无法和三连区分
01:13:058 (4,1,2) - these things' distance should looks like the same as previous
Inasane
00:29:116 (9) - can not see the reverse arrow
00:46:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really confuse here, if you overlap the stream under the slder, most players could not aware it
01:08:028 (4,5,6,7) - there should be 1/8

good luck thats all
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
_Yiiiii
Hi, this is my GD :)

It's my first time make dubstep map, I can't do better without overmapping XD pls don't kill me
File name
OMFG - Stardust (DJ Fish) [iiiii's Another].osu

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116,213,91763,5,4,0:0:0:0:
DJ Fish
128 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
DJ Fish

_Yiiiii wrote:

Hi, this is my GD :)

It's my first time make dubstep map, I can't do better without overmapping XD pls don't kill me
File name
OMFG - Stardust (DJ Fish) [iiiii's Another].osu

Content
osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Stardust
TitleUnicode:Stardust
Artist:OMFG
ArtistUnicode:OMFG
Creator:DJ Fish
Version:iiiii's Another
Source:
Tags:Stardust OMFG DJ Fish Star Dust
BeatmapID:0
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116,213,91763,5,4,0:0:0:0:
Nice :)
Mir
osu! Alumni
2,151 posts
Joined July 2016
Mir
Hi, M4M!

Let’s get into it.

Hard

Beats and Notes

  1. All good!

Flow and Gameplay

  1. 00:20:822 (4,1) – This jump is way too big for a Hard map imo. I’d nerf this.
  2. 00:34:587 (2) – This note threw me off. I’d recommend moving it out a little bit just so the slider end doesn’t hide the approach circle too much.

Aesthetics and Hitsounding

  1. 00:18:352 (1,2) – No blanket here?
  2. 00:32:822 (3,4) – Blanket.
  3. 00:33:528 (5,1) – Blanket!~
  4. 01:09:528 (2,5) – Could stack the slider end of 01:09:528 (2) with 01:10:587 (5)?
  5. 01:16:763 (2,3) – Blanket! D:
  6. 01:30:528 (6,7) – Blanket is triggering me. :c

Insane

Beats and Notes

  1. All good! (except for a lot of unnecessary triplets that can be easily compensated for with more jumps but that’s just my opinion)

Flow and Gameplay

  1. 00:28:234 (4,5,6,7,8,9) – Cool idea but… this slider 00:29:116 (9) throws me off so much. You could add two more sliders like 00:28:939 (8) instead to make it easier to read and more comfortable to play imo. I don’t see why you have to hold it.

Aesthetics and Hitsounding

  1. 00:12:705 (1,2) – Blanket!
  2. 00:29:116 (9,1) – Blanket if you didn’t follow the above~

I couldn’t find anything noteworthy in the other diffs, so I didn’t add them to the mod. Cool song!~
Kanye
159 posts
Joined November 2013
Kanye
Hi, M4M from my queue.

Sorry I'm late, been catching up on sleep and other mods, finally got here though

[General]
(*) Why not replace the red combo colour with a purple, since it would fit better
(*) I think 30% volume is way too quiet to provide any feedback at all when clicking. At 23 seconds for example, you can't hear the clicks since they blend with the bg music so well, that it would confuse players into thinking they missed when they didn't. Maybe increase to 50%, but even then at the kiai you can barely hear it still. Possibly just add a hitsound change at 00:23:999 (1) - to use normal sounds, since it would fit this part better than soft.
(*) The audio track seems to just suddenly cut out at the end. It's not a major issue, but maybe you could edit it to fade out slowly

[Stan's Normal]
(*) 01:26:822 (2) - Replace this with a copy of the (1) slider and just rotate it slightly instead?
All seems good other than that!

[Hard]
(*) 00:19:763 (1,2,3,4) - I think this overlap would be too confusing to some, so maybe just keep it going down linear, or reverse the second lot and stack the tails, like this http://puu.sh/rBMJD.jpg
(*) 00:25:763 (1) - Stack on the head of 00:24:705 (3) -
(*) 00:29:646 (7) - NC
(*) 01:12:175 (1,2) - I think this should be replaced with a circle, slider, circle
(*) 01:16:410 (1,2) - Same here
(*) 01:23:469 (2,3) - And here


[Insane]
(*) 00:21:175 (1) - I think you should stack the head and the tail on the two notes it's overlapping
(*) 00:27:352 (4) - Shorten by 1/2 and shift along , then replace the current starting point with a circle, like this http://puu.sh/rBMWE.jpg
(*) 00:27:881 (1,2,3) - A triple doesn't fit here, remove the second note and just leave it as 1/2 spacing http://puu.sh/rBMYl.jpg
(*) 00:28:234 (3) - I really like this onwards :D
(*) 01:07:763 (5) - NC
(*) 01:07:763 (5) - The 1/8 space beat actually begins here, so replace the rest of this burst with two 1/8 reverse sliders like this http://puu.sh/rBN5g.jpg
(*) 01:11:999 (1) - Fix stacking
(*) 01:12:528 (3) - Replace with two circles
(*) 01:23:293 (1) - From here onwards there's a lot of overlapping, which doesn't look very good, so try fix this
(*) 01:30:175 (3) - Stack on tail

[iiiii's Another]
(*) Ayyy finally mapping the intro
(*) 00:09:969 (1,1) - These spinners are way too short, and if a player doesn't expect them then they have no time to react and spin fast enough. Just make the whole thing one spinner
(*) 00:31:058 (1) - Add some sliders in here, I know it fits, but it does wear out the player if they have to continue clicking 1/2 for that long. Maybe here 00:35:293 (1) -


Well that's all from me, a good set, with a couple issues, but they're fixable. You need to fix the hitsounding issue, since if there's no feedback in the clicks then it's difficult to play the map. Definitely watch this video that pishi made about it, as it will make things more clear https://youtu.be/Lz6D7HPJ0eQ?t=3m52s . I like what iiiii did in their diff, where they added claps their notes to provide some feedback to it, but I think overall the volume should be increased as a start. You might want to add custom hitsounds to your diff since some skins people use might be bad for this issue, and if you provide then with hitsounds then it'll make things a lot better. Well other than that, I think this set is good, I really love the song, so nice and peaceful, and a great way to end my night xD but yeah, good luck with the map, and I'll see you on my map :D https://osu.ppy.sh/s/377148
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
kanor
hi，从我的modding Q来><
[Normal]
01:06:352 (1,2) - 这里折返三次就够了，normal折返四次一是不好排，二是比较难
挺好的，整个set里最满意的diff，稍微修一下那几个红点滑条感觉差不多了
加油w
[Hard]
00:14:469 (3,5,6,1) - 建议叠起来
00:15:528 (1,2) - 没包好
00:16:234 (2,3) - 没叠好，建议关了堆叠效果
00:24:705 (3,4,5) - 分别ctrl+G一下flow顺得多
00:26:116 (2,3,4,5) - 如果叠就完全叠了，如果不叠就拉开点，这种要叠不叠看起来比较丑.......
00:29:293 (5,6,1) - 这里56最好叠在1上，不然和前面的放在一起你就得解释为什么56突然降DS
00:30:352 (3,4) - blanket
00:32:469 (2,3,4,5) - blanket的话看起来更舒服一点
00:33:528 (5,1) - 你大多数的blanket都和这里的这个差不多，但是里包好还有一定的距离
00:35:646 (3,4,5,6) - 这里DS起飞了，然后00:39:528 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这里又强行缩小......不合曲，hard虽然不想前面低难度那样需要全程ds，但是你起码也要让Player能明显地感觉到这个diff又一个基础的ds，免得时不时“这里怎么又跳了？”“这里怎么又缩得这么小？”
然后是blanket，最好全图重新检查一遍，很多地方都没包好，这种小细节会直接决定Modder对这个图的第一印象
00:43:763 (1,2,7,8) - 这里是可以叠起来的，稍微挪一下就可以
这是没包好的
这是包好了的，后者看起来会舒服很多（如果是强迫症来摸这个首先心里给你1分然后写一版blanket）
[Insane]
00:15:528 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这一段很不建议stack，对读版很不友好，而且个人不太建议这么下节奏，没有合适的key做引导这么自己带节奏有点作死的嫌疑......
00:20:999 (2,1) - 如果你要靠近放，建议就叠在2上面，如果你不打算靠近放就放得更远一点，不然这里DS突然降低找不到合适的解释
00:22:410 (1,2) - 没搞懂这里怎么DS又拉近了
00:22:587 (2,3) - 没叠好
00:26:822 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的节奏不明所以，如果压琴的话滑条就应该下在3，如果要跟鼓点那么3和4中间就漏音了
00:28:234 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个overmap很没必要，也丑
00:31:058 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 如果你要放跳，最好保持一个固定的距离或者固定的趋势，比如全程一个DS或是DS随着跳逐渐拉大，像这种突然拉开又突然拉近的打起来很不顺手
00:57:881 - 这个音强烈建议不要漏
01:24:352 (4,5) - 没叠好
还有很大的提升空间，加油
[Another]
00:34:058 (2,3) - 建议ctrl+G
00:37:763 (3,4) - 前面都是顺时针flow到这里突然变成逆时针，有点突兀
00:43:940 (2,3) - 建议ctrl+G
00:44:469 (1,2,3,4) - 不推荐钝角跳，嘛不过你坚持的话随意，就整体来说00:43:763 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这一段和整体难度脱节，建议把DS缩小一点或者跳得善良一点
00:53:646 (1,2,3,4) - 这里2和3的DS为什么突然缩小了？
00:55:058 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的DS为什么突然拉得这么大而00:55:763 (1,2,3,4) - 又马上缩小？
最后一段kai全是滑条spam很无聊
试着3个滑条+2个单点——2个滑条+4个单点——1个滑条+2个单点+1个滑条+2单点——全是单点
这样是不是更有层次感一点呢？
而且因为曲子本身比较单调，我反而希望能看到些overmap......算是我个人的偏好吧XD
差不多就这些
GL :)
_Yiiiii
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_Yiiiii

Kanye wrote:

[iiiii's Another]
(*) Ayyy finally mapping the intro
(*) 00:09:969 (1,1) - These spinners are way too short, and if a player doesn't expect them then they have no time to react and spin fast enough. Just make the whole thing one spinner No, I just want to make the sense of something difficult is approaching by doing this, and the spinners are long enough.
(*) 00:31:058 (1) - Add some sliders in here, I know it fits, but it does wear out the player if they have to continue clicking 1/2 for that long. Maybe here 00:35:293 (1) - Well, you have a point, but I agree with the saying "make objective sense, and not make your sense." Adding some sliders here is good for playing but it is a subjective advice, it can't beat objective reasons in any situation. I added these sliders 00:23:999 (1) - because I am following those strange electrical sound, 00:35:293 (1) - since there is a kiai time, it is suitable to change a way to express those sound.
Thanks for modding! :)

kanor wrote:

[Another]
00:34:058 (2,3) - 建议ctrl+G 好
00:37:763 (3,4) - 前面都是顺时针flow到这里突然变成逆时针，有点突兀 这里的滴滴滴的音明显比其他地方强，换一下感觉挺好
00:43:940 (2,3) - 建议ctrl+G 不，这次这几个音是渐变的
00:44:469 (1,2,3,4) - 不推荐钝角跳，嘛不过你坚持的话随意，就整体来说00:43:763 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这一段和整体难度脱节，建议把DS缩小一点或者跳得善良一点 故意恶心人的，再来一个这么说的我就改
00:53:646 (1,2,3,4) - 这里2和3的DS为什么突然缩小了？ 我也不知道我当时怎么想的，改了
00:55:058 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的DS为什么突然拉得这么大而00:55:763 (1,2,3,4) - 又马上缩小？跟音调有关啦，音调高了，DS就稍微大一点
最后一段kai全是滑条spam很无聊
试着3个滑条+2个单点——2个滑条+4个单点——1个滑条+2个单点+1个滑条+2单点——全是单点
这样是不是更有层次感一点呢？我倒是觉得这坨滑条挺爽的，再来两个人说就改
而且因为曲子本身比较单调，我反而希望能看到些overmap......算是我个人的偏好吧XD 刚拿到曲子的确挺想overmap的，不过看Insane已经有overmap了就没做
谢摸！:)

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